Comments received on poems by Bobby O
FATED HERO FAKED
Bobby O said:
I get used to patterns and am making efforts to try different approach. This was sorta new.
September 15th, 2023 16:23
Bobby O said:
I get used to patterns and am making efforts to try different approach. This was sorta new.
September 15th, 2023 16:23
FATED HERO FAKED
Parisab said:
So now you are ‘growing’ reflective on
Me! Your poems already had me on jazz and basketball and this one will keep me on my auditory trip even longer- Word
September 15th, 2023 15:59
Parisab said:
So now you are ‘growing’ reflective on
Me! Your poems already had me on jazz and basketball and this one will keep me on my auditory trip even longer- Word
September 15th, 2023 15:59
FATED HERO FAKED
Bobby O said:
A departure from accustomed style. Trying to be braver and not so dependent on constant rhyme. Appreciate the kind word. It means a lot. I’ve got some good examples of talent to stretch toward, yourself on top list.
September 15th, 2023 10:07
Bobby O said:
A departure from accustomed style. Trying to be braver and not so dependent on constant rhyme. Appreciate the kind word. It means a lot. I’ve got some good examples of talent to stretch toward, yourself on top list.
September 15th, 2023 10:07
FATED HERO FAKED
peto said:
Great read Bobby
Sounds really personal rather than historical
Like a coward dies a thousand deaths
And you savored every one
Special write
September 15th, 2023 10:02
peto said:
Great read Bobby
Sounds really personal rather than historical
Like a coward dies a thousand deaths
And you savored every one
Special write
September 15th, 2023 10:02
MONK and MY AUNT
Neville said:
I dig single malt as it comes .. and have on occasion, dug too deep .. this is so cool, but am sorry for your loss Bobby O .. Neville
September 15th, 2023 02:49
Neville said:
I dig single malt as it comes .. and have on occasion, dug too deep .. this is so cool, but am sorry for your loss Bobby O .. Neville
September 15th, 2023 02:49
MONK and MY AUNT
David Wakeling said:
The trifecta: Aunt Carol,he and Thelonius Monk.This inspired me to listen to some Jazz again.Well done
September 14th, 2023 21:35
David Wakeling said:
The trifecta: Aunt Carol,he and Thelonius Monk.This inspired me to listen to some Jazz again.Well done
September 14th, 2023 21:35
MONK and MY AUNT
Bobby O said:
She has that touch doesn’t she. Thanks for the read and grace
September 14th, 2023 15:02
Bobby O said:
She has that touch doesn’t she. Thanks for the read and grace
September 14th, 2023 15:02
MONK and MY AUNT
peto said:
Such a unique delivery it captivates the reader
Think parisab said it all
Great read
September 14th, 2023 14:58
peto said:
Such a unique delivery it captivates the reader
Think parisab said it all
Great read
September 14th, 2023 14:58
MONK and MY AUNT
Parisab said:
The hyper focus on being present among the spirit of jazz in the ‘hazed fog’ and the ‘pervasive funk’ can bring nothing but the mastery of jazz consumption, as it is meant to be-I’m sure the jazz heroes may have hoped for exactly this type of intimacy and commitment -thanks for the write as always
September 14th, 2023 13:55
Parisab said:
The hyper focus on being present among the spirit of jazz in the ‘hazed fog’ and the ‘pervasive funk’ can bring nothing but the mastery of jazz consumption, as it is meant to be-I’m sure the jazz heroes may have hoped for exactly this type of intimacy and commitment -thanks for the write as always
September 14th, 2023 13:55
CROOKED EYES
Parisab said:
I call them the gladiators of our time, at the crooked sports show business-the whole system stinks, but I sure love all the hero’s you named and even the unsung and underpaid injured heroes-I know your preferences are more sophisticated and intentional Bobby-
September 13th, 2023 23:39
Parisab said:
I call them the gladiators of our time, at the crooked sports show business-the whole system stinks, but I sure love all the hero’s you named and even the unsung and underpaid injured heroes-I know your preferences are more sophisticated and intentional Bobby-
September 13th, 2023 23:39
CROOKED EYES
Bobby O said:
Hee hee. It’s a misdirection that doesn’t go w the poem but rather w the picture. From Orphan Black one of the clones was a trained assassin and they were testing her math acuity. “ if I had three mangos and gave you two how many ….?”
In her Russian accent she says” mangos…,”. etc. it’s just a great scene. Orphan Black is a masterpiece.
September 13th, 2023 17:23
Bobby O said:
Hee hee. It’s a misdirection that doesn’t go w the poem but rather w the picture. From Orphan Black one of the clones was a trained assassin and they were testing her math acuity. “ if I had three mangos and gave you two how many ….?”
In her Russian accent she says” mangos…,”. etc. it’s just a great scene. Orphan Black is a masterpiece.
September 13th, 2023 17:23
CROOKED EYES
Bobby O said:
Hee hee. It’s a misdirection that doesn’t go w the poem but rather w the picture. From Orphan Black one of the clones was a trained assassin and they were testing her math acuity. “ if I had three mangos and gave you two how many ….?”
In her Russian accent she says” mangos…,”. etc. it’s just a great scene. Orphan Black is a masterpiece.
September 13th, 2023 17:22
Bobby O said:
Hee hee. It’s a misdirection that doesn’t go w the poem but rather w the picture. From Orphan Black one of the clones was a trained assassin and they were testing her math acuity. “ if I had three mangos and gave you two how many ….?”
In her Russian accent she says” mangos…,”. etc. it’s just a great scene. Orphan Black is a masterpiece.
September 13th, 2023 17:22
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
Bobby O said:
I was going for that homey kinda title, like when an old guy tells a kid that the sun don’t shine on the same dog’s ass everyday or May it does shine on a different one? I got confused so I went w squirrel but I felt bad talking about a blind one cuz of PETA and stuff?
September 11th, 2023 10:58
Bobby O said:
I was going for that homey kinda title, like when an old guy tells a kid that the sun don’t shine on the same dog’s ass everyday or May it does shine on a different one? I got confused so I went w squirrel but I felt bad talking about a blind one cuz of PETA and stuff?
September 11th, 2023 10:58
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
sorenbarrett said:
The title led me down a false path until the ending where my thoughts had to do a major readjust. We live in a world of surprises and some of them are memorable and some are just plain good. Nice write Bobby.
September 11th, 2023 10:17
sorenbarrett said:
The title led me down a false path until the ending where my thoughts had to do a major readjust. We live in a world of surprises and some of them are memorable and some are just plain good. Nice write Bobby.
September 11th, 2023 10:17
CONNECTION
Bobby O said:
I think good but then I talk myself into stuff l using logic perfectly designed by an insider
September 11th, 2023 04:23
Bobby O said:
I think good but then I talk myself into stuff l using logic perfectly designed by an insider
September 11th, 2023 04:23
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
David Wakeling said:
She\'s making you an offer you cant refuse.Enjoyable read.
September 10th, 2023 17:27
David Wakeling said:
She\'s making you an offer you cant refuse.Enjoyable read.
September 10th, 2023 17:27
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
peto said:
Great memory Bobby
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful write
The one part I struggled with
YOU an underdog???
Charmer
September 10th, 2023 07:16
peto said:
Great memory Bobby
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful write
The one part I struggled with
YOU an underdog???
Charmer
September 10th, 2023 07:16
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
Neville said:
good fortune always smiles down on the righteous .. my guess is, you earnt it sir .. very muchly enjoyed .. Neville
September 10th, 2023 02:47
Neville said:
good fortune always smiles down on the righteous .. my guess is, you earnt it sir .. very muchly enjoyed .. Neville
September 10th, 2023 02:47
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories will be forever with you Bobby.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories will be forever with you Bobby.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 01:47
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
LIZ said:
First, the title is gold! I\'m glad you hold this experience with such fondness! Certain \"moments\" don\'t come around often! 💫
September 10th, 2023 00:32
LIZ said:
First, the title is gold! I\'m glad you hold this experience with such fondness! Certain \"moments\" don\'t come around often! 💫
September 10th, 2023 00:32
CONNECTION
Neville said:
no doubt she has two of the most adorable pairs of lips too .. 🎶🎵🎶
September 9th, 2023 09:19
Neville said:
no doubt she has two of the most adorable pairs of lips too .. 🎶🎵🎶
September 9th, 2023 09:19
CONNECTION
peto said:
Didn\'t think you could top the picture
Then you lifted your pen
September 9th, 2023 04:28
peto said:
Didn\'t think you could top the picture
Then you lifted your pen
September 9th, 2023 04:28
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful and may she definately hopefully know it\'s for her. 💖
September 9th, 2023 02:50
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful and may she definately hopefully know it\'s for her. 💖
September 9th, 2023 02:50
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about a walk/ramble ya had in the countryside or summat.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
September 9th, 2023 01:29
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about a walk/ramble ya had in the countryside or summat.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
September 9th, 2023 01:29
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem.Actually it reads like a song.It just needs a guitar solo.Just saying.Well done
September 9th, 2023 00:29
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem.Actually it reads like a song.It just needs a guitar solo.Just saying.Well done
September 9th, 2023 00:29
CONNECTION
LIZ said:
Oh so beautiful! When we look past the obvious, we find....REAL!!! ❤️
September 9th, 2023 00:23
LIZ said:
Oh so beautiful! When we look past the obvious, we find....REAL!!! ❤️
September 9th, 2023 00:23
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
Parisab said:
‘Digits open a pristine view’ ‘unselfish valor will display’ how marvelous that you setting a stage with everything beautiful, for her-May you keep celebrating many birthdays and to keep absorbing the best with your taste…
September 8th, 2023 23:54
Parisab said:
‘Digits open a pristine view’ ‘unselfish valor will display’ how marvelous that you setting a stage with everything beautiful, for her-May you keep celebrating many birthdays and to keep absorbing the best with your taste…
September 8th, 2023 23:54
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
LIZ said:
Magic!!!! This is my favorite one! See, I knew you were a romantic at heart!! \"She is my first and last\" Mmmmm
oh wow! I\'m lighting a candle to this, and basking in the energy you\'ve so bravely displayed! Beautiful! Thank you! 💋💕
September 8th, 2023 19:39
LIZ said:
Magic!!!! This is my favorite one! See, I knew you were a romantic at heart!! \"She is my first and last\" Mmmmm
oh wow! I\'m lighting a candle to this, and basking in the energy you\'ve so bravely displayed! Beautiful! Thank you! 💋💕
September 8th, 2023 19:39
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
Introverted Sage said:
I hope she sees this!
Sweet write!
\'this magic box
Only her power unlocks\'
🤌🏽choice rhyming!
This is great!
September 8th, 2023 18:47
Introverted Sage said:
I hope she sees this!
Sweet write!
\'this magic box
Only her power unlocks\'
🤌🏽choice rhyming!
This is great!
September 8th, 2023 18:47
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