Comments received on poems by Bobby O
ELIMINATE, ACCUMULATE , CELEBRATE
hzugman said:
Nice poem Bobby. I particularly like your innovative format presentation. I\'m 83 so you probably think faster than I ...... do.
July 8th, 2023 08:41
hzugman said:
Nice poem Bobby. I particularly like your innovative format presentation. I\'m 83 so you probably think faster than I ...... do.
July 8th, 2023 08:41
ELIMINATE, ACCUMULATE , CELEBRATE
peto said:
Put together beautifully
This latest installment is magic
It\'s very much like a rap
Not positive but believe rap is for
Rhythmic American poetry
Exactly what we have here
Great read
July 8th, 2023 07:54
peto said:
Put together beautifully
This latest installment is magic
It\'s very much like a rap
Not positive but believe rap is for
Rhythmic American poetry
Exactly what we have here
Great read
July 8th, 2023 07:54
PERFECT TIME IS NOW
DrichThePoet said:
You should figure that out and tell me ok🙂
July 8th, 2023 03:03
DrichThePoet said:
You should figure that out and tell me ok🙂
July 8th, 2023 03:03
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Parisab said:
This trilogy is very special with rich and implicit meaning.
July 8th, 2023 01:22
Parisab said:
This trilogy is very special with rich and implicit meaning.
July 8th, 2023 01:22
CONNECTION
arqios said:
The inside circle begins with weeding out the spoiled apple from infecting the rest.
July 8th, 2023 01:21
arqios said:
The inside circle begins with weeding out the spoiled apple from infecting the rest.
July 8th, 2023 01:21
WORDS
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Hello ) thanks for reading my poems . Yeah , I do think some people take criticism quite strongly and I guess we all want nice comments on our poems .. sorry that you have upset a few people on here .. I think ‘ nobody’s perfect ‘ but yeah criticism can affect people , in ways I guess . I don’t think there’s anything wrong in saying where we might improve in our poetry .. that might even be helpful to some
July 8th, 2023 00:39
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Hello ) thanks for reading my poems . Yeah , I do think some people take criticism quite strongly and I guess we all want nice comments on our poems .. sorry that you have upset a few people on here .. I think ‘ nobody’s perfect ‘ but yeah criticism can affect people , in ways I guess . I don’t think there’s anything wrong in saying where we might improve in our poetry .. that might even be helpful to some
July 8th, 2023 00:39
CONNECTION
LIZ said:
I had to go and read the other one. This is such an important subject. Getting rid of poisonous people, who hold us back, and then adding those who bring light into our lives. A painful process...but rewarding. \"Cuz Sustenance Seeps Thru\"-absolutely!
July 7th, 2023 13:20
LIZ said:
I had to go and read the other one. This is such an important subject. Getting rid of poisonous people, who hold us back, and then adding those who bring light into our lives. A painful process...but rewarding. \"Cuz Sustenance Seeps Thru\"-absolutely!
July 7th, 2023 13:20
CONNECTION
peto said:
It\'s also a privilege to read your words Bobby
Really enjoyed this one
Short sharp bang on point
Enjoyed
July 7th, 2023 13:13
peto said:
It\'s also a privilege to read your words Bobby
Really enjoyed this one
Short sharp bang on point
Enjoyed
July 7th, 2023 13:13
CORRECTION
peto said:
Great to see you found your pen
Back with a bang
Keep em coming
July 7th, 2023 03:16
peto said:
Great to see you found your pen
Back with a bang
Keep em coming
July 7th, 2023 03:16
THE NASCAR LOOP
Bobby O said:
I love it when coincidence of separate unrelated behavior coincides serendipitously with a review Like it beats all kinda Vegas odds that on the list I was making this morning of my ten favorite words that the seventh word was
ENTICING
July 4th, 2023 05:58
Bobby O said:
I love it when coincidence of separate unrelated behavior coincides serendipitously with a review Like it beats all kinda Vegas odds that on the list I was making this morning of my ten favorite words that the seventh word was
ENTICING
July 4th, 2023 05:58
THE NASCAR LOOP
Bobby O said:
I love it when coincidence of separate unrelated behavior coincides serendipitously with a review Like it beats all kinda Vegas odds that on the list I was making this morning of my ten favorite words that the seventh word was
ENTICING
July 4th, 2023 05:57
Bobby O said:
I love it when coincidence of separate unrelated behavior coincides serendipitously with a review Like it beats all kinda Vegas odds that on the list I was making this morning of my ten favorite words that the seventh word was
ENTICING
July 4th, 2023 05:57
THE NASCAR LOOP
Neville said:
a compelling read from beginning to end sir O ... N
July 3rd, 2023 06:34
Neville said:
a compelling read from beginning to end sir O ... N
July 3rd, 2023 06:34
SAM COOKE STILL NO. 1
sorenbarrett said:
Sam was always one of my favorites. There was something about his voice and the tone of his music that took me to another place.
July 1st, 2023 20:20
sorenbarrett said:
Sam was always one of my favorites. There was something about his voice and the tone of his music that took me to another place.
July 1st, 2023 20:20
THE NASCAR LOOP
LIZ said:
There is so much here!
Have you ever been to the Indianapolis 500? It\'s an annual automobile race held at Indianapolis Motor Speedway, in Indiana. Your poem made me think of it. You\'re basically looking at race cars going around! Same destination each time! The cars only stop for maintenance.
\"Then you treat me like a pitstop, my emotions ain\'t fake\". Broken heart?
Like the myth of Sisyphus; wow! Basically, all the slow work thrown back at your face! Going in circles, reaching the same results, but wanting to change direction in order to arrive at true love\'s destination. Fear....and hope!
Thank you for sharing!
July 1st, 2023 12:54
LIZ said:
There is so much here!
Have you ever been to the Indianapolis 500? It\'s an annual automobile race held at Indianapolis Motor Speedway, in Indiana. Your poem made me think of it. You\'re basically looking at race cars going around! Same destination each time! The cars only stop for maintenance.
\"Then you treat me like a pitstop, my emotions ain\'t fake\". Broken heart?
Like the myth of Sisyphus; wow! Basically, all the slow work thrown back at your face! Going in circles, reaching the same results, but wanting to change direction in order to arrive at true love\'s destination. Fear....and hope!
Thank you for sharing!
July 1st, 2023 12:54
THE NASCAR LOOP
peto said:
Bobby pitstop
Think i know your sis Penelope
Great last verse stopped me going in circles
Magic magic 4 straight times
July 1st, 2023 11:13
peto said:
Bobby pitstop
Think i know your sis Penelope
Great last verse stopped me going in circles
Magic magic 4 straight times
July 1st, 2023 11:13
THE NASCAR LOOP
evenwheniLie said:
Each line made me want to keep reading, meaningful poetry with a good flow is always the best..
July 1st, 2023 03:06
evenwheniLie said:
Each line made me want to keep reading, meaningful poetry with a good flow is always the best..
July 1st, 2023 03:06
SAM COOKE STILL NO. 1
Parisab said:
Thank you for being a serious patron of his memory-All I know is that he was likely intentionally silenced-his soul will live on, in his wide range of frequencies, I pray
July 1st, 2023 00:16
Parisab said:
Thank you for being a serious patron of his memory-All I know is that he was likely intentionally silenced-his soul will live on, in his wide range of frequencies, I pray
July 1st, 2023 00:16
SAM COOKE STILL NO. 1
peto said:
Bobby you send me
Honest you do
Fantastic tribute
June 30th, 2023 08:35
peto said:
Bobby you send me
Honest you do
Fantastic tribute
June 30th, 2023 08:35
SAM COOKE STILL NO. 1
LIZ said:
Ah soul music! What about \"What a Wonderful World\"? That one\'s a classic!
June 30th, 2023 08:18
LIZ said:
Ah soul music! What about \"What a Wonderful World\"? That one\'s a classic!
June 30th, 2023 08:18
WORDS
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting nicely expressed poem I especially like the last line with mention of the universe and destiny ))
June 30th, 2023 03:43
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting nicely expressed poem I especially like the last line with mention of the universe and destiny ))
June 30th, 2023 03:43
SAM COOKE STILL NO. 1
Neville said:
I have a thing about Leonard Norman Cohen ..
June 30th, 2023 01:14
Neville said:
I have a thing about Leonard Norman Cohen ..
June 30th, 2023 01:14
I KNEW IT WOULD BE NEVER
Bobby O said:
That’s about as nice as it gets. You mention lingo and call me fellow poet and informed me I had a stance , thought maybe I had expression and I hope my stance has exaggerated posture like Yaz. Thanks fir the words that are kind w incite and hit home rounding third catching my intent. Props
June 29th, 2023 15:35
Bobby O said:
That’s about as nice as it gets. You mention lingo and call me fellow poet and informed me I had a stance , thought maybe I had expression and I hope my stance has exaggerated posture like Yaz. Thanks fir the words that are kind w incite and hit home rounding third catching my intent. Props
June 29th, 2023 15:35
I KNEW IT WOULD BE NEVER
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Love the lingo, love the expression and stance of the piece. The truth told, and told cool. You\'ve got style, fellow poet!
June 29th, 2023 14:46
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Love the lingo, love the expression and stance of the piece. The truth told, and told cool. You\'ve got style, fellow poet!
June 29th, 2023 14:46
POUNDING ON THAT ANVIL OF FATE
LIZ said:
Ah fate! \"A change is gonna come\" indeed! In the meantime, since, \"it\'s a mistake to look past you\", please continue to drop knowledge! We are eager! Beautiful piece!
June 29th, 2023 10:26
LIZ said:
Ah fate! \"A change is gonna come\" indeed! In the meantime, since, \"it\'s a mistake to look past you\", please continue to drop knowledge! We are eager! Beautiful piece!
June 29th, 2023 10:26
POUNDING ON THAT ANVIL OF FATE
Bobby O said:
Cool. Sometimes I go rap it to impress the ladies
June 29th, 2023 09:17
Bobby O said:
Cool. Sometimes I go rap it to impress the ladies
June 29th, 2023 09:17
POUNDING ON THAT ANVIL OF FATE
peto said:
Great read
Very musical vibe not because of named musicians
Super rhythm
Keep reaching Bobby
Touching
June 29th, 2023 09:13
peto said:
Great read
Very musical vibe not because of named musicians
Super rhythm
Keep reaching Bobby
Touching
June 29th, 2023 09:13
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