Comments received on poems by Bobby O
FACING HARD TRUTH
Parisab said:
Great and brave write-using intellectualized terms to serve one’s vanity-We take ourselves entirely too seriously-thank you for the sharper perspective-
May 21st, 2023 01:54
Parisab said:
Great and brave write-using intellectualized terms to serve one’s vanity-We take ourselves entirely too seriously-thank you for the sharper perspective-
May 21st, 2023 01:54
TWO VOICES THAT WE FEED
myself and me said:
It is such a fresh idea to try and you did it so beautifully. I am honored that you read my piece. Please accept my apology for such a late response. I have not visit here for quite a while. It is a pleasure to know you here. I enjoyed reading your poems. M.M.
May 18th, 2023 19:35
myself and me said:
It is such a fresh idea to try and you did it so beautifully. I am honored that you read my piece. Please accept my apology for such a late response. I have not visit here for quite a while. It is a pleasure to know you here. I enjoyed reading your poems. M.M.
May 18th, 2023 19:35
PRAYER OF THANKS
Keith Jeffries said:
Gratitude shown through prayer is essential to recognising who we are in this life and how God loves us. Saying thank you to the provider of life should be a natural response. This poem embodies such an act. Thank you
May 17th, 2023 04:07
Keith Jeffries said:
Gratitude shown through prayer is essential to recognising who we are in this life and how God loves us. Saying thank you to the provider of life should be a natural response. This poem embodies such an act. Thank you
May 17th, 2023 04:07
CLICHE’ NO LONGER
Bobby O said:
Your words really gratify and your humble decry truly identifies a certain character of substance both admirable and regal. Also , I’m certain that nuance you note is so in your wheelhouse and silky like a Pip and MJ fast break. Much appreciate the connect and I am always excited when you share your thoughts. Thanks
May 16th, 2023 02:07
Bobby O said:
Your words really gratify and your humble decry truly identifies a certain character of substance both admirable and regal. Also , I’m certain that nuance you note is so in your wheelhouse and silky like a Pip and MJ fast break. Much appreciate the connect and I am always excited when you share your thoughts. Thanks
May 16th, 2023 02:07
CLICHE’ NO LONGER
Parisab said:
‘When again love visits,Thank God that glorious day
This story then will have a happy end,
no longer a cliche
The final lines beautifully wrapped up the whole essence of the poem-the final words encompassed the whole story in a new and fresh ending. This is particularly a difficult task. I will try and attempt this nuanced magic one day.
May 16th, 2023 01:54
Parisab said:
‘When again love visits,Thank God that glorious day
This story then will have a happy end,
no longer a cliche
The final lines beautifully wrapped up the whole essence of the poem-the final words encompassed the whole story in a new and fresh ending. This is particularly a difficult task. I will try and attempt this nuanced magic one day.
May 16th, 2023 01:54
CLICHE’ NO LONGER
arqios said:
It is in others that I seem to see myself the best so polishing the mirror is quite compelling, do unto others so it has been otherwise said! Thanks for the most appealing of reminders.
May 14th, 2023 20:36
arqios said:
It is in others that I seem to see myself the best so polishing the mirror is quite compelling, do unto others so it has been otherwise said! Thanks for the most appealing of reminders.
May 14th, 2023 20:36
CLICHE’ NO LONGER
horrorautumnpoet said:
Enjoyed this!! It had some good life vibes in it :)
May 13th, 2023 12:49
horrorautumnpoet said:
Enjoyed this!! It had some good life vibes in it :)
May 13th, 2023 12:49
CLICHE’ NO LONGER
Jerry Reynolds said:
\"Chin deep in a self-dug rut\"
An image that will live comfortably on the red dirt road of my mind.
Good, go Bobby O.
May 13th, 2023 10:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
\"Chin deep in a self-dug rut\"
An image that will live comfortably on the red dirt road of my mind.
Good, go Bobby O.
May 13th, 2023 10:48
CLICHE’ NO LONGER
Neville said:
there\'s nowt quite like it is there, that feeling of unconditional giving ..
May 13th, 2023 08:46
Neville said:
there\'s nowt quite like it is there, that feeling of unconditional giving ..
May 13th, 2023 08:46
3 NERDS WALKED INTO A V BAR
orchidee said:
I was wanting: \'3 (e.g.) elephants walked into a bar\'.
\'We don\'t get many elephants in here, said the landlord.
\'I\'m not surprised, with the prices you charge\' said the elephants.
There\'s a naughty elephant joke that I cannot repat in public - have to request it by e-mail!
May 13th, 2023 02:10
orchidee said:
I was wanting: \'3 (e.g.) elephants walked into a bar\'.
\'We don\'t get many elephants in here, said the landlord.
\'I\'m not surprised, with the prices you charge\' said the elephants.
There\'s a naughty elephant joke that I cannot repat in public - have to request it by e-mail!
May 13th, 2023 02:10
3 NERDS WALKED INTO A V BAR
Parisab said:
You taught them in the true southern gentlemanly fashion, sir.
May 12th, 2023 14:10
Parisab said:
You taught them in the true southern gentlemanly fashion, sir.
May 12th, 2023 14:10
EVERY BUNNY NEEDS SOME BUNNY
sorenbarrett said:
Bobby this one is a little late for Easter. It reminded me of episodes that I have had in the past. It gave me a smile.
May 11th, 2023 08:23
sorenbarrett said:
Bobby this one is a little late for Easter. It reminded me of episodes that I have had in the past. It gave me a smile.
May 11th, 2023 08:23
Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G
DontSleepOnTheBoy said:
\"Words and chords fired with a furious frenzy and a ferocious fluidity. Lines and rhymes scatted so scathingly slow they create this surreal serenity.\"
Too clean! I love it 👌🏿
May 11th, 2023 00:39
DontSleepOnTheBoy said:
\"Words and chords fired with a furious frenzy and a ferocious fluidity. Lines and rhymes scatted so scathingly slow they create this surreal serenity.\"
Too clean! I love it 👌🏿
May 11th, 2023 00:39
TWO VOICES THAT WE FEED
arqios said:
Truly inspired! The concepts and the supporting thought and expression brings to life these two voices that we can meet even each and every day.
May 10th, 2023 08:42
arqios said:
Truly inspired! The concepts and the supporting thought and expression brings to life these two voices that we can meet even each and every day.
May 10th, 2023 08:42
CONNECTION
arqios said:
Privy on the ledge, hat askew. The raking angle connection renewed.
May 7th, 2023 16:27
arqios said:
Privy on the ledge, hat askew. The raking angle connection renewed.
May 7th, 2023 16:27
CONNECTION
MendedFences27 said:
Connecting despite the distractions and the noise, seeing another in a weaker moment and recognizing their
inner beauty knowing another well enough to recognize them within their smile, all these things seen in your few words of poetic beauty. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 7th, 2023 11:28
MendedFences27 said:
Connecting despite the distractions and the noise, seeing another in a weaker moment and recognizing their
inner beauty knowing another well enough to recognize them within their smile, all these things seen in your few words of poetic beauty. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 7th, 2023 11:28
CONNECTION
Neville said:
the synapse that existed between us has since been connected ..
May 7th, 2023 01:48
Neville said:
the synapse that existed between us has since been connected ..
May 7th, 2023 01:48
CONNECTION
Bobby O said:
I’m hoping it rings. Thanks , as always, for your astute insight and kind words
May 7th, 2023 00:17
Bobby O said:
I’m hoping it rings. Thanks , as always, for your astute insight and kind words
May 7th, 2023 00:17
PRAYER OF THANKS
sorenbarrett said:
It is refreshing to hear any thanks these days. Gratitude is highly lacking. Whether God, other people, or just good fortune people seem more interested in asking than thanking.
May 6th, 2023 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
It is refreshing to hear any thanks these days. Gratitude is highly lacking. Whether God, other people, or just good fortune people seem more interested in asking than thanking.
May 6th, 2023 19:00
PRAYER OF THANKS
Neville said:
The man did good .. very good it seems .. not an easy thing to do ..
well done ..
Neville
May 6th, 2023 05:33
Neville said:
The man did good .. very good it seems .. not an easy thing to do ..
well done ..
Neville
May 6th, 2023 05:33
PRAYER OF THANKS
orchidee said:
A fine write and prayer Bobby.
I missed a chance at a Funeral Service. Only knew the person briefly. The Registrar-type person (not a Vicar) came out and asked the few people \'Does anyone actually know J. much, to give a few words/eulogy?\' I missed a chance.
May 6th, 2023 02:05
orchidee said:
A fine write and prayer Bobby.
I missed a chance at a Funeral Service. Only knew the person briefly. The Registrar-type person (not a Vicar) came out and asked the few people \'Does anyone actually know J. much, to give a few words/eulogy?\' I missed a chance.
May 6th, 2023 02:05
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