Comments received on poems by Bobby O
UNCERTAIN PLANNED
LIZ said:
Very nice!!! We can\'t really rely on much these days. Almost everything is a smokescreen. So we do what we must to get through the twist and turns. \"Like a penny with a hole in it\"! Ufffff you never know!!!
July 15th, 2023 03:17
LIZ said:
Very nice!!! We can\'t really rely on much these days. Almost everything is a smokescreen. So we do what we must to get through the twist and turns. \"Like a penny with a hole in it\"! Ufffff you never know!!!
July 15th, 2023 03:17
SOME PLANS ARE TRICKY
David Wakeling said:
Great poem of self disclosure.I particularly like the line \"She read my poem but not my disguise.\"Well done
July 14th, 2023 17:55
David Wakeling said:
Great poem of self disclosure.I particularly like the line \"She read my poem but not my disguise.\"Well done
July 14th, 2023 17:55
SOME PLANS ARE TRICKY
Bobby O said:
Smokey is as close to prayers in my music as will likely occur. I respect all preferences if all others but I talk to the creator in a silent way.
July 14th, 2023 08:45
Bobby O said:
Smokey is as close to prayers in my music as will likely occur. I respect all preferences if all others but I talk to the creator in a silent way.
July 14th, 2023 08:45
SOME PLANS ARE TRICKY
orchidee said:
Liz will see you with me, i.e. someone who don\'t know any Smokey songs. I know a hymn or 20 though! lol.
July 14th, 2023 08:36
orchidee said:
Liz will see you with me, i.e. someone who don\'t know any Smokey songs. I know a hymn or 20 though! lol.
July 14th, 2023 08:36
SOME PLANS ARE TRICKY
LIZ said:
Kept your identity out of sight huh? I don\'t see you with anyone who doesn\'t know any Smokey songs! 😉 But if you were using his lines, I can see how you got their attention. Lol 🎶 This is no fiction, this is no act, this is real, it\'s a fact. I\'ll always belong only to you, each day I\'ll be livin\' to make sure I\'m givin\' you more love and more joy 🎶 This one\'s a favorite! Definitely a glory day!
July 14th, 2023 04:10
LIZ said:
Kept your identity out of sight huh? I don\'t see you with anyone who doesn\'t know any Smokey songs! 😉 But if you were using his lines, I can see how you got their attention. Lol 🎶 This is no fiction, this is no act, this is real, it\'s a fact. I\'ll always belong only to you, each day I\'ll be livin\' to make sure I\'m givin\' you more love and more joy 🎶 This one\'s a favorite! Definitely a glory day!
July 14th, 2023 04:10
SOME PLANS ARE TRICKY
Neville said:
.. you are such a cool dude .. I\'m just gonna go cut n paste your authors note into my frontal lobe sir ..
July 14th, 2023 04:00
Neville said:
.. you are such a cool dude .. I\'m just gonna go cut n paste your authors note into my frontal lobe sir ..
July 14th, 2023 04:00
AWESTRUCK
LIZ said:
This is absolutely breathtaking! A great accolade. And yes, even in your own
point of view...I see it! Wouldn\'t expect anything less from you!!
July 12th, 2023 09:51
LIZ said:
This is absolutely breathtaking! A great accolade. And yes, even in your own
point of view...I see it! Wouldn\'t expect anything less from you!!
July 12th, 2023 09:51
AWESTRUCK
LIZ said:
This is absolutely breathtaking! A great accolade. And yes, even in your own
point of view...I see it! Wouldn\'t expect anything less from you!!
July 12th, 2023 09:51
LIZ said:
This is absolutely breathtaking! A great accolade. And yes, even in your own
point of view...I see it! Wouldn\'t expect anything less from you!!
July 12th, 2023 09:51
AWESTRUCK
Introverted Sage said:
This reminds me of how we are known differently by everyone that knows us.
Nice write!
Thanks for sharing
July 9th, 2023 14:35
Introverted Sage said:
This reminds me of how we are known differently by everyone that knows us.
Nice write!
Thanks for sharing
July 9th, 2023 14:35
AWESTRUCK
Parisab said:
Sublime description of your muse today-Great notice to her details, even her pain, when you carved out this poem, poet friend.
July 9th, 2023 12:44
Parisab said:
Sublime description of your muse today-Great notice to her details, even her pain, when you carved out this poem, poet friend.
July 9th, 2023 12:44
AWESTRUCK
peto said:
Great title and tribute Bobby
Norma Jean will never be forgotten
Really enjoyed this read
July 9th, 2023 10:31
peto said:
Great title and tribute Bobby
Norma Jean will never be forgotten
Really enjoyed this read
July 9th, 2023 10:31
AWESTRUCK
John Prophet said:
The female’s designed to muddle the male mind. Some more so than others. Nice write!
JP
July 9th, 2023 08:21
John Prophet said:
The female’s designed to muddle the male mind. Some more so than others. Nice write!
JP
July 9th, 2023 08:21
AWESTRUCK
Bobby O said:
You woke me up for that whole truck full of incite w that deep look? Love you lots
July 9th, 2023 05:33
Bobby O said:
You woke me up for that whole truck full of incite w that deep look? Love you lots
July 9th, 2023 05:33
ELIMINATE, ACCUMULATE , CELEBRATE
Introverted Sage said:
Some words or maybe the combination of words seem to strike a chord in one where another just sees.. some words.
The depth, steps and culmination of this bring to mind memories buried deep.
Where does that prismatic view come from.. and how can we make it more constant?
My guess.. Eliminate, Accumulate, Celebrate?
Brilliant!
July 8th, 2023 16:40
Introverted Sage said:
Some words or maybe the combination of words seem to strike a chord in one where another just sees.. some words.
The depth, steps and culmination of this bring to mind memories buried deep.
Where does that prismatic view come from.. and how can we make it more constant?
My guess.. Eliminate, Accumulate, Celebrate?
Brilliant!
July 8th, 2023 16:40
CORRECTION
Introverted Sage said:
\'it\'s their trial\'
Profound realization.
What\'s meant for you will always find you.
What\'s not will fall away.
Great write!
July 8th, 2023 15:48
Introverted Sage said:
\'it\'s their trial\'
Profound realization.
What\'s meant for you will always find you.
What\'s not will fall away.
Great write!
July 8th, 2023 15:48
ELIMINATE, ACCUMULATE , CELEBRATE
hzugman said:
Nice poem Bobby. I particularly like your innovative format presentation. I\'m 83 so you probably think faster than I ...... do.
July 8th, 2023 08:41
hzugman said:
Nice poem Bobby. I particularly like your innovative format presentation. I\'m 83 so you probably think faster than I ...... do.
July 8th, 2023 08:41
ELIMINATE, ACCUMULATE , CELEBRATE
peto said:
Put together beautifully
This latest installment is magic
It\'s very much like a rap
Not positive but believe rap is for
Rhythmic American poetry
Exactly what we have here
Great read
July 8th, 2023 07:54
peto said:
Put together beautifully
This latest installment is magic
It\'s very much like a rap
Not positive but believe rap is for
Rhythmic American poetry
Exactly what we have here
Great read
July 8th, 2023 07:54
PERFECT TIME IS NOW
DrichThePoet said:
You should figure that out and tell me ok🙂
July 8th, 2023 03:03
DrichThePoet said:
You should figure that out and tell me ok🙂
July 8th, 2023 03:03
ELIMINATE, ACCUMULATE , CELEBRATE
Parisab said:
This trilogy is very special with rich and implicit meaning.
July 8th, 2023 01:22
Parisab said:
This trilogy is very special with rich and implicit meaning.
July 8th, 2023 01:22
CONNECTION
arqios said:
The inside circle begins with weeding out the spoiled apple from infecting the rest.
July 8th, 2023 01:21
arqios said:
The inside circle begins with weeding out the spoiled apple from infecting the rest.
July 8th, 2023 01:21
WORDS
Caring dove said:
Hello ) thanks for reading my poems . Yeah , I do think some people take criticism quite strongly and I guess we all want nice comments on our poems .. sorry that you have upset a few people on here .. I think ‘ nobody’s perfect ‘ but yeah criticism can affect people , in ways I guess . I don’t think there’s anything wrong in saying where we might improve in our poetry .. that might even be helpful to some
July 8th, 2023 00:39
Caring dove said:
Hello ) thanks for reading my poems . Yeah , I do think some people take criticism quite strongly and I guess we all want nice comments on our poems .. sorry that you have upset a few people on here .. I think ‘ nobody’s perfect ‘ but yeah criticism can affect people , in ways I guess . I don’t think there’s anything wrong in saying where we might improve in our poetry .. that might even be helpful to some
July 8th, 2023 00:39
CONNECTION
LIZ said:
I had to go and read the other one. This is such an important subject. Getting rid of poisonous people, who hold us back, and then adding those who bring light into our lives. A painful process...but rewarding. \"Cuz Sustenance Seeps Thru\"-absolutely!
July 7th, 2023 13:20
LIZ said:
I had to go and read the other one. This is such an important subject. Getting rid of poisonous people, who hold us back, and then adding those who bring light into our lives. A painful process...but rewarding. \"Cuz Sustenance Seeps Thru\"-absolutely!
July 7th, 2023 13:20
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