Comments received on poems by Bobby O
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Bobby O said:
When we played tag in grade school …
September 25th, 2023 04:22
Bobby O said:
When we played tag in grade school …
September 25th, 2023 04:22
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Lorenz said:
O yeah,
everybody get together
put your hands like this
and sing alone with the Jackson five ,
yeah !
September 25th, 2023 04:19
Lorenz said:
O yeah,
everybody get together
put your hands like this
and sing alone with the Jackson five ,
yeah !
September 25th, 2023 04:19
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Neville said:
you managed to cram more than just a handful of life\'s very important lessons into such a tiny space .. bravo Bobby O .. N
September 25th, 2023 01:59
Neville said:
you managed to cram more than just a handful of life\'s very important lessons into such a tiny space .. bravo Bobby O .. N
September 25th, 2023 01:59
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David Wakeling said:
This is incredible.So much wisdom here.Sadly I\'m too dumb to understand it all but I will give it a second try.Amazing
September 24th, 2023 21:52
David Wakeling said:
This is incredible.So much wisdom here.Sadly I\'m too dumb to understand it all but I will give it a second try.Amazing
September 24th, 2023 21:52
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Introverted Sage said:
Wise words
great write!
September 24th, 2023 20:25
Introverted Sage said:
Wise words
great write!
September 24th, 2023 20:25
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Bobby O said:
I agree. I’m thinking this might fall into the general common sense category, sorta like “look both ways before crossing the street”
Far be from me to advise most of my tales tell of barely surviving.
September 24th, 2023 19:53
Bobby O said:
I agree. I’m thinking this might fall into the general common sense category, sorta like “look both ways before crossing the street”
Far be from me to advise most of my tales tell of barely surviving.
September 24th, 2023 19:53
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Bobby O said:
I agree. I’m thinking this might fall into the general common sense category, sorta like “look both ways before crossing the street”
Far be from me to advise most of my tales tell of barely surviving.
September 24th, 2023 19:52
Bobby O said:
I agree. I’m thinking this might fall into the general common sense category, sorta like “look both ways before crossing the street”
Far be from me to advise most of my tales tell of barely surviving.
September 24th, 2023 19:52
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Doggerel Dave said:
Not normally keen on on offerings of advice in poetic form here.
But there\'s lotsa wisdom there......
September 24th, 2023 19:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Not normally keen on on offerings of advice in poetic form here.
But there\'s lotsa wisdom there......
September 24th, 2023 19:39
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Parisab said:
Finding the truth in connection within and a gentle attachment to the one you adore! So sweet is higher love…
September 24th, 2023 19:32
Parisab said:
Finding the truth in connection within and a gentle attachment to the one you adore! So sweet is higher love…
September 24th, 2023 19:32
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vividvoid14 said:
haha ofc you posted it on your page
September 24th, 2023 17:43
vividvoid14 said:
haha ofc you posted it on your page
September 24th, 2023 17:43
MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
Bobby O said:
Men are such j@@offs so many times over.
September 23rd, 2023 17:23
Bobby O said:
Men are such j@@offs so many times over.
September 23rd, 2023 17:23
MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
Parisab said:
How could one resist, pleasure or business, both would become tales to tell, from the likes of her-side note, I saw a very bad movie of her the other night and thought that her talent is definitely underutilized because the “movie business” only saw her as a piece of as$
September 23rd, 2023 17:04
Parisab said:
How could one resist, pleasure or business, both would become tales to tell, from the likes of her-side note, I saw a very bad movie of her the other night and thought that her talent is definitely underutilized because the “movie business” only saw her as a piece of as$
September 23rd, 2023 17:04
MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
jarcher54 said:
Oh wow... the parting image is so poignant. A lovely synecdoche... that last whiff of perfume, that last time being in her company. Oh and thanks for the photo-- it kind of explains a lot!
September 23rd, 2023 13:32
jarcher54 said:
Oh wow... the parting image is so poignant. A lovely synecdoche... that last whiff of perfume, that last time being in her company. Oh and thanks for the photo-- it kind of explains a lot!
September 23rd, 2023 13:32
MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
David Wakeling said:
Powerful verse here.A tough life lesson.Well done
September 23rd, 2023 06:58
David Wakeling said:
Powerful verse here.A tough life lesson.Well done
September 23rd, 2023 06:58
MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
Bobby O said:
Thanks very much. She was fun for a minute. That photo above the poem is actually her.
September 23rd, 2023 03:59
Bobby O said:
Thanks very much. She was fun for a minute. That photo above the poem is actually her.
September 23rd, 2023 03:59
MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
Doggerel Dave said:
Moral tale - powerful piece of advice........
That\'s.. (is.. was).. entertainment.
September 23rd, 2023 01:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Moral tale - powerful piece of advice........
That\'s.. (is.. was).. entertainment.
September 23rd, 2023 01:48
MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
Neville said:
never learn anything by half ..
I sense both a compelling and constraining pleasure, but not maybe in equal measures and with a whole lot of intrigue thrown in .. a jolly good read old chap ... Neville
September 23rd, 2023 01:27
Neville said:
never learn anything by half ..
I sense both a compelling and constraining pleasure, but not maybe in equal measures and with a whole lot of intrigue thrown in .. a jolly good read old chap ... Neville
September 23rd, 2023 01:27
CRAZED and CONFUSED
Parisab said:
The barren desert must feelings so foreign from your side of Chicago-and those darn grains of sand, ouch, in the land escape of your words…wishing you well…
September 21st, 2023 23:04
Parisab said:
The barren desert must feelings so foreign from your side of Chicago-and those darn grains of sand, ouch, in the land escape of your words…wishing you well…
September 21st, 2023 23:04
CRAZED and CONFUSED
Neville said:
there are those that say the last cut is the deepest ..
but we all know that it\'s just the beginning, don\'t we .. a fine narrative that bites deep and leaves a sting behind it .. Neville
September 19th, 2023 05:44
Neville said:
there are those that say the last cut is the deepest ..
but we all know that it\'s just the beginning, don\'t we .. a fine narrative that bites deep and leaves a sting behind it .. Neville
September 19th, 2023 05:44
CRAZED and CONFUSED
Bobby O said:
It’s all made up. I just pretended that a woman dumped me as hard as thst is to believe it could happen???! And I don’t even know what a dromedary is?
September 19th, 2023 04:15
Bobby O said:
It’s all made up. I just pretended that a woman dumped me as hard as thst is to believe it could happen???! And I don’t even know what a dromedary is?
September 19th, 2023 04:15
CRAZED and CONFUSED
LIZ said:
Painful to read, but oh so raw. I think this one\'s my favorite from you, because it feels the most real. Mmmm not necessarily a waste of time. We always focus on the aftermath. What about the good times? But, what do I know!!! This is beautifully heartfelt!!! Glad you shared it!!!
September 19th, 2023 04:07
LIZ said:
Painful to read, but oh so raw. I think this one\'s my favorite from you, because it feels the most real. Mmmm not necessarily a waste of time. We always focus on the aftermath. What about the good times? But, what do I know!!! This is beautifully heartfelt!!! Glad you shared it!!!
September 19th, 2023 04:07
CRAZED and CONFUSED
David Wakeling said:
Some tough realisations here..I hope time will heal.
September 19th, 2023 03:20
David Wakeling said:
Some tough realisations here..I hope time will heal.
September 19th, 2023 03:20
SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! !\'m impressed with your rapping skill. You have my sympathy, and I know how you feel, for I am a Sox fan, but of the Red persuasion. We too are now on a downward trend. Today\'s players and teams are all about the money.
Your rap shows what happens when a great team becomes lost due to insufficient funding. Maybe there should be a limit on salaries and expenditures. - Phil A.
September 18th, 2023 21:30
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! !\'m impressed with your rapping skill. You have my sympathy, and I know how you feel, for I am a Sox fan, but of the Red persuasion. We too are now on a downward trend. Today\'s players and teams are all about the money.
Your rap shows what happens when a great team becomes lost due to insufficient funding. Maybe there should be a limit on salaries and expenditures. - Phil A.
September 18th, 2023 21:30
SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE
Bobby O said:
No, I was at a party and some kids were freestyling Rappin’ and when it’s your turn they give you a subject matter and I asked to join in and cause I was talking bout BB earlier with a few of them that was my assigned subject. They didn’t even believe I could or would do it and one of them recorded me and the poem here is my exact freestyle. The kids were surprised, but it’s something I can do , mostly..
September 18th, 2023 04:13
Bobby O said:
No, I was at a party and some kids were freestyling Rappin’ and when it’s your turn they give you a subject matter and I asked to join in and cause I was talking bout BB earlier with a few of them that was my assigned subject. They didn’t even believe I could or would do it and one of them recorded me and the poem here is my exact freestyle. The kids were surprised, but it’s something I can do , mostly..
September 18th, 2023 04:13
SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE
Neville said:
I am a baseball virgin .. sorry if we are on about something else entirely ..
September 18th, 2023 03:52
Neville said:
I am a baseball virgin .. sorry if we are on about something else entirely ..
September 18th, 2023 03:52
SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE
Bobby O said:
The kids are always surprised that an old man can hold his own in that arena. It’s fun and I’m careful I don’t step up to those w monster talent. These guys weren’t ready
September 17th, 2023 23:29
Bobby O said:
The kids are always surprised that an old man can hold his own in that arena. It’s fun and I’m careful I don’t step up to those w monster talent. These guys weren’t ready
September 17th, 2023 23:29
FATED HERO FAKED
jarcher54 said:
I saw the courage before I read your comments.. bold and rough, rugged like Whitman, musical like Ginsburg. Carry on sir. A good one to re-read!
September 16th, 2023 01:57
jarcher54 said:
I saw the courage before I read your comments.. bold and rough, rugged like Whitman, musical like Ginsburg. Carry on sir. A good one to re-read!
September 16th, 2023 01:57
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