Comments received on poems by Bobby O
POSTPARTUM SNEAK ATTACK
Parisab said:
Very respectful and empathetic perspective from a third person point of view-it looks like you took their words to heart and reflected it back in a tender way-good story telling about this serious mental health matter
June 16th, 2023 21:36
Parisab said:
Very respectful and empathetic perspective from a third person point of view-it looks like you took their words to heart and reflected it back in a tender way-good story telling about this serious mental health matter
June 16th, 2023 21:36
POSTPARTUM SNEAK ATTACK
Jeffrey Weese said:
Bobby O, your poem \"Postpartum Sneak Attack\" is a profoundly moving tribute that sheds light on the reality of postpartum struggles. Your skillful usage of vivid imagery and sincere tone provides an intimate and touching glimpse into your friend\'s experience. The varied rhythm conveys the unpredictability and intensity of her emotional journey, heightening the reader\'s empathy. Your choice of words skillfully mirrors the chaos and turmoil that she faces, yet also the strength and determination she embodies.
Furthermore, your reference to her husband\'s unwavering support underscores the importance of unity and companionship during such difficult times. The use of the child\'s name, Graysen, adds a deeply personal touch and serves as a symbol of hope, reinforcing the sentiment that love can prevail over adversity. Lastly, your closing lines invoke a strong sense of optimism and resilience, embodying the message that despite the current hardship, there will be a return to joy and normalcy. It\'s an incredibly powerful testament to human resilience and the power of love, and it resonates profoundly.
June 16th, 2023 10:39
Jeffrey Weese said:
Bobby O, your poem \"Postpartum Sneak Attack\" is a profoundly moving tribute that sheds light on the reality of postpartum struggles. Your skillful usage of vivid imagery and sincere tone provides an intimate and touching glimpse into your friend\'s experience. The varied rhythm conveys the unpredictability and intensity of her emotional journey, heightening the reader\'s empathy. Your choice of words skillfully mirrors the chaos and turmoil that she faces, yet also the strength and determination she embodies.
Furthermore, your reference to her husband\'s unwavering support underscores the importance of unity and companionship during such difficult times. The use of the child\'s name, Graysen, adds a deeply personal touch and serves as a symbol of hope, reinforcing the sentiment that love can prevail over adversity. Lastly, your closing lines invoke a strong sense of optimism and resilience, embodying the message that despite the current hardship, there will be a return to joy and normalcy. It\'s an incredibly powerful testament to human resilience and the power of love, and it resonates profoundly.
June 16th, 2023 10:39
LEARNIN’ FROM CURTIS
terriblesoul977 said:
I giggled a bit to this one. I like your writing style!!
June 6th, 2023 01:48
terriblesoul977 said:
I giggled a bit to this one. I like your writing style!!
June 6th, 2023 01:48
MEASURE TWICE
sadpoet said:
Nope. Attach some meaning to the cliches if you’re gonna use them. Just to say “happenstance unforeseen” without taking an extra thirty seconds to bring to life s real visual. Happenstance unforeseen is just lazy.
Do you see how rude your comment on my poem is when it\'s reflected back with your own work? Get a life.
May 31st, 2023 10:41
sadpoet said:
Nope. Attach some meaning to the cliches if you’re gonna use them. Just to say “happenstance unforeseen” without taking an extra thirty seconds to bring to life s real visual. Happenstance unforeseen is just lazy.
Do you see how rude your comment on my poem is when it\'s reflected back with your own work? Get a life.
May 31st, 2023 10:41
MEASURE TWICE
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s getting compliments from beautiful women. I get \'em from ugly women, and run a mile! heehee . Did I make that up?!
May 31st, 2023 09:24
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s getting compliments from beautiful women. I get \'em from ugly women, and run a mile! heehee . Did I make that up?!
May 31st, 2023 09:24
SUDDENLY AWKWARD
depthsofthesoul said:
Hopefully I don\'t offend but reading this had me chuckling a little bit thinking back to my 20\'s and dating...what a mess 😅 lol
May 27th, 2023 23:25
depthsofthesoul said:
Hopefully I don\'t offend but reading this had me chuckling a little bit thinking back to my 20\'s and dating...what a mess 😅 lol
May 27th, 2023 23:25
SUDDENLY AWKWARD
Neville said:
Ha, you are not alone .. been there, done that and wore the T shirt out several times ... Neville
May 27th, 2023 13:18
Neville said:
Ha, you are not alone .. been there, done that and wore the T shirt out several times ... Neville
May 27th, 2023 13:18
FACING HARD TRUTH
Bobby O said:
It was an ode to distraction and an admission I’m still prone to the minutia that sidetracks focus.
May 27th, 2023 03:56
Bobby O said:
It was an ode to distraction and an admission I’m still prone to the minutia that sidetracks focus.
May 27th, 2023 03:56
FACING HARD TRUTH
horrorautumnpoet said:
DId you happen to get inspiration from my poem Doppelganger? just asking bc I see sort a of resemblance. i mean, it\'s okay if you did or if you didnt. just curious..
I liked it although it could be explored more!
May 27th, 2023 03:52
horrorautumnpoet said:
DId you happen to get inspiration from my poem Doppelganger? just asking bc I see sort a of resemblance. i mean, it\'s okay if you did or if you didnt. just curious..
I liked it although it could be explored more!
May 27th, 2023 03:52
SUDDENLY AWKWARD
horrorautumnpoet said:
Loved this one, bro!
Got a little stiff and deer in head lights right in the middle there.
May 27th, 2023 03:43
horrorautumnpoet said:
Loved this one, bro!
Got a little stiff and deer in head lights right in the middle there.
May 27th, 2023 03:43
PERFECT TIME IS NOW
Bobby O said:
Thanks for the read and kind words. I surely will read your piece, like right now.
May 26th, 2023 21:21
Bobby O said:
Thanks for the read and kind words. I surely will read your piece, like right now.
May 26th, 2023 21:21
SUDDENLY AWKWARD
Parisab said:
Writing about past impressions, like looking for footprints on the sand…Clever poem!
May 26th, 2023 20:49
Parisab said:
Writing about past impressions, like looking for footprints on the sand…Clever poem!
May 26th, 2023 20:49
PERFECT TIME IS NOW
Bobby O said:
Thanks for the read and kind words. I surely will read your piece, like right now.
May 26th, 2023 06:44
Bobby O said:
Thanks for the read and kind words. I surely will read your piece, like right now.
May 26th, 2023 06:44
PERFECT TIME IS NOW
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fine poem motivating and expressed awesomely well in smooth rocking rap like flow and tune wow! Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 06:19
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fine poem motivating and expressed awesomely well in smooth rocking rap like flow and tune wow! Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 06:19
Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G
Bobby O said:
Simpatico! Gonna ask for your hand in meaningful friendship. Thanks for checking it out. Means a lot.
May 21st, 2023 17:56
Bobby O said:
Simpatico! Gonna ask for your hand in meaningful friendship. Thanks for checking it out. Means a lot.
May 21st, 2023 17:56
Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G
lisztmsv said:
I absolutely love all your musical imagery. It took me back to my performance arts instructor, when he taught me to appreciate all types of genres of music. Music definitely inspires us all, influences us to become great writers. It makes us grow to aspire to artists as great as the many legends you have named. Thank you for recommending me this piece to read. I\'m glad I did. Looking forward to reading the rest of your works.
May 21st, 2023 17:53
lisztmsv said:
I absolutely love all your musical imagery. It took me back to my performance arts instructor, when he taught me to appreciate all types of genres of music. Music definitely inspires us all, influences us to become great writers. It makes us grow to aspire to artists as great as the many legends you have named. Thank you for recommending me this piece to read. I\'m glad I did. Looking forward to reading the rest of your works.
May 21st, 2023 17:53
FACING HARD TRUTH
Bobby O said:
Gratified fir your words and appreciate the symbiotic sharing in progress.
May 21st, 2023 03:30
Bobby O said:
Gratified fir your words and appreciate the symbiotic sharing in progress.
May 21st, 2023 03:30
FACING HARD TRUTH
Bobby O said:
Very cool. You made it sound better than I actually thought. It’s finished simpler than I intended and I just gave in to the way it wound up. At first, I was going to examine the blur as a metaphor for how things go awry and how we fictionslizr to serve selfish purpose but that vanity thing which was only gonna be one line gave me an easy out. I’m still gonna attempt the more serious w chagrin and restyled purpose. But you made me feel better and I couldn’t not admit truth to the YOU in my poetic circle.
May 21st, 2023 02:04
Bobby O said:
Very cool. You made it sound better than I actually thought. It’s finished simpler than I intended and I just gave in to the way it wound up. At first, I was going to examine the blur as a metaphor for how things go awry and how we fictionslizr to serve selfish purpose but that vanity thing which was only gonna be one line gave me an easy out. I’m still gonna attempt the more serious w chagrin and restyled purpose. But you made me feel better and I couldn’t not admit truth to the YOU in my poetic circle.
May 21st, 2023 02:04
FACING HARD TRUTH
Parisab said:
Great and brave write-using intellectualized terms to serve one’s vanity-We take ourselves entirely too seriously-thank you for the sharper perspective-
May 21st, 2023 01:54
Parisab said:
Great and brave write-using intellectualized terms to serve one’s vanity-We take ourselves entirely too seriously-thank you for the sharper perspective-
May 21st, 2023 01:54
TWO VOICES THAT WE FEED
myself and me said:
It is such a fresh idea to try and you did it so beautifully. I am honored that you read my piece. Please accept my apology for such a late response. I have not visit here for quite a while. It is a pleasure to know you here. I enjoyed reading your poems. M.M.
May 18th, 2023 19:35
myself and me said:
It is such a fresh idea to try and you did it so beautifully. I am honored that you read my piece. Please accept my apology for such a late response. I have not visit here for quite a while. It is a pleasure to know you here. I enjoyed reading your poems. M.M.
May 18th, 2023 19:35
PRAYER OF THANKS
Keith Jeffries said:
Gratitude shown through prayer is essential to recognising who we are in this life and how God loves us. Saying thank you to the provider of life should be a natural response. This poem embodies such an act. Thank you
May 17th, 2023 04:07
Keith Jeffries said:
Gratitude shown through prayer is essential to recognising who we are in this life and how God loves us. Saying thank you to the provider of life should be a natural response. This poem embodies such an act. Thank you
May 17th, 2023 04:07
CLICHE’ NO LONGER
Bobby O said:
Your words really gratify and your humble decry truly identifies a certain character of substance both admirable and regal. Also , I’m certain that nuance you note is so in your wheelhouse and silky like a Pip and MJ fast break. Much appreciate the connect and I am always excited when you share your thoughts. Thanks
May 16th, 2023 02:07
Bobby O said:
Your words really gratify and your humble decry truly identifies a certain character of substance both admirable and regal. Also , I’m certain that nuance you note is so in your wheelhouse and silky like a Pip and MJ fast break. Much appreciate the connect and I am always excited when you share your thoughts. Thanks
May 16th, 2023 02:07
CLICHE’ NO LONGER
Parisab said:
‘When again love visits,Thank God that glorious day
This story then will have a happy end,
no longer a cliche
The final lines beautifully wrapped up the whole essence of the poem-the final words encompassed the whole story in a new and fresh ending. This is particularly a difficult task. I will try and attempt this nuanced magic one day.
May 16th, 2023 01:54
Parisab said:
‘When again love visits,Thank God that glorious day
This story then will have a happy end,
no longer a cliche
The final lines beautifully wrapped up the whole essence of the poem-the final words encompassed the whole story in a new and fresh ending. This is particularly a difficult task. I will try and attempt this nuanced magic one day.
May 16th, 2023 01:54
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