Comments received on poems by Bobby O
CLICHE’ NO LONGER
arqios said:
It is in others that I seem to see myself the best so polishing the mirror is quite compelling, do unto others so it has been otherwise said! Thanks for the most appealing of reminders.
May 14th, 2023 20:36
arqios said:
It is in others that I seem to see myself the best so polishing the mirror is quite compelling, do unto others so it has been otherwise said! Thanks for the most appealing of reminders.
May 14th, 2023 20:36
CLICHE’ NO LONGER
horrorautumnpoet said:
Enjoyed this!! It had some good life vibes in it :)
May 13th, 2023 12:49
horrorautumnpoet said:
Enjoyed this!! It had some good life vibes in it :)
May 13th, 2023 12:49
CLICHE’ NO LONGER
Jerry Reynolds said:
\"Chin deep in a self-dug rut\"
An image that will live comfortably on the red dirt road of my mind.
Good, go Bobby O.
May 13th, 2023 10:48
Jerry Reynolds said:
\"Chin deep in a self-dug rut\"
An image that will live comfortably on the red dirt road of my mind.
Good, go Bobby O.
May 13th, 2023 10:48
CLICHE’ NO LONGER
Neville said:
there\'s nowt quite like it is there, that feeling of unconditional giving ..
May 13th, 2023 08:46
Neville said:
there\'s nowt quite like it is there, that feeling of unconditional giving ..
May 13th, 2023 08:46
3 NERDS WALKED INTO A V BAR
orchidee said:
I was wanting: \'3 (e.g.) elephants walked into a bar\'.
\'We don\'t get many elephants in here, said the landlord.
\'I\'m not surprised, with the prices you charge\' said the elephants.
There\'s a naughty elephant joke that I cannot repat in public - have to request it by e-mail!
May 13th, 2023 02:10
orchidee said:
I was wanting: \'3 (e.g.) elephants walked into a bar\'.
\'We don\'t get many elephants in here, said the landlord.
\'I\'m not surprised, with the prices you charge\' said the elephants.
There\'s a naughty elephant joke that I cannot repat in public - have to request it by e-mail!
May 13th, 2023 02:10
3 NERDS WALKED INTO A V BAR
Parisab said:
You taught them in the true southern gentlemanly fashion, sir.
May 12th, 2023 14:10
Parisab said:
You taught them in the true southern gentlemanly fashion, sir.
May 12th, 2023 14:10
EVERY BUNNY NEEDS SOME BUNNY
sorenbarrett said:
Bobby this one is a little late for Easter. It reminded me of episodes that I have had in the past. It gave me a smile.
May 11th, 2023 08:23
sorenbarrett said:
Bobby this one is a little late for Easter. It reminded me of episodes that I have had in the past. It gave me a smile.
May 11th, 2023 08:23
Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G
DontSleepOnTheBoy said:
\"Words and chords fired with a furious frenzy and a ferocious fluidity. Lines and rhymes scatted so scathingly slow they create this surreal serenity.\"
Too clean! I love it 👌🏿
May 11th, 2023 00:39
DontSleepOnTheBoy said:
\"Words and chords fired with a furious frenzy and a ferocious fluidity. Lines and rhymes scatted so scathingly slow they create this surreal serenity.\"
Too clean! I love it 👌🏿
May 11th, 2023 00:39
TWO VOICES THAT WE FEED
arqios said:
Truly inspired! The concepts and the supporting thought and expression brings to life these two voices that we can meet even each and every day.
May 10th, 2023 08:42
arqios said:
Truly inspired! The concepts and the supporting thought and expression brings to life these two voices that we can meet even each and every day.
May 10th, 2023 08:42
CONNECTION
arqios said:
Privy on the ledge, hat askew. The raking angle connection renewed.
May 7th, 2023 16:27
arqios said:
Privy on the ledge, hat askew. The raking angle connection renewed.
May 7th, 2023 16:27
CONNECTION
MendedFences27 said:
Connecting despite the distractions and the noise, seeing another in a weaker moment and recognizing their
inner beauty knowing another well enough to recognize them within their smile, all these things seen in your few words of poetic beauty. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 7th, 2023 11:28
MendedFences27 said:
Connecting despite the distractions and the noise, seeing another in a weaker moment and recognizing their
inner beauty knowing another well enough to recognize them within their smile, all these things seen in your few words of poetic beauty. Loved it. - Phil A.
May 7th, 2023 11:28
CONNECTION
Neville said:
the synapse that existed between us has since been connected ..
May 7th, 2023 01:48
Neville said:
the synapse that existed between us has since been connected ..
May 7th, 2023 01:48
CONNECTION
Bobby O said:
I’m hoping it rings. Thanks , as always, for your astute insight and kind words
May 7th, 2023 00:17
Bobby O said:
I’m hoping it rings. Thanks , as always, for your astute insight and kind words
May 7th, 2023 00:17
PRAYER OF THANKS
sorenbarrett said:
It is refreshing to hear any thanks these days. Gratitude is highly lacking. Whether God, other people, or just good fortune people seem more interested in asking than thanking.
May 6th, 2023 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
It is refreshing to hear any thanks these days. Gratitude is highly lacking. Whether God, other people, or just good fortune people seem more interested in asking than thanking.
May 6th, 2023 19:00
PRAYER OF THANKS
Neville said:
The man did good .. very good it seems .. not an easy thing to do ..
well done ..
Neville
May 6th, 2023 05:33
Neville said:
The man did good .. very good it seems .. not an easy thing to do ..
well done ..
Neville
May 6th, 2023 05:33
PRAYER OF THANKS
orchidee said:
A fine write and prayer Bobby.
I missed a chance at a Funeral Service. Only knew the person briefly. The Registrar-type person (not a Vicar) came out and asked the few people \'Does anyone actually know J. much, to give a few words/eulogy?\' I missed a chance.
May 6th, 2023 02:05
orchidee said:
A fine write and prayer Bobby.
I missed a chance at a Funeral Service. Only knew the person briefly. The Registrar-type person (not a Vicar) came out and asked the few people \'Does anyone actually know J. much, to give a few words/eulogy?\' I missed a chance.
May 6th, 2023 02:05
PRAYER OF THANKS
Parisab said:
Divine and joyful! As though your words were touched by the holy spirit and rose to the occasion, our eyes tilt and shine humbly toward the heavenly sky”
May 6th, 2023 01:25
Parisab said:
Divine and joyful! As though your words were touched by the holy spirit and rose to the occasion, our eyes tilt and shine humbly toward the heavenly sky”
May 6th, 2023 01:25
TRAVELS
Bobby O said:
I certainly did not invent it. I believe it was a format under the broader category
DIMINISHED HEXAVERSE it’s cool that it perks interest , was a new experience for me . Even harder for me was format
EXTREME ALLITERATION. Had to be a certain length (??) and tell a story and EVERY WORD had to start w same letter.
I barely squeezed a finished poem seconds before the 25 minute(?) clock ran out. Check it out It’s titled PERHAPS , it on my poems list here.
May 5th, 2023 08:30
Bobby O said:
I certainly did not invent it. I believe it was a format under the broader category
DIMINISHED HEXAVERSE it’s cool that it perks interest , was a new experience for me . Even harder for me was format
EXTREME ALLITERATION. Had to be a certain length (??) and tell a story and EVERY WORD had to start w same letter.
I barely squeezed a finished poem seconds before the 25 minute(?) clock ran out. Check it out It’s titled PERHAPS , it on my poems list here.
May 5th, 2023 08:30
TRAVELS
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was extraordinary. I swear poetry competitions are some of the heated competitions to ever exist, it\'s like everyone glares at each other with crazy eyes, lol. This is legendary, though, and the form is so intriguing...does the form have a name, or did you invent it?
May 5th, 2023 07:53
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow this was extraordinary. I swear poetry competitions are some of the heated competitions to ever exist, it\'s like everyone glares at each other with crazy eyes, lol. This is legendary, though, and the form is so intriguing...does the form have a name, or did you invent it?
May 5th, 2023 07:53
TRAVELS
Neville said:
Get outa here, how could you not .. I have myself neva dared to take on board such a complex formal literary feat .. I know a decent hit man tho\' if you wanna bring out a grievance .......... Nice one sir .. N :)
May 5th, 2023 05:10
Neville said:
Get outa here, how could you not .. I have myself neva dared to take on board such a complex formal literary feat .. I know a decent hit man tho\' if you wanna bring out a grievance .......... Nice one sir .. N :)
May 5th, 2023 05:10
TRAVELS
Bobby O said:
Cool. It was the challenge to be able submit within the format and I was ok with my result. There’s another piece that required a certain meaty length w format called
EXTREME ALLITERATION that really twisted me up before I achieved staying within the rule. Every word had to start w the same Letter in a piece that moved w lines supporting a point of view. It’s titled PERHAPS. , within my list of poems should you be curious.
May 5th, 2023 04:58
Bobby O said:
Cool. It was the challenge to be able submit within the format and I was ok with my result. There’s another piece that required a certain meaty length w format called
EXTREME ALLITERATION that really twisted me up before I achieved staying within the rule. Every word had to start w the same Letter in a piece that moved w lines supporting a point of view. It’s titled PERHAPS. , within my list of poems should you be curious.
May 5th, 2023 04:58
TRAVELS
Fay Slimm. said:
Win or not that writing contest I enjoyed the format and the message within. Second chances are sometimes there to be taken Thanks for sharing it Bobby
May 5th, 2023 04:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Win or not that writing contest I enjoyed the format and the message within. Second chances are sometimes there to be taken Thanks for sharing it Bobby
May 5th, 2023 04:44
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