Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



Pinocchio, deep in thought
LIZ said:

🤣🤣🤣🤣 thank you for the laugh! Happy Saturday! ❤️

July 29th, 2023 09:27

Pinocchio, deep in thought
peto said:

Tell the right lie and something else would grow
Cheers for the laugh

July 29th, 2023 09:01

Pinocchio, deep in thought
orchidee said:

An X-rated Pinocchio film. Swoon! lol.
But of course you mean, his little finger, for example. heehee.

July 29th, 2023 08:12

Pinocchio, deep in thought
Caring dove said:

Too much lying isn’t good lol it probably doesn’t help us either . Guess we use to question our own actions /behaviour ms sometimes

Happy Saturday to you too ))



July 29th, 2023 04:02

Winter’s Meadow
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive words Teddy.

Andy

July 29th, 2023 01:55

Winter’s Meadow
Bella Shepard said:

I love the picture you\'ve chosen for this poem dear Teddy, a very special place. Your verse and song, a beautiful remembrance.

July 28th, 2023 13:50

Winter’s Meadow
Bella Shepard said:

I love the picture you\'ve chosen for this poem dear Teddy, a very special place. Your verse and song, a beautiful remembrance.

July 28th, 2023 13:50

Winter’s Meadow
L. B. Mek said:

I\'m sorry your poignant words
were inspired
by such a tragic event my friend;
but in a way, I really relate to your theme/vision dear Poetess
and I agree, in a lot of ways
all Art, can be distilled
as artists curating
a meeting place, between that
which grants us our inspiration
and the us, that yearns to communicate
with that very source..
so those brushstrokes, do tend
to plead, a little
those rhymes do stress to please
and ask if that special someone
or whatever, may visit
this homage, to what the artist deemed
as an important part of who they are/were..
yeah, this is truly such a deep write..
thank you!

July 28th, 2023 03:03

Just Vertigo
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
(abstract imagery at its most relatable vividity)
I read and learn, dear Poetess

July 28th, 2023 02:56

Winter’s Meadow
LIZ said:

Oh so sad, but beautiful! A loss like this is never forgotten. Sending you a big hug!!!!

July 28th, 2023 02:53

Winter’s Meadow
Neville said:



You captured the scene and added the feeling so bloomin well my fine literary friend .. Oh\' and please convey my regards to your patella\'s .. Neville ❤️

July 28th, 2023 02:29

Winter’s Meadow
Caring dove said:

A sad yet nicely expressed writing , teddy ))

Sorry to hear of that ..



July 28th, 2023 02:09

Winter’s Meadow
orchidee said:

A sensitive write T.
When KP goes, my poem will be \'Endless Joy!\' oohh, heehee.

July 28th, 2023 02:00

Just Vertigo
Goldfinch60 said:

Love\'s truth can also be there at the bottom of that mountain Teddy, just be careful climbing down and love will be there waiting for you.

Andy

July 28th, 2023 01:50

The Poetess and the Pussy
Neville said:



............... this is effin brill 🐈‍⬛❤️

July 27th, 2023 23:51

Just Vertigo
Neville said:


even when the going gets really tough, there are times when one just has to sit back, take a deep breath, close one\'s eyes gently and enjoy the view ..

and that\'s where you took me today my very dearest of Teddy\'s .. ❤️

July 27th, 2023 23:32

Just Vertigo
thinkerbell said:

Stunningly beautiful🥰

July 27th, 2023 12:20

Just Vertigo
Bella Shepard said:

I love the way you\'ve framed this watershed moment in terms of blood and red ink. Loss of blood will cause severe vertigo as can the pain of love. Such artistry in these lines dear Teddy!

July 27th, 2023 11:50

Just Vertigo
orchidee said:

KP\'s dramatic too - a drama queen! lol.

July 27th, 2023 07:23

Just Vertigo
sorenbarrett said:

Such expressive lines about the emotions inside that one feels when emptying the dam through a pin prick of a pen.

July 27th, 2023 06:45

Just Vertigo
peto said:

Love,truth, blood, violence, agony
And an ending that left me dizzy
Without lines???
Back with a vengeance
Great read Teddy

July 27th, 2023 04:19

Just Vertigo
LIZ said:

Oh I like this one. Real love will have us writing our truth in blood. It can feel crazy at times. But when that climax hits...it all comes together beautifully! ❤️

July 27th, 2023 03:39

Destination
Caring dove said:

We all need wings to fly .. or that feeling of peace and freedom to feel and be where we wish . Birds are always beautiful , I find

A lovely short writing , teddy

July 25th, 2023 11:20

Destination
sorenbarrett said:

An example of how a few words can say so much and so eloquently

July 25th, 2023 06:05

The Poetess and the Pussy
Bella Shepard said:

Dearest Teddy, as Sheldon on the \"Big Bang Theory\" would say \"Bazinga!\" From the Van Gogh-esque pic, to the caricature of the cat, along with the zinger at the end, this is priceless. What is life without a little madness. You made my day!

July 22nd, 2023 12:31

Destination
Neville said:



and I would sit beside thee as a passenger .. ❤️



July 18th, 2023 02:13

The Poetess and the Pussy
Teddy.15 said:

Dear Dave Well thank you very much then.
😁

July 18th, 2023 00:59

Destination
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words Teddy but I am sure that you have many dreams in your heart.

Andy

July 18th, 2023 00:25

The Poetess and the Pussy
Doggerel Dave said:

😁 I\'ll pay that one, Teddy.

July 18th, 2023 00:23

The Last Goodbye
MendedFences27 said:

Funny how the historical \"Last Goodbye,\" has changed with the technology, first written and sent by courier, then written and sent by mail, then by phone, and today by text,
Your experience shows that males never learn how to handle relationships. We are much too macho to get hurt. Your poem is also a lesson on how to survive the breakup. \"Just get on with my life,\" a powerful statement. - Phil A.

July 17th, 2023 21:29



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