Comments received on poems by Teddy.15



Doctor\'s Orders
AuburnScribbler said:

Being a grandson of a winemaker, I totally relate to this Teddy.15.

A very nice little rhyme indeed, and I hope that all is well.

September 13th, 2023 08:46

Doctor\'s Orders
Pop64 said:

I\'ll drink to that! Slainte!

September 13th, 2023 08:25

Violin Strings
Pop64 said:

You chose the violin for this write, not a guitar, oboe or standing bass, but that which can truly define the intention of your write. I can picture, rather hear to sound, no defined melody, but yet a captivating cacophony of sound. Splendid write.

September 13th, 2023 05:52

Violin Strings
Neville said:



Yet I feel it sing & so beautifully ❤️

September 13th, 2023 04:37

Violin Strings
Moon_child said:

its tiny but beutiful
love the photo

September 13th, 2023 04:12

Violin Strings
LIZ said:

The violin is one of those instruments that....with the right notes, can really take us through an emotional musical ride!! I love this, and the picture! 💖💖💖

September 13th, 2023 02:34

Violin Strings
orchidee said:

Is it screeching or playing melodically?! lol.

September 13th, 2023 02:09

An Ode To The Wedding Band
Aktarul Islam said:

You have a good sense of humor. Excellent poem. Keep it up, honorable poet

September 12th, 2023 17:11

An Ode To The Wedding Band
Bella Shepard said:

This is delightful, puts me in mind of the movie \"The first wives club\". And the pic, I love the way she\'s looking back to make sure he\'s flat. Men, can\'t live with \'em, can\'t kill \'em. You\'ve tickled the funny bone and given me a smile all over.

September 12th, 2023 14:59

An Ode To The Wedding Band
sorenbarrett said:

Humorous but relatable which is what gives it its humor. Well said.

September 12th, 2023 12:19

An Ode To The Wedding Band
orchidee said:

My wedding ring for KP was a ring-pull Coca-Cola can opener! lol.

September 12th, 2023 11:06

An Ode To The Wedding Band
LIZ said:

Oh boy!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Teddy!!!!! The picture\'s worth a thousand words!!! 😆

September 12th, 2023 10:14

An Ode To The Wedding Band
BlessedbyGod said:

Anytime Miss Teddy, I\'ve read your work for years and love every piece you write , you are very talented

September 12th, 2023 10:02

An Ode To The Wedding Band
BlessedbyGod said:

Hahaha, could go either way!!!
Great piece Teddy!!


September 12th, 2023 09:54

Doctor\'s Orders
Neville said:



Go on, make me laugh, like Hogarth .. after all, it\'s my bread and butter ❤️

September 12th, 2023 04:23

No Regrets
spilleronsheet said:

It feels precious to read your words again….welcome back, though my words were late but thoughts never subsided….

September 12th, 2023 02:44

Doctor\'s Orders
orchidee said:

There you are - a pic of you! What you been up to?! lol.

September 12th, 2023 01:31

Doctor\'s Orders
peto said:

Ah dr feelgood
Lifts your spirits and never let\'s you leave without a shot

September 12th, 2023 01:14

Doctor\'s Orders
LIZ said:

Or 2? 🤣 Nice one!!! 💖

September 12th, 2023 00:01

Doctor\'s Orders
Soman Ragavan said:

Doctors give their orders; poets give theirs…
“Man being reasonable must get drunk. The best of life is but intoxication.”
--Gordon Byron (1788-1824).
Soman Ragavan. 12 September, 2023
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September 11th, 2023 20:41

Doctor\'s Orders
Caring dove said:

Sometimes we need something lighthearted lol 🙂
I never drink at all .. never liked it very much




September 11th, 2023 18:01

Knowing I Saw Enough
Pop64 said:

A wish or desire, rather, for the masses, to be fulfilled before their passing. A poignant, thought provoking write!

September 11th, 2023 10:06

Knowing I Saw Enough
L. B. Mek said:

it\'s all about quality, dear Poetess
accrue more quality that quantity
and this wish of yours will be granted
way before that final curtain
comes calling...
(and what a striking image)
hope you n yours have a lovely week

September 11th, 2023 03:03

In Silence and Disbelief
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!

September 11th, 2023 02:58

Knowing I Saw Enough
orchidee said:

Ya seen me - what more could ya want?! heehee. Good write Teddy.
I seen the light - I changed the light bulb! 😁

September 11th, 2023 01:52

Knowing I Saw Enough
LIZ said:

I see you!!! And there is so much good!!!! 💖💖💖

September 10th, 2023 17:22

Knowing I Saw Enough
peto said:

Maybe you could take some consolation knowing your words let the rest of us see the light
Great message Teddy
Delivered perfectly


September 10th, 2023 17:18

In Silence and Disbelief
Bella Shepard said:

Dearest Teddy, you have captured in this poem the pain and grief that we, as a nation, suffered that day. I remember the time and place when I heard the news, watching moment by moment as it was unfolding, and then seeing the second tower fall in real time. How could this be happening? You have paid tribute to all those first responders who rushed in when duty called, and gave their lives. It is with a greatful heart that I thank you for honoring all those who suffered and died on that day.

September 9th, 2023 15:45

In Silence and Disbelief
sorenbarrett said:

A captivating memorial of a dark day that has directly or indirectly affected all of us. Powerfully stated in a moving poem.

September 9th, 2023 08:07

In Silence and Disbelief
peto said:

Empathy at it\'s finest Teddy
You are a world child
I can\'t really add to this write
Other than to thank you for it

September 9th, 2023 04:26



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