Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Empty Sky
L. B. Mek said:
(such a poignantly moody Poem
dear Poetess and please
forgive my dreary musings below kind friend
your ink inspires my honesty, a little too
effectively..
lol)
airports, are a cruel kind of gateway
to our muse of possibility and dreams
in an instant, we\'re sky high and free
and that very instant
we feel that cruel distance, singeing
that widening gap in our hearts...
(this is why i don\'t do goodbyes
I give everything i have
in the Time i\'m gifted with
the kind souls that enter my life
and when cruel fate comes around
I simply disappear
it has been this way all my life, a kindness
of sorts, since
i leave behind little but fragments
to remember me by)
but to me
every memory visits crystal clear
decades
after finality visits my cherished relationships..
but these wet eyes, realise
to feel this way, i must have loved so abundantly
and so gratefully, i shall carry these scarring
mementos
till that hurrah breath, grants a most finite
sigh of relief..
till then we reminisce and 🍻
September 4th, 2023 03:52
L. B. Mek said:
(such a poignantly moody Poem
dear Poetess and please
forgive my dreary musings below kind friend
your ink inspires my honesty, a little too
effectively..
lol)
airports, are a cruel kind of gateway
to our muse of possibility and dreams
in an instant, we\'re sky high and free
and that very instant
we feel that cruel distance, singeing
that widening gap in our hearts...
(this is why i don\'t do goodbyes
I give everything i have
in the Time i\'m gifted with
the kind souls that enter my life
and when cruel fate comes around
I simply disappear
it has been this way all my life, a kindness
of sorts, since
i leave behind little but fragments
to remember me by)
but to me
every memory visits crystal clear
decades
after finality visits my cherished relationships..
but these wet eyes, realise
to feel this way, i must have loved so abundantly
and so gratefully, i shall carry these scarring
mementos
till that hurrah breath, grants a most finite
sigh of relief..
till then we reminisce and 🍻
September 4th, 2023 03:52
Tiger Heart
Teddy.15 said:
William Blake\'s poem has had so much inspiration on me Tyger Tyger burning bright in the forest of the night. I am a tiger 🐅 lol 🤣
September 4th, 2023 02:35
Teddy.15 said:
William Blake\'s poem has had so much inspiration on me Tyger Tyger burning bright in the forest of the night. I am a tiger 🐅 lol 🤣
September 4th, 2023 02:35
Tiger Heart
orchidee said:
What I want to know is - what is a \'tyger\' in Blakes\' poem?! lol. There\'s a liger, so maybe a cross between a tiger and a lion, but still spelt wrong as \'lyger\'.
I must know these things of major importance. lol.
He was eccentric, so I wouldn\'t be surprised if he was thinking of some mythical beast, half-tiger, half-Fido. :)
September 4th, 2023 02:30
orchidee said:
What I want to know is - what is a \'tyger\' in Blakes\' poem?! lol. There\'s a liger, so maybe a cross between a tiger and a lion, but still spelt wrong as \'lyger\'.
I must know these things of major importance. lol.
He was eccentric, so I wouldn\'t be surprised if he was thinking of some mythical beast, half-tiger, half-Fido. :)
September 4th, 2023 02:30
Tiger Heart
LIZ said:
\"sometimes they can choke my soul\" Lord have mercy!! Isn\'t that the truth!!! 💖
September 4th, 2023 02:22
LIZ said:
\"sometimes they can choke my soul\" Lord have mercy!! Isn\'t that the truth!!! 💖
September 4th, 2023 02:22
Empty Sky
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams be of good memories Teddy.
Andy
September 4th, 2023 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
May those dreams be of good memories Teddy.
Andy
September 4th, 2023 02:07
Empty Sky
Parisab said:
You are still looking up in the sky for a certain airplane-your sentiments are as big as the sky today…
September 3rd, 2023 13:06
Parisab said:
You are still looking up in the sky for a certain airplane-your sentiments are as big as the sky today…
September 3rd, 2023 13:06
Empty Sky
Bella Shepard said:
I am thrilled to see your post, have missed your unequaled verse. The beautiful picture of clouds has such an ethereal feel to it, it complements the essence of this simple yet elegant poem. So glad you\'re back!
September 3rd, 2023 11:59
Bella Shepard said:
I am thrilled to see your post, have missed your unequaled verse. The beautiful picture of clouds has such an ethereal feel to it, it complements the essence of this simple yet elegant poem. So glad you\'re back!
September 3rd, 2023 11:59
Short-Circuit
Neville said:
hope you had as good a time on holiday as I\'m having now finding you back here .. ❤️
September 3rd, 2023 09:29
Neville said:
hope you had as good a time on holiday as I\'m having now finding you back here .. ❤️
September 3rd, 2023 09:29
Empty Sky
Accidental Poet said:
I know the feeling Teddy. A rose of love lives forever. 🌹
September 3rd, 2023 07:32
Accidental Poet said:
I know the feeling Teddy. A rose of love lives forever. 🌹
September 3rd, 2023 07:32
Empty Sky
sorenbarrett said:
At first read I took this literally but then upon reflection I saw that it could be taken as emotional terminals where people part in life never to see the other the same again. A subtle poem of growth, age, and emotional distancing. Touching
September 3rd, 2023 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
At first read I took this literally but then upon reflection I saw that it could be taken as emotional terminals where people part in life never to see the other the same again. A subtle poem of growth, age, and emotional distancing. Touching
September 3rd, 2023 05:45
Empty Sky
Neville said:
every word sadly enjoyed .. but the balance set write by what I sincerely hope is your eventual return .. ❤️
September 3rd, 2023 05:18
Neville said:
every word sadly enjoyed .. but the balance set write by what I sincerely hope is your eventual return .. ❤️
September 3rd, 2023 05:18
Empty Sky
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Teddy.
Did ya see me again?! lol.
September 3rd, 2023 04:46
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Teddy.
Did ya see me again?! lol.
September 3rd, 2023 04:46
Empty Sky
LIZ said:
You sparked a memory!!! Beautiful!! Good to have you back!! 💖
September 3rd, 2023 04:29
LIZ said:
You sparked a memory!!! Beautiful!! Good to have you back!! 💖
September 3rd, 2023 04:29
Empty Sky
Caring dove said:
Nice to see you posting again , teddy )
YeAh some things / people are difficult to let go of
September 3rd, 2023 04:15
Caring dove said:
Nice to see you posting again , teddy )
YeAh some things / people are difficult to let go of
September 3rd, 2023 04:15
Empty Sky
peto said:
That is some memory Teddy
Haunts your dreams
So much said in such short verse
Good to see a write from you
September 3rd, 2023 03:41
peto said:
That is some memory Teddy
Haunts your dreams
So much said in such short verse
Good to see a write from you
September 3rd, 2023 03:41
Short-Circuit
L. B. Mek said:
have a great holiday!
(oh and a lovely write as well) lol
i think if we were to become cyborg\'s, eventually
the only part of me I would never change
is my heart
August 25th, 2023 03:06
L. B. Mek said:
have a great holiday!
(oh and a lovely write as well) lol
i think if we were to become cyborg\'s, eventually
the only part of me I would never change
is my heart
August 25th, 2023 03:06
Binding Pages
L. B. Mek said:
just comfort love handles
and ennui lulls
convincing us, happiness
is but a mirage...
(lol
even too much warmth
comes with consequences)
I so relate with your theme
diamonds aren\'t born, they\'re made
and you\'re a diamond in the making
if you\'ve realised
how struggle n pressure
helps you get stronger
August 25th, 2023 03:03
L. B. Mek said:
just comfort love handles
and ennui lulls
convincing us, happiness
is but a mirage...
(lol
even too much warmth
comes with consequences)
I so relate with your theme
diamonds aren\'t born, they\'re made
and you\'re a diamond in the making
if you\'ve realised
how struggle n pressure
helps you get stronger
August 25th, 2023 03:03
Love Letter
L. B. Mek said:
(qwerty inked
digitally pristine n sincere
I\'ll email you the pixel copy
of my heart...)
😉
August 25th, 2023 02:58
L. B. Mek said:
(qwerty inked
digitally pristine n sincere
I\'ll email you the pixel copy
of my heart...)
😉
August 25th, 2023 02:58
Reflecting Upon One\'s Very Own Finale
L. B. Mek said:
how we\'re in sync my cherished friend
next Friday i\'ll share a work titled \'After\'
that will be like a humble version
of this wonderfully poignant poem you shared
thank you! and when that time comes
you won\'t be journeying alone
as all your angels and loved ones
will be waiting to ferry you across
like the VVIP you are
August 25th, 2023 02:53
L. B. Mek said:
how we\'re in sync my cherished friend
next Friday i\'ll share a work titled \'After\'
that will be like a humble version
of this wonderfully poignant poem you shared
thank you! and when that time comes
you won\'t be journeying alone
as all your angels and loved ones
will be waiting to ferry you across
like the VVIP you are
August 25th, 2023 02:53
Observing a Miracle
L. B. Mek said:
so tender, you paint a soul not a character, dear Poetess
simply beautiful
August 25th, 2023 02:47
L. B. Mek said:
so tender, you paint a soul not a character, dear Poetess
simply beautiful
August 25th, 2023 02:47
Binding Pages
sorenbarrett said:
So short but true. There must be an opposition in all things. There can be no light without darkness. Very nice
August 17th, 2023 23:08
sorenbarrett said:
So short but true. There must be an opposition in all things. There can be no light without darkness. Very nice
August 17th, 2023 23:08
Short-Circuit
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about a subject that makes me a bit nervous. I\'m not sure we have thought out this technology adequately.
August 16th, 2023 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about a subject that makes me a bit nervous. I\'m not sure we have thought out this technology adequately.
August 16th, 2023 07:21
Short-Circuit
Parisab said:
Such a fresh concept, to not just criticize, but to empathize with it, and to wish to be it (some of the time.) Great read Teddy!
August 13th, 2023 16:11
Parisab said:
Such a fresh concept, to not just criticize, but to empathize with it, and to wish to be it (some of the time.) Great read Teddy!
August 13th, 2023 16:11
Short-Circuit
Caring dove said:
Great writing teddy .. )
to be honest this makes me think of feeling numb .. not feeling anything at all .. and that is a difficult place to be .. you know when your watching something that’s supposed to be happy /funny .. and you feel ‘nothing ‘ I’ve felt that before .. sometimes but yes I can relate to the not wanting to feel grief / sadness .( difficult emotions )
I can see the envy in this but also the sympathy towards something which may not feel anything ..
‘ as I watch her I tremble
because
I am convinced her robotic heart
wants so desperately to beat
If just for a moment
to feel any slight emotion’
how sad is it not to ‘ feel ‘ happiness joy and just to feel ‘ empty ‘
A well written poem 🌸
August 13th, 2023 14:23
Caring dove said:
Great writing teddy .. )
to be honest this makes me think of feeling numb .. not feeling anything at all .. and that is a difficult place to be .. you know when your watching something that’s supposed to be happy /funny .. and you feel ‘nothing ‘ I’ve felt that before .. sometimes but yes I can relate to the not wanting to feel grief / sadness .( difficult emotions )
I can see the envy in this but also the sympathy towards something which may not feel anything ..
‘ as I watch her I tremble
because
I am convinced her robotic heart
wants so desperately to beat
If just for a moment
to feel any slight emotion’
how sad is it not to ‘ feel ‘ happiness joy and just to feel ‘ empty ‘
A well written poem 🌸
August 13th, 2023 14:23
Short-Circuit
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Teddy, you\'ve chosen a most appropriate pic for this poem. Ophelia, I think, succumbing to her fate. You\'ve put so exquisitely into words the struggle of our emotional lives, for it is all emotion in the end. If we feel, we endure the consequences good, or bad, but we Feel. Your emotional life has led you to this gem of a poem, you are the amazing writer my dear! A thousand fav\'s
August 13th, 2023 13:56
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Teddy, you\'ve chosen a most appropriate pic for this poem. Ophelia, I think, succumbing to her fate. You\'ve put so exquisitely into words the struggle of our emotional lives, for it is all emotion in the end. If we feel, we endure the consequences good, or bad, but we Feel. Your emotional life has led you to this gem of a poem, you are the amazing writer my dear! A thousand fav\'s
August 13th, 2023 13:56
Short-Circuit
peto said:
Careful what you wish for Teddy
Ai couldn\'t write with such feeling as this
And when that switch is flicked hmmm
Thought provoking read
Thoroughly enjoyed
August 13th, 2023 13:52
peto said:
Careful what you wish for Teddy
Ai couldn\'t write with such feeling as this
And when that switch is flicked hmmm
Thought provoking read
Thoroughly enjoyed
August 13th, 2023 13:52
Short-Circuit
LIZ said:
This is such a real subject, put in the most delicate way. I agree, it would be nice to feel no grief or sadness......oh but I would accept grief and sadness, as long as I get to love and laugh!!! Well done Teddy! 💖💖💖
August 13th, 2023 13:32
LIZ said:
This is such a real subject, put in the most delicate way. I agree, it would be nice to feel no grief or sadness......oh but I would accept grief and sadness, as long as I get to love and laugh!!! Well done Teddy! 💖💖💖
August 13th, 2023 13:32
Short-Circuit
orchidee said:
Never be as intelligent as humans though, I say. I mean Daleks are talking dustbins! heehee.
Ahhh, a poem about KP, I see! Looks like her too. lol.
August 13th, 2023 13:21
orchidee said:
Never be as intelligent as humans though, I say. I mean Daleks are talking dustbins! heehee.
Ahhh, a poem about KP, I see! Looks like her too. lol.
August 13th, 2023 13:21
Binding Pages
Teddy.15 said:
No I\'m not Dave I\'m saying if there was no suffering that it wouldn\'t be worth writing about if it was all roses and light it would be boring. 💖
August 13th, 2023 01:48
Teddy.15 said:
No I\'m not Dave I\'m saying if there was no suffering that it wouldn\'t be worth writing about if it was all roses and light it would be boring. 💖
August 13th, 2023 01:48
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