Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Observing a Miracle
MendedFences27 said:
An absolutely wonder poem of observation and imagination. \"As every gentleman does,\" establishes his identity as the forlorn lover, a classic figure that you use well. Your closing is equal to the task and adds a balance for the rreader. I simply loved this - Phil A.
August 5th, 2023 10:31
MendedFences27 said:
An absolutely wonder poem of observation and imagination. \"As every gentleman does,\" establishes his identity as the forlorn lover, a classic figure that you use well. Your closing is equal to the task and adds a balance for the rreader. I simply loved this - Phil A.
August 5th, 2023 10:31
Observing a Miracle
Sunsetmet said:
This is a lovely cafe style piece line by line what meaning it has where you sit and smiles and thoughts come to mind spiritually a connection great gratitude and affection lovely written Teddy
August 5th, 2023 08:38
Sunsetmet said:
This is a lovely cafe style piece line by line what meaning it has where you sit and smiles and thoughts come to mind spiritually a connection great gratitude and affection lovely written Teddy
August 5th, 2023 08:38
Observing a Miracle
orchidee said:
A fine write Teddy.
Argghhh, KP might stay with me forever! lol.
August 5th, 2023 06:33
orchidee said:
A fine write Teddy.
Argghhh, KP might stay with me forever! lol.
August 5th, 2023 06:33
Observing a Miracle
LIZ said:
When true love hits, even when
the loved one is gone, their love stays with us forever; and it can\'t help but shine through. At least that\'s what I got from this one! Very nice! ❤️
August 5th, 2023 05:26
LIZ said:
When true love hits, even when
the loved one is gone, their love stays with us forever; and it can\'t help but shine through. At least that\'s what I got from this one! Very nice! ❤️
August 5th, 2023 05:26
Observing a Miracle
Bobby O said:
Yay the privilege of loss for
It proves we once held the most
August 5th, 2023 03:43
Bobby O said:
Yay the privilege of loss for
It proves we once held the most
August 5th, 2023 03:43
Observing a Miracle
Caring dove said:
And we all need those type of people .. those that help us smile 🙂
That’s sad about his wife but to feel like she’s with him .. ( in spirit atleast )
A nicely expressed writing , teddy
August 5th, 2023 03:32
Caring dove said:
And we all need those type of people .. those that help us smile 🙂
That’s sad about his wife but to feel like she’s with him .. ( in spirit atleast )
A nicely expressed writing , teddy
August 5th, 2023 03:32
Just a Dream I Had
Teddy.15 said:
Nice to meet you pop64, so very happy to know your thoughts. I actually loved writing this. Thank you. 💖
August 4th, 2023 11:43
Teddy.15 said:
Nice to meet you pop64, so very happy to know your thoughts. I actually loved writing this. Thank you. 💖
August 4th, 2023 11:43
Just a Dream I Had
Pop64 said:
The imagery and detail in this is amazing as you tell your story, your dream. A wonderful read!
August 4th, 2023 11:38
Pop64 said:
The imagery and detail in this is amazing as you tell your story, your dream. A wonderful read!
August 4th, 2023 11:38
The day of New To You Belongs
Neville said:
sounds, feels and reads like a little bit of heaven .. Madagascar is on my wish list by the way ... ❤️
August 4th, 2023 07:30
Neville said:
sounds, feels and reads like a little bit of heaven .. Madagascar is on my wish list by the way ... ❤️
August 4th, 2023 07:30
The day of New To You Belongs
L. B. Mek said:
ohhh, paint me jealous what a picturesque view
so happy for you, that must have been ideal
\'a sight to see and to behold
to see this theatre light unfold\'
and grace our glass lives
peeking out from our rooflights
we embrace our new day
inhaling hope, breath taking flight
Brilliant!
thank you dear Poetess, what a perfect read
to get our weekend started right!
lol
August 4th, 2023 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
ohhh, paint me jealous what a picturesque view
so happy for you, that must have been ideal
\'a sight to see and to behold
to see this theatre light unfold\'
and grace our glass lives
peeking out from our rooflights
we embrace our new day
inhaling hope, breath taking flight
Brilliant!
thank you dear Poetess, what a perfect read
to get our weekend started right!
lol
August 4th, 2023 05:34
Just a Dream I Had
L. B. Mek said:
such a fun read, dear Poetess
you n elvis, share a few heated canvases..
lucky fella
decades dead and still
getting all the ladeis..
lol
August 4th, 2023 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
such a fun read, dear Poetess
you n elvis, share a few heated canvases..
lucky fella
decades dead and still
getting all the ladeis..
lol
August 4th, 2023 05:27
The Perfect Painting
L. B. Mek said:
within hues of a day\'s grace
I surmise meaning in my worth
am I too shades of brightness
contained in a pulse of blinding
hope
(see what you went and done did,
inspired me
to scribble me feeble poetic reply
lol)
thank you! wise Poet
I read and learn
August 4th, 2023 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
within hues of a day\'s grace
I surmise meaning in my worth
am I too shades of brightness
contained in a pulse of blinding
hope
(see what you went and done did,
inspired me
to scribble me feeble poetic reply
lol)
thank you! wise Poet
I read and learn
August 4th, 2023 05:19
“Sommelier Full-Time Wanted”
L. B. Mek said:
congrats on your new job
..what?
what better qualifications could they ask for?
lol
(that picture 🤣)
thank you!
August 4th, 2023 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
congrats on your new job
..what?
what better qualifications could they ask for?
lol
(that picture 🤣)
thank you!
August 4th, 2023 05:14
The day of New To You Belongs
LIZ said:
A new day to enjoy life!! CHOICES! I\'m attracted to the moon though! 🌙 I prefer being up at night. Have a great day Teddy!! 💖
August 4th, 2023 03:06
LIZ said:
A new day to enjoy life!! CHOICES! I\'m attracted to the moon though! 🌙 I prefer being up at night. Have a great day Teddy!! 💖
August 4th, 2023 03:06
The day of New To You Belongs
orchidee said:
A fine write Teddy.
Now me next poem: \'Another day of misery with KP\'. lol.
Not that I see her much in person - only in the papers, on TV, etc, etc.
August 4th, 2023 02:03
orchidee said:
A fine write Teddy.
Now me next poem: \'Another day of misery with KP\'. lol.
Not that I see her much in person - only in the papers, on TV, etc, etc.
August 4th, 2023 02:03
Just a Dream I Had
MendedFences27 said:
This is what Elvis is doing these days, traveling around filling women\'s dreams with thoughts of love and romance while being serenaded. He\'s the dream-troubadour.
A wonderful poem about a colorful dream, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
August 3rd, 2023 14:01
MendedFences27 said:
This is what Elvis is doing these days, traveling around filling women\'s dreams with thoughts of love and romance while being serenaded. He\'s the dream-troubadour.
A wonderful poem about a colorful dream, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
August 3rd, 2023 14:01
Just a Dream I Had
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderful, picturesque and heartwarming piece of poetry here Teddy.15, and it\'s also a great homage to the King, even if it is a fantastical work.
Also, the accompanying visual, is a very nice piece of artwork.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 3rd, 2023 11:38
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderful, picturesque and heartwarming piece of poetry here Teddy.15, and it\'s also a great homage to the King, even if it is a fantastical work.
Also, the accompanying visual, is a very nice piece of artwork.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
August 3rd, 2023 11:38
Just a Dream I Had
Caring dove said:
Great writing teddy love the mention of the lemonade lol 🙂
I
Once saw a Elvis impersonator .. a long time ago when I was volunteering in a charity shop ..
Seemed quite good ..
August 3rd, 2023 11:18
Caring dove said:
Great writing teddy love the mention of the lemonade lol 🙂
I
Once saw a Elvis impersonator .. a long time ago when I was volunteering in a charity shop ..
Seemed quite good ..
August 3rd, 2023 11:18
Just a Dream I Had
Doggerel Dave said:
You shy? Dropped your what?
Teddy, forget I writ that - Was a very rich dream....
August 3rd, 2023 06:17
Doggerel Dave said:
You shy? Dropped your what?
Teddy, forget I writ that - Was a very rich dream....
August 3rd, 2023 06:17
Just a Dream I Had
Neville said:
Fantastic, we all have our fantasies .. don\'t we ..
this reads like a real FAN teasy .. ❤️
August 3rd, 2023 01:40
Neville said:
Fantastic, we all have our fantasies .. don\'t we ..
this reads like a real FAN teasy .. ❤️
August 3rd, 2023 01:40
Just a Dream I Had
Parisab said:
He may return to another magical piazza nearby! It must be the Italian wine:))
August 3rd, 2023 01:37
Parisab said:
He may return to another magical piazza nearby! It must be the Italian wine:))
August 3rd, 2023 01:37
Just a Dream I Had
orchidee said:
We had an \'Elvis\' at a church I was with. Well, he was older. Looked a bit like Elvis, but collected all his gear, pics, etc.
August 3rd, 2023 01:31
orchidee said:
We had an \'Elvis\' at a church I was with. Well, he was older. Looked a bit like Elvis, but collected all his gear, pics, etc.
August 3rd, 2023 01:31
The Perfect Painting
Bella Shepard said:
Happiness, heaped upon happiness in this poem dear Teddy. My smile just got bigger and bigger with each line. Gorgeous picture to boot.
August 2nd, 2023 16:28
Bella Shepard said:
Happiness, heaped upon happiness in this poem dear Teddy. My smile just got bigger and bigger with each line. Gorgeous picture to boot.
August 2nd, 2023 16:28
The Perfect Painting
MendedFences27 said:
If pictures could talk, this one would have uttered your words. Made me smile. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 2nd, 2023 10:53
MendedFences27 said:
If pictures could talk, this one would have uttered your words. Made me smile. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 2nd, 2023 10:53
“Sommelier Full-Time Wanted”
Sunsetmet said:
Red bold wine in do time but interview
is tough room with a view anytime LOL
August 2nd, 2023 08:24
Sunsetmet said:
Red bold wine in do time but interview
is tough room with a view anytime LOL
August 2nd, 2023 08:24
The Perfect Painting
peto said:
If a picture paints a thousand words
Or 24
Your words do it justice
Have a good yin
August 2nd, 2023 05:16
peto said:
If a picture paints a thousand words
Or 24
Your words do it justice
Have a good yin
August 2nd, 2023 05:16
The Perfect Painting
Parisab said:
You’ve painted another sweet picture! I love that you sound joyous while creating this poem-thanks for the visuals …arte bella
August 2nd, 2023 02:48
Parisab said:
You’ve painted another sweet picture! I love that you sound joyous while creating this poem-thanks for the visuals …arte bella
August 2nd, 2023 02:48
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