Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
Pop64 said:
First off, I love the expression \"Wrinkles of the great moon\", that\'s so original and just so clever and descriptive. To be free upon days wake, that\'s a dream in itself. This read so beautifully - Michael
October 16th, 2023 09:52
Pop64 said:
First off, I love the expression \"Wrinkles of the great moon\", that\'s so original and just so clever and descriptive. To be free upon days wake, that\'s a dream in itself. This read so beautifully - Michael
October 16th, 2023 09:52
A True Hollywood Woman
2781 said:
The world would be a better place if we were all child like.
October 16th, 2023 07:54
2781 said:
The world would be a better place if we were all child like.
October 16th, 2023 07:54
A True Hollywood Woman
LIZ said:
A child\'s insight, on the realities of life.....and what we as adults fail to see!!! If you would have seen her today...with the knowledge you have....would it change your mind? Would you see her differently? Just thinking out loud!! 😏
This picture though!! 🤌
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October 16th, 2023 05:02
LIZ said:
A child\'s insight, on the realities of life.....and what we as adults fail to see!!! If you would have seen her today...with the knowledge you have....would it change your mind? Would you see her differently? Just thinking out loud!! 😏
This picture though!! 🤌
💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
October 16th, 2023 05:02
A Letter From Dante To Me
L. B. Mek said:
simply Beautiful!
Muse inspiring, A muse
Poetic legacy, enriching
refinement of a Poetess\'
ink
meanwhile Poesy\'s truth
lives on...!
October 16th, 2023 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
simply Beautiful!
Muse inspiring, A muse
Poetic legacy, enriching
refinement of a Poetess\'
ink
meanwhile Poesy\'s truth
lives on...!
October 16th, 2023 04:35
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, I hope he took your worries with him as he flew to the Moon.
Andy
October 16th, 2023 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Teddy, I hope he took your worries with him as he flew to the Moon.
Andy
October 16th, 2023 01:25
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
Thomas W Case said:
I love the atmosphere in this piece. Great use of language to set the scene.
October 16th, 2023 00:40
Thomas W Case said:
I love the atmosphere in this piece. Great use of language to set the scene.
October 16th, 2023 00:40
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Teddy, 👏 👌
October 15th, 2023 21:26
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece Teddy, 👏 👌
October 15th, 2023 21:26
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
peto said:
Your word choices in this one are spectacular Teddy
Loved it
October 15th, 2023 13:11
peto said:
Your word choices in this one are spectacular Teddy
Loved it
October 15th, 2023 13:11
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
LIZ said:
Ahhhh the Raven! My spirit animal!! I loved everything about this one!! FREEDOM-of the mind! Out of sight, but flying high!!
October 15th, 2023 09:17
LIZ said:
Ahhhh the Raven! My spirit animal!! I loved everything about this one!! FREEDOM-of the mind! Out of sight, but flying high!!
October 15th, 2023 09:17
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
sorenbarrett said:
Great poetic lines \"the shadows of the moons wrinkles \"i.I can\'t help but think of Poe\'s The Raven but in his poem the narrator did not end up free but would not lift himself from the shadow \"nevermore\"
October 15th, 2023 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
Great poetic lines \"the shadows of the moons wrinkles \"i.I can\'t help but think of Poe\'s The Raven but in his poem the narrator did not end up free but would not lift himself from the shadow \"nevermore\"
October 15th, 2023 06:58
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
novaa said:
Evocative words that capture a serene imagery. Enjoyed reading!
October 15th, 2023 05:05
novaa said:
Evocative words that capture a serene imagery. Enjoyed reading!
October 15th, 2023 05:05
A Letter From Dante To Me
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work and use of language to paint the scene. Well done.
October 15th, 2023 00:34
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work and use of language to paint the scene. Well done.
October 15th, 2023 00:34
A Letter From Dante To Me
Parisab said:
Your words are lit, and Dante would love the light and fire beautifully placed in your lovely poem…
October 13th, 2023 17:49
Parisab said:
Your words are lit, and Dante would love the light and fire beautifully placed in your lovely poem…
October 13th, 2023 17:49
A Letter From Dante To Me
aDarkerMind said:
the most touching side of you I have seen Teddy.
beautiful.
Dante himself would applaud such talent, of that I have no doubt;
October 13th, 2023 15:48
aDarkerMind said:
the most touching side of you I have seen Teddy.
beautiful.
Dante himself would applaud such talent, of that I have no doubt;
October 13th, 2023 15:48
A Letter From Dante To Me
peto said:
I know how much you admire dante
So hardly a surprise he brought the best out of you
The last verse is stunning
October 13th, 2023 15:43
peto said:
I know how much you admire dante
So hardly a surprise he brought the best out of you
The last verse is stunning
October 13th, 2023 15:43
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
so delicately paced and worded, dear Poetess
a Spring stroll of a read, just lovely
October 13th, 2023 07:10
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
so delicately paced and worded, dear Poetess
a Spring stroll of a read, just lovely
October 13th, 2023 07:10
An ode to the Mushroom
L. B. Mek said:
it shrinks in heat damn it!
you mushroom bully
oh I\'m judging you right back! 🧐
lol
October 13th, 2023 07:08
L. B. Mek said:
it shrinks in heat damn it!
you mushroom bully
oh I\'m judging you right back! 🧐
lol
October 13th, 2023 07:08
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Teddy, those kind of walks give us so much peace within ourselves.
Andy
October 13th, 2023 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Teddy, those kind of walks give us so much peace within ourselves.
Andy
October 13th, 2023 01:04
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
MendedFences27 said:
Fresh air, sunshine, and a \"stroll\" sounds like the perfect day. A gentle breeze to clear the \"air\" in your home, and \"hope\" that you are on the correct pathway sounds like a great plan. And, while you are at it, why not write a lovely poem. Nice work. - Phil A.
October 12th, 2023 18:22
MendedFences27 said:
Fresh air, sunshine, and a \"stroll\" sounds like the perfect day. A gentle breeze to clear the \"air\" in your home, and \"hope\" that you are on the correct pathway sounds like a great plan. And, while you are at it, why not write a lovely poem. Nice work. - Phil A.
October 12th, 2023 18:22
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
aDarkerMind said:
this was my first read of today Teddy;
hope you had as good a day as me.
dark, overcast, a little rain.
but my day blew me in the right direction.
I have much to learn from you my friend;
October 12th, 2023 14:17
aDarkerMind said:
this was my first read of today Teddy;
hope you had as good a day as me.
dark, overcast, a little rain.
but my day blew me in the right direction.
I have much to learn from you my friend;
October 12th, 2023 14:17
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
peto said:
You lady
Are already heading in the right direction
Hope it doesn\'t blow you OFF
nicely done
October 12th, 2023 14:10
peto said:
You lady
Are already heading in the right direction
Hope it doesn\'t blow you OFF
nicely done
October 12th, 2023 14:10
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
Pop64 said:
This inspiring breath of fresh air allows all of us to just take all the time in the world, like you and with you too. Thak you for sharing this truly feel good piece. - Michael
October 12th, 2023 12:47
Pop64 said:
This inspiring breath of fresh air allows all of us to just take all the time in the world, like you and with you too. Thak you for sharing this truly feel good piece. - Michael
October 12th, 2023 12:47
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
orchidee said:
You blowing hot or cold, or both?! lol.
October 12th, 2023 05:21
orchidee said:
You blowing hot or cold, or both?! lol.
October 12th, 2023 05:21
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
sorenbarrett said:
An upbeat thought and sense of freedom to wonder where ever we like even if we can\'t wander. Loved it.
October 12th, 2023 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
An upbeat thought and sense of freedom to wonder where ever we like even if we can\'t wander. Loved it.
October 12th, 2023 05:03
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