Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
sorenbarrett said:
Great poetic lines \"the shadows of the moons wrinkles \"i.I can\'t help but think of Poe\'s The Raven but in his poem the narrator did not end up free but would not lift himself from the shadow \"nevermore\"
October 15th, 2023 06:58
sorenbarrett said:
Great poetic lines \"the shadows of the moons wrinkles \"i.I can\'t help but think of Poe\'s The Raven but in his poem the narrator did not end up free but would not lift himself from the shadow \"nevermore\"
October 15th, 2023 06:58
Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon.
novaa said:
Evocative words that capture a serene imagery. Enjoyed reading!
October 15th, 2023 05:05
novaa said:
Evocative words that capture a serene imagery. Enjoyed reading!
October 15th, 2023 05:05
A Letter From Dante To Me
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work and use of language to paint the scene. Well done.
October 15th, 2023 00:34
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent work and use of language to paint the scene. Well done.
October 15th, 2023 00:34
A Letter From Dante To Me
Parisab said:
Your words are lit, and Dante would love the light and fire beautifully placed in your lovely poem…
October 13th, 2023 17:49
Parisab said:
Your words are lit, and Dante would love the light and fire beautifully placed in your lovely poem…
October 13th, 2023 17:49
A Letter From Dante To Me
aDarkerMind said:
the most touching side of you I have seen Teddy.
beautiful.
Dante himself would applaud such talent, of that I have no doubt;
October 13th, 2023 15:48
aDarkerMind said:
the most touching side of you I have seen Teddy.
beautiful.
Dante himself would applaud such talent, of that I have no doubt;
October 13th, 2023 15:48
A Letter From Dante To Me
peto said:
I know how much you admire dante
So hardly a surprise he brought the best out of you
The last verse is stunning
October 13th, 2023 15:43
peto said:
I know how much you admire dante
So hardly a surprise he brought the best out of you
The last verse is stunning
October 13th, 2023 15:43
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
so delicately paced and worded, dear Poetess
a Spring stroll of a read, just lovely
October 13th, 2023 07:10
L. B. Mek said:
Beautiful!
so delicately paced and worded, dear Poetess
a Spring stroll of a read, just lovely
October 13th, 2023 07:10
An ode to the Mushroom
L. B. Mek said:
it shrinks in heat damn it!
you mushroom bully
oh I\'m judging you right back! 🧐
lol
October 13th, 2023 07:08
L. B. Mek said:
it shrinks in heat damn it!
you mushroom bully
oh I\'m judging you right back! 🧐
lol
October 13th, 2023 07:08
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Teddy, those kind of walks give us so much peace within ourselves.
Andy
October 13th, 2023 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Teddy, those kind of walks give us so much peace within ourselves.
Andy
October 13th, 2023 01:04
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
MendedFences27 said:
Fresh air, sunshine, and a \"stroll\" sounds like the perfect day. A gentle breeze to clear the \"air\" in your home, and \"hope\" that you are on the correct pathway sounds like a great plan. And, while you are at it, why not write a lovely poem. Nice work. - Phil A.
October 12th, 2023 18:22
MendedFences27 said:
Fresh air, sunshine, and a \"stroll\" sounds like the perfect day. A gentle breeze to clear the \"air\" in your home, and \"hope\" that you are on the correct pathway sounds like a great plan. And, while you are at it, why not write a lovely poem. Nice work. - Phil A.
October 12th, 2023 18:22
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
aDarkerMind said:
this was my first read of today Teddy;
hope you had as good a day as me.
dark, overcast, a little rain.
but my day blew me in the right direction.
I have much to learn from you my friend;
October 12th, 2023 14:17
aDarkerMind said:
this was my first read of today Teddy;
hope you had as good a day as me.
dark, overcast, a little rain.
but my day blew me in the right direction.
I have much to learn from you my friend;
October 12th, 2023 14:17
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
peto said:
You lady
Are already heading in the right direction
Hope it doesn\'t blow you OFF
nicely done
October 12th, 2023 14:10
peto said:
You lady
Are already heading in the right direction
Hope it doesn\'t blow you OFF
nicely done
October 12th, 2023 14:10
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
Pop64 said:
This inspiring breath of fresh air allows all of us to just take all the time in the world, like you and with you too. Thak you for sharing this truly feel good piece. - Michael
October 12th, 2023 12:47
Pop64 said:
This inspiring breath of fresh air allows all of us to just take all the time in the world, like you and with you too. Thak you for sharing this truly feel good piece. - Michael
October 12th, 2023 12:47
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
orchidee said:
You blowing hot or cold, or both?! lol.
October 12th, 2023 05:21
orchidee said:
You blowing hot or cold, or both?! lol.
October 12th, 2023 05:21
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
sorenbarrett said:
An upbeat thought and sense of freedom to wonder where ever we like even if we can\'t wander. Loved it.
October 12th, 2023 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
An upbeat thought and sense of freedom to wonder where ever we like even if we can\'t wander. Loved it.
October 12th, 2023 05:03
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
Neville said:
I wasn\'t expecting such a breath of fresh air on such a wet pre-winters day .. I enjoyed where you took me this mane Teddy .. thank you Neville ❤️
October 12th, 2023 03:57
Neville said:
I wasn\'t expecting such a breath of fresh air on such a wet pre-winters day .. I enjoyed where you took me this mane Teddy .. thank you Neville ❤️
October 12th, 2023 03:57
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
David Wakeling said:
This is very pleasant.It sums up a wonderful day out.Delightful
October 12th, 2023 02:12
David Wakeling said:
This is very pleasant.It sums up a wonderful day out.Delightful
October 12th, 2023 02:12
It May Blow Me In The Right Direction
LIZ said:
A breath of fresh air! ✨️ Transformative at times! May take you exactly where you need to go! Enjoy 😉 💖
October 12th, 2023 02:03
LIZ said:
A breath of fresh air! ✨️ Transformative at times! May take you exactly where you need to go! Enjoy 😉 💖
October 12th, 2023 02:03
An Ode to my very own Sanity
MendedFences27 said:
Maybe she meant an E. M. T. or maybe she\'s from another planet and we\'re all E.T.\'s to her, or maybe, he just wanted to borrow her phone and one thing led to another.
Your poem becomes more powerful with the line \"we still meet from time to time,\" and soars with your closing. A fun poem. - Phil A.
October 11th, 2023 15:24
MendedFences27 said:
Maybe she meant an E. M. T. or maybe she\'s from another planet and we\'re all E.T.\'s to her, or maybe, he just wanted to borrow her phone and one thing led to another.
Your poem becomes more powerful with the line \"we still meet from time to time,\" and soars with your closing. A fun poem. - Phil A.
October 11th, 2023 15:24
An Ode to my very own Sanity
LIZ said:
TEDDY!!!!! I love your sense of humor!! Gets me every time!! 😂😂😂😂😂 I mean....if you think about it...we\'re all a \"little\" insane....OR is it \"A LOT\" insane? Mmmmmm....I wonder! LOL
October 11th, 2023 07:49
LIZ said:
TEDDY!!!!! I love your sense of humor!! Gets me every time!! 😂😂😂😂😂 I mean....if you think about it...we\'re all a \"little\" insane....OR is it \"A LOT\" insane? Mmmmmm....I wonder! LOL
October 11th, 2023 07:49
An Ode to my very own Sanity
orchidee said:
Didn\'t he go home, E.T.? Where is he now?
Oh well, if she does have an affair with him, any children will look like KP. lol.
Get well soon. 😁
October 11th, 2023 07:20
orchidee said:
Didn\'t he go home, E.T.? Where is he now?
Oh well, if she does have an affair with him, any children will look like KP. lol.
Get well soon. 😁
October 11th, 2023 07:20
An Ode to my very own Sanity
Neville said:
I once had a time slip that I just can\'t explain .. lost an hour and fifteen mins .. three time pieces all stopped at the same moment .. my wristwatch .. my car clock and the wall clock in my lounge .. sorry, I just got carried away again .. a fun post today Teddy ....... ❤️
October 11th, 2023 04:06
Neville said:
I once had a time slip that I just can\'t explain .. lost an hour and fifteen mins .. three time pieces all stopped at the same moment .. my wristwatch .. my car clock and the wall clock in my lounge .. sorry, I just got carried away again .. a fun post today Teddy ....... ❤️
October 11th, 2023 04:06
An ode to the Mushroom
Neville said:
I\'m a mushroomy kinda guy found some nice fly agaric while out foraging recently .. Neville
October 11th, 2023 03:08
Neville said:
I\'m a mushroomy kinda guy found some nice fly agaric while out foraging recently .. Neville
October 11th, 2023 03:08
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