Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
The Death of Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'scars to your beautiful\'
we seldom get timing right
between our heart\'s and eyes
we see, we fantasize
our heart warns, but tries to keep up
then we burn and we learn
that next time
we let our heart, dictate
wait
till we have more than hope
to step on and form our paths
before we approach
or reciprocate
and with our heart\'s guidance
we choose to believe
no regrets!
when we fall for the true thing
because come what may
we know we\'ll grow..
(i\'m sorry for the pain
than inspired these words, my friend
a brave write, love the defiant voice
soar high, dear Poetess
smile BRIGHT
let the world hear you Roar!)
September 15th, 2023 06:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'scars to your beautiful\'
we seldom get timing right
between our heart\'s and eyes
we see, we fantasize
our heart warns, but tries to keep up
then we burn and we learn
that next time
we let our heart, dictate
wait
till we have more than hope
to step on and form our paths
before we approach
or reciprocate
and with our heart\'s guidance
we choose to believe
no regrets!
when we fall for the true thing
because come what may
we know we\'ll grow..
(i\'m sorry for the pain
than inspired these words, my friend
a brave write, love the defiant voice
soar high, dear Poetess
smile BRIGHT
let the world hear you Roar!)
September 15th, 2023 06:05
Violin Strings
L. B. Mek said:
\'erratically\'
simply Brilliant dear Poet
I so relate..
and what an image, that\'s
breathtakingly, heartbreakingly
beautiful
September 15th, 2023 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'erratically\'
simply Brilliant dear Poet
I so relate..
and what an image, that\'s
breathtakingly, heartbreakingly
beautiful
September 15th, 2023 05:58
Doggy Style
Pop64 said:
While this is a thought provoking write, it too is humorous. Love the direction this took. Michael
September 15th, 2023 05:50
Pop64 said:
While this is a thought provoking write, it too is humorous. Love the direction this took. Michael
September 15th, 2023 05:50
An Ode To The Wedding Band
L. B. Mek said:
lol
you and your images
Bulldoze over them all, dear cherished friend
it takes two to fail at marriage
but there\'s always an asshole
hiding behind the other
trying to look good to the world...
Hollywood scenes
while the other is swimming
in reality\'s tears..
September 15th, 2023 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
lol
you and your images
Bulldoze over them all, dear cherished friend
it takes two to fail at marriage
but there\'s always an asshole
hiding behind the other
trying to look good to the world...
Hollywood scenes
while the other is swimming
in reality\'s tears..
September 15th, 2023 05:45
Doctor\'s Orders
L. B. Mek said:
lol
great pic dear Poetess
and yes, it does help
as long
as its us drinking
and not addiction
drowning us...
September 15th, 2023 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
lol
great pic dear Poetess
and yes, it does help
as long
as its us drinking
and not addiction
drowning us...
September 15th, 2023 05:41
An Ode To The Wedding Band
Aktarul Islam said:
You have a good sense of humor. Excellent poem. Keep it up, honorable poet
September 15th, 2023 04:55
Aktarul Islam said:
You have a good sense of humor. Excellent poem. Keep it up, honorable poet
September 15th, 2023 04:55
Doggy Style
Neville said:
Shh\' it happens and doesn\'t it just .. that\'s one helluva observational poem Teddy .. and by the way, I call my bag Berty .. Neville ❤️
September 15th, 2023 02:43
Neville said:
Shh\' it happens and doesn\'t it just .. that\'s one helluva observational poem Teddy .. and by the way, I call my bag Berty .. Neville ❤️
September 15th, 2023 02:43
Doggy Style
Doggerel Dave said:
Prada bag a knock off - look at the stitching....😇!!!
September 15th, 2023 02:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Prada bag a knock off - look at the stitching....😇!!!
September 15th, 2023 02:25
Doggy Style
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write Teddy, and one of Fido\'s friends there.
September 15th, 2023 01:57
orchidee said:
Oh lol good write Teddy, and one of Fido\'s friends there.
September 15th, 2023 01:57
Doggy Style
Aktarul Islam said:
Wow, amazing, you nailed it. Hats off to you, Dear poet.
September 15th, 2023 01:23
Aktarul Islam said:
Wow, amazing, you nailed it. Hats off to you, Dear poet.
September 15th, 2023 01:23
Doggy Style
LIZ said:
TEDDY!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 what have you started???? Lord!!! I see those bags...filled with dog shit....everywhere!!! 😆😆
September 15th, 2023 00:23
LIZ said:
TEDDY!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 what have you started???? Lord!!! I see those bags...filled with dog shit....everywhere!!! 😆😆
September 15th, 2023 00:23
The Death of Love
sorenbarrett said:
This could be taken literally or figuratively in the sense of a broken heart. Although I don\'t wish either it would be better if it were the second. A hard hitting poem either way.
September 14th, 2023 17:34
sorenbarrett said:
This could be taken literally or figuratively in the sense of a broken heart. Although I don\'t wish either it would be better if it were the second. A hard hitting poem either way.
September 14th, 2023 17:34
The Death of Love
MendedFences27 said:
If you could replace your violin-heart with any other instrument, what would it be? Your poem says you were a violinist. Is or was, that true? Your poem brings to light the plight of many musicians. I\'m sure many have faced the moment where they must choose to change instruments or to stop playing completely. - Phil A.
September 14th, 2023 11:52
MendedFences27 said:
If you could replace your violin-heart with any other instrument, what would it be? Your poem says you were a violinist. Is or was, that true? Your poem brings to light the plight of many musicians. I\'m sure many have faced the moment where they must choose to change instruments or to stop playing completely. - Phil A.
September 14th, 2023 11:52
The Death of Love
peto said:
I\'m struggling to comment on this
Let\'s just say I\'m glad I can
September 14th, 2023 08:53
peto said:
I\'m struggling to comment on this
Let\'s just say I\'m glad I can
September 14th, 2023 08:53
The Death of Love
Pop64 said:
The imagery you wrote into this leaves the reader with understanding, sympathy and empathy. A remarkable write with hopes this was past.
September 14th, 2023 05:54
Pop64 said:
The imagery you wrote into this leaves the reader with understanding, sympathy and empathy. A remarkable write with hopes this was past.
September 14th, 2023 05:54
The Death of Love
Neville said:
Ouch & double ouch .. I know you can hit hard Teddy, but I sure was not expecting the kidney punch .. I trust this is not autobiographical ..
if it is, you can have any part of me you need .. ❤️
September 14th, 2023 03:14
Neville said:
Ouch & double ouch .. I know you can hit hard Teddy, but I sure was not expecting the kidney punch .. I trust this is not autobiographical ..
if it is, you can have any part of me you need .. ❤️
September 14th, 2023 03:14
The Death of Love
LIZ said:
Broken heart transplant! Often times going through the experience is the only way we\'ll listen and learn. Harsh? Sometimes....but if we can grasp the lesson, the pain can feel....just a LITTLE be less...cruel. Thank you for sharing this Teddy! I know it\'s not easy! 💖 💖💖
September 14th, 2023 01:55
LIZ said:
Broken heart transplant! Often times going through the experience is the only way we\'ll listen and learn. Harsh? Sometimes....but if we can grasp the lesson, the pain can feel....just a LITTLE be less...cruel. Thank you for sharing this Teddy! I know it\'s not easy! 💖 💖💖
September 14th, 2023 01:55
The Death of Love
orchidee said:
A fictional write Teddy?
Before I make some daft comment which may not be appropriate. Oops!
September 14th, 2023 01:48
orchidee said:
A fictional write Teddy?
Before I make some daft comment which may not be appropriate. Oops!
September 14th, 2023 01:48
Violin Strings
MendedFences27 said:
The violin is the only instrument that can cry. As a soul mate you have to treat it gently. Playing erratically, it\'s possibly Paganini. Oh well enjoy the music. Lovely short poem. - Phil A.
September 13th, 2023 16:26
MendedFences27 said:
The violin is the only instrument that can cry. As a soul mate you have to treat it gently. Playing erratically, it\'s possibly Paganini. Oh well enjoy the music. Lovely short poem. - Phil A.
September 13th, 2023 16:26
Doctor\'s Orders
AuburnScribbler said:
Being a grandson of a winemaker, I totally relate to this Teddy.15.
A very nice little rhyme indeed, and I hope that all is well.
September 13th, 2023 08:46
AuburnScribbler said:
Being a grandson of a winemaker, I totally relate to this Teddy.15.
A very nice little rhyme indeed, and I hope that all is well.
September 13th, 2023 08:46
Violin Strings
Pop64 said:
You chose the violin for this write, not a guitar, oboe or standing bass, but that which can truly define the intention of your write. I can picture, rather hear to sound, no defined melody, but yet a captivating cacophony of sound. Splendid write.
September 13th, 2023 05:52
Pop64 said:
You chose the violin for this write, not a guitar, oboe or standing bass, but that which can truly define the intention of your write. I can picture, rather hear to sound, no defined melody, but yet a captivating cacophony of sound. Splendid write.
September 13th, 2023 05:52
Violin Strings
LIZ said:
The violin is one of those instruments that....with the right notes, can really take us through an emotional musical ride!! I love this, and the picture! 💖💖💖
September 13th, 2023 02:34
LIZ said:
The violin is one of those instruments that....with the right notes, can really take us through an emotional musical ride!! I love this, and the picture! 💖💖💖
September 13th, 2023 02:34
Violin Strings
orchidee said:
Is it screeching or playing melodically?! lol.
September 13th, 2023 02:09
orchidee said:
Is it screeching or playing melodically?! lol.
September 13th, 2023 02:09
An Ode To The Wedding Band
Aktarul Islam said:
You have a good sense of humor. Excellent poem. Keep it up, honorable poet
September 12th, 2023 17:11
Aktarul Islam said:
You have a good sense of humor. Excellent poem. Keep it up, honorable poet
September 12th, 2023 17:11
An Ode To The Wedding Band
Bella Shepard said:
This is delightful, puts me in mind of the movie \"The first wives club\". And the pic, I love the way she\'s looking back to make sure he\'s flat. Men, can\'t live with \'em, can\'t kill \'em. You\'ve tickled the funny bone and given me a smile all over.
September 12th, 2023 14:59
Bella Shepard said:
This is delightful, puts me in mind of the movie \"The first wives club\". And the pic, I love the way she\'s looking back to make sure he\'s flat. Men, can\'t live with \'em, can\'t kill \'em. You\'ve tickled the funny bone and given me a smile all over.
September 12th, 2023 14:59
An Ode To The Wedding Band
sorenbarrett said:
Humorous but relatable which is what gives it its humor. Well said.
September 12th, 2023 12:19
sorenbarrett said:
Humorous but relatable which is what gives it its humor. Well said.
September 12th, 2023 12:19
An Ode To The Wedding Band
orchidee said:
My wedding ring for KP was a ring-pull Coca-Cola can opener! lol.
September 12th, 2023 11:06
orchidee said:
My wedding ring for KP was a ring-pull Coca-Cola can opener! lol.
September 12th, 2023 11:06
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