Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
In The Line Of Fire
peto said:
A cannon
Well that\'s scrambled my brain
Excellent as per
Happy Saturday to you also
July 8th, 2023 03:24
peto said:
A cannon
Well that\'s scrambled my brain
Excellent as per
Happy Saturday to you also
July 8th, 2023 03:24
In The Line Of Fire
Neville said:
eggsactly, .. this is smashing ..
it seems the yolk is literally on him .. 🐣🐥🐤💛
July 8th, 2023 02:45
Neville said:
eggsactly, .. this is smashing ..
it seems the yolk is literally on him .. 🐣🐥🐤💛
July 8th, 2023 02:45
In The Line Of Fire
Caring dove said:
Lol )) great writing teddy , I liked the read 🙂
I think he falls off the wall because he is clumsy or yeah someone wasn’t nice to him ,
July 8th, 2023 02:44
Caring dove said:
Lol )) great writing teddy , I liked the read 🙂
I think he falls off the wall because he is clumsy or yeah someone wasn’t nice to him ,
July 8th, 2023 02:44
Messenger (my Raven)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, Ravens are very clever birds to be able to get our imaginations to fill ill of them.
Andy
July 8th, 2023 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, Ravens are very clever birds to be able to get our imaginations to fill ill of them.
Andy
July 8th, 2023 01:13
Messenger (my Raven)
Michael Edwards said:
I read this out loud and it was so so good - now thats what I call a poem!!
July 7th, 2023 07:43
Michael Edwards said:
I read this out loud and it was so so good - now thats what I call a poem!!
July 7th, 2023 07:43
Messenger (my Raven)
LIZ said:
Sorrow! But I have to tell you, the RAVEN is my spirit animal. They\'re empaths, and very smart! If you haven\'t, I suggest reading Odin\'s ravens. They\'re sometimes seen as a sign of death, but I see them as...transformation; and we all know how painful that can be. But, with transformation comes rebirth. Great read!! Thank you!
July 7th, 2023 05:49
LIZ said:
Sorrow! But I have to tell you, the RAVEN is my spirit animal. They\'re empaths, and very smart! If you haven\'t, I suggest reading Odin\'s ravens. They\'re sometimes seen as a sign of death, but I see them as...transformation; and we all know how painful that can be. But, with transformation comes rebirth. Great read!! Thank you!
July 7th, 2023 05:49
Messenger (my Raven)
L. B. Mek said:
\'and as he picked up his eerie feathers
no doubt off to face his next victim
I knew...
I knew ...\'
this poem, is more centred dear Poetess
as-if from the very first word
you already knew, where
your scribbling footsteps would
take you, for a change
a rare gift in our poetic journey
since most of the time, i find
we start not having a clue, where
our words will take us..
lol
(or maybe that\'s jut me and my
mad hatter, tendencies)
such an atmospheric poem you\'ve crafted
a memorable read, thank you!
hope you have lovely weekend my friend
July 7th, 2023 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'and as he picked up his eerie feathers
no doubt off to face his next victim
I knew...
I knew ...\'
this poem, is more centred dear Poetess
as-if from the very first word
you already knew, where
your scribbling footsteps would
take you, for a change
a rare gift in our poetic journey
since most of the time, i find
we start not having a clue, where
our words will take us..
lol
(or maybe that\'s jut me and my
mad hatter, tendencies)
such an atmospheric poem you\'ve crafted
a memorable read, thank you!
hope you have lovely weekend my friend
July 7th, 2023 04:19
Messenger (my Raven)
Caring dove said:
Hi teddy )) a good writing .. to be honest I think ravens can often be associated with the dark and that maybe there a sign of bad luck .. but no I don’t think they are .. I always find it interesting the meaning behind seeing different animals /birds ,
July 7th, 2023 03:29
Caring dove said:
Hi teddy )) a good writing .. to be honest I think ravens can often be associated with the dark and that maybe there a sign of bad luck .. but no I don’t think they are .. I always find it interesting the meaning behind seeing different animals /birds ,
July 7th, 2023 03:29
Messenger (my Raven)
peto said:
Getting a very spiritual vibe from this
And believe every word
Happy friday back
The weekend starts here
With a superb read
July 7th, 2023 03:24
peto said:
Getting a very spiritual vibe from this
And believe every word
Happy friday back
The weekend starts here
With a superb read
July 7th, 2023 03:24
Messenger (my Raven)
orchidee said:
A fine write T.
I\'ve seen ravens and crows in a big field, almost all to themselves, seeming to enjoy being there.
July 7th, 2023 01:41
orchidee said:
A fine write T.
I\'ve seen ravens and crows in a big field, almost all to themselves, seeming to enjoy being there.
July 7th, 2023 01:41
My Angel
MendedFences27 said:
An Angel and a muse. A wonderful poem inspired your Angel. May she always bring to you the poetic inspiration. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2023 17:39
MendedFences27 said:
An Angel and a muse. A wonderful poem inspired your Angel. May she always bring to you the poetic inspiration. - Phil A.
July 6th, 2023 17:39
My Angel
sorenbarrett said:
Memories often cast such resplendente images providing a soft pillow where we may lay our head. A most beautiful tribute.
July 6th, 2023 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
Memories often cast such resplendente images providing a soft pillow where we may lay our head. A most beautiful tribute.
July 6th, 2023 10:12
My Angel
orchidee said:
An angelic write T. I know an angel of death, having married KP. lol.
July 6th, 2023 07:04
orchidee said:
An angelic write T. I know an angel of death, having married KP. lol.
July 6th, 2023 07:04
My Angel
Christina8 said:
I believe we all have an angel. Wonderful write, Teddy!!
July 6th, 2023 06:44
Christina8 said:
I believe we all have an angel. Wonderful write, Teddy!!
July 6th, 2023 06:44
My Angel
Caring dove said:
I believe angels comfort me sometimes .. and are here.
Lovely writing ))
Glad you have an Angel there for you
July 6th, 2023 04:20
Caring dove said:
I believe angels comfort me sometimes .. and are here.
Lovely writing ))
Glad you have an Angel there for you
July 6th, 2023 04:20
My Angel
peto said:
Your untouchable angel is definitely touching your good self
Cant help feel a female relative vibe
Mum gran sis child
Or all rolled into one
Heavenly
July 6th, 2023 03:57
peto said:
Your untouchable angel is definitely touching your good self
Cant help feel a female relative vibe
Mum gran sis child
Or all rolled into one
Heavenly
July 6th, 2023 03:57
My Angel
Neville said:
I have one of them too Teddy .. she watches over me all of the time .. a real treat to read my friend ❤️
July 6th, 2023 02:08
Neville said:
I have one of them too Teddy .. she watches over me all of the time .. a real treat to read my friend ❤️
July 6th, 2023 02:08
Nightly Theatre
Goldfinch60 said:
I know! All you were was gathering the coins thrown into the fountain!! 🤣😅😅
Andy
https://youtu.be/87kbwiLSDDU
July 6th, 2023 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
I know! All you were was gathering the coins thrown into the fountain!! 🤣😅😅
Andy
https://youtu.be/87kbwiLSDDU
July 6th, 2023 02:05
Nightly Theatre
peto said:
Great dreams
With killer last line
enjoyed and laughed at end
July 5th, 2023 14:38
peto said:
Great dreams
With killer last line
enjoyed and laughed at end
July 5th, 2023 14:38
Portrait of Truth
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The magnanimity of love! - Beautifully captured Teddy.
July 5th, 2023 06:07
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The magnanimity of love! - Beautifully captured Teddy.
July 5th, 2023 06:07
Nightly Theatre
LIZ said:
Oh nice!! Now, I\'m thirsty! I enjoyed this one! Thank you! 🙂
July 5th, 2023 04:01
LIZ said:
Oh nice!! Now, I\'m thirsty! I enjoyed this one! Thank you! 🙂
July 5th, 2023 04:01
Nightly Theatre
orchidee said:
If KP takes a skinny dip, and I see it, I will never recover. I will be permanently damaged, never be the same again. lol.
July 5th, 2023 04:00
orchidee said:
If KP takes a skinny dip, and I see it, I will never recover. I will be permanently damaged, never be the same again. lol.
July 5th, 2023 04:00
Nightly Theatre
Caring dove said:
Lol , too much champagne 🙂
A lovely lighthearted writing ..
Some dreams can feel so real can’t they
July 5th, 2023 03:59
Caring dove said:
Lol , too much champagne 🙂
A lovely lighthearted writing ..
Some dreams can feel so real can’t they
July 5th, 2023 03:59
It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun
Neville said:
like I have said so many times before .. I have never dared to venture near a sonnet with other than my eyes .. and you have just reminded me of the quality of the competition I would be up against and I\'m not sure my ego would be able to cope .. mightily impressed this here scribbler be ... Neville :)
July 5th, 2023 03:47
Neville said:
like I have said so many times before .. I have never dared to venture near a sonnet with other than my eyes .. and you have just reminded me of the quality of the competition I would be up against and I\'m not sure my ego would be able to cope .. mightily impressed this here scribbler be ... Neville :)
July 5th, 2023 03:47
Portrait of Truth
Poetic Dan said:
Always the sweetest of reads thank you kindly my dear!
July 5th, 2023 01:08
Poetic Dan said:
Always the sweetest of reads thank you kindly my dear!
July 5th, 2023 01:08
Portrait of Truth
MendedFences27 said:
A unique image of the breadth of love. Well-spoken and as honest as it is real. Loved it. - Phil A.
July 4th, 2023 15:33
MendedFences27 said:
A unique image of the breadth of love. Well-spoken and as honest as it is real. Loved it. - Phil A.
July 4th, 2023 15:33
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