Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
And Write She shall
Pop64 said:
Sadness, I find, turns into more profound, deeper writes. These 3 short lines are a true statement of fact. Wonderfully conveyed.
September 27th, 2023 08:05
Pop64 said:
Sadness, I find, turns into more profound, deeper writes. These 3 short lines are a true statement of fact. Wonderfully conveyed.
September 27th, 2023 08:05
The Death of Great Music
sorenbarrett said:
I often wonder if they were all to live longer along with Janis Joplin, Mozart, Jimi Hendrix and many other greats what would music be like today? A provocative and most interesting thought. Nicely done Teddy.
September 27th, 2023 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
I often wonder if they were all to live longer along with Janis Joplin, Mozart, Jimi Hendrix and many other greats what would music be like today? A provocative and most interesting thought. Nicely done Teddy.
September 27th, 2023 05:19
The Death of Great Music
Christina8 said:
I often wonder the same....as the daughter in law of a recording artist I think he went to soon....same with all the above mentioned artists....enough to make you cry when you think about all the music we missed out on.....Christina
September 27th, 2023 02:27
Christina8 said:
I often wonder the same....as the daughter in law of a recording artist I think he went to soon....same with all the above mentioned artists....enough to make you cry when you think about all the music we missed out on.....Christina
September 27th, 2023 02:27
The Death of Great Music
LIZ said:
Tragedies....only way to not let ourselves become victims of it, is by keeping their music alive! đź’–đź’–đź’–
September 27th, 2023 02:07
LIZ said:
Tragedies....only way to not let ourselves become victims of it, is by keeping their music alive! đź’–đź’–đź’–
September 27th, 2023 02:07
And Write She shall
Christina8 said:
i do find it\'s easier to write about the sad stuff than happy...
September 26th, 2023 04:56
Christina8 said:
i do find it\'s easier to write about the sad stuff than happy...
September 26th, 2023 04:56
Washed Away
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve heard of lightning striking, whirlwind relationships and love going down the drain but this kind of wraps it all up into one. The metaphor of the umbrella is great, I think we all need one.
September 25th, 2023 13:50
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve heard of lightning striking, whirlwind relationships and love going down the drain but this kind of wraps it all up into one. The metaphor of the umbrella is great, I think we all need one.
September 25th, 2023 13:50
Washed Away
Doggerel Dave said:
I have absolutely no idea how your brain is wired (and, I admit, have been troubled by this in the past) but you certainly come up with some very interesting and entertaining connections, Teddy.
September 25th, 2023 04:15
Doggerel Dave said:
I have absolutely no idea how your brain is wired (and, I admit, have been troubled by this in the past) but you certainly come up with some very interesting and entertaining connections, Teddy.
September 25th, 2023 04:15
None Of Us Would Be Poets.
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(I bow to your superior talent
dear Poetess)
Beautiful poetry
I think your beloved Dante
would agree with me..
Have a lovely week, my friend
September 25th, 2023 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
(I bow to your superior talent
dear Poetess)
Beautiful poetry
I think your beloved Dante
would agree with me..
Have a lovely week, my friend
September 25th, 2023 04:13
Washed Away
Neville said:
brilliant .. this reminds me so much of ME .. ❤️
September 25th, 2023 03:20
Neville said:
brilliant .. this reminds me so much of ME .. ❤️
September 25th, 2023 03:20
Washed Away
Goldfinch60 said:
That can happen to us all Teddy but there is always a way forward into a better life where that umbrella will not be needed.
Andy
September 25th, 2023 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
That can happen to us all Teddy but there is always a way forward into a better life where that umbrella will not be needed.
Andy
September 25th, 2023 02:46
Washed Away
LIZ said:
Teddy, life\'s experiences can do that to us. Letting go is no joke. But setting ourselves free....well that\'s priceless. And we must be aware...hence the heavy duty umbrella. BUT, I truly believe that sometimes....those hurricane winds take us to the most incredible, unexpected places...and that\'s where we learn and grow. I may be way off here but....I loved it!! ❤️
September 25th, 2023 02:32
LIZ said:
Teddy, life\'s experiences can do that to us. Letting go is no joke. But setting ourselves free....well that\'s priceless. And we must be aware...hence the heavy duty umbrella. BUT, I truly believe that sometimes....those hurricane winds take us to the most incredible, unexpected places...and that\'s where we learn and grow. I may be way off here but....I loved it!! ❤️
September 25th, 2023 02:32
Washed Away
orchidee said:
Yes, airing my dirty washing in public? Not meaning actual washing, but.... ohh you know what I mean! lol.
September 25th, 2023 02:20
orchidee said:
Yes, airing my dirty washing in public? Not meaning actual washing, but.... ohh you know what I mean! lol.
September 25th, 2023 02:20
Senryu 1
Neville said:
this is probably one of the finest examples of this poetic form I have ever come across .. ❤️
September 24th, 2023 14:51
Neville said:
this is probably one of the finest examples of this poetic form I have ever come across .. ❤️
September 24th, 2023 14:51
Senryu 1
Bella Shepard said:
Perfectly constructed, beautifully expressed. Simple, yes. But oh, so profound.
September 24th, 2023 12:40
Bella Shepard said:
Perfectly constructed, beautifully expressed. Simple, yes. But oh, so profound.
September 24th, 2023 12:40
Senryu 1
orchidee said:
Good senryu Teddy - bit of French there? Sen-wotsit. lol.
September 24th, 2023 09:49
orchidee said:
Good senryu Teddy - bit of French there? Sen-wotsit. lol.
September 24th, 2023 09:49
Senryu 1
spilleronsheet said:
In lines of three, you praised and encouraged many….lovely dearest teddy
September 24th, 2023 08:09
spilleronsheet said:
In lines of three, you praised and encouraged many….lovely dearest teddy
September 24th, 2023 08:09
Senryu 1
aDarkerMind said:
indeed it is Teddy;
a true reflection as clever as always;
September 24th, 2023 06:09
aDarkerMind said:
indeed it is Teddy;
a true reflection as clever as always;
September 24th, 2023 06:09
None Of Us Would Be Poets.
aDarkerMind said:
very true Teddy.
and beautifully written.
September 24th, 2023 06:00
aDarkerMind said:
very true Teddy.
and beautifully written.
September 24th, 2023 06:00
None Of Us Would Be Poets.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Teddy.
I do understand others pain as I am a listener and have helped many people just by listening.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Teddy.
I do understand others pain as I am a listener and have helped many people just by listening.
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:50
A Very Brief MomentÂ
Goldfinch60 said:
The lights are always red when Mary drives. LOL
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
The lights are always red when Mary drives. LOL
Andy
September 24th, 2023 00:40
None Of Us Would Be Poets.
Bella Shepard said:
Emotions shape almost every aspect our every day lives, and you express so beautifully the need for the greatest of all, \"love\". While we cannot physically feel anothers pain, we recognize the signs, and that draws us to commiserate, comfort, help. These words are written from a heart that truly understands.
September 23rd, 2023 14:23
Bella Shepard said:
Emotions shape almost every aspect our every day lives, and you express so beautifully the need for the greatest of all, \"love\". While we cannot physically feel anothers pain, we recognize the signs, and that draws us to commiserate, comfort, help. These words are written from a heart that truly understands.
September 23rd, 2023 14:23
Blank Sheet
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Blank sheet” by Teddy.15
Thus, love has departed. This has resulted in frustration and resentment. There is even anger in the heart. From anger hardly anything positive can come out. It turns out that the musical performance is a solo one. It is even a performance from which no sounds come out : “total silence.” Even the piano keys are not those of the present. In the past they played perfect renditions. Now they play music from which no sound comes out. The instrument and the poetess are silent. The poetess is turned both blind and lost. A frustrated love can have this troubling effect. Emotionally affected writers are known to write tragedies or sad stories. Soman Ragavan. 23 September, 2023. //
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September 23rd, 2023 10:07
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Blank sheet” by Teddy.15
Thus, love has departed. This has resulted in frustration and resentment. There is even anger in the heart. From anger hardly anything positive can come out. It turns out that the musical performance is a solo one. It is even a performance from which no sounds come out : “total silence.” Even the piano keys are not those of the present. In the past they played perfect renditions. Now they play music from which no sound comes out. The instrument and the poetess are silent. The poetess is turned both blind and lost. A frustrated love can have this troubling effect. Emotionally affected writers are known to write tragedies or sad stories. Soman Ragavan. 23 September, 2023. //
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September 23rd, 2023 10:07
Destination
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Destination” by Teddy.15
The photo has the words : “Why must I be a bird with no wings ?”
Birds have been created with wings. It is unnatural to clip their wings. It is like humans being deprived of their limbs… Thus, the bird’s wings must be left alone. A bird without wings is condemned just to hop about, whereas it is meant to fly. Wings enable it to escape from many predators, except winged ones that are faster than itself. If it just remains on the ground, it becomes very vulnerable. Wings help it to escape from many dangers.
As concerns humans, dreams are the stuff through which we set targets that ideally we wish to attain for our betterment. We might or might not achieve these targets, but at least we formulate them and we work towards attaining them. Thus, dreams give us a purpose in life. Very often our achievements started as dreams. Without dreams we will just slouch about, not achieving much. Dreams enable humans to move forward. Wings help the bird to survive. Survival is the precondition for the bird to propagate itself.
Soman Ragavan. 23 September, 2023. //
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September 23rd, 2023 09:55
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Destination” by Teddy.15
The photo has the words : “Why must I be a bird with no wings ?”
Birds have been created with wings. It is unnatural to clip their wings. It is like humans being deprived of their limbs… Thus, the bird’s wings must be left alone. A bird without wings is condemned just to hop about, whereas it is meant to fly. Wings enable it to escape from many predators, except winged ones that are faster than itself. If it just remains on the ground, it becomes very vulnerable. Wings help it to escape from many dangers.
As concerns humans, dreams are the stuff through which we set targets that ideally we wish to attain for our betterment. We might or might not achieve these targets, but at least we formulate them and we work towards attaining them. Thus, dreams give us a purpose in life. Very often our achievements started as dreams. Without dreams we will just slouch about, not achieving much. Dreams enable humans to move forward. Wings help the bird to survive. Survival is the precondition for the bird to propagate itself.
Soman Ragavan. 23 September, 2023. //
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September 23rd, 2023 09:55
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