Comments received on poems by Teddy.15
When it comes to love
L. B. Mek said:
\'after all I am the poetess\'
of yes your are, truly
\'The\' Poetess, indeed!
(i\'m allowed to trumpet
i\'m invested!) lol
maybe indecision, is your decision
that artistic license to bamboozle
and delight
is all yours my friend, a reward
for these inking skills
you\'ve so evidently cultivated
with zeal!
July 14th, 2023 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'after all I am the poetess\'
of yes your are, truly
\'The\' Poetess, indeed!
(i\'m allowed to trumpet
i\'m invested!) lol
maybe indecision, is your decision
that artistic license to bamboozle
and delight
is all yours my friend, a reward
for these inking skills
you\'ve so evidently cultivated
with zeal!
July 14th, 2023 04:09
My Path to Paradise Begins in Hell
peto said:
Pity he is gone
I\'m sure he would love your writing just as much
Take 2nd best if he\'s not a corpse also
You know dante would want you to
A great talent
July 14th, 2023 01:02
peto said:
Pity he is gone
I\'m sure he would love your writing just as much
Take 2nd best if he\'s not a corpse also
You know dante would want you to
A great talent
July 14th, 2023 01:02
My Path to Paradise Begins in Hell
Neville said:
this is so flaming good it makes my quill quiver in awe ... or as near as damn it ... Neville ❤️
July 14th, 2023 00:21
Neville said:
this is so flaming good it makes my quill quiver in awe ... or as near as damn it ... Neville ❤️
July 14th, 2023 00:21
My Path to Paradise Begins in Hell
LIZ said:
The first line got me in my feelings! \"You’re the king of my universe
your poetry ignites my gentle heart
where the river was born to a peaceful flow we stand together as one sweet soul\" 🥺 \"There is no greater sorrow
than knowing our hands will never touch but you are deep within me\"- ah but there\'s always poetry, right? And you never know, maybe you\'ll get to burn before it all goes to hell!!! I guess I\'m a hopeless romantic! Very beautiful!!
July 13th, 2023 12:43
LIZ said:
The first line got me in my feelings! \"You’re the king of my universe
your poetry ignites my gentle heart
where the river was born to a peaceful flow we stand together as one sweet soul\" 🥺 \"There is no greater sorrow
than knowing our hands will never touch but you are deep within me\"- ah but there\'s always poetry, right? And you never know, maybe you\'ll get to burn before it all goes to hell!!! I guess I\'m a hopeless romantic! Very beautiful!!
July 13th, 2023 12:43
Spellbound
peto said:
Amazing
Finding hell inspirational
Enjoy your writing very much
I\'m approaching
Surprise me
July 12th, 2023 14:02
peto said:
Amazing
Finding hell inspirational
Enjoy your writing very much
I\'m approaching
Surprise me
July 12th, 2023 14:02
Spellbound
Bella Shepard said:
We need the opposites of life to live fully, said so beautifully in this poem. Your simple spark has created a real gem here, and a real fav.
July 12th, 2023 11:17
Bella Shepard said:
We need the opposites of life to live fully, said so beautifully in this poem. Your simple spark has created a real gem here, and a real fav.
July 12th, 2023 11:17
Spellbound
orchidee said:
I know the darkest places of....... in me marriage to KP! lol.
July 12th, 2023 10:40
orchidee said:
I know the darkest places of....... in me marriage to KP! lol.
July 12th, 2023 10:40
Spellbound
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Hope there is always light at the end of every tunnel. Nice work Teddy!
July 12th, 2023 10:21
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Hope there is always light at the end of every tunnel. Nice work Teddy!
July 12th, 2023 10:21
Spellbound
LIZ said:
Surprises can be good! Bring it on!! And yes, in the darkest times, we find our brightest light. \"A simple spark\"! Beautiful!\"
July 12th, 2023 07:23
LIZ said:
Surprises can be good! Bring it on!! And yes, in the darkest times, we find our brightest light. \"A simple spark\"! Beautiful!\"
July 12th, 2023 07:23
When it comes to love
Neville said:
How I missed this yesterday, I\'ll neva know .. You must have posted it late because I kept popping back just to check on your ink .. anyway, neva mind, I can now see clearly, it was ink well spilt ... ❤️ Neville
July 12th, 2023 03:08
Neville said:
How I missed this yesterday, I\'ll neva know .. You must have posted it late because I kept popping back just to check on your ink .. anyway, neva mind, I can now see clearly, it was ink well spilt ... ❤️ Neville
July 12th, 2023 03:08
When it comes to love
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy I love your first line \"Darkness has become my very light\" I also loved the doubt and indecision in the last line.
July 11th, 2023 18:16
sorenbarrett said:
Teddy I love your first line \"Darkness has become my very light\" I also loved the doubt and indecision in the last line.
July 11th, 2023 18:16
When it comes to love
LIZ said:
But...we need darkness in order to see light! So either way you put it, love will always survive!!! \"is mine to write, my blood is my ink pulsating veins raging inside\"- YES!!! Well done!!!
July 11th, 2023 13:33
LIZ said:
But...we need darkness in order to see light! So either way you put it, love will always survive!!! \"is mine to write, my blood is my ink pulsating veins raging inside\"- YES!!! Well done!!!
July 11th, 2023 13:33
When it comes to love
peto said:
Can I decide for you
Happy ever after all day long
\"Nowt\" I didn\'t expect from Italy
You are on fire right now
Superb
July 11th, 2023 12:32
peto said:
Can I decide for you
Happy ever after all day long
\"Nowt\" I didn\'t expect from Italy
You are on fire right now
Superb
July 11th, 2023 12:32
My Nevada
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Full of meaning and significance. We are the result of our experience, and yet the creators of the impending same... Very powerful.
July 11th, 2023 09:13
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Full of meaning and significance. We are the result of our experience, and yet the creators of the impending same... Very powerful.
July 11th, 2023 09:13
My Nevada
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Teddy but you have come out of that down time into your wonderful life so all is good.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Teddy but you have come out of that down time into your wonderful life so all is good.
Andy
July 11th, 2023 01:55
My Nevada
peto said:
Super write
That spark returned, I suspect pretty quickly just by your words I\'ve read lately
Loved the dance
July 10th, 2023 10:16
peto said:
Super write
That spark returned, I suspect pretty quickly just by your words I\'ve read lately
Loved the dance
July 10th, 2023 10:16
My Nevada
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write, Teddy! So sad but written with such description.....Great job!
July 10th, 2023 09:28
Christina8 said:
A wonderful write, Teddy! So sad but written with such description.....Great job!
July 10th, 2023 09:28
My Nevada
L. B. Mek said:
who we are and what we overcome
as seeds, to the us blossoming
in the now we cherish sincere
(i can imagine you dancing
in that desert, with just you
and the angels that look over you)
pulse as the drumbeat
to our life\'s emancipation songs
if we survived, we did enough
onwards
to existence\'s, blessed
hurdles
(stay strong beautiful!
but no more public peep shows
gotta make em Pay!
google earth a modern menace)
lol
July 10th, 2023 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
who we are and what we overcome
as seeds, to the us blossoming
in the now we cherish sincere
(i can imagine you dancing
in that desert, with just you
and the angels that look over you)
pulse as the drumbeat
to our life\'s emancipation songs
if we survived, we did enough
onwards
to existence\'s, blessed
hurdles
(stay strong beautiful!
but no more public peep shows
gotta make em Pay!
google earth a modern menace)
lol
July 10th, 2023 04:09
In The Line Of Fire
L. B. Mek said:
lol
thank you for the chuckles my friend
\'don\'t moonwalk on top of walls
when feeling a little, too humpty\'
(i tried 😌)
July 10th, 2023 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
lol
thank you for the chuckles my friend
\'don\'t moonwalk on top of walls
when feeling a little, too humpty\'
(i tried 😌)
July 10th, 2023 04:01
My Nevada
Neville said:
this is absolutely brill & I aint talkin fish neither .. I seriously mean it ..
I thought I was your Nevada tho ... ❤️
July 10th, 2023 02:07
Neville said:
this is absolutely brill & I aint talkin fish neither .. I seriously mean it ..
I thought I was your Nevada tho ... ❤️
July 10th, 2023 02:07
My Nevada
orchidee said:
Good write T.
KP \'kills me off\' - I\'m utterly out of love! lol.
July 10th, 2023 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write T.
KP \'kills me off\' - I\'m utterly out of love! lol.
July 10th, 2023 01:55
My Nevada
Parisab said:
All the desperate things we do for love and sometimes with no reciprocity-great read, being showy in Vegas doesn’t receive much notice-everyone and everything is already extra-thanks for sharing your heartfelt words- bravo a una poetessa
July 10th, 2023 01:04
Parisab said:
All the desperate things we do for love and sometimes with no reciprocity-great read, being showy in Vegas doesn’t receive much notice-everyone and everything is already extra-thanks for sharing your heartfelt words- bravo a una poetessa
July 10th, 2023 01:04
My Nevada
Caring dove said:
Hi teddy this is so sad yet beautifully expressed ) it’s very difficult to feel in a place of sadness / depression .. I’ve been there before .. still get sad sometimes .
Beautiful way with words yet so much sadness speaking from them 🌸
July 10th, 2023 00:48
Caring dove said:
Hi teddy this is so sad yet beautifully expressed ) it’s very difficult to feel in a place of sadness / depression .. I’ve been there before .. still get sad sometimes .
Beautiful way with words yet so much sadness speaking from them 🌸
July 10th, 2023 00:48
In The Line Of Fire
orchidee said:
We must know these things! lol.
And - why some fat bloke in a funny costume and beard comes down our chimneys once a year - how does he do it?!
July 8th, 2023 11:46
orchidee said:
We must know these things! lol.
And - why some fat bloke in a funny costume and beard comes down our chimneys once a year - how does he do it?!
July 8th, 2023 11:46
In The Line Of Fire
Christina8 said:
Huh, I had never heard about the cannon.....love the read and your puns! Great job!
July 8th, 2023 08:00
Christina8 said:
Huh, I had never heard about the cannon.....love the read and your puns! Great job!
July 8th, 2023 08:00
In The Line Of Fire
peto said:
A cannon
Well that\'s scrambled my brain
Excellent as per
Happy Saturday to you also
July 8th, 2023 03:24
peto said:
A cannon
Well that\'s scrambled my brain
Excellent as per
Happy Saturday to you also
July 8th, 2023 03:24
In The Line Of Fire
Neville said:
eggsactly, .. this is smashing ..
it seems the yolk is literally on him .. 🐣🐥🐤💛
July 8th, 2023 02:45
Neville said:
eggsactly, .. this is smashing ..
it seems the yolk is literally on him .. 🐣🐥🐤💛
July 8th, 2023 02:45
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