Comments received on poems by Summersounds68



[my thoughts are sticky]
Bella Shepard said:

In a perfect haiku, you describe my daily life. The older I get, the stickier they become.

October 4th, 2023 12:00

[my thoughts are sticky]
Pop64 said:

Perfect in form and a lot said in such a short write.

October 4th, 2023 09:48

My Face is a Kalidoscope River
Summersounds68 said:

Thank you, 2781.

October 4th, 2023 08:13

My Face is a Kalidoscope River
2781 said:

There\'s still hope.

October 3rd, 2023 23:56

My Face is a Kalidoscope River
Summersounds68 said:

I sincerely appreciate comments.

October 3rd, 2023 16:01

Singing the Black Cat Blues
Summersounds68 said:

All animal lovers are free to reply.

October 2nd, 2023 19:19

Lips and Nose
Summersounds68 said:

Bella, thank you for your uplifting comment. I enjoyed your humerous response. ~ Sonia

September 30th, 2023 16:08

Lips and Nose
Bella Shepard said:

On the other hand, lips and nose are our most powerful sensory organs, taste and smell. How often do they trigger wonderful, and not so wonderful memories. The smell of coffee in the morning can\'t be beat. Now with a nose that big you could probably smell it in the next county. Good write, fun write my friend!

September 30th, 2023 15:13

Swinging Topiary Trio
Summersounds68 said:

Doggerel Dave, thank you for your unique comment.

September 16th, 2023 19:50

Swinging Topiary Trio
Doggerel Dave said:

Alibaba rides again.... still, as the inspiration for a neat piece of verse, probably worth more in spirit than Alibaba charges....

September 16th, 2023 19:35

The Night Visitor Arrived
Summersounds68 said:

Doggerel Dave, thank you for your empathetic comment.

September 16th, 2023 11:18

The Night Visitor Arrived
Doggerel Dave said:

A dream which involves a phantom visitor, ghost busters and an Amazon delivery and provided a happy ending sounds very much like the surreal dreams I have on occasion...😂

September 15th, 2023 19:21

[haiku chain evening shadows]
Summersounds68 said:

Michael, thank you for your lovely comment.

September 15th, 2023 18:11

[haiku chain evening shadows]
Pop64 said:

Imagery is perfect as is the format of the haiku, nice write!

September 15th, 2023 13:09

Sitting on a Cornflake
Summersounds68 said:

Bella, those were the fun days when growing up. We lived for those Saturday morning cartoons and munching on cereal. Thank you for your encouraging comment.

September 13th, 2023 19:33

Sitting on a Cornflake
Doggerel Dave said:

Thought that woz you last Saturday.............. Does Kellogg\'s pay up promptly?...Thoroughly enjoyable nostalgic read. Thanks.



September 13th, 2023 19:31

Cracks on the Sidewalk
Summersounds68 said:

Doggerel Dave, thank you for commenting.

September 13th, 2023 19:27

U-Haul Trucks aren\'t Allowed in Heaven
Doggerel Dave said:

A truth. Wherever I end up (and I\'m not sure it is heaven or anywhere else) none of the junk I surround myself with comes with me. Some of it is essential while I\'m here, but the rest....

September 13th, 2023 19:23

Cracks on the Sidewalk
Doggerel Dave said:

Be of good cheer Ss68 is back! I\'m sure it is going to get better...😂

September 13th, 2023 19:16

Sitting on a Cornflake
Bella Shepard said:

My dear new friend, this is priceless. Being a Boomer myself, this poem reads like my own childhood Saturday mornings with Looney Tunes; Bugs Bunny, Elmer Fudd, Daffy Duck and all the Mel Blanc characters. You recall it all so vividly and beautifully, down to the cornflake left on the floor. We are indeed fortunate to have experienced that time, and I thank you this trip down memory lane in wonderful verse.

September 13th, 2023 15:07

Sitting on a Cornflake
Pop64 said:

This takes me back to the late 60s, getting up early on Saturdays and Sundays, beating everyone to the TV. The imagery is superb in its descriptive clarity and the humor is the topping on this wonderful read.

September 13th, 2023 12:50

TOO MANY MILES TO DRIVE
Suetah said:

Great writing! Your poem stories are all so descriptive. I can visualize what is happening from your powerful words. :)

September 10th, 2023 23:56

DADDY WORKED FROM DUSK TO DAWN
Suetah said:

Very well written with great descriptions!

September 10th, 2023 23:54

U-Haul Trucks aren\'t Allowed in Heaven
Summersounds68 said:

I would like to hear from other poets.

September 10th, 2023 09:32

Love is in the Air
Jowi said:

It goes straight through, I love

August 31st, 2023 14:12

Love is in the Air
Pop64 said:

A truly fluid read, one with terrific use of imagery, which served well to convey its meaning.

August 31st, 2023 12:23

STEPPING INTO THE UNKNOWN
vanabba3 said:

I am hoping to be there too one day... By the way, you haven\'t written anything lately...? I HAVE... lol check out what I have waiting your critique.

October 7th, 2018 20:49

STEPPING INTO THE UNKNOWN
Summersounds68 said:

Goldfinch, your words are so true. Thank you for reading my poem, \'Stepping Into the Unknown.\'
~ Sonia

March 2nd, 2017 12:24

STEPPING INTO THE UNKNOWN
Goldfinch60 said:

That first step is always the hardest, but without that step we would never get anywhere in life itself.

March 2nd, 2017 03:00

DADDY WORKED FROM DUSK TO DAWN
Summersounds68 said:

Kat, your enthusiastic comment is appreciated. ~ Sonia

January 7th, 2017 20:45

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