Comments received on poems by @merci
NOT YET READY
Poetic Licence said:
You get the feeling off sadness and the ongoing battle of demons in the mind, a touching and sad write, well expressed
February 11th, 2025 08:50
Poetic Licence said:
You get the feeling off sadness and the ongoing battle of demons in the mind, a touching and sad write, well expressed
February 11th, 2025 08:50
NOT YET READY
sorenbarrett said:
The coldness of lonliness is emphasized in feel that there should be more to this poem and it\'s abrupt ending fits its theme well. Very nice
February 11th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
The coldness of lonliness is emphasized in feel that there should be more to this poem and it\'s abrupt ending fits its theme well. Very nice
February 11th, 2025 08:26
FORBIDDEN TEMPTATION
Mutley Ravishes said:
As I\'m sure you\'re already aware, the adrenaline sweeps the pain away. For a while. Then it comes back again. Repeat endlessly. Until its message is understood?!
January 13th, 2025 19:45
Mutley Ravishes said:
As I\'m sure you\'re already aware, the adrenaline sweeps the pain away. For a while. Then it comes back again. Repeat endlessly. Until its message is understood?!
January 13th, 2025 19:45
THE DICHOTOMY OF DECEMBER
Thoughtless said:
Did you know that Jingle Bells was actually written for a holiday we celebrate in the U.S. A. called Thanksgiving? So much for that bit of trivia. That dichotomy you write of is often reflected in the homeless or as we say now the unhoused in America. Why is it that people only remember those in need, if at all, during holidays? Good write. Merci, for your thoughts, Merci.
January 13th, 2025 09:50
Thoughtless said:
Did you know that Jingle Bells was actually written for a holiday we celebrate in the U.S. A. called Thanksgiving? So much for that bit of trivia. That dichotomy you write of is often reflected in the homeless or as we say now the unhoused in America. Why is it that people only remember those in need, if at all, during holidays? Good write. Merci, for your thoughts, Merci.
January 13th, 2025 09:50
FORBIDDEN TEMPTATION
Thoughtless said:
I know the feeling, the temporary ecstasy of release, then the fading afterglow, with a desire for more. Your composition speaks to me. Adam and Eve losing innocence. I remember losing mine. You did well in expressing what others might feel.
January 13th, 2025 09:44
Thoughtless said:
I know the feeling, the temporary ecstasy of release, then the fading afterglow, with a desire for more. Your composition speaks to me. Adam and Eve losing innocence. I remember losing mine. You did well in expressing what others might feel.
January 13th, 2025 09:44
LIVING IN HELL\'S SHADOW
2781 said:
I think it\'s called repaying evil for evil.
April 16th, 2024 05:13
2781 said:
I think it\'s called repaying evil for evil.
April 16th, 2024 05:13
JAMES, MY FRIEND
Cassie58 said:
An endearing tribute to a much admired friend. I like the cuteness of this poem. Your friend James has his own brand of cuteness.
February 24th, 2024 16:47
Cassie58 said:
An endearing tribute to a much admired friend. I like the cuteness of this poem. Your friend James has his own brand of cuteness.
February 24th, 2024 16:47
TRANSFORMED BY YOUR LOVE
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Hope you get to meet your special love soon!
January 23rd, 2024 05:16
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Hope you get to meet your special love soon!
January 23rd, 2024 05:16
THE TRUTH IS LOST FOREVER
2781 said:
There\'s a righteousness judge that searches the heart.
December 12th, 2023 01:27
2781 said:
There\'s a righteousness judge that searches the heart.
December 12th, 2023 01:27
I don\'t know why I am feeling like this again
Your Girlfriend said:
Great writing. Love it!!
November 13th, 2023 14:58
Your Girlfriend said:
Great writing. Love it!!
November 13th, 2023 14:58
I don\'t know why I am feeling like this again
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and relatable.
November 12th, 2023 18:55
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and relatable.
November 12th, 2023 18:55
Last night I had a vision
2781 said:
The greatest among then shall be your servant.
Seek first the kingdom of God and His righteousness, and all these things will be added to you.
The serpent was the most cunning of all the creatures the Lord God had made. X
October 9th, 2023 02:09
2781 said:
The greatest among then shall be your servant.
Seek first the kingdom of God and His righteousness, and all these things will be added to you.
The serpent was the most cunning of all the creatures the Lord God had made. X
October 9th, 2023 02:09
Unrequited Affection: Unseen Love
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem like the way you have expressed yourself in this writing
June 12th, 2023 02:10
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem like the way you have expressed yourself in this writing
June 12th, 2023 02:10
