Comments received on poems by @merci
BRUISED AND BROKEN
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear the anger in this piece with words like scratch, bruised, broken, bleeding. It calls out for an answer that is never given. Well written
November 3rd, 2025 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
I can hear the anger in this piece with words like scratch, bruised, broken, bleeding. It calls out for an answer that is never given. Well written
November 3rd, 2025 06:28
AMONG BUFFONS, I RISE
sorenbarrett said:
The differences in the sexes and what one remembers and not. So well imaged the social niceties and veneer in place for our roles. \'Tis true I do not remember many things my wife does but then she does not remember the things that I do. Is it a memory issue or a gender issue of what is important to the sex? Well written
October 28th, 2025 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
The differences in the sexes and what one remembers and not. So well imaged the social niceties and veneer in place for our roles. \'Tis true I do not remember many things my wife does but then she does not remember the things that I do. Is it a memory issue or a gender issue of what is important to the sex? Well written
October 28th, 2025 07:57
THE KISS
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read satirically written about a kiss. It sounded like there was little emotional glue between the ones kissing. For a French kiss to be good there needs to be a lot of fireworks before not just during. Someone you already feel one with then it is not sharing someone\'s saliva but your own. Well done
October 23rd, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read satirically written about a kiss. It sounded like there was little emotional glue between the ones kissing. For a French kiss to be good there needs to be a lot of fireworks before not just during. Someone you already feel one with then it is not sharing someone\'s saliva but your own. Well done
October 23rd, 2025 04:04
WHAT IS LOVE?
sorenbarrett said:
I love the second line this so perfectly encapsulates it. A great poem about a very popular emotion so nicely worded
October 16th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
I love the second line this so perfectly encapsulates it. A great poem about a very popular emotion so nicely worded
October 16th, 2025 05:04
FOR WHAT?
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling comes through in this poem and that is poetry. Loved it
October 15th, 2025 15:50
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling comes through in this poem and that is poetry. Loved it
October 15th, 2025 15:50
BURDENED
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write how negative attitude and behavior impacts all those around, and sometimes unintentionally can bring some people down, nicely expressed and written
June 16th, 2025 11:07
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write how negative attitude and behavior impacts all those around, and sometimes unintentionally can bring some people down, nicely expressed and written
June 16th, 2025 11:07
BURDENED
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about the one that drags others down with negative attitude and behavior.
June 16th, 2025 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about the one that drags others down with negative attitude and behavior.
June 16th, 2025 10:26
YOUR BIZOUZS AND BEYOND
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of a beautiful relationship, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 12:57
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of a beautiful relationship, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 12:57
YOUR BIZOUZS AND BEYOND
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and lovely this poem speaks of a relationship and what one has become. Lovely
May 27th, 2025 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and lovely this poem speaks of a relationship and what one has become. Lovely
May 27th, 2025 10:48
THAT NOSTALGIC FEELING
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write of the looking back at what was and possibly still wishes was, lovely calming write, enjoyed the read
May 19th, 2025 05:13
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write of the looking back at what was and possibly still wishes was, lovely calming write, enjoyed the read
May 19th, 2025 05:13
THAT NOSTALGIC FEELING
sorenbarrett said:
Such a common theme but so cleverly imaged and worded that it deserves a fave for this alone. I can feel this poem and its intensity another reason for the fave. Well done
May 19th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Such a common theme but so cleverly imaged and worded that it deserves a fave for this alone. I can feel this poem and its intensity another reason for the fave. Well done
May 19th, 2025 05:02
TODAY IS A DAY LIKE NONE OTHER
Poetic Licence said:
I relate to this, a positive write about a sad situation for many, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 06:51
Poetic Licence said:
I relate to this, a positive write about a sad situation for many, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 06:51
TODAY IS A DAY LIKE NONE OTHER
sorenbarrett said:
Although alone you never are for you have yourself as partner always faithful and caring. A wonderful write about being strong with oneself.
April 2nd, 2025 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
Although alone you never are for you have yourself as partner always faithful and caring. A wonderful write about being strong with oneself.
April 2nd, 2025 06:47
I REMEMBER
Poetic Licence said:
With each new sun rise there is another chance, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 11:29
Poetic Licence said:
With each new sun rise there is another chance, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 11:29
I REMEMBER
sorenbarrett said:
Hope is born each morning and always returns just as the sun. A bright and hopeful write.
March 26th, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
Hope is born each morning and always returns just as the sun. A bright and hopeful write.
March 26th, 2025 08:48
I SET THE BAR LOW
sorenbarrett said:
A dog, a cat, a man or woman love knows no boundaries of beauty. The heart has no eyes and this poem is cute, tender and at the same time brutal in its honesty just as love is. A most wonderful composition. A fave
March 24th, 2025 15:35
sorenbarrett said:
A dog, a cat, a man or woman love knows no boundaries of beauty. The heart has no eyes and this poem is cute, tender and at the same time brutal in its honesty just as love is. A most wonderful composition. A fave
March 24th, 2025 15:35
I SET THE BAR LOW
Poetic Licence said:
You loved them for what they were and not what you wanted them to be, nicely expressed write
March 24th, 2025 10:03
Poetic Licence said:
You loved them for what they were and not what you wanted them to be, nicely expressed write
March 24th, 2025 10:03
NOT YET READY
Poetic Licence said:
You get the feeling off sadness and the ongoing battle of demons in the mind, a touching and sad write, well expressed
February 11th, 2025 08:50
Poetic Licence said:
You get the feeling off sadness and the ongoing battle of demons in the mind, a touching and sad write, well expressed
February 11th, 2025 08:50
NOT YET READY
sorenbarrett said:
The coldness of lonliness is emphasized in feel that there should be more to this poem and it\'s abrupt ending fits its theme well. Very nice
February 11th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
The coldness of lonliness is emphasized in feel that there should be more to this poem and it\'s abrupt ending fits its theme well. Very nice
February 11th, 2025 08:26
FORBIDDEN TEMPTATION
Mutley Ravishes said:
As I\'m sure you\'re already aware, the adrenaline sweeps the pain away. For a while. Then it comes back again. Repeat endlessly. Until its message is understood?!
January 13th, 2025 19:45
Mutley Ravishes said:
As I\'m sure you\'re already aware, the adrenaline sweeps the pain away. For a while. Then it comes back again. Repeat endlessly. Until its message is understood?!
January 13th, 2025 19:45
THE DICHOTOMY OF DECEMBER
Thoughtless said:
Did you know that Jingle Bells was actually written for a holiday we celebrate in the U.S. A. called Thanksgiving? So much for that bit of trivia. That dichotomy you write of is often reflected in the homeless or as we say now the unhoused in America. Why is it that people only remember those in need, if at all, during holidays? Good write. Merci, for your thoughts, Merci.
January 13th, 2025 09:50
Thoughtless said:
Did you know that Jingle Bells was actually written for a holiday we celebrate in the U.S. A. called Thanksgiving? So much for that bit of trivia. That dichotomy you write of is often reflected in the homeless or as we say now the unhoused in America. Why is it that people only remember those in need, if at all, during holidays? Good write. Merci, for your thoughts, Merci.
January 13th, 2025 09:50
FORBIDDEN TEMPTATION
Thoughtless said:
I know the feeling, the temporary ecstasy of release, then the fading afterglow, with a desire for more. Your composition speaks to me. Adam and Eve losing innocence. I remember losing mine. You did well in expressing what others might feel.
January 13th, 2025 09:44
Thoughtless said:
I know the feeling, the temporary ecstasy of release, then the fading afterglow, with a desire for more. Your composition speaks to me. Adam and Eve losing innocence. I remember losing mine. You did well in expressing what others might feel.
January 13th, 2025 09:44
LIVING IN HELL\'S SHADOW
2781 said:
I think it\'s called repaying evil for evil.
April 16th, 2024 05:13
2781 said:
I think it\'s called repaying evil for evil.
April 16th, 2024 05:13
JAMES, MY FRIEND
Cassie58 said:
An endearing tribute to a much admired friend. I like the cuteness of this poem. Your friend James has his own brand of cuteness.
February 24th, 2024 16:47
Cassie58 said:
An endearing tribute to a much admired friend. I like the cuteness of this poem. Your friend James has his own brand of cuteness.
February 24th, 2024 16:47
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