Comments received on poems by gray0328
Event Horizon
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful view of time and space and love as well.
August 27th, 2024 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful view of time and space and love as well.
August 27th, 2024 12:56
The Ninth Chorus
sorenbarrett said:
This makes me think of when baseball started.
August 26th, 2024 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
This makes me think of when baseball started.
August 26th, 2024 15:57
A New Dawn
Cassie58 said:
This is a wonderful tribute to Emily Dickinson. I swear I saw her penning her poems late at night by candlelight, as she glanced through the window. Very much enjoyed.
August 25th, 2024 12:30
Cassie58 said:
This is a wonderful tribute to Emily Dickinson. I swear I saw her penning her poems late at night by candlelight, as she glanced through the window. Very much enjoyed.
August 25th, 2024 12:30
A New Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
I love the rhythm that this form of poetry gives to the piece. It has a heart beat. Lovely
August 25th, 2024 06:00
sorenbarrett said:
I love the rhythm that this form of poetry gives to the piece. It has a heart beat. Lovely
August 25th, 2024 06:00
The Silent Burden
sorenbarrett said:
It can not be kept secret if more than one person knows it. Nicely stated
August 24th, 2024 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
It can not be kept secret if more than one person knows it. Nicely stated
August 24th, 2024 09:20
A New Bloom in Winter
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful poetic expression. Some really nice lines here. Much enjoyed. Thank you.
August 23rd, 2024 14:40
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful poetic expression. Some really nice lines here. Much enjoyed. Thank you.
August 23rd, 2024 14:40
A New Bloom in Winter
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully state with great imagery.
August 23rd, 2024 14:09
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully state with great imagery.
August 23rd, 2024 14:09
The Ringers\' Ritual
sorenbarrett said:
Haven\'t played that game in years. A great firsthand description brought excitement to the game. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
Haven\'t played that game in years. A great firsthand description brought excitement to the game. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 15:59
The Nuthouse Olympics
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read of nature and all its wonders. lovely
August 21st, 2024 11:18
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read of nature and all its wonders. lovely
August 21st, 2024 11:18
The Quiet Bridge
Cassie58 said:
Wonderfully spiritual in its content. Great poetic expression and fine imagery. Pleased I stopped by today.
August 20th, 2024 12:19
Cassie58 said:
Wonderfully spiritual in its content. Great poetic expression and fine imagery. Pleased I stopped by today.
August 20th, 2024 12:19
The Quiet Bridge
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful poetic lines
\"Between the teeth of hope and the tongue
Of doubt.\"
\"We walk on stones that bruise the tender
Soles of our faith\"
Not being a religious man but would rather consider myself spiritual still loved the tone of this poem \"Yet, in the small, quiet spaces, He waits—
Not in the grand, not in the sky-split flame,
But in the touch of hands, the soft surrender
Of anger. In the bending of the will,\"
A wonderful write
August 20th, 2024 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful poetic lines
\"Between the teeth of hope and the tongue
Of doubt.\"
\"We walk on stones that bruise the tender
Soles of our faith\"
Not being a religious man but would rather consider myself spiritual still loved the tone of this poem \"Yet, in the small, quiet spaces, He waits—
Not in the grand, not in the sky-split flame,
But in the touch of hands, the soft surrender
Of anger. In the bending of the will,\"
A wonderful write
August 20th, 2024 08:19
The Joy of Losing Me
Mutley Ravishes said:
The pain of all that grasping!
\"Love isn’t a thing to be captured
But a river that flows through all.\" Great work.
August 20th, 2024 00:20
Mutley Ravishes said:
The pain of all that grasping!
\"Love isn’t a thing to be captured
But a river that flows through all.\" Great work.
August 20th, 2024 00:20
The Joy of Losing Me
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely nature we are a part of and need to loose our self in to appreciate. A wonderful write
August 19th, 2024 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely nature we are a part of and need to loose our self in to appreciate. A wonderful write
August 19th, 2024 14:32
The Role of Ethics
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful message stated eloquently and in good poetic verse
August 18th, 2024 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful message stated eloquently and in good poetic verse
August 18th, 2024 07:00
Firth of the Clyde
rhmn_7 said:
Well now I have to see Glasgow and the Clyde for myself, thank you for the inspiration!
August 18th, 2024 06:01
rhmn_7 said:
Well now I have to see Glasgow and the Clyde for myself, thank you for the inspiration!
August 18th, 2024 06:01
The Joy of Simply Being
Mutley Ravishes said:
Preach! Great write. I sometimes wonder if it’s all the responsibility of being an adult that contributes to losing the magic of childhood.
I recall a young lady saying that magic upped and left her when she went through puberty. I had the same experience.
And then there are the egos of identification. Of beliefs.
Oh well, I guess it’s up to us to rediscover it. Lot’s of work to do.
August 17th, 2024 23:45
Mutley Ravishes said:
Preach! Great write. I sometimes wonder if it’s all the responsibility of being an adult that contributes to losing the magic of childhood.
I recall a young lady saying that magic upped and left her when she went through puberty. I had the same experience.
And then there are the egos of identification. Of beliefs.
Oh well, I guess it’s up to us to rediscover it. Lot’s of work to do.
August 17th, 2024 23:45
Firth of the Clyde
Dan Williams said:
\"the wind, indifferent, presses on\" ... Aye Laddie, a fine job you\'ve done hear.
August 17th, 2024 23:24
Dan Williams said:
\"the wind, indifferent, presses on\" ... Aye Laddie, a fine job you\'ve done hear.
August 17th, 2024 23:24
The Joy of Simply Being
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read bringing memories of playing with toy trains and riding on box cars playing in the train yard
August 17th, 2024 18:08
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read bringing memories of playing with toy trains and riding on box cars playing in the train yard
August 17th, 2024 18:08
Firth of the Clyde
sorenbarrett said:
Stunning images painted so poetically. A vision in this poem. Very nicely worded.
August 16th, 2024 18:17
sorenbarrett said:
Stunning images painted so poetically. A vision in this poem. Very nicely worded.
August 16th, 2024 18:17
The Old Witch Babysits
sorenbarrett said:
Mythical and enthralling it holds the feel of legend and old hobbit tales . Nicely done.
August 15th, 2024 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
Mythical and enthralling it holds the feel of legend and old hobbit tales . Nicely done.
August 15th, 2024 05:29
« Return to the profile of gray0328
