Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
1 + 2 does not mean free
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Wow..amazing work here...the entire concept of love and relationships and how they work...it\'s because that relentless fucking pipsqueek is forever attempting to destroy that bliss that happens between two people...so, people retreat into their own little worlds and feel that they have to shut out the rest of the world, which is not at all healthy in the long run...because everyone needs more than just one other soul to fulfill their destinies..in any event...great poem....take care
November 5th, 2018 00:58
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Wow..amazing work here...the entire concept of love and relationships and how they work...it\'s because that relentless fucking pipsqueek is forever attempting to destroy that bliss that happens between two people...so, people retreat into their own little worlds and feel that they have to shut out the rest of the world, which is not at all healthy in the long run...because everyone needs more than just one other soul to fulfill their destinies..in any event...great poem....take care
November 5th, 2018 00:58
The Existence
sylviasearcher said:
I Was trying to find some words to express what a powerful piece this was which would do justice to your narrative but I failed.
I really enjoyed the raw emotion and tragedy expressed so beautifully.
November 2nd, 2018 07:51
sylviasearcher said:
I Was trying to find some words to express what a powerful piece this was which would do justice to your narrative but I failed.
I really enjoyed the raw emotion and tragedy expressed so beautifully.
November 2nd, 2018 07:51
The Human Condition
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I really enjoyed this.
I have spent at least the last 5 years trying to leave the human condition behind.
I just don\'t comprehend humans, I think I am of the soil they steal from to feed their greedy flesh!
July 2nd, 2018 01:44
sylviasearcher said:
Oh I really enjoyed this.
I have spent at least the last 5 years trying to leave the human condition behind.
I just don\'t comprehend humans, I think I am of the soil they steal from to feed their greedy flesh!
July 2nd, 2018 01:44
The Human Condition
Christina8 said:
This is something I haven\'t seen from you before Aa. Very \"in your face\" and to the point but I like it very much. You certainly said what you meant! Great job!
June 30th, 2018 20:46
Christina8 said:
This is something I haven\'t seen from you before Aa. Very \"in your face\" and to the point but I like it very much. You certainly said what you meant! Great job!
June 30th, 2018 20:46
The Human Condition
orchidee said:
You never said you was beyond hearing me sing again - so there\'s still hope! heehee.
June 30th, 2018 12:00
orchidee said:
You never said you was beyond hearing me sing again - so there\'s still hope! heehee.
June 30th, 2018 12:00
Clean up your act.
Laura🌻 said:
Aa,
A great write! I totally agree!
“You only have a limited time on Earth.”
LET’S MAKE THE BEST OF IT!
~Laura~
May 23rd, 2018 15:54
Laura🌻 said:
Aa,
A great write! I totally agree!
“You only have a limited time on Earth.”
LET’S MAKE THE BEST OF IT!
~Laura~
May 23rd, 2018 15:54
Clean up your act.
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, I just had an image in my head of souls that choose to repeat the cycle and stay dirty. Our time here may have its limitations but we need not worry as all returns back for new creations.
Thank you for your inspiration!
May 23rd, 2018 09:25
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant, I just had an image in my head of souls that choose to repeat the cycle and stay dirty. Our time here may have its limitations but we need not worry as all returns back for new creations.
Thank you for your inspiration!
May 23rd, 2018 09:25
Clean up your act.
Fay Slimm. said:
Sound advice here Aa - - -life indeed is too short for living it thoughtlessly.
May 23rd, 2018 06:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Sound advice here Aa - - -life indeed is too short for living it thoughtlessly.
May 23rd, 2018 06:24
Still burning
dusk arising said:
OK first off, you are already a \'one off\'. you are unique and theres not another \'you\' in the universe. Out there someplace is the thing/person who will suit you. She may not be a dead ringer of the gal in your dreams but she will fulfill your hopes desires and your need to please her.
Don\'t stop looking BUT dont make too many important comprmises - the one you choose has to be a keeper and not a disaster in the making! Thats called making your head rule your heart.
Remember this \'the harder you try, the luckier you get!\'
Good luck, the right one is out there and wants YOU just as much as you want HER. You just havent met yet.
May 17th, 2018 10:54
dusk arising said:
OK first off, you are already a \'one off\'. you are unique and theres not another \'you\' in the universe. Out there someplace is the thing/person who will suit you. She may not be a dead ringer of the gal in your dreams but she will fulfill your hopes desires and your need to please her.
Don\'t stop looking BUT dont make too many important comprmises - the one you choose has to be a keeper and not a disaster in the making! Thats called making your head rule your heart.
Remember this \'the harder you try, the luckier you get!\'
Good luck, the right one is out there and wants YOU just as much as you want HER. You just havent met yet.
May 17th, 2018 10:54
Falling
SLR said:
For just a portion of the day, I can smile again. Great line! You can feel the sincerity.
May 16th, 2018 21:34
SLR said:
For just a portion of the day, I can smile again. Great line! You can feel the sincerity.
May 16th, 2018 21:34
The Duality of WoMan
Lorna said:
Good picture of struggle....... I guess if we are trying we can\'t be all bad!
May 12th, 2018 05:57
Lorna said:
Good picture of struggle....... I guess if we are trying we can\'t be all bad!
May 12th, 2018 05:57
The Duality of WoMan
SLR said:
No-one is ALL good. I used to think that no-one was ALL bad but I\'ve met some sociopaths that make me rethink that. But you\'re completely right. We all have to find our own way. Good write.
May 11th, 2018 19:45
SLR said:
No-one is ALL good. I used to think that no-one was ALL bad but I\'ve met some sociopaths that make me rethink that. But you\'re completely right. We all have to find our own way. Good write.
May 11th, 2018 19:45
The Duality of WoMan
sylviasearcher said:
Well written description of the complexity of self
May 11th, 2018 13:03
sylviasearcher said:
Well written description of the complexity of self
May 11th, 2018 13:03
I think
dusk arising said:
I suppose you could have written:-
i do,
and the things i do,
i do.
May 10th, 2018 05:16
dusk arising said:
I suppose you could have written:-
i do,
and the things i do,
i do.
May 10th, 2018 05:16
Fixing holes with good intentions
sylviasearcher said:
I don\'t care,but I can\'t give up
Life is a bad day, work is a chore
I wrote it wrong and could not say
The record is stuck, I got no more
May 9th, 2018 06:23
sylviasearcher said:
I don\'t care,but I can\'t give up
Life is a bad day, work is a chore
I wrote it wrong and could not say
The record is stuck, I got no more
May 9th, 2018 06:23
Pain is no longer welcome here
Lorna said:
Good one aa and the last two lines are just wonderful!
May 8th, 2018 04:19
Lorna said:
Good one aa and the last two lines are just wonderful!
May 8th, 2018 04:19
I say the wrong thing
Lorna said:
You have written nothing but lovely things aa ........ I always enjoy them........
May 8th, 2018 04:09
Lorna said:
You have written nothing but lovely things aa ........ I always enjoy them........
May 8th, 2018 04:09
I say the wrong thing
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
good poem aa harvey :-) some people will always find fault in your words or fault in our actions and you are right..
I cannot meet your expectations,
Nor can I quote the Romantics.
I cannot know just what you want from me;
I can only give you, all of this.
we can only give out what we can give! nobody is perfect
i love the ending line
Every single part of me, I throw this down at your feet
And all I ask is that you please understand that I come in peace.
it sounds like you give all you can and you are not perfect ... you come in peace and thats all that matters !
nice work aa harvey :-)
May 8th, 2018 03:15
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
good poem aa harvey :-) some people will always find fault in your words or fault in our actions and you are right..
I cannot meet your expectations,
Nor can I quote the Romantics.
I cannot know just what you want from me;
I can only give you, all of this.
we can only give out what we can give! nobody is perfect
i love the ending line
Every single part of me, I throw this down at your feet
And all I ask is that you please understand that I come in peace.
it sounds like you give all you can and you are not perfect ... you come in peace and thats all that matters !
nice work aa harvey :-)
May 8th, 2018 03:15
Fallen angel
sylviasearcher said:
A hopeful poem... No lyrics spring to mind for hopeful love ...
May 8th, 2018 02:11
sylviasearcher said:
A hopeful poem... No lyrics spring to mind for hopeful love ...
May 8th, 2018 02:11
Fallen angel
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
really lovely :-) :-)
May 7th, 2018 01:32
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
really lovely :-) :-)
May 7th, 2018 01:32
Pain is no longer welcome here
Laura🌻 said:
A beautifully written message, Aa!
Eventually we do get what we deserve...including love!
~Laura~
May 6th, 2018 18:14
Laura🌻 said:
A beautifully written message, Aa!
Eventually we do get what we deserve...including love!
~Laura~
May 6th, 2018 18:14
Pain is no longer welcome here
dusk arising said:
I enjoyed reading this and it certainly chimes with my experience of loves lost and ones personal outlook in the days immediately after an ending. Hopefully ageing also brings self esteem and gone are those younger days when a feeling of worthlessness could so easily invade. Nowadays a feeling of freedom to get on with the stuff i want to do pervades.
May 6th, 2018 10:38
dusk arising said:
I enjoyed reading this and it certainly chimes with my experience of loves lost and ones personal outlook in the days immediately after an ending. Hopefully ageing also brings self esteem and gone are those younger days when a feeling of worthlessness could so easily invade. Nowadays a feeling of freedom to get on with the stuff i want to do pervades.
May 6th, 2018 10:38
They sea me without
sylviasearcher said:
And is there a raven at your door?
Great poem.
This is very sad.
I walk in foreign footsteps...
It says so much. I spend my life this way.
It has put a song in my head. Probably another I should not admit I listen to. I can hear the words but can\'t remember the title ... I will put in my best efforts at recall.
May 4th, 2018 07:10
sylviasearcher said:
And is there a raven at your door?
Great poem.
This is very sad.
I walk in foreign footsteps...
It says so much. I spend my life this way.
It has put a song in my head. Probably another I should not admit I listen to. I can hear the words but can\'t remember the title ... I will put in my best efforts at recall.
May 4th, 2018 07:10
Choose life
sylviasearcher said:
How about this one...
I could sing it to you all night, all night
If I could, I\'d make it alright, alright
Nothing\'s stopping you except what\'s inside
I can help you, but it\'s your fight, your fight
Fight back
Don\'t take it lyin\' down, you got to bite back
The face of liberty\'s starting to crack
She had a plan up until she got smacked in the mouth
And it all went south
Like freedom
The slaves are lookin\' for someone to lead them
The master\'s lookin\' for someone to need him
The promised land is there for those who need it most
And Lincoln\'s ghost said
Get out of your own way, oh, I
Get out of your own way, oh, I
I could sing it to you all night, all night
If I could, I\'d make it alright, alright
Nothing\'s stopping you except what\'s inside
I can help you, but it\'s your fight, your fight
Get out of your own way
Get out of your own way
Get out of your own way
Get out of your own way
Get out of your own way
Blessed are the arrogant
For there is the kingdom of their own company
Blessed are the superstars
For the magnificence in their light
We understand better our own insignificance
Blessed are the filthy rich
For you can only truly own what you give away
Like your pain
U2 get out of your own way
May 3rd, 2018 06:33
sylviasearcher said:
How about this one...
I could sing it to you all night, all night
If I could, I\'d make it alright, alright
Nothing\'s stopping you except what\'s inside
I can help you, but it\'s your fight, your fight
Fight back
Don\'t take it lyin\' down, you got to bite back
The face of liberty\'s starting to crack
She had a plan up until she got smacked in the mouth
And it all went south
Like freedom
The slaves are lookin\' for someone to lead them
The master\'s lookin\' for someone to need him
The promised land is there for those who need it most
And Lincoln\'s ghost said
Get out of your own way, oh, I
Get out of your own way, oh, I
I could sing it to you all night, all night
If I could, I\'d make it alright, alright
Nothing\'s stopping you except what\'s inside
I can help you, but it\'s your fight, your fight
Get out of your own way
Get out of your own way
Get out of your own way
Get out of your own way
Get out of your own way
Blessed are the arrogant
For there is the kingdom of their own company
Blessed are the superstars
For the magnificence in their light
We understand better our own insignificance
Blessed are the filthy rich
For you can only truly own what you give away
Like your pain
U2 get out of your own way
May 3rd, 2018 06:33
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