Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
I see you
dusk arising said:
This is quite lovely. The longing reaches out. The male side of me says \'do something about it if you feel so strongly\', But not being female i guess this is one area where my feminine side cannot reach.
Maybe a pint of Heineken would help me. Their slogan is \'Heineken refreshes the parts other beers cannot reach\'.
February 17th, 2020 05:51
dusk arising said:
This is quite lovely. The longing reaches out. The male side of me says \'do something about it if you feel so strongly\', But not being female i guess this is one area where my feminine side cannot reach.
Maybe a pint of Heineken would help me. Their slogan is \'Heineken refreshes the parts other beers cannot reach\'.
February 17th, 2020 05:51
I see you
Lauraš» said:
Aa Harvey,
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. I do hope that one day, when you look in that mirror, you will see the reflection youāre hoping for!
Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~š»
February 17th, 2020 05:20
Lauraš» said:
Aa Harvey,
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. I do hope that one day, when you look in that mirror, you will see the reflection youāre hoping for!
Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~š»
February 17th, 2020 05:20
Brighter than the stars at night
Clara said:
This is really good!! So well written, inspired. Thanks for sharing.
February 13th, 2020 17:22
Clara said:
This is really good!! So well written, inspired. Thanks for sharing.
February 13th, 2020 17:22
Brighter than the stars at night
Fay Slimm. said:
So much truth in these few lines - thanks for the solemn reminders my friend.
February 13th, 2020 17:08
Fay Slimm. said:
So much truth in these few lines - thanks for the solemn reminders my friend.
February 13th, 2020 17:08
Brighter than the stars at night
Saxon Crow said:
Very nice write. And apt!
February 13th, 2020 14:57
Saxon Crow said:
Very nice write. And apt!
February 13th, 2020 14:57
Tell me
FredPeyer said:
Your well written poem reminds me that we should be much more open with our inner thoughts. How do you know somebody if they don\'t talk?
I like it!
February 11th, 2020 21:58
FredPeyer said:
Your well written poem reminds me that we should be much more open with our inner thoughts. How do you know somebody if they don\'t talk?
I like it!
February 11th, 2020 21:58
Tell me
Clara said:
This reads almost inviting but slightly dangerous. Do I want to tell you anything... I do and I don\'t. Very intriguing. Then the ending there, about not being a fount. Bubbles and waterfalls. Almost seems as if the whole conversation would be almost pointless. Curious little poem indeed, great work.
February 11th, 2020 16:26
Clara said:
This reads almost inviting but slightly dangerous. Do I want to tell you anything... I do and I don\'t. Very intriguing. Then the ending there, about not being a fount. Bubbles and waterfalls. Almost seems as if the whole conversation would be almost pointless. Curious little poem indeed, great work.
February 11th, 2020 16:26
This is no way to be
Mil57Man said:
So sad, so real. The road oflife is very steep. The waters, treacherous
and very deep and often times they will make you weep. then life will push you to the brink, to show you. You\'re a lot tougher than you think.
Remember, when you feel you can no longer stand. You can always reach out and tag Heavenly Hands.
February 10th, 2020 09:30
Mil57Man said:
So sad, so real. The road oflife is very steep. The waters, treacherous
and very deep and often times they will make you weep. then life will push you to the brink, to show you. You\'re a lot tougher than you think.
Remember, when you feel you can no longer stand. You can always reach out and tag Heavenly Hands.
February 10th, 2020 09:30
Mechanic
Fay Slimm. said:
A good example of staying as young as we feel A.A. - I like the words \"self-repair\" which is always easier with someone who cares - - good read.
February 9th, 2020 07:13
Fay Slimm. said:
A good example of staying as young as we feel A.A. - I like the words \"self-repair\" which is always easier with someone who cares - - good read.
February 9th, 2020 07:13
Handbags at dawn
Bragee said:
The art of deception!
Love has definitely lost its meaning over time.
It\'s more fluid han ever.
February 4th, 2020 12:32
Bragee said:
The art of deception!
Love has definitely lost its meaning over time.
It\'s more fluid han ever.
February 4th, 2020 12:32
Waiting for an angel
Clara said:
I like this. Wanting to be with your loved one in heaven but hoping they live a full time before you meet again. True love indeed.
January 31st, 2020 16:50
Clara said:
I like this. Wanting to be with your loved one in heaven but hoping they live a full time before you meet again. True love indeed.
January 31st, 2020 16:50
Tired of T.V.
dusk arising said:
LOL yes a good fun read. Exactly describes the way i felt last night as i climbed the wooden hill to bed.
January 27th, 2020 08:51
dusk arising said:
LOL yes a good fun read. Exactly describes the way i felt last night as i climbed the wooden hill to bed.
January 27th, 2020 08:51
Death is inevitable.
Clara said:
I really like this. Definitely a much needed reminder not to take anything for granted. To enjoy it while we\'re here. Thank you!
January 26th, 2020 14:39
Clara said:
I really like this. Definitely a much needed reminder not to take anything for granted. To enjoy it while we\'re here. Thank you!
January 26th, 2020 14:39
Death is inevitable.
Fay Slimm. said:
How true these word A.A. - we must treat the bit in between as a gift for sure. Thanks for the wise reminder.
January 26th, 2020 11:18
Fay Slimm. said:
How true these word A.A. - we must treat the bit in between as a gift for sure. Thanks for the wise reminder.
January 26th, 2020 11:18
Death is inevitable.
dusk arising said:
Yep, thats exactly how life is. There are only two certainties. We are born and we die. The bit in between is a gift..... so many don\'t make it into the later years.
January 26th, 2020 10:39
dusk arising said:
Yep, thats exactly how life is. There are only two certainties. We are born and we die. The bit in between is a gift..... so many don\'t make it into the later years.
January 26th, 2020 10:39
Welcome to Far Town
_Aquarius_ said:
Wow this is amazing! A very chilling read! Extremely powerful! Really spoke to and moved me.
January 21st, 2020 18:37
_Aquarius_ said:
Wow this is amazing! A very chilling read! Extremely powerful! Really spoke to and moved me.
January 21st, 2020 18:37
Welcome to Far Town
dusk arising said:
Striking out at christianity\'s deaf ears eh? A doomsday warning for any soul but still they will hold high the cross. One wonders what jesus would actually think of that cross being used as some form of worship by a human race who nailed him to it and tortured him.
Well as a non believer I\'m lucky to have the freedom to ask such questions.
Yep, death awaits us all. No one wishes a painful death but with age comes the acceptance of our fate and, though not necessarily in the christian tradition, a faith that there is something more.
Very enjoyable read.
January 21st, 2020 15:06
dusk arising said:
Striking out at christianity\'s deaf ears eh? A doomsday warning for any soul but still they will hold high the cross. One wonders what jesus would actually think of that cross being used as some form of worship by a human race who nailed him to it and tortured him.
Well as a non believer I\'m lucky to have the freedom to ask such questions.
Yep, death awaits us all. No one wishes a painful death but with age comes the acceptance of our fate and, though not necessarily in the christian tradition, a faith that there is something more.
Very enjoyable read.
January 21st, 2020 15:06
A lifelong search for love
Nicholas Browning said:
Amen to that.
In all seriousness this is a compelling read. It makes sense, and it\'s very true. I enjoyed the read.
January 19th, 2020 10:57
Nicholas Browning said:
Amen to that.
In all seriousness this is a compelling read. It makes sense, and it\'s very true. I enjoyed the read.
January 19th, 2020 10:57
Bon Voyage
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful poem of loving and wise advice . Every line a gem.
January 15th, 2020 04:27
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful poem of loving and wise advice . Every line a gem.
January 15th, 2020 04:27
Bon Voyage
kevin browne said:
I\'ll certainly give your advive a good go. Thanks for the tips. Lovely to read and take in...!!!
January 14th, 2020 14:45
kevin browne said:
I\'ll certainly give your advive a good go. Thanks for the tips. Lovely to read and take in...!!!
January 14th, 2020 14:45
Discrimination
Seek said:
A profound message for whom discrimination has been normalized by those who see it as that. Your poem is a call to an awakening and a reminder, that esteem of self is our right, not to be grabbed by self-styled gods. I wrote something touching on a similar theme using a very different approach. My most recent poem related to this issue is titled \"The Stamp\". I hope you have time to read it and comment. Peace.
January 12th, 2020 11:23
Seek said:
A profound message for whom discrimination has been normalized by those who see it as that. Your poem is a call to an awakening and a reminder, that esteem of self is our right, not to be grabbed by self-styled gods. I wrote something touching on a similar theme using a very different approach. My most recent poem related to this issue is titled \"The Stamp\". I hope you have time to read it and comment. Peace.
January 12th, 2020 11:23
Kill a love
Evergreen said:
I can really feel your pain in this write. Losing the one we love feels like losing a limb. Iāve been where you are. Iāve felt hopeless and lost and alone. Just when you think youāve lost your everything, that youāve lost āthe oneā, keep your head held high and learn to love yourself. When you lose love you need to be able to recognize itās not your fault. Things happen for a reason. Stay strong, you got this.
January 10th, 2020 00:03
Evergreen said:
I can really feel your pain in this write. Losing the one we love feels like losing a limb. Iāve been where you are. Iāve felt hopeless and lost and alone. Just when you think youāve lost your everything, that youāve lost āthe oneā, keep your head held high and learn to love yourself. When you lose love you need to be able to recognize itās not your fault. Things happen for a reason. Stay strong, you got this.
January 10th, 2020 00:03
No faith in love
dusk arising said:
A sorrowful read. Love can be a lot more than the romantic kind of love you mourn here.
Maybe learning about love starts with beginning to love the beautiful world we live upon. Once on the road of learning about love you\'ll find you can love yourself and once you achieve that, then the rest will fall into place.
I\'m sorry if this reads rather glibly. I do mean every word of it and there are many older wiser folk who will tell you the same story.
January 8th, 2020 13:28
dusk arising said:
A sorrowful read. Love can be a lot more than the romantic kind of love you mourn here.
Maybe learning about love starts with beginning to love the beautiful world we live upon. Once on the road of learning about love you\'ll find you can love yourself and once you achieve that, then the rest will fall into place.
I\'m sorry if this reads rather glibly. I do mean every word of it and there are many older wiser folk who will tell you the same story.
January 8th, 2020 13:28
Our love is fading
Evergreen said:
Love faces many trials. I really enjoyed this.
January 7th, 2020 22:02
Evergreen said:
Love faces many trials. I really enjoyed this.
January 7th, 2020 22:02
Q & A
dusk arising said:
This is a real thought jerker. Until somebody put the idea of there being this \'god\' figure into your head you had absolutely no need of any god. Until you were led to believe that there was something you were meant to be you could be anything you wanted to be within the limits of your own ambition and capabilities.
Religion and \'conditioning\' have so much to answer for in the manner that they both restrict human freedom.
January 6th, 2020 07:16
dusk arising said:
This is a real thought jerker. Until somebody put the idea of there being this \'god\' figure into your head you had absolutely no need of any god. Until you were led to believe that there was something you were meant to be you could be anything you wanted to be within the limits of your own ambition and capabilities.
Religion and \'conditioning\' have so much to answer for in the manner that they both restrict human freedom.
January 6th, 2020 07:16
Thorns
dusk arising said:
As one who walked through that door i completely agree.
Life is more peaceful and accepting on this side.
January 4th, 2020 16:53
dusk arising said:
As one who walked through that door i completely agree.
Life is more peaceful and accepting on this side.
January 4th, 2020 16:53
I never want to make you cry
myself and me said:
A feeling seems so familiar. Well expressed.
December 23rd, 2019 11:51
myself and me said:
A feeling seems so familiar. Well expressed.
December 23rd, 2019 11:51
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