Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
Paradise Gone
dusk arising said:
Your writing today brought to mind the dying thoughts of a young soldier. Unsure of his faith and of course unsure of life after death.
There are no answers for any of us and your words amplify this.
A very strong write from you today.
February 22nd, 2020 23:47
dusk arising said:
Your writing today brought to mind the dying thoughts of a young soldier. Unsure of his faith and of course unsure of life after death.
There are no answers for any of us and your words amplify this.
A very strong write from you today.
February 22nd, 2020 23:47
I hate you
dusk arising said:
Ouch! Get rid of that hate. Hate is no good in anyone\'s life, it\'s far too negative.
February 18th, 2020 11:15
dusk arising said:
Ouch! Get rid of that hate. Hate is no good in anyone\'s life, it\'s far too negative.
February 18th, 2020 11:15
I see you
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic ending, not sure if one or two but never the less! Keep being you
February 17th, 2020 10:08
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic ending, not sure if one or two but never the less! Keep being you
February 17th, 2020 10:08
I see you
dusk arising said:
This is quite lovely. The longing reaches out. The male side of me says \'do something about it if you feel so strongly\', But not being female i guess this is one area where my feminine side cannot reach.
Maybe a pint of Heineken would help me. Their slogan is \'Heineken refreshes the parts other beers cannot reach\'.
February 17th, 2020 06:11
dusk arising said:
This is quite lovely. The longing reaches out. The male side of me says \'do something about it if you feel so strongly\', But not being female i guess this is one area where my feminine side cannot reach.
Maybe a pint of Heineken would help me. Their slogan is \'Heineken refreshes the parts other beers cannot reach\'.
February 17th, 2020 06:11
I see you
Saxon Crow said:
A fragile poem of hope. Really enjoyed reading it.
February 17th, 2020 06:09
Saxon Crow said:
A fragile poem of hope. Really enjoyed reading it.
February 17th, 2020 06:09
I see you
dusk arising said:
This is quite lovely. The longing reaches out. The male side of me says \'do something about it if you feel so strongly\', But not being female i guess this is one area where my feminine side cannot reach.
Maybe a pint of Heineken would help me. Their slogan is \'Heineken refreshes the parts other beers cannot reach\'.
February 17th, 2020 05:51
dusk arising said:
This is quite lovely. The longing reaches out. The male side of me says \'do something about it if you feel so strongly\', But not being female i guess this is one area where my feminine side cannot reach.
Maybe a pint of Heineken would help me. Their slogan is \'Heineken refreshes the parts other beers cannot reach\'.
February 17th, 2020 05:51
I see you
Laura🌻 said:
Aa Harvey,
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. I do hope that one day, when you look in that mirror, you will see the reflection you’re hoping for!
Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~🌻
February 17th, 2020 05:20
Laura🌻 said:
Aa Harvey,
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. I do hope that one day, when you look in that mirror, you will see the reflection you’re hoping for!
Thank you for sharing.
~Laura~🌻
February 17th, 2020 05:20
Brighter than the stars at night
Clara said:
This is really good!! So well written, inspired. Thanks for sharing.
February 13th, 2020 17:22
Clara said:
This is really good!! So well written, inspired. Thanks for sharing.
February 13th, 2020 17:22
Brighter than the stars at night
Fay Slimm. said:
So much truth in these few lines - thanks for the solemn reminders my friend.
February 13th, 2020 17:08
Fay Slimm. said:
So much truth in these few lines - thanks for the solemn reminders my friend.
February 13th, 2020 17:08
Brighter than the stars at night
Saxon Crow said:
Very nice write. And apt!
February 13th, 2020 14:57
Saxon Crow said:
Very nice write. And apt!
February 13th, 2020 14:57
Tell me
FredPeyer said:
Your well written poem reminds me that we should be much more open with our inner thoughts. How do you know somebody if they don\'t talk?
I like it!
February 11th, 2020 21:58
FredPeyer said:
Your well written poem reminds me that we should be much more open with our inner thoughts. How do you know somebody if they don\'t talk?
I like it!
February 11th, 2020 21:58
Tell me
Clara said:
This reads almost inviting but slightly dangerous. Do I want to tell you anything... I do and I don\'t. Very intriguing. Then the ending there, about not being a fount. Bubbles and waterfalls. Almost seems as if the whole conversation would be almost pointless. Curious little poem indeed, great work.
February 11th, 2020 16:26
Clara said:
This reads almost inviting but slightly dangerous. Do I want to tell you anything... I do and I don\'t. Very intriguing. Then the ending there, about not being a fount. Bubbles and waterfalls. Almost seems as if the whole conversation would be almost pointless. Curious little poem indeed, great work.
February 11th, 2020 16:26
This is no way to be
Mil57Man said:
So sad, so real. The road oflife is very steep. The waters, treacherous
and very deep and often times they will make you weep. then life will push you to the brink, to show you. You\'re a lot tougher than you think.
Remember, when you feel you can no longer stand. You can always reach out and tag Heavenly Hands.
February 10th, 2020 09:30
Mil57Man said:
So sad, so real. The road oflife is very steep. The waters, treacherous
and very deep and often times they will make you weep. then life will push you to the brink, to show you. You\'re a lot tougher than you think.
Remember, when you feel you can no longer stand. You can always reach out and tag Heavenly Hands.
February 10th, 2020 09:30
Mechanic
Fay Slimm. said:
A good example of staying as young as we feel A.A. - I like the words \"self-repair\" which is always easier with someone who cares - - good read.
February 9th, 2020 07:13
Fay Slimm. said:
A good example of staying as young as we feel A.A. - I like the words \"self-repair\" which is always easier with someone who cares - - good read.
February 9th, 2020 07:13
Handbags at dawn
Bragee said:
The art of deception!
Love has definitely lost its meaning over time.
It\'s more fluid han ever.
February 4th, 2020 12:32
Bragee said:
The art of deception!
Love has definitely lost its meaning over time.
It\'s more fluid han ever.
February 4th, 2020 12:32
Waiting for an angel
Clara said:
I like this. Wanting to be with your loved one in heaven but hoping they live a full time before you meet again. True love indeed.
January 31st, 2020 16:50
Clara said:
I like this. Wanting to be with your loved one in heaven but hoping they live a full time before you meet again. True love indeed.
January 31st, 2020 16:50
Tired of T.V.
dusk arising said:
LOL yes a good fun read. Exactly describes the way i felt last night as i climbed the wooden hill to bed.
January 27th, 2020 08:51
dusk arising said:
LOL yes a good fun read. Exactly describes the way i felt last night as i climbed the wooden hill to bed.
January 27th, 2020 08:51
Death is inevitable.
Clara said:
I really like this. Definitely a much needed reminder not to take anything for granted. To enjoy it while we\'re here. Thank you!
January 26th, 2020 14:39
Clara said:
I really like this. Definitely a much needed reminder not to take anything for granted. To enjoy it while we\'re here. Thank you!
January 26th, 2020 14:39
Death is inevitable.
Fay Slimm. said:
How true these word A.A. - we must treat the bit in between as a gift for sure. Thanks for the wise reminder.
January 26th, 2020 11:18
Fay Slimm. said:
How true these word A.A. - we must treat the bit in between as a gift for sure. Thanks for the wise reminder.
January 26th, 2020 11:18
Death is inevitable.
dusk arising said:
Yep, thats exactly how life is. There are only two certainties. We are born and we die. The bit in between is a gift..... so many don\'t make it into the later years.
January 26th, 2020 10:39
dusk arising said:
Yep, thats exactly how life is. There are only two certainties. We are born and we die. The bit in between is a gift..... so many don\'t make it into the later years.
January 26th, 2020 10:39
Welcome to Far Town
_Aquarius_ said:
Wow this is amazing! A very chilling read! Extremely powerful! Really spoke to and moved me.
January 21st, 2020 18:37
_Aquarius_ said:
Wow this is amazing! A very chilling read! Extremely powerful! Really spoke to and moved me.
January 21st, 2020 18:37
Welcome to Far Town
dusk arising said:
Striking out at christianity\'s deaf ears eh? A doomsday warning for any soul but still they will hold high the cross. One wonders what jesus would actually think of that cross being used as some form of worship by a human race who nailed him to it and tortured him.
Well as a non believer I\'m lucky to have the freedom to ask such questions.
Yep, death awaits us all. No one wishes a painful death but with age comes the acceptance of our fate and, though not necessarily in the christian tradition, a faith that there is something more.
Very enjoyable read.
January 21st, 2020 15:06
dusk arising said:
Striking out at christianity\'s deaf ears eh? A doomsday warning for any soul but still they will hold high the cross. One wonders what jesus would actually think of that cross being used as some form of worship by a human race who nailed him to it and tortured him.
Well as a non believer I\'m lucky to have the freedom to ask such questions.
Yep, death awaits us all. No one wishes a painful death but with age comes the acceptance of our fate and, though not necessarily in the christian tradition, a faith that there is something more.
Very enjoyable read.
January 21st, 2020 15:06
A lifelong search for love
Nicholas Browning said:
Amen to that.
In all seriousness this is a compelling read. It makes sense, and it\'s very true. I enjoyed the read.
January 19th, 2020 10:57
Nicholas Browning said:
Amen to that.
In all seriousness this is a compelling read. It makes sense, and it\'s very true. I enjoyed the read.
January 19th, 2020 10:57
Bon Voyage
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful poem of loving and wise advice . Every line a gem.
January 15th, 2020 04:27
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful poem of loving and wise advice . Every line a gem.
January 15th, 2020 04:27
Bon Voyage
kevin browne said:
I\'ll certainly give your advive a good go. Thanks for the tips. Lovely to read and take in...!!!
January 14th, 2020 14:45
kevin browne said:
I\'ll certainly give your advive a good go. Thanks for the tips. Lovely to read and take in...!!!
January 14th, 2020 14:45
Discrimination
Seek said:
A profound message for whom discrimination has been normalized by those who see it as that. Your poem is a call to an awakening and a reminder, that esteem of self is our right, not to be grabbed by self-styled gods. I wrote something touching on a similar theme using a very different approach. My most recent poem related to this issue is titled \"The Stamp\". I hope you have time to read it and comment. Peace.
January 12th, 2020 11:23
Seek said:
A profound message for whom discrimination has been normalized by those who see it as that. Your poem is a call to an awakening and a reminder, that esteem of self is our right, not to be grabbed by self-styled gods. I wrote something touching on a similar theme using a very different approach. My most recent poem related to this issue is titled \"The Stamp\". I hope you have time to read it and comment. Peace.
January 12th, 2020 11:23
Kill a love
Evergreen said:
I can really feel your pain in this write. Losing the one we love feels like losing a limb. I’ve been where you are. I’ve felt hopeless and lost and alone. Just when you think you’ve lost your everything, that you’ve lost “the one”, keep your head held high and learn to love yourself. When you lose love you need to be able to recognize it’s not your fault. Things happen for a reason. Stay strong, you got this.
January 10th, 2020 00:03
Evergreen said:
I can really feel your pain in this write. Losing the one we love feels like losing a limb. I’ve been where you are. I’ve felt hopeless and lost and alone. Just when you think you’ve lost your everything, that you’ve lost “the one”, keep your head held high and learn to love yourself. When you lose love you need to be able to recognize it’s not your fault. Things happen for a reason. Stay strong, you got this.
January 10th, 2020 00:03
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