Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey
Bon Voyage
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful poem of loving and wise advice . Every line a gem.
January 15th, 2020 04:27
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful poem of loving and wise advice . Every line a gem.
January 15th, 2020 04:27
Bon Voyage
kevin browne said:
I\'ll certainly give your advive a good go. Thanks for the tips. Lovely to read and take in...!!!
January 14th, 2020 14:45
kevin browne said:
I\'ll certainly give your advive a good go. Thanks for the tips. Lovely to read and take in...!!!
January 14th, 2020 14:45
Discrimination
Seek said:
A profound message for whom discrimination has been normalized by those who see it as that. Your poem is a call to an awakening and a reminder, that esteem of self is our right, not to be grabbed by self-styled gods. I wrote something touching on a similar theme using a very different approach. My most recent poem related to this issue is titled \"The Stamp\". I hope you have time to read it and comment. Peace.
January 12th, 2020 11:23
Seek said:
A profound message for whom discrimination has been normalized by those who see it as that. Your poem is a call to an awakening and a reminder, that esteem of self is our right, not to be grabbed by self-styled gods. I wrote something touching on a similar theme using a very different approach. My most recent poem related to this issue is titled \"The Stamp\". I hope you have time to read it and comment. Peace.
January 12th, 2020 11:23
Kill a love
Evergreen said:
I can really feel your pain in this write. Losing the one we love feels like losing a limb. Iāve been where you are. Iāve felt hopeless and lost and alone. Just when you think youāve lost your everything, that youāve lost āthe oneā, keep your head held high and learn to love yourself. When you lose love you need to be able to recognize itās not your fault. Things happen for a reason. Stay strong, you got this.
January 10th, 2020 00:03
Evergreen said:
I can really feel your pain in this write. Losing the one we love feels like losing a limb. Iāve been where you are. Iāve felt hopeless and lost and alone. Just when you think youāve lost your everything, that youāve lost āthe oneā, keep your head held high and learn to love yourself. When you lose love you need to be able to recognize itās not your fault. Things happen for a reason. Stay strong, you got this.
January 10th, 2020 00:03
No faith in love
dusk arising said:
A sorrowful read. Love can be a lot more than the romantic kind of love you mourn here.
Maybe learning about love starts with beginning to love the beautiful world we live upon. Once on the road of learning about love you\'ll find you can love yourself and once you achieve that, then the rest will fall into place.
I\'m sorry if this reads rather glibly. I do mean every word of it and there are many older wiser folk who will tell you the same story.
January 8th, 2020 13:28
dusk arising said:
A sorrowful read. Love can be a lot more than the romantic kind of love you mourn here.
Maybe learning about love starts with beginning to love the beautiful world we live upon. Once on the road of learning about love you\'ll find you can love yourself and once you achieve that, then the rest will fall into place.
I\'m sorry if this reads rather glibly. I do mean every word of it and there are many older wiser folk who will tell you the same story.
January 8th, 2020 13:28
Our love is fading
Evergreen said:
Love faces many trials. I really enjoyed this.
January 7th, 2020 22:02
Evergreen said:
Love faces many trials. I really enjoyed this.
January 7th, 2020 22:02
Q & A
dusk arising said:
This is a real thought jerker. Until somebody put the idea of there being this \'god\' figure into your head you had absolutely no need of any god. Until you were led to believe that there was something you were meant to be you could be anything you wanted to be within the limits of your own ambition and capabilities.
Religion and \'conditioning\' have so much to answer for in the manner that they both restrict human freedom.
January 6th, 2020 07:16
dusk arising said:
This is a real thought jerker. Until somebody put the idea of there being this \'god\' figure into your head you had absolutely no need of any god. Until you were led to believe that there was something you were meant to be you could be anything you wanted to be within the limits of your own ambition and capabilities.
Religion and \'conditioning\' have so much to answer for in the manner that they both restrict human freedom.
January 6th, 2020 07:16
Thorns
dusk arising said:
As one who walked through that door i completely agree.
Life is more peaceful and accepting on this side.
January 4th, 2020 16:53
dusk arising said:
As one who walked through that door i completely agree.
Life is more peaceful and accepting on this side.
January 4th, 2020 16:53
I never want to make you cry
myself and me said:
A feeling seems so familiar. Well expressed.
December 23rd, 2019 11:51
myself and me said:
A feeling seems so familiar. Well expressed.
December 23rd, 2019 11:51
Say what you mean
orchidee said:
A fine write Aa.
Erm, I\'m hesitating to say what I mean - Er, perhaps, it might be, not sure, maybe, what I was going to say was....... Spit it out man, and just say it! lol.
December 6th, 2019 04:45
orchidee said:
A fine write Aa.
Erm, I\'m hesitating to say what I mean - Er, perhaps, it might be, not sure, maybe, what I was going to say was....... Spit it out man, and just say it! lol.
December 6th, 2019 04:45
Why do you do it?
kevin browne said:
Well, it looks as though you are becoming someone else. Your poetry proves that within it\'s self impression of you crying your heart out, but still to persist for a better life. That\'s a magical and positive to beleive in. Keep your finger dipped in the river of positivity and it will take you anywhere you like and more importantly be you..
November 30th, 2019 16:07
kevin browne said:
Well, it looks as though you are becoming someone else. Your poetry proves that within it\'s self impression of you crying your heart out, but still to persist for a better life. That\'s a magical and positive to beleive in. Keep your finger dipped in the river of positivity and it will take you anywhere you like and more importantly be you..
November 30th, 2019 16:07
No tomorrow
orchidee said:
I have a similar poem, but without the reincarnation included. Good write as a poem Aa.
November 10th, 2019 02:48
orchidee said:
I have a similar poem, but without the reincarnation included. Good write as a poem Aa.
November 10th, 2019 02:48
The Meaning of Life
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, great ending!
Thank you
November 6th, 2019 09:17
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, great ending!
Thank you
November 6th, 2019 09:17
There is nothing chivalrous about a sniper.
Aislinn Wilson said:
Very heavy. This is great
November 5th, 2019 22:17
Aislinn Wilson said:
Very heavy. This is great
November 5th, 2019 22:17
I can\'t get no
Evergreen said:
I really loved this. Sometimes love comes and goes, but one thing I will say, is that if there is no loyalty, then they werenāt the one. Your love will come. Time has a way of making things work out.
October 28th, 2019 22:52
Evergreen said:
I really loved this. Sometimes love comes and goes, but one thing I will say, is that if there is no loyalty, then they werenāt the one. Your love will come. Time has a way of making things work out.
October 28th, 2019 22:52
Light in darkness
Chris Yellow said:
Wow, how tormented. I hope you can find the cure for that drug of yours.
October 23rd, 2019 07:08
Chris Yellow said:
Wow, how tormented. I hope you can find the cure for that drug of yours.
October 23rd, 2019 07:08
Light in darkness
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic ending. The rock that rolls I know well but we can break our own spell!
Great stuff!
October 23rd, 2019 06:48
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic ending. The rock that rolls I know well but we can break our own spell!
Great stuff!
October 23rd, 2019 06:48
Love gives
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful tribute to Love - really enjoyed this positive and very wise write. .
October 22nd, 2019 15:46
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful tribute to Love - really enjoyed this positive and very wise write. .
October 22nd, 2019 15:46
Love gives
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
Love is all that and more though it can ask a lot sometimes. This is a superb great poem describing and appreciating the gift of love. Kudos.
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too
October 22nd, 2019 13:19
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
Love is all that and more though it can ask a lot sometimes. This is a superb great poem describing and appreciating the gift of love. Kudos.
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too
October 22nd, 2019 13:19
Never met someone like you before
Thoughts In Time said:
Wonderful to find that trust but itās an inner work of art ..in the end we only have thatās whatās in our hearts..thatās y no matter how grand or cheap I surround myself with things that I find beautiful that make my soul smile not to impress...itās only stuff..canāt take nothing with u only live in your heart and leave memories of how you made others feel..nice wordsš¹
October 15th, 2019 11:16
Thoughts In Time said:
Wonderful to find that trust but itās an inner work of art ..in the end we only have thatās whatās in our hearts..thatās y no matter how grand or cheap I surround myself with things that I find beautiful that make my soul smile not to impress...itās only stuff..canāt take nothing with u only live in your heart and leave memories of how you made others feel..nice wordsš¹
October 15th, 2019 11:16
People believe what they see
Thoughts In Time said:
Not all stories end sadly or badly...we allow others to see what we want them to see but then others might only see what they want to see..much thought here..well written š¹
October 12th, 2019 07:32
Thoughts In Time said:
Not all stories end sadly or badly...we allow others to see what we want them to see but then others might only see what they want to see..much thought here..well written š¹
October 12th, 2019 07:32
Poetry is dead
Thoughts In Time said:
Hmmmm...are you emotional or fed up...or just given up...some things are sent to test us and try us a lesson to learn ...š¹
October 11th, 2019 06:26
Thoughts In Time said:
Hmmmm...are you emotional or fed up...or just given up...some things are sent to test us and try us a lesson to learn ...š¹
October 11th, 2019 06:26
Rose
FredPeyer said:
Aa, I guess I better give my wife one of every color, just to be safe. No black one though.
October 9th, 2019 12:07
FredPeyer said:
Aa, I guess I better give my wife one of every color, just to be safe. No black one though.
October 9th, 2019 12:07
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