Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey



Word is
Fay Slimm. said:

And you chose rightly my friend - a fine example of waiting to find inspiration and than letting it float quickly from pen to paper. Thanks for for sharing these thoughts.

September 20th, 2019 04:45

?
Neville said:

thoroughly enjoyed ....

September 19th, 2019 07:39

Are you a believer?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Our SONG together is:

Oh I believe in You
And I believe in Babies
And I believe in Mum & Dad
We dont believe in maybes
But I believe in YOU
Because I know your love is true
And AMEN you know it too
COS WE BELIEVE IN LOVE !

Hi Friend thanks for your questioning Poem
It made us thinkand the answer is YES
Cos we believe in TRUE LOVE ~ AMEN

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡

September 17th, 2019 08:33

Are you a believer?
dusk arising said:

Once past the mutual attraction and love making comes the time of soul sharing. Just as described within your piece today. Often the make or break of a relationship.

Your final question has to receive a yes for future bliss to enter the scene.

September 17th, 2019 02:48

A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Monsoon
Bragee said:

Love...Good love,
is the key to the worlds greatest treasures

September 11th, 2019 11:23

Your twisted heart
kevin browne said:

An honest tale told through the eyes of distraction and a distraced mind trying to catch up with the thought od actually everything may turn ot okay in the end, This one pulls the reader in unable to stop re-reading it over and over to discover the real you...

September 8th, 2019 03:55

Even after
Clara said:

Well rounded write, the depth and story in the words you\'ve chosen really shine through. I feel the love and the loss, the betrayal... All of it. Great work!

CLARA X

September 7th, 2019 09:14

The remains of my heart
kevin browne said:

Fantastic love affairs within your heart to the seemingly hard to get Prince. I love this. Thank you...

August 28th, 2019 08:09

A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry Saint
sylviasearcher said:

True blue is true

August 21st, 2019 07:18

I don\'t know
kevin browne said:

Nicely done...

August 19th, 2019 10:47

I don\'t know
dusk arising said:

Well described \'high\' of love together with it\'s nagging fears of continuance.

Appreciate the days of those loving highs for they will pass. Capture them into your many verses so that you may read them in the years ahead of you and be taken back...... to when magic ran in your veins.

August 19th, 2019 09:38

Lost soul
sylviasearcher said:

I felt this this morning 😓

August 13th, 2019 02:41

Parents – They mess you up
Christina8 said:

Wow. I\'m glad I\'m not like that with my own.....they are not old enough anyway....but damn, give your kid wings and let them fly! Great write Harvey.

August 12th, 2019 13:24

Parents – They mess you up
Michael Edwards said:

Reminds me of Larkin\'s They F***k You Up Your Mum and Dad. Great write.

August 12th, 2019 08:20

Still lost
dusk arising said:

Vividly sad lament to past love. Very well written i feel, revealing the hidden beauty of this partner.

August 12th, 2019 02:06

Enemy of being great
dusk arising said:

I like the way you write. I too read that book and becoming truly adult rejected most of it. Vindicated now that we learn it is full of mis-translations and bending of the facts. Then i learn that the biggest christian church is one of the richest organisations in the world who trade in billions of dollars on the stock markets..... disgusting to think that all that money could be helping so many in a \'christian\' spirited way.

I am a variation of the norm, i am nothing... this life will be one of several along my learning journey of.... well i\'m not sure of what.... but i hold a firm faith in reincarnation.


August 5th, 2019 14:31

I can\'t write
PoeticBiscuit said:

I understand exactly how that feels, when you just hit that spot where nothing is really forming. It’s so frustrating. This one however was a good one, I enjoyed it!

August 3rd, 2019 12:22

This is my day
dusk arising said:

Hmmm, questions one wishes one could \'put away\' and relax knowing the loved one loves being nearby.

The insecure doubting mind clearly defined.

August 1st, 2019 02:04

The ashes of a phoenix heart
dusk arising said:

With tenacity and faith may you succeed.
If you both should fail, never doubt that you gave your all.

July 31st, 2019 06:36

I never made it across
kevin browne said:

At any stage of life and whatever the age luck becomes hidden for decades before it finally manages to reach out and touch your heart and bring you back to life. You will win the day even if the pavements are cracking up beneath your feet. Stick to writing poems such as this one can only leac confidence to come out and play.

July 27th, 2019 18:05

I never made it across
Poetic Dan said:

Wow that was powerful and seeing one down on there luck not want to look as a killer of a line in my mind.

You are amazing at being you! No direction or compass, maybe you\'re right where you need to be?


July 27th, 2019 03:51

Another time (The death of love, not me.)
Fay Slimm. said:

Truly a poetic tribute to love that is non-judgemental - - a wonderfully positive read.

July 25th, 2019 12:58

Another time (The death of love, not me.)
dusk arising said:

A song of love which truly transcends romantic love into the essence of unconditional love.

July 25th, 2019 04:20

Gifted
Poetic Dan said:

O my God\'s! that\'s what you all are to me, this felt like the thunderstorm that ran through me last night.

The is the most amazing message and shook me back to me core, it should be hung on every wall!

Much peace and respect
Always appreciated

July 24th, 2019 07:56

Without you
Fay Slimm. said:

A wise way of explaining the reasons where even love cannot hold partners when one feels a need to move on - your final line is a gift for those left behind - - \"Now you are gone, I realise I was enough................ an engaging read ...........

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July 22nd, 2019 04:55

Reject
dusk arising said:

I am imagining your CV.

July 21st, 2019 11:30

A throwaway poem
dusk arising said:

Throw me a line, drop me an \'h\', cast me a seed of a thought. Write it down, but never cast it away, for tomorrow it may grow into your finest, or nought.

July 20th, 2019 04:28

A throwaway poem
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

I\'ll take this poem
... and read it tonight
when the ambience and the light
...Is right
We\'ll all take your poems I\'m sure we would say
If you\'ve got anymore you wish
...thrown away

Great write aa I enjoyed this one!


July 20th, 2019 03:49

A throwaway poem
sylviasearcher said:

This is quite perfect. I’m glad you threw it away from you to me.

July 20th, 2019 03:36

Insight
Christina8 said:

I like what you write! But everybody seems to be busy today and not reading and reviewing poems. I deleted my own. Keep up the good work!

July 13th, 2019 18:03



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