Comments received on poems by Aa Harvey



The Snowman
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS FRIEND ~ I looked outa the winda but NO SNOW ~ still 28C = 82F ~ NOT a cloud in the Essex (UK) SKY ! \'Sno GO for SNOW PEOPLE today ! ANGELA is still in Auckland NZ (its 4am !) its the middle of Winter but yesterday it was 14C = 57F ! There is SNOW in S Island and all year round Glaziers ! Currently the temperature in DUNEDIN (NZ) is 2C = 36F and snow forcast ! Where are you with your Snowman ? When we were Kids we wanted to keep a SNOWMAN in the Freezer but Mum said it was unhygenic ! Mums have no empathy for S Men ! I was raised in the North of England (Lancashire) and we did get SNOW ! Snowmen taught us the transience of Life ~ six weeks was the longest one ever lasted ! Dogs & Cats last longer but white mice again are transient ! Your elegant Poem reminded me of so many things and (psychologically) it made me feel cooler !

Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN (Essex UK)
I share this site with my Fiancee Angela
She is on a Work Placement in New Zealand
Please check our SITE ~ Thanks B & A !

June 27th, 2019 10:14

The land that lies
Crystal Hope said:

This was such a great piece. so well written.

June 18th, 2019 13:08

Time is running out
Fay Slimm. said:

The poignant waiting for a Miss Right comes out clearly in this well rhymed lament - we long for happiness but time runs on - - - a fine piece of poetry a.a.

June 11th, 2019 11:59

The Monster
dusk arising said:

Oi! story of my life - except the last happy bits. LOL

I just had to keep reading to see where this was taking me.
Very enjoyable.

June 10th, 2019 05:11

Dead to love
dusk arising said:

When love is a two way emotion i.e. coming right back at you with the same energy as you are giving THEN you know romantic love. One way love is adoration. However, there is much more to \'love\' than \'romantic love\'. Life teaches us this to be true.

June 9th, 2019 11:55

Man flu
dusk arising said:

Thats telling it how it is.

June 8th, 2019 10:31

Man flu
SiwelMadaC said:

Nice

June 8th, 2019 03:36

Man flu
Poetic Dan said:

Achoo!

Great write!

June 8th, 2019 02:33

Discovery
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - those questions after loving a love stay close to our heart all life through as poignant reminders of what if and why - an engaging read and thanks for posting it Aa.

June 7th, 2019 05:38

My sacred silence
Lorna said:

Everything goes...... all of it........... so sayeth the Rubaiyat

June 5th, 2019 07:40

Years and years
Lorna said:

Really sad... especially loved the last stanza Neville............

June 4th, 2019 06:00

Death is written on every page
kevin browne said:

Yes, I agree with you. Death is written on every page and stamped on every continent there is on this planet. Bring back the beauty so the Sunshine can reveal a brighter life. A beautifully written, but a very sad poem with good meanings behind each word you wrote

May 30th, 2019 08:44

New doors
Fay Slimm. said:

So much appeal in these words of wisdom - - I love the imagery and the force of each line. New Doors is the perfect title too.

May 28th, 2019 16:04

Without limits
kevin browne said:

Brilliantly phrased writing skills shine through your sadness and pain of leaving us all behind. Please, don\'t do that because there is more to life than just living.Go find your rainbow and step inside the spectrum of life to see other set out landscapes of thought so intrinsicallt beautiful you will almost declare yourself a God. Keep writing these special pieces and grow with them.

May 22nd, 2019 11:37

The love plan
dusk arising said:

Wow, tremendous love poem.
Been there, done that, T-shirts are all worn out/thrown out. It\'s made me what i am today.
Such an important thing in our lives, to love and to be loved.

May 21st, 2019 14:06

Belief
sylviasearcher said:

I keep trying to believe in those pictures.

I sense some hope at the end of this poignant write

May 20th, 2019 04:59

A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Magic
FineB said:

Hello Aa Harvey,

Love is beautful, Love is grand, love is divine.

A super write and magical.

Keep writing
FineB

May 17th, 2019 03:49

A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Magic
Fay Slimm. said:

One of a series I hope my friend - love is to some never attainable and the final phrase in this four-line lament is too sad for words having brought me near tears. Admirable l poetry magic.

May 16th, 2019 12:57

The Trapper
Lorna said:

Very haunting - sounds like a hunter from prehistoric times - Otzi the Iceman!

May 15th, 2019 05:34

Reality
Gary Edward Geraci said:

To a man in prison I would suggest mystical contemplation. Should he correspond he will be set free. Great write!

May 14th, 2019 20:25

Reality
Crystal Hope said:

This poem was a great one.

May 14th, 2019 14:40

Reality
Poetic Dan said:

Wow.... Brilliantly sad but hopeful with a flow like tha, it did feel like a trap. Lucky I found a key.

Thank you for sharing
This reality
Much peace and respect

May 14th, 2019 11:08

I am to blame
Lorna said:

Awwww. Beautifully expressed ... but more liberating if someone loves without wanting to \"change\" them.

May 14th, 2019 07:58

Reality
Lorna said:

This fills me with claustrophobia and I want to know why he can\'t leave?

May 14th, 2019 05:32

I am to blame
Poetic Dan said:

So hard when that one sinks in.
Very well expressed but then one has to forgive their self.

Thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect

May 13th, 2019 12:50

The sunshine days
Fay Slimm. said:

A tender array of loving words here -
- thanks for sharing it with us A.A.

January 28th, 2019 07:42

The sunshine days
sylviasearcher said:

If only it were so simple.
What a warm and loving and hopeful poem.
I do believe kindness can heal and this felt healing.

January 28th, 2019 06:56

Terabithia
sylviasearcher said:

A beautiful flight of fancy to begin the day. Though there is a loss, the recollection of the memory is so beautiful.

Thanks for taking me to a magical place.

December 28th, 2018 04:00

Bamboo shoots
sylviasearcher said:

I really loved the dreamy imagery you created in this one.

I have just about worked our that finding my dreams and loving their richness is an important part of my journey to myself

November 13th, 2018 07:50

1 + 2 does not mean free
Lorna said:

Clever title......... good take on complications of relationships!

November 5th, 2018 08:03



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