Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan
The Waiting
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tom it is the waiting and not knowing that is hard to deal with at times.
Andy
March 20th, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tom it is the waiting and not knowing that is hard to deal with at times.
Andy
March 20th, 2024 02:21
Of course I am
Teddy.15 said:
So very well described the aching of being not fine but smiling and saying yes regardless, and for a women going through something important and in some cases terrifying to ask just shows to me anyway, Soulmate this has so many layers of emotion and lessons for us all. Kudos 🌹
March 19th, 2024 16:24
Teddy.15 said:
So very well described the aching of being not fine but smiling and saying yes regardless, and for a women going through something important and in some cases terrifying to ask just shows to me anyway, Soulmate this has so many layers of emotion and lessons for us all. Kudos 🌹
March 19th, 2024 16:24
The Waiting
Accidental Poet said:
What if all the things we wanted actually came true and happened as we wanted it to? Hey, it could happen. 😁👍
March 19th, 2024 14:52
Accidental Poet said:
What if all the things we wanted actually came true and happened as we wanted it to? Hey, it could happen. 😁👍
March 19th, 2024 14:52
The Waiting
orchidee said:
Should last line be a repeat \'What if?\' It says \'What it\'.
Yes, a terrible worry waiting for the No.7 bus too. I waited one Sunday for it for 2 hours. Then someone passed by and said \'Oh, it don\'t run on Sundays!\' Doh! (Did I make that up?).
March 19th, 2024 09:27
orchidee said:
Should last line be a repeat \'What if?\' It says \'What it\'.
Yes, a terrible worry waiting for the No.7 bus too. I waited one Sunday for it for 2 hours. Then someone passed by and said \'Oh, it don\'t run on Sundays!\' Doh! (Did I make that up?).
March 19th, 2024 09:27
Of course I am
Bragee said:
Great work!
Captures a feeling that many can relate to! The strong being strong for the strong.
March 18th, 2024 23:18
Bragee said:
Great work!
Captures a feeling that many can relate to! The strong being strong for the strong.
March 18th, 2024 23:18
Of course I am
Doggerel Dave said:
A gem, Tom. There\'s something so simple, plain and absolutely truthful about this. I\'ve seen it many times in the faces of partners such as you in in this piece.
March 18th, 2024 16:25
Doggerel Dave said:
A gem, Tom. There\'s something so simple, plain and absolutely truthful about this. I\'ve seen it many times in the faces of partners such as you in in this piece.
March 18th, 2024 16:25
Of course I am
Accidental Poet said:
Are any of us really ok? Well penned Tom. 😁👍
March 18th, 2024 09:13
Accidental Poet said:
Are any of us really ok? Well penned Tom. 😁👍
March 18th, 2024 09:13
Of Irish Descent
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You paint the picture well.
March 12th, 2024 14:46
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You paint the picture well.
March 12th, 2024 14:46
Of Irish Descent
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m at least part Irish, but I\'ve never left the US except for crossing the border with Canada once for about 7 hours. Happy St. Patrick\'s Day and well written Tom. ☘️
March 12th, 2024 09:43
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m at least part Irish, but I\'ve never left the US except for crossing the border with Canada once for about 7 hours. Happy St. Patrick\'s Day and well written Tom. ☘️
March 12th, 2024 09:43
Of Irish Descent
Doggerel Dave said:
Tom, I likes your work....but as a Londoner/Australian there\'s something about, what appears to be a riddle that I can\'t quite get to grips with.
Please don\'t respond now and spoil it for everyone else - just wait until the others have up and left, and the caravan has moved on... then let me know.
March 12th, 2024 07:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Tom, I likes your work....but as a Londoner/Australian there\'s something about, what appears to be a riddle that I can\'t quite get to grips with.
Please don\'t respond now and spoil it for everyone else - just wait until the others have up and left, and the caravan has moved on... then let me know.
March 12th, 2024 07:34
Of Irish Descent
Saxon Crow said:
Lol. I knew that was coming. An enjoyable poem Tom.
March 12th, 2024 05:34
Saxon Crow said:
Lol. I knew that was coming. An enjoyable poem Tom.
March 12th, 2024 05:34
Of Irish Descent
Cassie58 said:
It’s a while since I was in Dublin, but I heartily approve of anyone who wears the green on St Patrick’s day. Be proud of your heritage I say. I fly the flag for St George myself. Nothing like Guiness in an Irish pub. It doesn’t travel well. Cheers Tom. Have a good day.
March 12th, 2024 03:38
Cassie58 said:
It’s a while since I was in Dublin, but I heartily approve of anyone who wears the green on St Patrick’s day. Be proud of your heritage I say. I fly the flag for St George myself. Nothing like Guiness in an Irish pub. It doesn’t travel well. Cheers Tom. Have a good day.
March 12th, 2024 03:38
Out of Earshot
Doggerel Dave said:
A great moral tale, Tom (and I nearly missed it!) Never have I understood those who remove themselves from immediate reality when out there either via your phones and/or the additional mobile phone...
Some of the streets I\'ve walked down during a long and chequered life needed 360 degree awareness in the here and now.....
March 8th, 2024 22:06
Doggerel Dave said:
A great moral tale, Tom (and I nearly missed it!) Never have I understood those who remove themselves from immediate reality when out there either via your phones and/or the additional mobile phone...
Some of the streets I\'ve walked down during a long and chequered life needed 360 degree awareness in the here and now.....
March 8th, 2024 22:06
Out of Earshot
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. Nature has quite the soundtrack.
March 8th, 2024 14:01
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. Nature has quite the soundtrack.
March 8th, 2024 14:01
Out of Earshot
Goldfinch60 said:
So glad you are hearing the world around you now Tom, it is surprising how much joy you can get from listening to life around you.
Keep listening.
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
So glad you are hearing the world around you now Tom, it is surprising how much joy you can get from listening to life around you.
Keep listening.
Andy
March 8th, 2024 02:46
Out of Earshot
Bella Shepard said:
I love this telling of your \"aha\" moment, and how you gained a new perspective on the sounds of life. On my early morning walks I\'m privileged to hear the first bird of the morning, and slowly the whole chorus chimes in, it\'s magical, and I understand your joy. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece, I enjoyed it so very much.
March 7th, 2024 15:00
Bella Shepard said:
I love this telling of your \"aha\" moment, and how you gained a new perspective on the sounds of life. On my early morning walks I\'m privileged to hear the first bird of the morning, and slowly the whole chorus chimes in, it\'s magical, and I understand your joy. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece, I enjoyed it so very much.
March 7th, 2024 15:00
Out of Earshot
Neville said:
although there are many who think it might be cool, nice or maybe a laugh .. you just can\'t beat reality .. 10/10 in my book Tom ........................ N
March 7th, 2024 13:47
Neville said:
although there are many who think it might be cool, nice or maybe a laugh .. you just can\'t beat reality .. 10/10 in my book Tom ........................ N
March 7th, 2024 13:47
Out of Earshot
Cassie58 said:
A new world for you, outside your earphones. So many wonderful sounds you could have missed out on. I like to hear birdsong, laughter, children playing, church bells ringing, trains rattling by and buses halting to pick up passengers. So many sounds to enjoy. The earphones would make me feel isolated. Great write Tom. Lots of imagery. Have a good Thursday.
March 7th, 2024 12:19
Cassie58 said:
A new world for you, outside your earphones. So many wonderful sounds you could have missed out on. I like to hear birdsong, laughter, children playing, church bells ringing, trains rattling by and buses halting to pick up passengers. So many sounds to enjoy. The earphones would make me feel isolated. Great write Tom. Lots of imagery. Have a good Thursday.
March 7th, 2024 12:19
Out of Earshot
Cloie said:
Your walk without earphones turned into quite the adventure! It\'s amazing how a small change can lead to a whole new perspective. I love how you captured the transition from frustration to appreciation as you noticed the sounds and sights around you. It\'s a beautiful reminder to embrace the present moment. Great work!
March 7th, 2024 09:55
Cloie said:
Your walk without earphones turned into quite the adventure! It\'s amazing how a small change can lead to a whole new perspective. I love how you captured the transition from frustration to appreciation as you noticed the sounds and sights around you. It\'s a beautiful reminder to embrace the present moment. Great work!
March 7th, 2024 09:55
Out of Earshot
JulesBurnsit said:
Beautiful and so familiar. Putting my shoes on now.
March 7th, 2024 09:26
JulesBurnsit said:
Beautiful and so familiar. Putting my shoes on now.
March 7th, 2024 09:26
Out of Earshot
Accidental Poet said:
Awesome write Tom. The music of life can sometimes be so beautiful. Like the deaf man who can suddenly hear. So much we all take for granted Tom. 🤔
March 7th, 2024 09:20
Accidental Poet said:
Awesome write Tom. The music of life can sometimes be so beautiful. Like the deaf man who can suddenly hear. So much we all take for granted Tom. 🤔
March 7th, 2024 09:20
The Man in the White Coat
Cloie said:
This is hilarious! The ending made me chuckle. Great job!
March 7th, 2024 09:16
Cloie said:
This is hilarious! The ending made me chuckle. Great job!
March 7th, 2024 09:16
Out of Earshot
orchidee said:
That\'s sounds noisy - chattering, bells, laughing, whistling, etc! lol.
March 7th, 2024 09:00
orchidee said:
That\'s sounds noisy - chattering, bells, laughing, whistling, etc! lol.
March 7th, 2024 09:00
The Man in the White Coat
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Tom, some people are like that.
Andy
March 7th, 2024 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Tom, some people are like that.
Andy
March 7th, 2024 02:07
The Man in the White Coat
JulesBurnsit said:
Ah haha!! Perhaps the anorak was the cause of the rash that caused the visit to the doctor that caused the visit to the chemist that caused the... rain? Hmm? Your post made my day! Thanks!
March 6th, 2024 17:04
JulesBurnsit said:
Ah haha!! Perhaps the anorak was the cause of the rash that caused the visit to the doctor that caused the visit to the chemist that caused the... rain? Hmm? Your post made my day! Thanks!
March 6th, 2024 17:04
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