Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan
If I Could I Would
mvvenkataraman said:
Many kind ideas we have,
But, due to the presence of fate,
We are unable to execute it,
The poet has penned a marvel.
A great poem that is clear,
No tough or confusing words,
As English is terribly advancing !
October 29th, 2024 07:55
mvvenkataraman said:
Many kind ideas we have,
But, due to the presence of fate,
We are unable to execute it,
The poet has penned a marvel.
A great poem that is clear,
No tough or confusing words,
As English is terribly advancing !
October 29th, 2024 07:55
The Last Word
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, didn\'t they feign \"the pen is mightier than the sword\" only because we could, as my late mother warned me too many years ago, slice, dice and cut down to minutest pieces with... words. And poets and poetesses don\'t go silent when they kick the bucket either. That\'s the beauty of prophets, shall we say? This pretty number is more than hardhitting. Oh! But you\'ve tidily wrapped whomever thus addressed superbly. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting, striking poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing!
October 29th, 2024 07:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, didn\'t they feign \"the pen is mightier than the sword\" only because we could, as my late mother warned me too many years ago, slice, dice and cut down to minutest pieces with... words. And poets and poetesses don\'t go silent when they kick the bucket either. That\'s the beauty of prophets, shall we say? This pretty number is more than hardhitting. Oh! But you\'ve tidily wrapped whomever thus addressed superbly. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting, striking poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing!
October 29th, 2024 07:52
The Last Word
Doggerel Dave said:
Go for it , Man. You have the skills and depth to demolish him in a word duel anytime. Wollopers and wankers come and go, but keep your instrument finely tuned and it\'s them that looses the plot.
October 29th, 2024 05:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Go for it , Man. You have the skills and depth to demolish him in a word duel anytime. Wollopers and wankers come and go, but keep your instrument finely tuned and it\'s them that looses the plot.
October 29th, 2024 05:00
The Last Word
sorenbarrett said:
I love how I was lulled into the rhyme to be hit in the face with the last line and the emphasis it gained by non rhyme. Some fun with wording as well in the play on words. Very nice Tom two thumbs up
October 29th, 2024 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
I love how I was lulled into the rhyme to be hit in the face with the last line and the emphasis it gained by non rhyme. Some fun with wording as well in the play on words. Very nice Tom two thumbs up
October 29th, 2024 04:58
The Last Word
Mutley Ravishes said:
Who’s the “you,” Tom?! Or would that better be left unsaid?
October 29th, 2024 04:48
Mutley Ravishes said:
Who’s the “you,” Tom?! Or would that better be left unsaid?
October 29th, 2024 04:48
This Time Last Year
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and touching. I love the vulnerability.
October 26th, 2024 23:41
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and touching. I love the vulnerability.
October 26th, 2024 23:41
This Time Last Year
Accidental Poet said:
They are never really gone when they reside in one\'s own heart. 🌹
October 26th, 2024 03:29
Accidental Poet said:
They are never really gone when they reside in one\'s own heart. 🌹
October 26th, 2024 03:29
This Time Last Year
Cheeky Missy said:
Heartbreaking with touching and haunting poignancy, excellent imagery and a palpable sense of loss. I\'m so very sorry you lost whomever. Time passes, but sometimes the pain never loses its bite. I can still cry too easily over my mother and its been very nearly 9 years now, or my father and its been almost 4 years now. Thank you so very much for sharing.
October 25th, 2024 17:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Heartbreaking with touching and haunting poignancy, excellent imagery and a palpable sense of loss. I\'m so very sorry you lost whomever. Time passes, but sometimes the pain never loses its bite. I can still cry too easily over my mother and its been very nearly 9 years now, or my father and its been almost 4 years now. Thank you so very much for sharing.
October 25th, 2024 17:06
This Time Last Year
Doggerel Dave said:
A clear statement of the depth of your loss, Tom. Not at all maudlin, It just tells it as it is.
October 25th, 2024 14:20
Doggerel Dave said:
A clear statement of the depth of your loss, Tom. Not at all maudlin, It just tells it as it is.
October 25th, 2024 14:20
This Time Last Year
Neville said:
I don\'t have to ask because you have made it so very clear .. I am sorry for your loss Tom .. I wish I could say the first year is the toughest .. but I would be kidding the both of us .. Neville 💜
October 25th, 2024 13:13
Neville said:
I don\'t have to ask because you have made it so very clear .. I am sorry for your loss Tom .. I wish I could say the first year is the toughest .. but I would be kidding the both of us .. Neville 💜
October 25th, 2024 13:13
This Time Last Year
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and somewhat haunting and so well done.
October 25th, 2024 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and somewhat haunting and so well done.
October 25th, 2024 10:22
Spread Too Thin
sorenbarrett said:
The set up was perfect for the fin.... Distractions occur when too many things are put on the plate. Nicely written
October 25th, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
The set up was perfect for the fin.... Distractions occur when too many things are put on the plate. Nicely written
October 25th, 2024 05:05
Sixty Poems
sorenbarrett said:
Good questions posed in this write. Why are certain numbers more auspicious? And given a base 10 system why 21, 18, 12, 7, a fun read and keep on writing
October 24th, 2024 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
Good questions posed in this write. Why are certain numbers more auspicious? And given a base 10 system why 21, 18, 12, 7, a fun read and keep on writing
October 24th, 2024 05:37
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
NafisaSB said:
i can visualize and empathize - believe me - the trick is to go early or late - not at the rush hour
October 23rd, 2024 23:55
NafisaSB said:
i can visualize and empathize - believe me - the trick is to go early or late - not at the rush hour
October 23rd, 2024 23:55
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
Neville said:
I admire your observations Tom and of course, this one is filled with classics ..
October 23rd, 2024 11:03
Neville said:
I admire your observations Tom and of course, this one is filled with classics ..
October 23rd, 2024 11:03
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
Kerry said:
Oh! I can picture myself with the family last December in Tenerife! Thanks for the imagery - hilariously accurate.
October 23rd, 2024 06:39
Kerry said:
Oh! I can picture myself with the family last December in Tenerife! Thanks for the imagery - hilariously accurate.
October 23rd, 2024 06:39
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
Doggerel Dave said:
I have my reservations about organised mass tourism which I may have versified or at least commented on way back when.... but none crystalizes my feelings better than several or more of the breakfast experiences you vividly describe, Tom.
October 23rd, 2024 01:26
Doggerel Dave said:
I have my reservations about organised mass tourism which I may have versified or at least commented on way back when.... but none crystalizes my feelings better than several or more of the breakfast experiences you vividly describe, Tom.
October 23rd, 2024 01:26
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
Thomas W Case said:
You capture the scene very well. Excellent work, my friend.
October 22nd, 2024 14:56
Thomas W Case said:
You capture the scene very well. Excellent work, my friend.
October 22nd, 2024 14:56
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s what so fun about aka life: people in their foolish, selfish way of being, so unconsciously self-absorbed. This is hilarious! I couldn\'t help laughing aloud. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a none too subtle humorous poignancy jostling with that haunting boredom which never fails to reign supreme.i love it! Thank you so much for sharing.
October 22nd, 2024 07:41
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s what so fun about aka life: people in their foolish, selfish way of being, so unconsciously self-absorbed. This is hilarious! I couldn\'t help laughing aloud. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a none too subtle humorous poignancy jostling with that haunting boredom which never fails to reign supreme.i love it! Thank you so much for sharing.
October 22nd, 2024 07:41
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
sorenbarrett said:
This poem teems with the clatter of a busy morning breakfast hotel style. The bustle of impatient diners is monitored by the narrator awaiting his meal. I feel that I have been there so well captured in words.
October 22nd, 2024 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem teems with the clatter of a busy morning breakfast hotel style. The bustle of impatient diners is monitored by the narrator awaiting his meal. I feel that I have been there so well captured in words.
October 22nd, 2024 07:33
The Reading
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about fear of public speaking, stage fright, or what ever you call it. Most people have it but the more you know your subject the less there is. Soon the fear turns to excitement and serves as the fuel for performance. Nicely written it tells the story.
October 21st, 2024 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about fear of public speaking, stage fright, or what ever you call it. Most people have it but the more you know your subject the less there is. Soon the fear turns to excitement and serves as the fuel for performance. Nicely written it tells the story.
October 21st, 2024 04:41
The Reading
Neville said:
I know exactly wot U mean Tom .. I\'ve got a big un coming up soon .. N
October 21st, 2024 03:43
Neville said:
I know exactly wot U mean Tom .. I\'ve got a big un coming up soon .. N
October 21st, 2024 03:43
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