Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan
The Mingle Classes
Doggerel Dave said:
Fun not had by you along the way;
Up theirs is all I’d have to say.
Couldn’t you find any excuse?
Kindred spirits not mannered abuse:
Empty invite into the bin.
Make a point of committing some sin…..
My feeble acrostical attempt, Tom.
November 13th, 2024 18:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Fun not had by you along the way;
Up theirs is all I’d have to say.
Couldn’t you find any excuse?
Kindred spirits not mannered abuse:
Empty invite into the bin.
Make a point of committing some sin…..
My feeble acrostical attempt, Tom.
November 13th, 2024 18:21
The Mingle Classes
Neville said:
This is a splendid account of the uncomfortableness that many are obliged to suffer from time to time but is so very unnecessary .. enjoyed grossly Tom ..
November 13th, 2024 12:15
Neville said:
This is a splendid account of the uncomfortableness that many are obliged to suffer from time to time but is so very unnecessary .. enjoyed grossly Tom ..
November 13th, 2024 12:15
The Mingle Classes
orchidee said:
Will you have cucumber sandwiches too?! And will you say things like: \'Tally ho\'; \'How spiffing\'; \'Can\'t say I care much for that chap - the cad, the bounder\'?! etc. lol.
November 13th, 2024 11:14
orchidee said:
Will you have cucumber sandwiches too?! And will you say things like: \'Tally ho\'; \'How spiffing\'; \'Can\'t say I care much for that chap - the cad, the bounder\'?! etc. lol.
November 13th, 2024 11:14
Friday Night Hockey
Goldfinch60 said:
We all need something to release any problems we have, mine is croquet. Good words Tom.
Andy
November 13th, 2024 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
We all need something to release any problems we have, mine is croquet. Good words Tom.
Andy
November 13th, 2024 02:22
Friday Night Hockey
Doggerel Dave said:
As team games go, ice hockey certainly seems one of the wildest (from what I\'ve seen on TV).
Your poetry has all the texture of a regular life well lived, Tom - enjoyed by me very much.
November 12th, 2024 17:42
Doggerel Dave said:
As team games go, ice hockey certainly seems one of the wildest (from what I\'ve seen on TV).
Your poetry has all the texture of a regular life well lived, Tom - enjoyed by me very much.
November 12th, 2024 17:42
Friday Night Hockey
Neville said:
It aint hard to beat an egg, but it\'s hard to beat the thrill & thrust of a decent ice hocky match .. although shove ha\'penny comes bloomin close these days .. Neville
November 12th, 2024 12:27
Neville said:
It aint hard to beat an egg, but it\'s hard to beat the thrill & thrust of a decent ice hocky match .. although shove ha\'penny comes bloomin close these days .. Neville
November 12th, 2024 12:27
Friday Night Hockey
Cassie58 said:
You created the ambience here so well Tom. Sounds like a good way to wind down after a working week. Much enjoyed. All the best.
November 12th, 2024 11:43
Cassie58 said:
You created the ambience here so well Tom. Sounds like a good way to wind down after a working week. Much enjoyed. All the best.
November 12th, 2024 11:43
Friday Night Hockey
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid description of a hockey game full of bumps thumps, and violence, which is the real reason people go. Nicely written.
November 12th, 2024 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid description of a hockey game full of bumps thumps, and violence, which is the real reason people go. Nicely written.
November 12th, 2024 10:52
Words On Paper
Dan Williams said:
Excellent. Words, numbers, we are becoming less human all the time. Nice work.
November 9th, 2024 01:07
Dan Williams said:
Excellent. Words, numbers, we are becoming less human all the time. Nice work.
November 9th, 2024 01:07
Words On Paper
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes just words on paper Tom but they can be so meaningful to us in our lives.
Andy
November 8th, 2024 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes just words on paper Tom but they can be so meaningful to us in our lives.
Andy
November 8th, 2024 02:47
To Me Poetry
rebellion_in_sanity said:
In one word \'fantastic\'... don\'t need anything else to describe your poem.
November 5th, 2024 04:33
rebellion_in_sanity said:
In one word \'fantastic\'... don\'t need anything else to describe your poem.
November 5th, 2024 04:33
To Me Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tom, poetry is what comes from within you form your own pleasure. If others enjoy it that is OK by me.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tom, poetry is what comes from within you form your own pleasure. If others enjoy it that is OK by me.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:53
To Me Poetry
NafisaSB said:
i hear you loud and clear, and second your opinion
November 5th, 2024 00:42
NafisaSB said:
i hear you loud and clear, and second your opinion
November 5th, 2024 00:42
To Me Poetry
orchidee said:
Erm, not a \'crappy\' write as in Dave\'s comment - and not in any sense! lol.
November 4th, 2024 10:08
orchidee said:
Erm, not a \'crappy\' write as in Dave\'s comment - and not in any sense! lol.
November 4th, 2024 10:08
To Me Poetry
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
To find beauty in the details where others may miss. Beautifully written!
November 4th, 2024 09:54
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
To find beauty in the details where others may miss. Beautifully written!
November 4th, 2024 09:54
To Me Poetry
Doggerel Dave said:
To me the way it happens sometimes is like having a good crap - effortlessly it slides out with just a modicum of modification and control along the way.
Apologies, Tom - I frantically hunted for a better analogy, but none came my way. In no sense should this be construed....😊
November 4th, 2024 08:13
Doggerel Dave said:
To me the way it happens sometimes is like having a good crap - effortlessly it slides out with just a modicum of modification and control along the way.
Apologies, Tom - I frantically hunted for a better analogy, but none came my way. In no sense should this be construed....😊
November 4th, 2024 08:13
To Me Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed I agree it is another way of seeing the world around us that brings it closer to the heart. Lovely write
November 4th, 2024 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed I agree it is another way of seeing the world around us that brings it closer to the heart. Lovely write
November 4th, 2024 04:40
The Write Crowd
sorenbarrett said:
I too do my writing alone and it is a therapy that I wouldn\'t have with a group. I am not concerned with rules details and critiques it what the write does to put it into words. I truely do appreciate others reading it and learn from their criticisms and suggestions but not during the process itself. A very personal write Tom loved and identified with it.
October 31st, 2024 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
I too do my writing alone and it is a therapy that I wouldn\'t have with a group. I am not concerned with rules details and critiques it what the write does to put it into words. I truely do appreciate others reading it and learn from their criticisms and suggestions but not during the process itself. A very personal write Tom loved and identified with it.
October 31st, 2024 07:28
The Last Word
MR.apocalypse said:
love this poem just a big fuck you to the ones who judge with no self awareness
October 30th, 2024 21:21
MR.apocalypse said:
love this poem just a big fuck you to the ones who judge with no self awareness
October 30th, 2024 21:21
The Last Word
Neville said:
If it woz me, then I apologise .. if it woz someone else, then I know a good hit man, so just say the word .. or write it. whatever .. what ever .. Neville
October 30th, 2024 11:19
Neville said:
If it woz me, then I apologise .. if it woz someone else, then I know a good hit man, so just say the word .. or write it. whatever .. what ever .. Neville
October 30th, 2024 11:19
The Last Word
Goldfinch60 said:
So many do not agree with us poets Tom but if that happens to me I find that apathy is a great weapon.
Andy
October 30th, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
So many do not agree with us poets Tom but if that happens to me I find that apathy is a great weapon.
Andy
October 30th, 2024 02:23
The Last Word
orchidee said:
And just as bad - plagiarisers? Who pinch someone else\'s words and pass them off as one\'s own. It incurs poet\'s wrath.
October 29th, 2024 11:45
orchidee said:
And just as bad - plagiarisers? Who pinch someone else\'s words and pass them off as one\'s own. It incurs poet\'s wrath.
October 29th, 2024 11:45
The Last Word
Accidental Poet said:
That\'s telling them Tom. And I know what you mean by it almost wrote itself. 😉👍
October 29th, 2024 10:27
Accidental Poet said:
That\'s telling them Tom. And I know what you mean by it almost wrote itself. 😉👍
October 29th, 2024 10:27
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