Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan



Of Irish Descent
orchidee said:

Good write TC.

March 12th, 2024 04:54

Of Irish Descent
Cassie58 said:

It’s a while since I was in Dublin, but I heartily approve of anyone who wears the green on St Patrick’s day. Be proud of your heritage I say. I fly the flag for St George myself. Nothing like Guiness in an Irish pub. It doesn’t travel well. Cheers Tom. Have a good day.

March 12th, 2024 03:38

Out of Earshot
Doggerel Dave said:

A great moral tale, Tom (and I nearly missed it!) Never have I understood those who remove themselves from immediate reality when out there either via your phones and/or the additional mobile phone...
Some of the streets I\'ve walked down during a long and chequered life needed 360 degree awareness in the here and now.....

March 8th, 2024 22:06

Out of Earshot
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous. Nature has quite the soundtrack.

March 8th, 2024 14:01

Out of Earshot
Goldfinch60 said:

So glad you are hearing the world around you now Tom, it is surprising how much joy you can get from listening to life around you.
Keep listening.

Andy

March 8th, 2024 02:46

Out of Earshot
Bella Shepard said:

I love this telling of your \"aha\" moment, and how you gained a new perspective on the sounds of life. On my early morning walks I\'m privileged to hear the first bird of the morning, and slowly the whole chorus chimes in, it\'s magical, and I understand your joy. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece, I enjoyed it so very much.

March 7th, 2024 15:00

Out of Earshot
Neville said:


although there are many who think it might be cool, nice or maybe a laugh .. you just can\'t beat reality .. 10/10 in my book Tom ........................ N

March 7th, 2024 13:47

Out of Earshot
Cassie58 said:

A new world for you, outside your earphones. So many wonderful sounds you could have missed out on. I like to hear birdsong, laughter, children playing, church bells ringing, trains rattling by and buses halting to pick up passengers. So many sounds to enjoy. The earphones would make me feel isolated. Great write Tom. Lots of imagery. Have a good Thursday.

March 7th, 2024 12:19

Out of Earshot
Cloie said:

Your walk without earphones turned into quite the adventure! It\'s amazing how a small change can lead to a whole new perspective. I love how you captured the transition from frustration to appreciation as you noticed the sounds and sights around you. It\'s a beautiful reminder to embrace the present moment. Great work!

March 7th, 2024 09:55

Out of Earshot
JulesBurnsit said:

Beautiful and so familiar. Putting my shoes on now.

March 7th, 2024 09:26

Out of Earshot
Accidental Poet said:

Awesome write Tom. The music of life can sometimes be so beautiful. Like the deaf man who can suddenly hear. So much we all take for granted Tom. 🤔

March 7th, 2024 09:20

The Man in the White Coat
Cloie said:

This is hilarious! The ending made me chuckle. Great job!

March 7th, 2024 09:16

Out of Earshot
orchidee said:

That\'s sounds noisy - chattering, bells, laughing, whistling, etc! lol.

March 7th, 2024 09:00

The Man in the White Coat
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Tom, some people are like that.

Andy

March 7th, 2024 02:07

The Man in the White Coat
JulesBurnsit said:

Ah haha!! Perhaps the anorak was the cause of the rash that caused the visit to the doctor that caused the visit to the chemist that caused the... rain? Hmm? Your post made my day! Thanks!

March 6th, 2024 17:04

The Man in the White Coat
orchidee said:

Doh! Which is it to be - chemist or doctor first?
They say chemist can help with lesser ailments, and to try them first sometimes.
I shall do a one-liner poem of the same title, with the following words......came to take me away! lol.
So... if we want to know the weather, visit the chemist!

March 6th, 2024 11:07

The Man in the White Coat
Neville said:


white coats used to be our compulsory uniform but are no longer required or necessary ..

I think it was all the jokes & jibes about the men in white coats that sealed the fate of em .. I don\'t even wear a suit to work these days ..

Anyway, this was great, a real fun filled poem that got me going no end ..

p.s.

Tom no p.s .. Neville 😎👍

March 6th, 2024 10:55

The Man in the White Coat
Accidental Poet said:

Doctors aren\'t supposed to put you off like that, your pharmacist is correct that your doctor should be a professional and prescribe medication that your pharmacist can help you with. If everyone does their job, your rash will be a rash of the past. 😉👍

March 6th, 2024 09:39

The Man in the White Coat
Teddy.15 said:

lol 🤣 You win some and lose some. Just don\'t wear a brown anorak, those are for flashers. Hey I hope the rash cleared up! You do make me chuckle. 🌹

March 6th, 2024 09:22

The Man in the White Coat
Bella Shepard said:

This is delightful, I smiled all the way through, and was rewarded at the end with the chuckle of the day. Thank you dear friend, the sun is shining now all over!

March 6th, 2024 09:06

The Man in the White Coat
Doggerel Dave said:

I too have those inconclusive debates from time to time, Tom. The question is just when to cut my losses and make a strategic retreat....

March 6th, 2024 06:40

Making A Night of It
Thomas W Case said:

I love Indian food, but waiting hours for it is out of the question. Superb write. I feel I was there.

March 5th, 2024 13:31

Making A Night of It
Neville said:


sounds like your wife has got her head screwed on write .. I think I would have said the same thing ..

March 5th, 2024 13:17

Making A Night of It
Teddy.15 said:

Angry customers storm

to the bar, waving their

hands in frustration

saying they\'ve been sitting

at their table for an hour

and nobody had been

near to take their drinks order

Are you sure you weren\'t on Italy? lol 😆

March 5th, 2024 08:49

One of the Lads
Reynaldo Casison said:

Superb

March 5th, 2024 04:14

Making A Night of It
Goldfinch60 said:

This can happen sometimes Tom but luckily not very often, Good words.

Andy

March 5th, 2024 02:25

Making A Night of It
Cassie58 said:

My guess is their business won’t last much longer. Entertainment of a different kind. I think leaving was the best thing you could have done Tom. You penned a good read out of chaos.

March 5th, 2024 01:28

Making A Night of It
Doggerel Dave said:

Luckily (because it\'s the only one locally) my Indian is great - does wonderful vego dishes which suits me just fine.
However, your piece here made me laugh with recognition as I did experience a very similar joint while on holiday a couple of years back at the Taj Mahal* in a town I shan\'t name to protect the guilty.

*Not its real name

Good write, Tom - but I don\'t want to hear of it again.....

March 4th, 2024 21:10

Making A Night of It
Summersounds68 said:

Tom, reminds me of some restaurants in the Treasure Valley of Idaho where I live.
~ Sonia

March 4th, 2024 11:52

Making A Night of It
orchidee said:

Oh no, how did they last 10 years?!

March 4th, 2024 11:40



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