Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan
Friday Night Hockey
Doggerel Dave said:
As team games go, ice hockey certainly seems one of the wildest (from what I\'ve seen on TV).
Your poetry has all the texture of a regular life well lived, Tom - enjoyed by me very much.
November 12th, 2024 17:42
Doggerel Dave said:
As team games go, ice hockey certainly seems one of the wildest (from what I\'ve seen on TV).
Your poetry has all the texture of a regular life well lived, Tom - enjoyed by me very much.
November 12th, 2024 17:42
Friday Night Hockey
Neville said:
It aint hard to beat an egg, but it\'s hard to beat the thrill & thrust of a decent ice hocky match .. although shove ha\'penny comes bloomin close these days .. Neville
November 12th, 2024 12:27
Neville said:
It aint hard to beat an egg, but it\'s hard to beat the thrill & thrust of a decent ice hocky match .. although shove ha\'penny comes bloomin close these days .. Neville
November 12th, 2024 12:27
Friday Night Hockey
Cassie58 said:
You created the ambience here so well Tom. Sounds like a good way to wind down after a working week. Much enjoyed. All the best.
November 12th, 2024 11:43
Cassie58 said:
You created the ambience here so well Tom. Sounds like a good way to wind down after a working week. Much enjoyed. All the best.
November 12th, 2024 11:43
Friday Night Hockey
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid description of a hockey game full of bumps thumps, and violence, which is the real reason people go. Nicely written.
November 12th, 2024 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid description of a hockey game full of bumps thumps, and violence, which is the real reason people go. Nicely written.
November 12th, 2024 10:52
Words On Paper
Dan Williams said:
Excellent. Words, numbers, we are becoming less human all the time. Nice work.
November 9th, 2024 01:07
Dan Williams said:
Excellent. Words, numbers, we are becoming less human all the time. Nice work.
November 9th, 2024 01:07
Words On Paper
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes just words on paper Tom but they can be so meaningful to us in our lives.
Andy
November 8th, 2024 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes just words on paper Tom but they can be so meaningful to us in our lives.
Andy
November 8th, 2024 02:47
To Me Poetry
rebellion_in_sanity said:
In one word \'fantastic\'... don\'t need anything else to describe your poem.
November 5th, 2024 04:33
rebellion_in_sanity said:
In one word \'fantastic\'... don\'t need anything else to describe your poem.
November 5th, 2024 04:33
To Me Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tom, poetry is what comes from within you form your own pleasure. If others enjoy it that is OK by me.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tom, poetry is what comes from within you form your own pleasure. If others enjoy it that is OK by me.
Andy
November 5th, 2024 02:53
To Me Poetry
NafisaSB said:
i hear you loud and clear, and second your opinion
November 5th, 2024 00:42
NafisaSB said:
i hear you loud and clear, and second your opinion
November 5th, 2024 00:42
To Me Poetry
orchidee said:
Erm, not a \'crappy\' write as in Dave\'s comment - and not in any sense! lol.
November 4th, 2024 10:08
orchidee said:
Erm, not a \'crappy\' write as in Dave\'s comment - and not in any sense! lol.
November 4th, 2024 10:08
To Me Poetry
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
To find beauty in the details where others may miss. Beautifully written!
November 4th, 2024 09:54
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
To find beauty in the details where others may miss. Beautifully written!
November 4th, 2024 09:54
To Me Poetry
Doggerel Dave said:
To me the way it happens sometimes is like having a good crap - effortlessly it slides out with just a modicum of modification and control along the way.
Apologies, Tom - I frantically hunted for a better analogy, but none came my way. In no sense should this be construed....😊
November 4th, 2024 08:13
Doggerel Dave said:
To me the way it happens sometimes is like having a good crap - effortlessly it slides out with just a modicum of modification and control along the way.
Apologies, Tom - I frantically hunted for a better analogy, but none came my way. In no sense should this be construed....😊
November 4th, 2024 08:13
To Me Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed I agree it is another way of seeing the world around us that brings it closer to the heart. Lovely write
November 4th, 2024 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed I agree it is another way of seeing the world around us that brings it closer to the heart. Lovely write
November 4th, 2024 04:40
The Write Crowd
sorenbarrett said:
I too do my writing alone and it is a therapy that I wouldn\'t have with a group. I am not concerned with rules details and critiques it what the write does to put it into words. I truely do appreciate others reading it and learn from their criticisms and suggestions but not during the process itself. A very personal write Tom loved and identified with it.
October 31st, 2024 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
I too do my writing alone and it is a therapy that I wouldn\'t have with a group. I am not concerned with rules details and critiques it what the write does to put it into words. I truely do appreciate others reading it and learn from their criticisms and suggestions but not during the process itself. A very personal write Tom loved and identified with it.
October 31st, 2024 07:28
The Last Word
MR.apocalypse said:
love this poem just a big fuck you to the ones who judge with no self awareness
October 30th, 2024 21:21
MR.apocalypse said:
love this poem just a big fuck you to the ones who judge with no self awareness
October 30th, 2024 21:21
The Last Word
Neville said:
If it woz me, then I apologise .. if it woz someone else, then I know a good hit man, so just say the word .. or write it. whatever .. what ever .. Neville
October 30th, 2024 11:19
Neville said:
If it woz me, then I apologise .. if it woz someone else, then I know a good hit man, so just say the word .. or write it. whatever .. what ever .. Neville
October 30th, 2024 11:19
The Last Word
Goldfinch60 said:
So many do not agree with us poets Tom but if that happens to me I find that apathy is a great weapon.
Andy
October 30th, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
So many do not agree with us poets Tom but if that happens to me I find that apathy is a great weapon.
Andy
October 30th, 2024 02:23
The Last Word
orchidee said:
And just as bad - plagiarisers? Who pinch someone else\'s words and pass them off as one\'s own. It incurs poet\'s wrath.
October 29th, 2024 11:45
orchidee said:
And just as bad - plagiarisers? Who pinch someone else\'s words and pass them off as one\'s own. It incurs poet\'s wrath.
October 29th, 2024 11:45
If I Could I Would
mvvenkataraman said:
Many kind ideas we have,
But, due to the presence of fate,
We are unable to execute it,
The poet has penned a marvel.
A great poem that is clear,
No tough or confusing words,
As English is terribly advancing !
October 29th, 2024 07:55
mvvenkataraman said:
Many kind ideas we have,
But, due to the presence of fate,
We are unable to execute it,
The poet has penned a marvel.
A great poem that is clear,
No tough or confusing words,
As English is terribly advancing !
October 29th, 2024 07:55
The Last Word
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, didn\'t they feign \"the pen is mightier than the sword\" only because we could, as my late mother warned me too many years ago, slice, dice and cut down to minutest pieces with... words. And poets and poetesses don\'t go silent when they kick the bucket either. That\'s the beauty of prophets, shall we say? This pretty number is more than hardhitting. Oh! But you\'ve tidily wrapped whomever thus addressed superbly. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting, striking poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing!
October 29th, 2024 07:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Yes, didn\'t they feign \"the pen is mightier than the sword\" only because we could, as my late mother warned me too many years ago, slice, dice and cut down to minutest pieces with... words. And poets and poetesses don\'t go silent when they kick the bucket either. That\'s the beauty of prophets, shall we say? This pretty number is more than hardhitting. Oh! But you\'ve tidily wrapped whomever thus addressed superbly. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting, striking poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing!
October 29th, 2024 07:52
The Last Word
Doggerel Dave said:
Go for it , Man. You have the skills and depth to demolish him in a word duel anytime. Wollopers and wankers come and go, but keep your instrument finely tuned and it\'s them that looses the plot.
October 29th, 2024 05:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Go for it , Man. You have the skills and depth to demolish him in a word duel anytime. Wollopers and wankers come and go, but keep your instrument finely tuned and it\'s them that looses the plot.
October 29th, 2024 05:00
The Last Word
sorenbarrett said:
I love how I was lulled into the rhyme to be hit in the face with the last line and the emphasis it gained by non rhyme. Some fun with wording as well in the play on words. Very nice Tom two thumbs up
October 29th, 2024 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
I love how I was lulled into the rhyme to be hit in the face with the last line and the emphasis it gained by non rhyme. Some fun with wording as well in the play on words. Very nice Tom two thumbs up
October 29th, 2024 04:58
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