Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
Kerry said:
Oh! I can picture myself with the family last December in Tenerife! Thanks for the imagery - hilariously accurate.
October 23rd, 2024 06:39
Kerry said:
Oh! I can picture myself with the family last December in Tenerife! Thanks for the imagery - hilariously accurate.
October 23rd, 2024 06:39
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
Doggerel Dave said:
I have my reservations about organised mass tourism which I may have versified or at least commented on way back when.... but none crystalizes my feelings better than several or more of the breakfast experiences you vividly describe, Tom.
October 23rd, 2024 01:26
Doggerel Dave said:
I have my reservations about organised mass tourism which I may have versified or at least commented on way back when.... but none crystalizes my feelings better than several or more of the breakfast experiences you vividly describe, Tom.
October 23rd, 2024 01:26
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
Thomas W Case said:
You capture the scene very well. Excellent work, my friend.
October 22nd, 2024 14:56
Thomas W Case said:
You capture the scene very well. Excellent work, my friend.
October 22nd, 2024 14:56
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s what so fun about aka life: people in their foolish, selfish way of being, so unconsciously self-absorbed. This is hilarious! I couldn\'t help laughing aloud. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a none too subtle humorous poignancy jostling with that haunting boredom which never fails to reign supreme.i love it! Thank you so much for sharing.
October 22nd, 2024 07:41
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s what so fun about aka life: people in their foolish, selfish way of being, so unconsciously self-absorbed. This is hilarious! I couldn\'t help laughing aloud. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a none too subtle humorous poignancy jostling with that haunting boredom which never fails to reign supreme.i love it! Thank you so much for sharing.
October 22nd, 2024 07:41
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
sorenbarrett said:
This poem teems with the clatter of a busy morning breakfast hotel style. The bustle of impatient diners is monitored by the narrator awaiting his meal. I feel that I have been there so well captured in words.
October 22nd, 2024 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem teems with the clatter of a busy morning breakfast hotel style. The bustle of impatient diners is monitored by the narrator awaiting his meal. I feel that I have been there so well captured in words.
October 22nd, 2024 07:33
The Reading
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about fear of public speaking, stage fright, or what ever you call it. Most people have it but the more you know your subject the less there is. Soon the fear turns to excitement and serves as the fuel for performance. Nicely written it tells the story.
October 21st, 2024 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about fear of public speaking, stage fright, or what ever you call it. Most people have it but the more you know your subject the less there is. Soon the fear turns to excitement and serves as the fuel for performance. Nicely written it tells the story.
October 21st, 2024 04:41
The Reading
Neville said:
I know exactly wot U mean Tom .. I\'ve got a big un coming up soon .. N
October 21st, 2024 03:43
Neville said:
I know exactly wot U mean Tom .. I\'ve got a big un coming up soon .. N
October 21st, 2024 03:43
The Reading
jarcher54 said:
Poems about poetry are always interesting, but seldom profound. This one is just plain inspired and fun! But underneath the light narrative is a deep truth. Next!
October 6th, 2024 10:01
jarcher54 said:
Poems about poetry are always interesting, but seldom profound. This one is just plain inspired and fun! But underneath the light narrative is a deep truth. Next!
October 6th, 2024 10:01
The Reading
Thomas W Case said:
Superb. I\'ve done it many times and I was always nervous. You capture the feeling and scene well.
October 4th, 2024 16:11
Thomas W Case said:
Superb. I\'ve done it many times and I was always nervous. You capture the feeling and scene well.
October 4th, 2024 16:11
The Reading
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep on reading Tom, those nerves show that you care.
Andy
October 4th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep on reading Tom, those nerves show that you care.
Andy
October 4th, 2024 01:24
The Reading
Dan Williams said:
The acid test for my poems is to have someone read them out load. I choke in front of an audience.
October 4th, 2024 00:25
Dan Williams said:
The acid test for my poems is to have someone read them out load. I choke in front of an audience.
October 4th, 2024 00:25
The Reading
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, you\'re far better than I. In addition to the bits posted on YouTube, I\'ve participated in such events enough times to know I don\'t think it\'s worth the adventure, not for me. Excellently poignant with delightful winsomeness, rendered to effect so beautifully with tasteful details. Thank you so very much for sharing.
October 3rd, 2024 09:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, you\'re far better than I. In addition to the bits posted on YouTube, I\'ve participated in such events enough times to know I don\'t think it\'s worth the adventure, not for me. Excellently poignant with delightful winsomeness, rendered to effect so beautifully with tasteful details. Thank you so very much for sharing.
October 3rd, 2024 09:45
One With Everything
Goldfinch60 said:
Those strange connections are within us all Tom, if somebody had told me in 2007 that I would be writing poetry I would have laughed at them, I now have nearly 4,000 that I have written.
Andy
October 1st, 2024 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Those strange connections are within us all Tom, if somebody had told me in 2007 that I would be writing poetry I would have laughed at them, I now have nearly 4,000 that I have written.
Andy
October 1st, 2024 01:46
One With Everything
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! This is a beauty, taking the reader on a journey through so many avenues threaded together by both the original thought and also their related parts. Very lovely and excellently rendered with a very subtle poignancy and a fascination which never loses its hold, concluding so perfectly. I love it! Thank you so very much for sharing!
September 30th, 2024 16:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! This is a beauty, taking the reader on a journey through so many avenues threaded together by both the original thought and also their related parts. Very lovely and excellently rendered with a very subtle poignancy and a fascination which never loses its hold, concluding so perfectly. I love it! Thank you so very much for sharing!
September 30th, 2024 16:40
One With Everything
Neville said:
if you aint a genius already, you are heading that way ..
September 30th, 2024 08:09
Neville said:
if you aint a genius already, you are heading that way ..
September 30th, 2024 08:09
One With Everything
Doggerel Dave said:
Or....(sorry about this...) maybe not link them, but let each develop in their own special way, free of the others lest they hold one another back.......
Accumulate.. discharge.. renew.. change.
September 30th, 2024 07:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Or....(sorry about this...) maybe not link them, but let each develop in their own special way, free of the others lest they hold one another back.......
Accumulate.. discharge.. renew.. change.
September 30th, 2024 07:04
One With Everything
sorenbarrett said:
In this world all things are connected.
Great thoughts
September 30th, 2024 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
In this world all things are connected.
Great thoughts
September 30th, 2024 05:55
This Day Last Year
Thomas W Case said:
Right on, brother. I\'m glad you are back at it.
September 29th, 2024 21:32
Thomas W Case said:
Right on, brother. I\'m glad you are back at it.
September 29th, 2024 21:32
This Day Last Year
FrasMac said:
That\'s a book that I also own, along with the follow-up, \"Being Alive\"
September 28th, 2024 01:36
FrasMac said:
That\'s a book that I also own, along with the follow-up, \"Being Alive\"
September 28th, 2024 01:36
This Day Last Year
Goldfinch60 said:
Poetry can fill you with the wonder of life Tom, read all you can.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Poetry can fill you with the wonder of life Tom, read all you can.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:13
This Day Last Year
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like you\'ve been around here for a lot longer, Tom: a mainstay of commonsense and excellent poetry. I hope this year is just the beginning as you continue to sort the world in your straightforward way.
September 27th, 2024 17:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like you\'ve been around here for a lot longer, Tom: a mainstay of commonsense and excellent poetry. I hope this year is just the beginning as you continue to sort the world in your straightforward way.
September 27th, 2024 17:15
This Day Last Year
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! How very beautiful! Charmingly rendered and loaded with details to effect, a haunting poignancy in tow, I love, love, LOVE this! You remind me of how I ended up sonneteering: an 1881 sonnet anthology introduced me to what literature studies in school had only touched on and I both returned to writing poetry and also found my niche. Thank you so very much for sharing!
September 27th, 2024 12:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh! How very beautiful! Charmingly rendered and loaded with details to effect, a haunting poignancy in tow, I love, love, LOVE this! You remind me of how I ended up sonneteering: an 1881 sonnet anthology introduced me to what literature studies in school had only touched on and I both returned to writing poetry and also found my niche. Thank you so very much for sharing!
September 27th, 2024 12:18
This Day Last Year
Cassie58 said:
Poetry has always been wonderful therapy for me Tom, and book shops a source of inspiration. Put the two together and you have a hit. An anniversary to remember. Have a happy Friday.
September 27th, 2024 11:14
Cassie58 said:
Poetry has always been wonderful therapy for me Tom, and book shops a source of inspiration. Put the two together and you have a hit. An anniversary to remember. Have a happy Friday.
September 27th, 2024 11:14
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