Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan



I\'m that kind of tired
Tom Dylan said:

Thanks a lot, Alan. I was shattered yesterday, up all night coughing with the bug that\'s going round. I tried to get it down in a poem. Cheers, Tom.

February 20th, 2024 11:05

I\'m that kind of tired
Alan R said:

Damn! That is classic, in soo many ways..good write!

February 20th, 2024 10:05

Monday, I can\'t do this
Goldfinch60 said:

Being retired now Tom all my days are Saturdays, not a Monday in sight. LOL

Andy

February 20th, 2024 01:56

Monday, I can\'t do this
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. It looks like someone has a case of the Mondays. lol.

February 19th, 2024 16:41

Monday, I can\'t do this
Lillian said:

I don\'t think I\'ve ever related to a poem so much in my life. Good work, I love it!

February 19th, 2024 14:00

Monday, I can\'t do this
Lillian said:

I don\'t think I\'ve ever related to a poem so much in my life. Good work, I love it!

February 19th, 2024 14:00

Monday, I can\'t do this
Bella Shepard said:

Did a little googling, and it turns out that Monday is from the Old English word Mōna, in Latin luna. Perhaps we should change its name to Lunaday, it does make us crazy. Such a fun read, and oh so true. Good for you my friend, you\'re on your toes today!

February 19th, 2024 10:44

Monday, I can\'t do this
Teddy.15 said:

Now why do you think the boom town rats wrote the song? LoL keep your chin up my friend, it\'s your lucky day think it and it will simply be. 🌹

February 19th, 2024 04:21

Monday, I can\'t do this
Accidental Poet said:

Just think of it this way, you\'re one day closer to retirement. πŸ˜πŸ‘

February 19th, 2024 04:14

Monday, I can\'t do this
Alan R said:

Hahah don\'t πŸ˜‚

February 19th, 2024 03:48

Monday, I can\'t do this
orchidee said:

But you have only just started this Monday! (heehee).
Yes - would it help if you could work, say Saturdays, and have a day off mid-week instead?
Oohh, it\'ll be Tuesday in about 24 hours.
Do you have to work those \'nasty\' Mondays on Bank Holidays?

February 19th, 2024 03:22

On a clear night like this
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic imagery. You make this come alive.

February 17th, 2024 01:16

Spread Too Thin
Neville said:


you sound like a very lucky man .. enjoy each one and every single thing .. for as long as you can .. Neville

February 14th, 2024 01:33

The Clear-Out
Garth Rakumakoe said:

When the beginning was the end and the end is the beginning - Wishing your muse many many more flowing inks! - A well crafted piece, Tom.

February 13th, 2024 07:00

Prophets and Losses
Garth Rakumakoe said:

I love the storyline... Delivered with such candid humor and just poetic honesty... For the sheer love of poetry, this is such a good piece!

February 13th, 2024 06:56

Prophets and Losses
Goldfinch60 said:

Terrific fun write Tom.

Andy

February 13th, 2024 02:47

Prophets and Losses
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous. Funny and great storytelling, very creative. I love it.

February 12th, 2024 15:35

Prophets and Losses
Accidental Poet said:

We have here in the US a spin off of your Dragon\'s Den called Shark Tank. Well penned Tom. Those bank suits don\'t know nothing about writing anyhow. πŸ˜πŸ‘

February 12th, 2024 08:43

Prophets and Losses
orchidee said:

Doh! lol.

February 12th, 2024 08:12

Prophets and Losses
Doggerel Dave said:

You\'ve lightened up my evening with your whimsy, Tom. Ready for a sound night\'s sleep......

February 12th, 2024 07:17

Prophets and Losses
Neville said:


such mistakes are easy done .. at least you survived and if you play ya cards write, could even make a few bob by selling the product .. Neville

February 12th, 2024 06:35

Prophets and Losses
Teddy.15 said:

πŸ˜‚ that\'s so funny, you just brightened my day Tom. Thank you 🀣

February 12th, 2024 05:22

Spread Too Thin
Reynaldo Casison said:

Cool Tom,

Ya can enjoy \'The joys of writing haikus\'
and \'The cool jazz of the haiku\'
for haiku inspiration


February 12th, 2024 03:31

Spread Too Thin
Goldfinch60 said:

In life we are privileged to have so many interests Tom, you may have to reign them in sometimes but never be without them as they all bring so much joy.

Andy

February 10th, 2024 02:43

Spread Too Thin
Bella Shepard said:

We live life in the moment, and I would say enjoy what you do, and find inspiration in the things you love. A diverse life is a rich life, and your treasure is here in your words.

February 9th, 2024 15:56

Spread Too Thin
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic theme. Very relatable. Superb work.

February 9th, 2024 14:29

Spread Too Thin
Teddy.15 said:

LOL 🀣 don\'t forget your wife though, that would maybe be a frying pan moment, it would in my house lol 🀣🀣🀣🀣 happy Friday Mr T.C.D

February 9th, 2024 11:57

Spread Too Thin
Accidental Poet said:

ished. All things in good time Tom. Don\'t stress out over it. Your interests are there for a reason. But never give up on your very talented writing. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

February 9th, 2024 05:26

Spread Too Thin
orchidee said:

Spread more jam on the bread then?! I don\'t know how this metaphor fits in though! lol.
Maybe - take more time for bread and jam, as it were - relaxing, eating, etc. Focus more on just a few things?
Also - having things as hobbies, but not as obsessions, in wanting to rush to the \'end\' of them, when in fact there is no end of certain things.

February 9th, 2024 03:54

The Clear-Out
Neville said:

I sure hope the majority of this is a product of your exceptional imagination and not wholly autobiographical ..

it could only get worse if you were made aware of the huge sums of money that some other folk paid for the old TV set, those bashed up suit-cases, the instruments that you couldn\'t recall buying let alone playing ..

Not to mention the the rubbish from the garden, broken spades, brushes and deck-chairs ..

you better get your finger out and write on Tom ..

Neville

February 8th, 2024 08:25



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