Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan
The Last Word
Mutley Ravishes said:
Who’s the “you,” Tom?! Or would that better be left unsaid?
October 29th, 2024 04:48
Mutley Ravishes said:
Who’s the “you,” Tom?! Or would that better be left unsaid?
October 29th, 2024 04:48
This Time Last Year
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and touching. I love the vulnerability.
October 26th, 2024 23:41
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful and touching. I love the vulnerability.
October 26th, 2024 23:41
This Time Last Year
Cheeky Missy said:
Heartbreaking with touching and haunting poignancy, excellent imagery and a palpable sense of loss. I\'m so very sorry you lost whomever. Time passes, but sometimes the pain never loses its bite. I can still cry too easily over my mother and its been very nearly 9 years now, or my father and its been almost 4 years now. Thank you so very much for sharing.
October 25th, 2024 17:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Heartbreaking with touching and haunting poignancy, excellent imagery and a palpable sense of loss. I\'m so very sorry you lost whomever. Time passes, but sometimes the pain never loses its bite. I can still cry too easily over my mother and its been very nearly 9 years now, or my father and its been almost 4 years now. Thank you so very much for sharing.
October 25th, 2024 17:06
This Time Last Year
Doggerel Dave said:
A clear statement of the depth of your loss, Tom. Not at all maudlin, It just tells it as it is.
October 25th, 2024 14:20
Doggerel Dave said:
A clear statement of the depth of your loss, Tom. Not at all maudlin, It just tells it as it is.
October 25th, 2024 14:20
This Time Last Year
Neville said:
I don\'t have to ask because you have made it so very clear .. I am sorry for your loss Tom .. I wish I could say the first year is the toughest .. but I would be kidding the both of us .. Neville 💜
October 25th, 2024 13:13
Neville said:
I don\'t have to ask because you have made it so very clear .. I am sorry for your loss Tom .. I wish I could say the first year is the toughest .. but I would be kidding the both of us .. Neville 💜
October 25th, 2024 13:13
This Time Last Year
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and somewhat haunting and so well done.
October 25th, 2024 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and somewhat haunting and so well done.
October 25th, 2024 10:22
Spread Too Thin
sorenbarrett said:
The set up was perfect for the fin.... Distractions occur when too many things are put on the plate. Nicely written
October 25th, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
The set up was perfect for the fin.... Distractions occur when too many things are put on the plate. Nicely written
October 25th, 2024 05:05
Sixty Poems
sorenbarrett said:
Good questions posed in this write. Why are certain numbers more auspicious? And given a base 10 system why 21, 18, 12, 7, a fun read and keep on writing
October 24th, 2024 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
Good questions posed in this write. Why are certain numbers more auspicious? And given a base 10 system why 21, 18, 12, 7, a fun read and keep on writing
October 24th, 2024 05:37
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
NafisaSB said:
i can visualize and empathize - believe me - the trick is to go early or late - not at the rush hour
October 23rd, 2024 23:55
NafisaSB said:
i can visualize and empathize - believe me - the trick is to go early or late - not at the rush hour
October 23rd, 2024 23:55
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
Neville said:
I admire your observations Tom and of course, this one is filled with classics ..
October 23rd, 2024 11:03
Neville said:
I admire your observations Tom and of course, this one is filled with classics ..
October 23rd, 2024 11:03
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
Kerry said:
Oh! I can picture myself with the family last December in Tenerife! Thanks for the imagery - hilariously accurate.
October 23rd, 2024 06:39
Kerry said:
Oh! I can picture myself with the family last December in Tenerife! Thanks for the imagery - hilariously accurate.
October 23rd, 2024 06:39
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
Doggerel Dave said:
I have my reservations about organised mass tourism which I may have versified or at least commented on way back when.... but none crystalizes my feelings better than several or more of the breakfast experiences you vividly describe, Tom.
October 23rd, 2024 01:26
Doggerel Dave said:
I have my reservations about organised mass tourism which I may have versified or at least commented on way back when.... but none crystalizes my feelings better than several or more of the breakfast experiences you vividly describe, Tom.
October 23rd, 2024 01:26
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
Thomas W Case said:
You capture the scene very well. Excellent work, my friend.
October 22nd, 2024 14:56
Thomas W Case said:
You capture the scene very well. Excellent work, my friend.
October 22nd, 2024 14:56
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s what so fun about aka life: people in their foolish, selfish way of being, so unconsciously self-absorbed. This is hilarious! I couldn\'t help laughing aloud. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a none too subtle humorous poignancy jostling with that haunting boredom which never fails to reign supreme.i love it! Thank you so much for sharing.
October 22nd, 2024 07:41
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s what so fun about aka life: people in their foolish, selfish way of being, so unconsciously self-absorbed. This is hilarious! I couldn\'t help laughing aloud. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a none too subtle humorous poignancy jostling with that haunting boredom which never fails to reign supreme.i love it! Thank you so much for sharing.
October 22nd, 2024 07:41
The All-Inclusive Breakfast
sorenbarrett said:
This poem teems with the clatter of a busy morning breakfast hotel style. The bustle of impatient diners is monitored by the narrator awaiting his meal. I feel that I have been there so well captured in words.
October 22nd, 2024 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem teems with the clatter of a busy morning breakfast hotel style. The bustle of impatient diners is monitored by the narrator awaiting his meal. I feel that I have been there so well captured in words.
October 22nd, 2024 07:33
The Reading
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about fear of public speaking, stage fright, or what ever you call it. Most people have it but the more you know your subject the less there is. Soon the fear turns to excitement and serves as the fuel for performance. Nicely written it tells the story.
October 21st, 2024 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
A great write about fear of public speaking, stage fright, or what ever you call it. Most people have it but the more you know your subject the less there is. Soon the fear turns to excitement and serves as the fuel for performance. Nicely written it tells the story.
October 21st, 2024 04:41
The Reading
Neville said:
I know exactly wot U mean Tom .. I\'ve got a big un coming up soon .. N
October 21st, 2024 03:43
Neville said:
I know exactly wot U mean Tom .. I\'ve got a big un coming up soon .. N
October 21st, 2024 03:43
The Reading
jarcher54 said:
Poems about poetry are always interesting, but seldom profound. This one is just plain inspired and fun! But underneath the light narrative is a deep truth. Next!
October 6th, 2024 10:01
jarcher54 said:
Poems about poetry are always interesting, but seldom profound. This one is just plain inspired and fun! But underneath the light narrative is a deep truth. Next!
October 6th, 2024 10:01
The Reading
Thomas W Case said:
Superb. I\'ve done it many times and I was always nervous. You capture the feeling and scene well.
October 4th, 2024 16:11
Thomas W Case said:
Superb. I\'ve done it many times and I was always nervous. You capture the feeling and scene well.
October 4th, 2024 16:11
The Reading
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep on reading Tom, those nerves show that you care.
Andy
October 4th, 2024 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep on reading Tom, those nerves show that you care.
Andy
October 4th, 2024 01:24
The Reading
Dan Williams said:
The acid test for my poems is to have someone read them out load. I choke in front of an audience.
October 4th, 2024 00:25
Dan Williams said:
The acid test for my poems is to have someone read them out load. I choke in front of an audience.
October 4th, 2024 00:25
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