Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan
The Line
Doggerel Dave said:
Whoa - What I like about your work Tom, is that it deals with stuff out there in the real world. And this one feels like the start of a slippery slope leading to another of the kind of interminable offerings here which involve multiple examinations of the writer\'s internal states. Please don’t go there.
PS: Personal view only and of course you have every right to examine your navel fluff to the end of time…😊🙃
April 3rd, 2024 19:25
Doggerel Dave said:
Whoa - What I like about your work Tom, is that it deals with stuff out there in the real world. And this one feels like the start of a slippery slope leading to another of the kind of interminable offerings here which involve multiple examinations of the writer\'s internal states. Please don’t go there.
PS: Personal view only and of course you have every right to examine your navel fluff to the end of time…😊🙃
April 3rd, 2024 19:25
The Line
orchidee said:
Physically unwell? Mentally unwell? Or some depressive thing? I\'m being nosey. Ooh!
April 3rd, 2024 12:12
orchidee said:
Physically unwell? Mentally unwell? Or some depressive thing? I\'m being nosey. Ooh!
April 3rd, 2024 12:12
The Line
Cassie58 said:
A day at a time. Not easy to move forward when you feel rough. I hope with each new day you feel stronger Tom. Have a good Wednesday.
April 3rd, 2024 11:02
Cassie58 said:
A day at a time. Not easy to move forward when you feel rough. I hope with each new day you feel stronger Tom. Have a good Wednesday.
April 3rd, 2024 11:02
The Line
Accidental Poet said:
Glad to see you\'re on the mend Tom. Pen another great poem like this and you\'ll really be feeling even better. 😉👍
April 3rd, 2024 08:51
Accidental Poet said:
Glad to see you\'re on the mend Tom. Pen another great poem like this and you\'ll really be feeling even better. 😉👍
April 3rd, 2024 08:51
The Surprise Gifts
Cassie58 said:
I love the positive ending here after a shaky birthday start. I hope you had a lovely day. Your poem made me smile Tom. All’s well that ends well.
March 28th, 2024 11:58
Cassie58 said:
I love the positive ending here after a shaky birthday start. I hope you had a lovely day. Your poem made me smile Tom. All’s well that ends well.
March 28th, 2024 11:58
The Surprise Gifts
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah Tom - family dynamics and your own internal ambivalence thrown together in one interesting and amusing piece I really liked. Thanks.
March 27th, 2024 17:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah Tom - family dynamics and your own internal ambivalence thrown together in one interesting and amusing piece I really liked. Thanks.
March 27th, 2024 17:41
The Surprise Gifts
Accidental Poet said:
Was the Who Album, \"The Who Live at Leeds?\" I have that album. It was probably her favorite album too, so she wanted you to have your own. Great write Tom. 🎼🎵🎶🎵
March 27th, 2024 17:18
Accidental Poet said:
Was the Who Album, \"The Who Live at Leeds?\" I have that album. It was probably her favorite album too, so she wanted you to have your own. Great write Tom. 🎼🎵🎶🎵
March 27th, 2024 17:18
The Surprise Gifts
orchidee said:
Phew! Glad they never got out the family holiday photo album as a \'treat\' and bored you for 3 hours! lol.
March 27th, 2024 10:56
orchidee said:
Phew! Glad they never got out the family holiday photo album as a \'treat\' and bored you for 3 hours! lol.
March 27th, 2024 10:56
The Surprise Gifts
Alan R said:
It\'s beautiful peaceful and slightly sad at the same time
March 27th, 2024 09:21
Alan R said:
It\'s beautiful peaceful and slightly sad at the same time
March 27th, 2024 09:21
World Poetry Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words of meaning
Told on this wonderful day
Haikus abounding.
Andy
March 22nd, 2024 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words of meaning
Told on this wonderful day
Haikus abounding.
Andy
March 22nd, 2024 02:06
World Poetry Day
Doggerel Dave said:
Tom, I really admire your open nature, your ability to not be hidebound by preconceived notions of what I might be imbibing as I read your splendid advertisement for World Poetry Day.
This early in the morning It\'s a \'nice mug of tea\' - later I\'ll explore your other options......😊
March 21st, 2024 18:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Tom, I really admire your open nature, your ability to not be hidebound by preconceived notions of what I might be imbibing as I read your splendid advertisement for World Poetry Day.
This early in the morning It\'s a \'nice mug of tea\' - later I\'ll explore your other options......😊
March 21st, 2024 18:31
World Poetry Day
Bella Shepard said:
What a wonderful tribute to World Poetry Day, I had no idea, tells you what rock I\'ve been living under. Each stanza typifying how much poetry means in our lives, classic. And then that last stanza, perfect, I laughed my you know what off. Thank you !
March 21st, 2024 14:44
Bella Shepard said:
What a wonderful tribute to World Poetry Day, I had no idea, tells you what rock I\'ve been living under. Each stanza typifying how much poetry means in our lives, classic. And then that last stanza, perfect, I laughed my you know what off. Thank you !
March 21st, 2024 14:44
World Poetry Day
Accidental Poet said:
I was unaware of this. Just goes to show how we need more people to read poetry. Kudos to you Tom for raising the flag of poetry in honor of free speech. 🌹
March 21st, 2024 09:42
Accidental Poet said:
I was unaware of this. Just goes to show how we need more people to read poetry. Kudos to you Tom for raising the flag of poetry in honor of free speech. 🌹
March 21st, 2024 09:42
World Poetry Day
orchidee said:
Good write Tom.
All I know of Haikus is - is that a foreign sneeze? Haiku/Atchoo?! lol.
Do shut up Orchi. lol.
March 21st, 2024 09:40
orchidee said:
Good write Tom.
All I know of Haikus is - is that a foreign sneeze? Haiku/Atchoo?! lol.
Do shut up Orchi. lol.
March 21st, 2024 09:40
The Waiting
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tom it is the waiting and not knowing that is hard to deal with at times.
Andy
March 20th, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tom it is the waiting and not knowing that is hard to deal with at times.
Andy
March 20th, 2024 02:21
Of course I am
Teddy.15 said:
So very well described the aching of being not fine but smiling and saying yes regardless, and for a women going through something important and in some cases terrifying to ask just shows to me anyway, Soulmate this has so many layers of emotion and lessons for us all. Kudos 🌹
March 19th, 2024 16:24
Teddy.15 said:
So very well described the aching of being not fine but smiling and saying yes regardless, and for a women going through something important and in some cases terrifying to ask just shows to me anyway, Soulmate this has so many layers of emotion and lessons for us all. Kudos 🌹
March 19th, 2024 16:24
The Waiting
Accidental Poet said:
What if all the things we wanted actually came true and happened as we wanted it to? Hey, it could happen. 😁👍
March 19th, 2024 14:52
Accidental Poet said:
What if all the things we wanted actually came true and happened as we wanted it to? Hey, it could happen. 😁👍
March 19th, 2024 14:52
The Waiting
orchidee said:
Should last line be a repeat \'What if?\' It says \'What it\'.
Yes, a terrible worry waiting for the No.7 bus too. I waited one Sunday for it for 2 hours. Then someone passed by and said \'Oh, it don\'t run on Sundays!\' Doh! (Did I make that up?).
March 19th, 2024 09:27
orchidee said:
Should last line be a repeat \'What if?\' It says \'What it\'.
Yes, a terrible worry waiting for the No.7 bus too. I waited one Sunday for it for 2 hours. Then someone passed by and said \'Oh, it don\'t run on Sundays!\' Doh! (Did I make that up?).
March 19th, 2024 09:27
Of course I am
Bragee said:
Great work!
Captures a feeling that many can relate to! The strong being strong for the strong.
March 18th, 2024 23:18
Bragee said:
Great work!
Captures a feeling that many can relate to! The strong being strong for the strong.
March 18th, 2024 23:18
Of course I am
Doggerel Dave said:
A gem, Tom. There\'s something so simple, plain and absolutely truthful about this. I\'ve seen it many times in the faces of partners such as you in in this piece.
March 18th, 2024 16:25
Doggerel Dave said:
A gem, Tom. There\'s something so simple, plain and absolutely truthful about this. I\'ve seen it many times in the faces of partners such as you in in this piece.
March 18th, 2024 16:25
Of course I am
Accidental Poet said:
Are any of us really ok? Well penned Tom. 😁👍
March 18th, 2024 09:13
Accidental Poet said:
Are any of us really ok? Well penned Tom. 😁👍
March 18th, 2024 09:13
Of Irish Descent
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You paint the picture well.
March 12th, 2024 14:46
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You paint the picture well.
March 12th, 2024 14:46
Of Irish Descent
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m at least part Irish, but I\'ve never left the US except for crossing the border with Canada once for about 7 hours. Happy St. Patrick\'s Day and well written Tom. ☘️
March 12th, 2024 09:43
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m at least part Irish, but I\'ve never left the US except for crossing the border with Canada once for about 7 hours. Happy St. Patrick\'s Day and well written Tom. ☘️
March 12th, 2024 09:43
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