Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Springs Stir
Damaso said:
Wow, how intense the transition from one image to another. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 10th, 2025 12:05
Damaso said:
Wow, how intense the transition from one image to another. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 10th, 2025 12:05
Springs Stir
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that rocks back and forth with its flow. Short but nicely done
July 10th, 2025 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that rocks back and forth with its flow. Short but nicely done
July 10th, 2025 06:22
Fields of Daffodils
𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 said:
so sweet and soft, and a tad playful. hey lovely, indeed.
July 9th, 2025 11:14
𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 said:
so sweet and soft, and a tad playful. hey lovely, indeed.
July 9th, 2025 11:14
Mercy of Mind
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and without hope is the initial feel Control and betrayal lead to a lack of trust which all seem pretty typical in today\'s
July 9th, 2025 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and without hope is the initial feel Control and betrayal lead to a lack of trust which all seem pretty typical in today\'s
July 9th, 2025 09:33
Mercy of Mind
Bella Shepard said:
We can hope for mercy in a world turned upside down, unlike anything we\'ve ever known. You capture the feeling of disillusionment that seems to be pervasive. Well thought out, and very well written!
July 9th, 2025 09:23
Bella Shepard said:
We can hope for mercy in a world turned upside down, unlike anything we\'ve ever known. You capture the feeling of disillusionment that seems to be pervasive. Well thought out, and very well written!
July 9th, 2025 09:23
Heaven Waits
Bella Shepard said:
I love to read poetry aloud, and this poem possesses a beautiful lyrical quality as it takes us through the trials of life. Well done!
July 8th, 2025 15:43
Bella Shepard said:
I love to read poetry aloud, and this poem possesses a beautiful lyrical quality as it takes us through the trials of life. Well done!
July 8th, 2025 15:43
Heaven Waits
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is well written with great rhyme and images and is a fave
July 8th, 2025 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is well written with great rhyme and images and is a fave
July 8th, 2025 12:46
Untitled
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, some lovely lines, nice flow as you read creating nice images, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 07:27
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, some lovely lines, nice flow as you read creating nice images, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 07:27
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Love inspires images not otherwise seen. A beautiful poem of great depth and wonderful scenes that melt into metaphor. Very nicely done with rhyme
July 7th, 2025 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
Love inspires images not otherwise seen. A beautiful poem of great depth and wonderful scenes that melt into metaphor. Very nicely done with rhyme
July 7th, 2025 07:00
The Women at the Eclipse
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting tale of seductive love and its redeeming force. Very nicely written
July 6th, 2025 15:24
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting tale of seductive love and its redeeming force. Very nicely written
July 6th, 2025 15:24
Julys Purple Flower
sorenbarrett said:
A holiday celebration with a flower. A beautiful image cast of this purple flower. The Larkspur a beautiful flower representing love and joy. Nicely done
July 4th, 2025 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
A holiday celebration with a flower. A beautiful image cast of this purple flower. The Larkspur a beautiful flower representing love and joy. Nicely done
July 4th, 2025 10:40
The Boiled Black Sea
sorenbarrett said:
A world where might makes right, survival of the fittest is natures way yet we as humans feel a need to impose our values of love, compassion, fairness into the equation makes it a sad world where we are pitted against the forces of nature in a no win battle. Man has always been cruel by nature. A most emotional and well written poem of a powerful nature. Lovely
July 3rd, 2025 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
A world where might makes right, survival of the fittest is natures way yet we as humans feel a need to impose our values of love, compassion, fairness into the equation makes it a sad world where we are pitted against the forces of nature in a no win battle. Man has always been cruel by nature. A most emotional and well written poem of a powerful nature. Lovely
July 3rd, 2025 06:15
Behold a rose
Damaso said:
What beauty enjoyed it a lot. Thank you very much for sharing it. Greetings!
July 1st, 2025 09:40
Damaso said:
What beauty enjoyed it a lot. Thank you very much for sharing it. Greetings!
July 1st, 2025 09:40
Behold a rose
sorenbarrett said:
Classically set in the form of a rose and with accompanying language it in metaphor speaks of love. Well done and so common a theme I too am writing a poem now of the same subject.
July 1st, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Classically set in the form of a rose and with accompanying language it in metaphor speaks of love. Well done and so common a theme I too am writing a poem now of the same subject.
July 1st, 2025 09:02
Home
sorenbarrett said:
There is no place like home and although this poem seems literal in a sense it may be taken metaphorically as well. Nicely done
June 29th, 2025 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
There is no place like home and although this poem seems literal in a sense it may be taken metaphorically as well. Nicely done
June 29th, 2025 11:12
A Spring Storm
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem beautifully captures the contrast between spring\'s warmth and winter\'s lingering echoes. The imagery of nature\'s rebirth and stormy memories feels vivid and heartfelt. A touching reflection on renewal and remembrance.
June 27th, 2025 15:01
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your poem beautifully captures the contrast between spring\'s warmth and winter\'s lingering echoes. The imagery of nature\'s rebirth and stormy memories feels vivid and heartfelt. A touching reflection on renewal and remembrance.
June 27th, 2025 15:01
A Spring Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Seasonal memories of days gone bye in this poem leave a wistful feeling. Very nice
June 27th, 2025 10:53
sorenbarrett said:
Seasonal memories of days gone bye in this poem leave a wistful feeling. Very nice
June 27th, 2025 10:53
Natures Mind
sorenbarrett said:
Symbolic in its images this poem speaks in metaphor. Very nice
June 26th, 2025 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
Symbolic in its images this poem speaks in metaphor. Very nice
June 26th, 2025 11:05
From the Dragons Mouth
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and well written it seems a metaphor as well. Very nice
June 24th, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and well written it seems a metaphor as well. Very nice
June 24th, 2025 08:48
Fields of Daffodils
NafisaSB said:
very tender and lyrical.. God bless you both
an enjoyable read
June 24th, 2025 01:26
NafisaSB said:
very tender and lyrical.. God bless you both
an enjoyable read
June 24th, 2025 01:26
Truth and Lies
sorenbarrett said:
A poem and a journey through mortality set in a biblical metaphor nicely rhymed and metered it speaks cynically of the cycle of life,. Very well penned.
June 23rd, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A poem and a journey through mortality set in a biblical metaphor nicely rhymed and metered it speaks cynically of the cycle of life,. Very well penned.
June 23rd, 2025 04:47
The darkness
sorenbarrett said:
Some good lines in this poem I particularly liked (And drink your death when your not thirsty.) Nicely penned
June 22nd, 2025 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
Some good lines in this poem I particularly liked (And drink your death when your not thirsty.) Nicely penned
June 22nd, 2025 03:50
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Men\'s atrocities buried under the dirt of time uncovered from time to time and viewed from a distance are swept back under the rug of faded memory but those still fresh stink and remind us of the carnage we wrack on our fellow man. A sad poem
June 20th, 2025 06:08
sorenbarrett said:
Men\'s atrocities buried under the dirt of time uncovered from time to time and viewed from a distance are swept back under the rug of faded memory but those still fresh stink and remind us of the carnage we wrack on our fellow man. A sad poem
June 20th, 2025 06:08
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