Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Lovers Kiss
Cassie58 said:
Touching and so very sensual. Beautifully composed.
January 29th, 2025 14:47
Cassie58 said:
Touching and so very sensual. Beautifully composed.
January 29th, 2025 14:47
With Fingers Linked
sorenbarrett said:
There is the surface of this poem and then what lies beneath. In metaphor this poem speaks to me even if it was not intended
January 27th, 2025 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
There is the surface of this poem and then what lies beneath. In metaphor this poem speaks to me even if it was not intended
January 27th, 2025 12:26
With Fingers Linked
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful piece of writing, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 11:33
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful piece of writing, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 11:33
With Fingers Linked
RSM0812 said:
Unwinding at the end should be unbinding. Stupid spell check.
January 27th, 2025 07:50
RSM0812 said:
Unwinding at the end should be unbinding. Stupid spell check.
January 27th, 2025 07:50
Field of flowers
Dan Williams said:
What a nice build up to a satisfying ending \"And lied in the flowers and stayed\". Nice.
January 27th, 2025 00:59
Dan Williams said:
What a nice build up to a satisfying ending \"And lied in the flowers and stayed\". Nice.
January 27th, 2025 00:59
Waiting for Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
A poem fraught with fear of punishment for making wrong choices. It contains a darkness and a feel of anger. It is sad that people need to be motivated by fear and dread when love and peace are available.
January 26th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
A poem fraught with fear of punishment for making wrong choices. It contains a darkness and a feel of anger. It is sad that people need to be motivated by fear and dread when love and peace are available.
January 26th, 2025 06:26
Field of flowers
sorenbarrett said:
Angel trumpets in your pillow? A most wonderful read of a peaceful somewhat altered state.
January 25th, 2025 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
Angel trumpets in your pillow? A most wonderful read of a peaceful somewhat altered state.
January 25th, 2025 11:38
Field of flowers
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful imagery in your lines. Nicely composed. Thanks for sharing.
January 25th, 2025 11:08
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful imagery in your lines. Nicely composed. Thanks for sharing.
January 25th, 2025 11:08
Storm and Storm
sorenbarrett said:
A farewell to winter in this poem. The meter is great and pulls the reader along and is aided by rhyme and near rhyme. It has the pacing of a limeric and sends its message well. Nicely done
January 25th, 2025 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
A farewell to winter in this poem. The meter is great and pulls the reader along and is aided by rhyme and near rhyme. It has the pacing of a limeric and sends its message well. Nicely done
January 25th, 2025 07:51
Storm and Storm
Poetic Licence said:
It will soon be on it`s way, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:42
Poetic Licence said:
It will soon be on it`s way, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:42
To Pam
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and heartfelt poem, written message to a love gone by, nicely and caringly worded
January 23rd, 2025 10:13
Poetic Licence said:
A touching and heartfelt poem, written message to a love gone by, nicely and caringly worded
January 23rd, 2025 10:13
To Pam
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt write to an old lover that time has separated it flows with hope.
January 23rd, 2025 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt write to an old lover that time has separated it flows with hope.
January 23rd, 2025 07:21
Freezing
sorenbarrett said:
Frozen images play in this winter wonderland. Descriptive to say the least
January 21st, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
Frozen images play in this winter wonderland. Descriptive to say the least
January 21st, 2025 08:42
The Calm
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme, near rhyme and irregular internal patterns of rhyme in this poem lend to the flow and beauty of this piece. The message is deep as well and the poem is the perfect length for the message. Very nice it was most enjoyable to read
January 19th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyme, near rhyme and irregular internal patterns of rhyme in this poem lend to the flow and beauty of this piece. The message is deep as well and the poem is the perfect length for the message. Very nice it was most enjoyable to read
January 19th, 2025 05:00
Morning Stillness
sorenbarrett said:
Senual and by metaphor sexual it speaks to the seduction of the night. Lovely
January 17th, 2025 12:37
sorenbarrett said:
Senual and by metaphor sexual it speaks to the seduction of the night. Lovely
January 17th, 2025 12:37
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