Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mixed emotion bitter sweet, hot and cold. Nicely done
January 21st, 2026 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of mixed emotion bitter sweet, hot and cold. Nicely done
January 21st, 2026 14:38
Happiness
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a poem of deceit and one all too true. Well written it speaks for itself and is a fave
January 19th, 2026 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a poem of deceit and one all too true. Well written it speaks for itself and is a fave
January 19th, 2026 13:03
Happiness
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complexities of love, loyalty, and the struggle between internal emotions and external challenges. It emphasizes the enduring nature of love amidst adversity and the importance of protecting one’s feelings and words.
January 19th, 2026 12:35
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the complexities of love, loyalty, and the struggle between internal emotions and external challenges. It emphasizes the enduring nature of love amidst adversity and the importance of protecting one’s feelings and words.
January 19th, 2026 12:35
The Dance
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the complexities of love, juxtaposing chaotic emotions with moments of tenderness and nostalgia. It reflects on the highs and lows of romantic relationships, capturing both the joyous and sorrowful aspects of love. lovely written.
January 18th, 2026 18:13
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the complexities of love, juxtaposing chaotic emotions with moments of tenderness and nostalgia. It reflects on the highs and lows of romantic relationships, capturing both the joyous and sorrowful aspects of love. lovely written.
January 18th, 2026 18:13
The Dance
sorenbarrett said:
A moment of exultation and excitement of soaring nicely described
January 18th, 2026 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
A moment of exultation and excitement of soaring nicely described
January 18th, 2026 12:36
My Bride
sorenbarrett said:
Oh how strong the passion we call love when first its new, how beautiful the flower bud and how shines new steel before corruption and rust take their toll. Curse the clock that it may stop. A lovely poem full of such brightness and hope
January 17th, 2026 13:41
sorenbarrett said:
Oh how strong the passion we call love when first its new, how beautiful the flower bud and how shines new steel before corruption and rust take their toll. Curse the clock that it may stop. A lovely poem full of such brightness and hope
January 17th, 2026 13:41
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely written a poem of encouragement to become all that one can be. A lovely piece of poetry
January 16th, 2026 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely written a poem of encouragement to become all that one can be. A lovely piece of poetry
January 16th, 2026 07:59
Ripples
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of internal rhyme that speaks to the heart
January 14th, 2026 12:17
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of internal rhyme that speaks to the heart
January 14th, 2026 12:17
My Garden Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write of the beauty of commitment to another and its undying fidelity in age. Lovely
January 13th, 2026 13:06
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write of the beauty of commitment to another and its undying fidelity in age. Lovely
January 13th, 2026 13:06
Silent Prayers
NinjaGirl said:
Absolutely lovely imagery, this is a path I want to take!
January 12th, 2026 16:42
NinjaGirl said:
Absolutely lovely imagery, this is a path I want to take!
January 12th, 2026 16:42
Silent Prayers
sorenbarrett said:
A most peaceful poem that calls out to the reader through natures images to rest in a calm and serene place.
January 12th, 2026 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
A most peaceful poem that calls out to the reader through natures images to rest in a calm and serene place.
January 12th, 2026 16:01
Guild the Rose
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor of a rose and love that are woven into one braided line. A lovely write
January 11th, 2026 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor of a rose and love that are woven into one braided line. A lovely write
January 11th, 2026 09:57
Dafodil
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the images, rhyme and internal rhyme in this poem
January 10th, 2026 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the images, rhyme and internal rhyme in this poem
January 10th, 2026 09:46
Space and Time
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely picture painted in words. The universe in all its power and majesty. A picture of creation. Nicely written
January 9th, 2026 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely picture painted in words. The universe in all its power and majesty. A picture of creation. Nicely written
January 9th, 2026 09:08
A Curious Thing
sorenbarrett said:
It seems to me this poem could be about imagination and memory with all that emotion that goes with it. A lovely write
January 7th, 2026 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
It seems to me this poem could be about imagination and memory with all that emotion that goes with it. A lovely write
January 7th, 2026 06:02
Day of Kindness
Friendship said:
So beautiful, your poem revolves around compassion, charity, and the importance of kindness in human interactions. The poet emphasizes the significance of recognizing and alleviating the suffering of others, particularly those who are marginalized or impoverished. It calls for a collective responsibility to share joy and resources with those in need, highlighting the interconnectedness of humanity.
January 4th, 2026 08:26
Friendship said:
So beautiful, your poem revolves around compassion, charity, and the importance of kindness in human interactions. The poet emphasizes the significance of recognizing and alleviating the suffering of others, particularly those who are marginalized or impoverished. It calls for a collective responsibility to share joy and resources with those in need, highlighting the interconnectedness of humanity.
January 4th, 2026 08:26
Day of Kindness
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of rhy8me well crafted and such a pleasure to read. Nicely done my friend and a fave
January 4th, 2026 05:25
sorenbarrett said:
A most beautiful poem of rhy8me well crafted and such a pleasure to read. Nicely done my friend and a fave
January 4th, 2026 05:25
Untitled
Friendship said:
Your poem seems to be an exploration of these heavy themes, aiming to evoke emotional responses and provoke thought about the nature of life, death, and the enduring power of love.
January 2nd, 2026 13:19
Friendship said:
Your poem seems to be an exploration of these heavy themes, aiming to evoke emotional responses and provoke thought about the nature of life, death, and the enduring power of love.
January 2nd, 2026 13:19
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Such a timely poem at this time of year about time itself. Nicely worded it reveals its meaning slowly. Loved it
January 2nd, 2026 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
Such a timely poem at this time of year about time itself. Nicely worded it reveals its meaning slowly. Loved it
January 2nd, 2026 09:30
Light and darkness 3
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem explores the juxtaposition of light and darkness, symbolizing the dualities of life, love, and the passage of time. It reflects on the complexities of emotions, the inevitability of fate, and the interplay between joy and sorrow.
January 1st, 2026 17:46
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem explores the juxtaposition of light and darkness, symbolizing the dualities of life, love, and the passage of time. It reflects on the complexities of emotions, the inevitability of fate, and the interplay between joy and sorrow.
January 1st, 2026 17:46
Light and darkness 3
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write with intriguing rhyme and most interesting meter that seems almost musical at times. Nicely done
January 1st, 2026 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write with intriguing rhyme and most interesting meter that seems almost musical at times. Nicely done
January 1st, 2026 05:16
Angelic song
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of such lovely words that sing off the page. Well written and a bright greeting to a New Year
December 31st, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of such lovely words that sing off the page. Well written and a bright greeting to a New Year
December 31st, 2025 05:23
The Falling Snow
sorenbarrett said:
You set the scene well in this poem of winter. A message as well for those that can see. Lovely
December 30th, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
You set the scene well in this poem of winter. A message as well for those that can see. Lovely
December 30th, 2025 09:51
River Sonnet
sorenbarrett said:
Love and passion in this poem of symbols and metaphor. Well done in good rhyme and flow
December 28th, 2025 17:38
sorenbarrett said:
Love and passion in this poem of symbols and metaphor. Well done in good rhyme and flow
December 28th, 2025 17:38
Red rose in repose
sorenbarrett said:
Rose red a fairy tale a sleeping beauty another both seem to apply. Beauty taken to bed, slept on may leave the injuries of time wasted, a love that leads to picking what is of nature cutting its natural force leaving it to wilt and die. Awaken and foster our own beauty living in harmony with that of others. A lovely write.
December 27th, 2025 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
Rose red a fairy tale a sleeping beauty another both seem to apply. Beauty taken to bed, slept on may leave the injuries of time wasted, a love that leads to picking what is of nature cutting its natural force leaving it to wilt and die. Awaken and foster our own beauty living in harmony with that of others. A lovely write.
December 27th, 2025 08:24
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