Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Mountains Candle
sorenbarrett said:
Careful wording and images give the feeling of past places one has been and this is well blended with the sense of togetherness until the end of time. Very nice and emotional
February 13th, 2025 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Careful wording and images give the feeling of past places one has been and this is well blended with the sense of togetherness until the end of time. Very nice and emotional
February 13th, 2025 10:54
Any Man
Poetic Licence said:
I get the feel of loneliness and isolation, someone who could do with a bit of company. Well written
February 12th, 2025 10:16
Poetic Licence said:
I get the feel of loneliness and isolation, someone who could do with a bit of company. Well written
February 12th, 2025 10:16
Any Man
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of anomie and isolation pervade this poem. It carries the reader down this street to its inevitable dead end. Nicely written
February 12th, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
A sense of anomie and isolation pervade this poem. It carries the reader down this street to its inevitable dead end. Nicely written
February 12th, 2025 09:13
Dead Kings
sorenbarrett said:
A message here for people of today. Kings or presidents all one and the same. A timely read
February 11th, 2025 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
A message here for people of today. Kings or presidents all one and the same. A timely read
February 11th, 2025 08:14
The Train to North Durham
David Wakeling said:
Women? ya can\'t live with em and ya can\'t shoot em. A lively tale of the girl that got away.Don\'t they all.Enjoyed this well constructed poem
February 10th, 2025 15:05
David Wakeling said:
Women? ya can\'t live with em and ya can\'t shoot em. A lively tale of the girl that got away.Don\'t they all.Enjoyed this well constructed poem
February 10th, 2025 15:05
The Train to North Durham
sorenbarrett said:
There are certain faces, bodies, people that strike us with bolt of passion, it is not love at first sight but lust at first sight. Some may be lukey to strike it off on such occasions but for most of us we lay smitten with an unfulfilled dream for the rest of our lives and no matter how great the love we find or the encouters we philander nothing will ever come close to fulfilling that dream left unfulfilled. A wonderful psychological write
February 10th, 2025 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
There are certain faces, bodies, people that strike us with bolt of passion, it is not love at first sight but lust at first sight. Some may be lukey to strike it off on such occasions but for most of us we lay smitten with an unfulfilled dream for the rest of our lives and no matter how great the love we find or the encouters we philander nothing will ever come close to fulfilling that dream left unfulfilled. A wonderful psychological write
February 10th, 2025 11:46
I Vacationed in Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a continuation of The Divine Comedy and the upward climb into heaven. Nicely written with great imagery
February 9th, 2025 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a continuation of The Divine Comedy and the upward climb into heaven. Nicely written with great imagery
February 9th, 2025 04:49
I Vacationed in Heaven
arqios said:
Working out the correlation of “vacation” in your two latest poems, an interesting journey of thought and feeling. 🙏🏻🕊
February 9th, 2025 04:30
arqios said:
Working out the correlation of “vacation” in your two latest poems, an interesting journey of thought and feeling. 🙏🏻🕊
February 9th, 2025 04:30
When i vacationed in Hell
Mutley Ravishes said:
I took myself into hell once upon a time. I don\'t want to go back. Or, should I say, when I go back, I\'d like to be ready. The serpent patiently waits.....to be uplifted!
Great write.
February 8th, 2025 18:54
Mutley Ravishes said:
I took myself into hell once upon a time. I don\'t want to go back. Or, should I say, when I go back, I\'d like to be ready. The serpent patiently waits.....to be uplifted!
Great write.
February 8th, 2025 18:54
When i vacationed in Hell
Neville said:
Hell, this is epic, almost a complete treatise on its namesake .. Congratulations on hitting the ton too sir .. Neville 😎👍
February 8th, 2025 12:26
Neville said:
Hell, this is epic, almost a complete treatise on its namesake .. Congratulations on hitting the ton too sir .. Neville 😎👍
February 8th, 2025 12:26
When i vacationed in Hell
sorenbarrett said:
The darkest hell is the one in our mind and from that one we don\'t come back. With our conscience being our Satan it is mercilous and brutal we give it our heart but to no avail. There are many great lines in this piece and it seems like Dante\'s decent into hell in his devine comedy but instead of observing others it is oneself being tortured but almost as an observer as well. This seperation of mind from body in pain is an emphasis of the how one without conscionce focuses on physical pain while a conscience when felt is a far greater pain than the physical. Given a second chance by a conscience or Saten that has learned compassion. A most lovely write heart felt. No my friend I am on several other sites but have not published any of my works feel free to look at any of my past works, some are worth a look most of my early works as for most of us are writings of learning with a few rants.
February 8th, 2025 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
The darkest hell is the one in our mind and from that one we don\'t come back. With our conscience being our Satan it is mercilous and brutal we give it our heart but to no avail. There are many great lines in this piece and it seems like Dante\'s decent into hell in his devine comedy but instead of observing others it is oneself being tortured but almost as an observer as well. This seperation of mind from body in pain is an emphasis of the how one without conscionce focuses on physical pain while a conscience when felt is a far greater pain than the physical. Given a second chance by a conscience or Saten that has learned compassion. A most lovely write heart felt. No my friend I am on several other sites but have not published any of my works feel free to look at any of my past works, some are worth a look most of my early works as for most of us are writings of learning with a few rants.
February 8th, 2025 10:01
When i vacationed in Hell
Poetic Licence said:
That is quite a comprehensive guide through how most people view hell, a great piece of writing
February 8th, 2025 08:33
Poetic Licence said:
That is quite a comprehensive guide through how most people view hell, a great piece of writing
February 8th, 2025 08:33
First Steps
Poetic Licence said:
A baby or young child easily lifts your spirits and day, because all their responses are genuine, honest or funny, lovely write
February 6th, 2025 13:58
Poetic Licence said:
A baby or young child easily lifts your spirits and day, because all their responses are genuine, honest or funny, lovely write
February 6th, 2025 13:58
First Steps
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing like a baby or child to brighten the day and lift spirits. There is something so sincere in their responses. A lovely write
February 6th, 2025 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
Nothing like a baby or child to brighten the day and lift spirits. There is something so sincere in their responses. A lovely write
February 6th, 2025 13:52
Behold a Rose
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded with a timeless metaphor. Your word choice made all the difference. Lovely
February 5th, 2025 10:24
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded with a timeless metaphor. Your word choice made all the difference. Lovely
February 5th, 2025 10:24
Everything in Between
Poetic Licence said:
Many questions asked and so many possible answers, a nice write around what to believe and what not to, really enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 14:51
Poetic Licence said:
Many questions asked and so many possible answers, a nice write around what to believe and what not to, really enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 14:51
Everything in Between
sorenbarrett said:
What can you believe and what can\'t you believe? Hard to say. A good write that gets this point across.
February 4th, 2025 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
What can you believe and what can\'t you believe? Hard to say. A good write that gets this point across.
February 4th, 2025 12:56
I love you
sorenbarrett said:
I xould feel this one the words were magical and that is enough for me to be poetry. Deserves a fave
February 3rd, 2025 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
I xould feel this one the words were magical and that is enough for me to be poetry. Deserves a fave
February 3rd, 2025 07:07
Civil War
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful piece, last line a classic, enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 02:44
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful piece, last line a classic, enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 02:44
Civil War
Cassie58 said:
Powerfully penned and delivered. The final line is hard to swallow.
February 2nd, 2025 11:47
Cassie58 said:
Powerfully penned and delivered. The final line is hard to swallow.
February 2nd, 2025 11:47
Civil War
sorenbarrett said:
Sad enough to shead a tear. Moving and powerful
February 2nd, 2025 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
Sad enough to shead a tear. Moving and powerful
February 2nd, 2025 08:54
End
sorenbarrett said:
Dark fatalism pervades this poem and indeed it is true. Very nicely put
February 1st, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Dark fatalism pervades this poem and indeed it is true. Very nicely put
February 1st, 2025 09:02
Untitled
Poetic Licence said:
A mind drifting in to the unknown, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 11:39
Poetic Licence said:
A mind drifting in to the unknown, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 11:39
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A look into the vast beyond. Nicely framed in the night sky. Beautiful
January 31st, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
A look into the vast beyond. Nicely framed in the night sky. Beautiful
January 31st, 2025 09:07
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