Comments received on poems by RSM0812
The Garden
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks from darkness and its alur. It is seductive in its shadows and feels peaceful. Nicely written
August 14th, 2025 07:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks from darkness and its alur. It is seductive in its shadows and feels peaceful. Nicely written
August 14th, 2025 07:36
The Human Soul
RSM0812 said:
It means your soul will live after your death. Lol
August 13th, 2025 19:13
RSM0812 said:
It means your soul will live after your death. Lol
August 13th, 2025 19:13
The Human Soul
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely but most unusual pairing of the soul and death that boggles the mind and leaves one to wonder. Nicely done
August 13th, 2025 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely but most unusual pairing of the soul and death that boggles the mind and leaves one to wonder. Nicely done
August 13th, 2025 13:12
My Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphoric poem of love using a common symbol. A lovely write
August 12th, 2025 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful metaphoric poem of love using a common symbol. A lovely write
August 12th, 2025 09:09
Black and White
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the flow and feel as well as internal rhyme in this poem a fave
August 11th, 2025 11:01
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the flow and feel as well as internal rhyme in this poem a fave
August 11th, 2025 11:01
Dove
sorenbarrett said:
A peaceful feel to this poem that speaks in symbols of deeper things it calls out. Nicely done
August 10th, 2025 21:05
sorenbarrett said:
A peaceful feel to this poem that speaks in symbols of deeper things it calls out. Nicely done
August 10th, 2025 21:05
Inner Struggle
sorenbarrett said:
Oh if we only knew. A good read with great images. Nicely said
August 9th, 2025 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
Oh if we only knew. A good read with great images. Nicely said
August 9th, 2025 12:02
Love Poem
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic in its pledges this poem speaks to commitment in love and its lasting nature. Nicely done
August 7th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic in its pledges this poem speaks to commitment in love and its lasting nature. Nicely done
August 7th, 2025 05:14
Life is a Gift
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for this lovely poem, a reminder of what we too often fail to see in the busyness of life. You capture the beauty of being in each precious moment. Love it!!
August 6th, 2025 10:44
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for this lovely poem, a reminder of what we too often fail to see in the busyness of life. You capture the beauty of being in each precious moment. Love it!!
August 6th, 2025 10:44
Life is a Gift
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem they say. Enjoy the day. In metaphor the same cycles of life roll on. Nicely penned
August 6th, 2025 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem they say. Enjoy the day. In metaphor the same cycles of life roll on. Nicely penned
August 6th, 2025 06:48
My Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love veiled in metaphor of the thickest weave, no lace here. Very nicely done
August 5th, 2025 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love veiled in metaphor of the thickest weave, no lace here. Very nicely done
August 5th, 2025 08:16
Natures Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
Magical words woven into rhyme paint a dramatic picture in black a fave
August 4th, 2025 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
Magical words woven into rhyme paint a dramatic picture in black a fave
August 4th, 2025 08:16
Quiet Repose
Bella Shepard said:
You describe a love so beautiful that to lose yourself in it, is to find perfection. Soft and lovely the flow of words.
August 3rd, 2025 12:28
Bella Shepard said:
You describe a love so beautiful that to lose yourself in it, is to find perfection. Soft and lovely the flow of words.
August 3rd, 2025 12:28
Quiet Repose
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the theme of deep love and longing, conveying the poet\'s emotional attachment and dependence on their beloved. The speaker expresses a profound sense of loss and despair in the absence of their loved one, highlighting the joy and beauty that this love brings to their life.
August 3rd, 2025 07:28
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the theme of deep love and longing, conveying the poet\'s emotional attachment and dependence on their beloved. The speaker expresses a profound sense of loss and despair in the absence of their loved one, highlighting the joy and beauty that this love brings to their life.
August 3rd, 2025 07:28
Quiet Repose
sorenbarrett said:
Nice meter and flow in this love poem well written.
August 3rd, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Nice meter and flow in this love poem well written.
August 3rd, 2025 04:44
Lost in Love
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a dream of serenity nicely set to rhyme. Well done
August 2nd, 2025 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a dream of serenity nicely set to rhyme. Well done
August 2nd, 2025 13:22
Little Raindrop.
sorenbarrett said:
Nature\'s sadness portrayed in this poem. Nicely imaged and in rhyme. Well done
July 31st, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Nature\'s sadness portrayed in this poem. Nicely imaged and in rhyme. Well done
July 31st, 2025 04:13
Devils Soul
Bella Shepard said:
A chilling picture of what awaits when we give up the moral soul. Disquieting, but very powerful, and definitely to be contemplated.
July 30th, 2025 09:30
Bella Shepard said:
A chilling picture of what awaits when we give up the moral soul. Disquieting, but very powerful, and definitely to be contemplated.
July 30th, 2025 09:30
Devils Soul
Poetic Licence said:
Dark but very poignant in today\'s world, when you look around its easy to think the devil is winning, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 06:07
Poetic Licence said:
Dark but very poignant in today\'s world, when you look around its easy to think the devil is winning, enjoyed the read
July 30th, 2025 06:07
Devils Soul
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of darkness and horror. It calls to peoples fears. Nicely written
July 30th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of darkness and horror. It calls to peoples fears. Nicely written
July 30th, 2025 04:32
Love and Pain
sorenbarrett said:
The first two lines, to me reflect aging and the passage of time. So well worded and imaged. The second stanza forgiveness and hope, while the third reveals how love blinds one to passion of the past. The last two lines are ambiguous depending on how the reader takes the earlier stanzas. It may be that continued loss is the pain that lingers with patience in the form of love awaits to change or more positively a persistent and undying love awaits the inevitable reunion with what is still a stranger and is willing to suffer the ongoing pain of separation until such a time. A fave
July 29th, 2025 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
The first two lines, to me reflect aging and the passage of time. So well worded and imaged. The second stanza forgiveness and hope, while the third reveals how love blinds one to passion of the past. The last two lines are ambiguous depending on how the reader takes the earlier stanzas. It may be that continued loss is the pain that lingers with patience in the form of love awaits to change or more positively a persistent and undying love awaits the inevitable reunion with what is still a stranger and is willing to suffer the ongoing pain of separation until such a time. A fave
July 29th, 2025 06:51
Empty Words
sorenbarrett said:
Listening for a loved ones words sets the tone in this poem and the longing can be hear throughout. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 15:07
sorenbarrett said:
Listening for a loved ones words sets the tone in this poem and the longing can be hear throughout. Nicely done
July 28th, 2025 15:07
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