Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Horrizons in Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
Mea culpa seems the theme of this poem. The frailty of man and need for higher power to guard and protect is accompanied with the excuse of being just human. Mea culpa, mea maxima culpa. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
Mea culpa seems the theme of this poem. The frailty of man and need for higher power to guard and protect is accompanied with the excuse of being just human. Mea culpa, mea maxima culpa. Nicely done
November 4th, 2025 08:05
Dying Star
Bella Shepard said:
As everything is born, so it must die. You relate the story of our dying sun, an event we find impossible to conceive of, yet will ultimately happen. You capture the essence of the inevitable end in beautiful imagery, and the emotion of humanity\'s fate. Well done!
November 3rd, 2025 14:47
Bella Shepard said:
As everything is born, so it must die. You relate the story of our dying sun, an event we find impossible to conceive of, yet will ultimately happen. You capture the essence of the inevitable end in beautiful imagery, and the emotion of humanity\'s fate. Well done!
November 3rd, 2025 14:47
Dying Star
sorenbarrett said:
Here there seems to be a theme of soaring but yet of dying and falling from sight. Nicely written with periodic rhyme it flows well.
November 3rd, 2025 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
Here there seems to be a theme of soaring but yet of dying and falling from sight. Nicely written with periodic rhyme it flows well.
November 3rd, 2025 09:32
The Midnight Ocean Cove
NinjaGirl said:
I especially love the first line--how water can be thirsty because it\'s salty. Beautifully written
November 2nd, 2025 21:35
NinjaGirl said:
I especially love the first line--how water can be thirsty because it\'s salty. Beautifully written
November 2nd, 2025 21:35
The Midnight Ocean Cove
Bella Shepard said:
Outstanding imagery, beautiful rhyme and flow, this is the stuff dreams are made of!
November 2nd, 2025 10:04
Bella Shepard said:
Outstanding imagery, beautiful rhyme and flow, this is the stuff dreams are made of!
November 2nd, 2025 10:04
The Midnight Ocean Cove
sorenbarrett said:
Great wording creating images in this poem that seems to rock one to sleep in another sphere and dimension. Nicely done
November 2nd, 2025 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
Great wording creating images in this poem that seems to rock one to sleep in another sphere and dimension. Nicely done
November 2nd, 2025 08:36
The Hoops
sorenbarrett said:
This one had me going from shadow boxing to basketball. Nicely written a fun read
November 1st, 2025 19:43
sorenbarrett said:
This one had me going from shadow boxing to basketball. Nicely written a fun read
November 1st, 2025 19:43
A Moment
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the way you wrap this poem up! Tbh I’m biased because I’m a sucker for a verb ending any poem - it’s just so impactful. But this one was really nice 🤍
November 1st, 2025 01:37
Rocky Lagou said:
I love the way you wrap this poem up! Tbh I’m biased because I’m a sucker for a verb ending any poem - it’s just so impactful. But this one was really nice 🤍
November 1st, 2025 01:37
A Moment
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal love poem I suppose. Intriguing and mind puzzling. Very nice
October 31st, 2025 12:32
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal love poem I suppose. Intriguing and mind puzzling. Very nice
October 31st, 2025 12:32
The warm sun
arqios said:
...it gives and it also takes away. What a mighty source it is. Photosynthesis was quite a fascinating unit in primary school science🙏🕊️
October 28th, 2025 05:19
arqios said:
...it gives and it also takes away. What a mighty source it is. Photosynthesis was quite a fascinating unit in primary school science🙏🕊️
October 28th, 2025 05:19
The warm sun
sorenbarrett said:
Majestic and grand in its theme and symbol. Interesting that it is presented as a she in that the sun is traditionally seen as a he but it makes some sense in that as a nurturer the sun could well be seen as a mother. Well done
October 27th, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
Majestic and grand in its theme and symbol. Interesting that it is presented as a she in that the sun is traditionally seen as a he but it makes some sense in that as a nurturer the sun could well be seen as a mother. Well done
October 27th, 2025 05:28
Untittled
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that drips with feeling. An assertion and recounting of what is. Nicely worded and with good flow
October 26th, 2025 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem that drips with feeling. An assertion and recounting of what is. Nicely worded and with good flow
October 26th, 2025 09:38
The ocean Cove
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of longing, escape, and the tranquil beauty of nature, specifically through the imagery of the ocean and a desire for connection. It reflects both a yearning for an idyllic place and the emotional turbulence associated with love and rest.
October 26th, 2025 07:49
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of longing, escape, and the tranquil beauty of nature, specifically through the imagery of the ocean and a desire for connection. It reflects both a yearning for an idyllic place and the emotional turbulence associated with love and rest.
October 26th, 2025 07:49
The ocean Cove
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation to a love party is what I read into this poem. Very nice.
October 25th, 2025 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation to a love party is what I read into this poem. Very nice.
October 25th, 2025 10:01
Oh Nightmare
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the duality of dreams and nightmares, exploring the themes of solitude, introspection, and the quest for peace amidst life\'s struggles. It reflects on the complexities of existence—life and death, fear and comfort—ultimately expressing a longing for love and connection.
October 24th, 2025 17:01
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the duality of dreams and nightmares, exploring the themes of solitude, introspection, and the quest for peace amidst life\'s struggles. It reflects on the complexities of existence—life and death, fear and comfort—ultimately expressing a longing for love and connection.
October 24th, 2025 17:01
Oh Nightmare
sorenbarrett said:
Nightmare of dream this poem speaks of birth and love. Nicely written
October 24th, 2025 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
Nightmare of dream this poem speaks of birth and love. Nicely written
October 24th, 2025 08:46
The phenomenon
Friendship said:
Well-written, my friend; your poem explores the complexities of love, depicting it as a multifaceted experience that involves both joy and pain. It emphasizes the transient and fragile nature of love, likening it to sand—both small and infinite, highlighting how it can be easily lost yet cherished.
October 23rd, 2025 11:35
Friendship said:
Well-written, my friend; your poem explores the complexities of love, depicting it as a multifaceted experience that involves both joy and pain. It emphasizes the transient and fragile nature of love, likening it to sand—both small and infinite, highlighting how it can be easily lost yet cherished.
October 23rd, 2025 11:35
The phenomenon
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is and a wonderful gift it is. A lovely write about one thing that people share in common with other animals
October 23rd, 2025 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed it is and a wonderful gift it is. A lovely write about one thing that people share in common with other animals
October 23rd, 2025 07:39
The Defiant Ocean
sorenbarrett said:
This write is nicely worded leaving a melancholic feeling a haunted sense. Well done
October 22nd, 2025 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
This write is nicely worded leaving a melancholic feeling a haunted sense. Well done
October 22nd, 2025 08:34
My nightmare
sorenbarrett said:
A poem beautiful in wording, imagery and flow it rolls off the tongue to be lapped up by the brain. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
A poem beautiful in wording, imagery and flow it rolls off the tongue to be lapped up by the brain. Nicely done
October 21st, 2025 05:31
My Only One
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, your poem revolves around the intense emotions associated with love, desire, and longing. It explores the dual nature of passion — its beauty and its burdens — highlighting a yearning for physical and emotional connection with a beloved.
October 20th, 2025 17:27
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, your poem revolves around the intense emotions associated with love, desire, and longing. It explores the dual nature of passion — its beauty and its burdens — highlighting a yearning for physical and emotional connection with a beloved.
October 20th, 2025 17:27
My Only One
sorenbarrett said:
A vampiric poem that builds until its reveal. A good write
October 20th, 2025 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
A vampiric poem that builds until its reveal. A good write
October 20th, 2025 11:57
The Sigh of Death
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful this poem speaks of the perfection and imperfection and cycle of life and death. So well integrated and written in poetic metaphor and rhyme. A wonderful write and a fave
October 19th, 2025 06:01
sorenbarrett said:
Simply beautiful this poem speaks of the perfection and imperfection and cycle of life and death. So well integrated and written in poetic metaphor and rhyme. A wonderful write and a fave
October 19th, 2025 06:01
Divine Soul
sorenbarrett said:
In reading this Krishna came to mind. A beautiful poem that feels peaceful in its culmination. It is full of nature and the cycle of life. Very nicely worded and crafted.
October 18th, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
In reading this Krishna came to mind. A beautiful poem that feels peaceful in its culmination. It is full of nature and the cycle of life. Very nicely worded and crafted.
October 18th, 2025 06:21
Breath
arqios said:
Beautifully heartfelt. I\'m liking how the imagery moves from breath to stars, tying love to both the intimate and the cosmic. It reads like a vow that stretches beyond life itself, which makes the closing lines especially powerful.
October 17th, 2025 05:12
arqios said:
Beautifully heartfelt. I\'m liking how the imagery moves from breath to stars, tying love to both the intimate and the cosmic. It reads like a vow that stretches beyond life itself, which makes the closing lines especially powerful.
October 17th, 2025 05:12
Breath
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge in a poem, words of love spoken. Nicely worded the message is clear and I hope that the lover hears
October 16th, 2025 14:18
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge in a poem, words of love spoken. Nicely worded the message is clear and I hope that the lover hears
October 16th, 2025 14:18
The Garden
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning imagery my friend, I\'m there in the forest. What a wonderful tribute to nature and all that she bestows upon us. Beautiful rhyming lines that flow so gently, this is truly a retreat of peace.
October 15th, 2025 12:19
Bella Shepard said:
Stunning imagery my friend, I\'m there in the forest. What a wonderful tribute to nature and all that she bestows upon us. Beautiful rhyming lines that flow so gently, this is truly a retreat of peace.
October 15th, 2025 12:19
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