Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Natures Heart
sorenbarrett said:
Here the heart becomes surreal and takes on more than sympathy. Lovely
June 7th, 2026 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
Here the heart becomes surreal and takes on more than sympathy. Lovely
June 7th, 2026 10:48
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write that speaks poetically of angels and our journey onward. Well done
June 6th, 2026 15:30
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write that speaks poetically of angels and our journey onward. Well done
June 6th, 2026 15:30
Neutral
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words for a beautiful thought. Well expressed
June 4th, 2026 07:07
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words for a beautiful thought. Well expressed
June 4th, 2026 07:07
Sleep
sorenbarrett said:
A restless poem of energy not contained and what is left behind. Nicely done
June 3rd, 2026 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
A restless poem of energy not contained and what is left behind. Nicely done
June 3rd, 2026 06:24
Untitled
Durdica Porobija said:
An introspective, psychological poem that also highlights the existential question of why in a silent sky. Very moving!
May 30th, 2026 06:52
Durdica Porobija said:
An introspective, psychological poem that also highlights the existential question of why in a silent sky. Very moving!
May 30th, 2026 06:52
Ethreal Dawn
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of love, the weight of emotion, and the interplay between light and darkness. It evokes imagery of nature and the cosmos, suggesting a connection between personal emotions and the wider universe.
May 23rd, 2026 09:14
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of love, the weight of emotion, and the interplay between light and darkness. It evokes imagery of nature and the cosmos, suggesting a connection between personal emotions and the wider universe.
May 23rd, 2026 09:14
Ethreal Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written and well worded with rhyme very nice
May 23rd, 2026 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written and well worded with rhyme very nice
May 23rd, 2026 05:59
Linger
sorenbarrett said:
There is a somber final feel to this poem. Nicely done
May 22nd, 2026 12:21
sorenbarrett said:
There is a somber final feel to this poem. Nicely done
May 22nd, 2026 12:21
The Bridge
arqios said:
Herein lies the essence and vital utility of bridges. Excellent and enjoyable 🕊️🙏
May 22nd, 2026 06:29
arqios said:
Herein lies the essence and vital utility of bridges. Excellent and enjoyable 🕊️🙏
May 22nd, 2026 06:29
The Bridge
sorenbarrett said:
Well crafted this poem paints a picture of danger and the carefree nature of challenging it. Nicely done and I love the last line that makes one wonder if one does meet eternity on it.
May 21st, 2026 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
Well crafted this poem paints a picture of danger and the carefree nature of challenging it. Nicely done and I love the last line that makes one wonder if one does meet eternity on it.
May 21st, 2026 14:24
The Bridge
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of transition, journey, and the interplay between life and death. It metaphorically uses a bridge to symbolize the passage from one state of existence to another, suggesting that love and eternal connection persist beyond physical separation.
May 21st, 2026 12:52
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of transition, journey, and the interplay between life and death. It metaphorically uses a bridge to symbolize the passage from one state of existence to another, suggesting that love and eternal connection persist beyond physical separation.
May 21st, 2026 12:52
The Peaceful Spring
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of a season for new life and growth. Well imaged it flowers in its verse
May 20th, 2026 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of a season for new life and growth. Well imaged it flowers in its verse
May 20th, 2026 10:37
The Angel
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyming was most interesting with its variance and change in the middle of the poem. Well done
May 19th, 2026 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
The rhyming was most interesting with its variance and change in the middle of the poem. Well done
May 19th, 2026 06:38
A Rose
Friendship said:
Nicely said , your poem symbolizes a beloved, representing both the allure and complexities of romantic affection.
May 17th, 2026 08:50
Friendship said:
Nicely said , your poem symbolizes a beloved, representing both the allure and complexities of romantic affection.
May 17th, 2026 08:50
A Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture poetically painted but is seems more in metaphor and for that the fave
May 17th, 2026 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture poetically painted but is seems more in metaphor and for that the fave
May 17th, 2026 06:31
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a reference to the cosmic wheel. Well written
May 16th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a reference to the cosmic wheel. Well written
May 16th, 2026 04:34
Whispey leaf
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor well crafted loved it a fave
May 15th, 2026 06:31
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor well crafted loved it a fave
May 15th, 2026 06:31
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