Comments received on poems by RSM0812
The Bench
sorenbarrett said:
The truth lies beneath the surface. We all put on faces only to drop the mask on occasion. A metaphor as deep as the soul. I loved this poem and am giving it a fave.
March 8th, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
The truth lies beneath the surface. We all put on faces only to drop the mask on occasion. A metaphor as deep as the soul. I loved this poem and am giving it a fave.
March 8th, 2025 13:31
Look the other way
Poetic Licence said:
All too often people close their eyes and ears, rather than acting on what they see and hear, enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 13:47
Poetic Licence said:
All too often people close their eyes and ears, rather than acting on what they see and hear, enjoyed the read
March 7th, 2025 13:47
Look the other way
sorenbarrett said:
Closing one\'s eyes can be so easy. A read with deeper meaning
March 7th, 2025 11:15
sorenbarrett said:
Closing one\'s eyes can be so easy. A read with deeper meaning
March 7th, 2025 11:15
The Lonely Rose
Poetic Licence said:
This simply a wonderful piece of writing,loved it
March 5th, 2025 14:06
Poetic Licence said:
This simply a wonderful piece of writing,loved it
March 5th, 2025 14:06
The Lonely Rose
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! Brilliant! Every once in a while on this site I read something that is truly great. This poem worthy of any book is so classical in form but the message drives deep. A true masterpiece I congratulate you and am envious.
March 5th, 2025 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
Wow!! Brilliant! Every once in a while on this site I read something that is truly great. This poem worthy of any book is so classical in form but the message drives deep. A true masterpiece I congratulate you and am envious.
March 5th, 2025 11:41
My love, My Pulse
sorenbarrett said:
The unity of all is encompassed in this poem, interrelationships, symbiosis and how everything fits. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
The unity of all is encompassed in this poem, interrelationships, symbiosis and how everything fits. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 09:25
Farewell Winter
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful painting of aged winter personified and spring as well a younger wife beautiful in her blooming. Very nice
March 2nd, 2025 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful painting of aged winter personified and spring as well a younger wife beautiful in her blooming. Very nice
March 2nd, 2025 15:05
Farewell Winter
Poetic Licence said:
At last the sun has ended its vacation, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 14:58
Poetic Licence said:
At last the sun has ended its vacation, enjoyed the read
March 2nd, 2025 14:58
Farewell Winter
arqios said:
So reminds me of my wife and myself! Now I’m melting like Olaf ( ⛄️ from Frozen fame) 🙏🏻🕊️
March 2nd, 2025 12:38
arqios said:
So reminds me of my wife and myself! Now I’m melting like Olaf ( ⛄️ from Frozen fame) 🙏🏻🕊️
March 2nd, 2025 12:38
Scam
sorenbarrett said:
Open to many interpretations this one I took as each or our own meat sacks that are only on rent. Lovely
March 1st, 2025 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
Open to many interpretations this one I took as each or our own meat sacks that are only on rent. Lovely
March 1st, 2025 11:33
She
Poetic Licence said:
Well expressed and layered write i enjoyed reading
February 26th, 2025 12:52
Poetic Licence said:
Well expressed and layered write i enjoyed reading
February 26th, 2025 12:52
She
sorenbarrett said:
Dramatic this poem that could be taken as a metaphor as well. Very nicely done.
February 26th, 2025 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
Dramatic this poem that could be taken as a metaphor as well. Very nicely done.
February 26th, 2025 09:40
Our Song
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written piece which feels smooth as you read through, yet has a dark undercurrent, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:50
Poetic Licence said:
A beautifully written piece which feels smooth as you read through, yet has a dark undercurrent, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:50
Our Song
sorenbarrett said:
Masterfully written this poem has a wonderful flow and rhyme to it and the meaning is deep and rather heavy. A absolutely wonderful piece that I wish I had written. A definite fave
February 25th, 2025 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
Masterfully written this poem has a wonderful flow and rhyme to it and the meaning is deep and rather heavy. A absolutely wonderful piece that I wish I had written. A definite fave
February 25th, 2025 03:32
Oh Tender Tongue
NafisaSB said:
your ecstasy shines out - all the best for much more
February 24th, 2025 00:24
NafisaSB said:
your ecstasy shines out - all the best for much more
February 24th, 2025 00:24
Oh Tender Tongue
arqios said:
A stirring expression and poetic rendition. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 23rd, 2025 14:35
arqios said:
A stirring expression and poetic rendition. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 23rd, 2025 14:35
Oh Tender Tongue
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with good rhyme and underlying meaning. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 11:42
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with good rhyme and underlying meaning. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 11:42
Tick Tock
sorenbarrett said:
Apocalyptic in nature is the feel that I get from this poem. The passage of time is emphasized and it seems dark. Nicely expressed.
February 22nd, 2025 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
Apocalyptic in nature is the feel that I get from this poem. The passage of time is emphasized and it seems dark. Nicely expressed.
February 22nd, 2025 13:30
Tinkering with Control
Poetic Licence said:
Greed the creator of monsters, the tool of destruction, the illness in today\'s world, enjoyed the read
February 19th, 2025 12:52
Poetic Licence said:
Greed the creator of monsters, the tool of destruction, the illness in today\'s world, enjoyed the read
February 19th, 2025 12:52
Tinkering with Control
sorenbarrett said:
Greed one of the primary hard wired human traits that makes society and breaks society. Good write
February 19th, 2025 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
Greed one of the primary hard wired human traits that makes society and breaks society. Good write
February 19th, 2025 11:30
Toungue twister
sorenbarrett said:
Great internal rhyme in this piece that helps in the flow. Very nice.
February 18th, 2025 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
Great internal rhyme in this piece that helps in the flow. Very nice.
February 18th, 2025 14:23
My dreams
arqios said:
Like how you positioned strength and gentleness in one seamless movement, that speaks heaps and heaps🙏🏻🕊
February 17th, 2025 18:39
arqios said:
Like how you positioned strength and gentleness in one seamless movement, that speaks heaps and heaps🙏🏻🕊
February 17th, 2025 18:39
My dreams
sorenbarrett said:
Many live their dreams as their reality. A wonderful write
February 17th, 2025 11:14
sorenbarrett said:
Many live their dreams as their reality. A wonderful write
February 17th, 2025 11:14
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