Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Loss and Gain
Poetic Licence said:
A well written write around redemption and forgiveness, nicely expressed
April 7th, 2025 02:18
Poetic Licence said:
A well written write around redemption and forgiveness, nicely expressed
April 7th, 2025 02:18
Loss and Gain
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of redemption. Not bright but dark it cries out. Nicely written
April 6th, 2025 11:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of redemption. Not bright but dark it cries out. Nicely written
April 6th, 2025 11:56
Awaiting The Will
Poetic Licence said:
Ignorance is bliss until it is no more, and we all arrive at our final destination, enjoyed the read
April 6th, 2025 02:17
Poetic Licence said:
Ignorance is bliss until it is no more, and we all arrive at our final destination, enjoyed the read
April 6th, 2025 02:17
Awaiting The Will
sorenbarrett said:
The tree of knowledge has a price. They say ignorance is bliss and so it might be until it ends. Death is the stopping place. A deep write
April 5th, 2025 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
The tree of knowledge has a price. They say ignorance is bliss and so it might be until it ends. Death is the stopping place. A deep write
April 5th, 2025 11:38
Untittled
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write that can have many meanings, enjoyed the flow of the read
April 4th, 2025 12:27
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly crafted write that can have many meanings, enjoyed the flow of the read
April 4th, 2025 12:27
Untittled
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme after rhyme in a poem of metaphor. Nicely written
April 4th, 2025 11:07
sorenbarrett said:
Rhyme after rhyme in a poem of metaphor. Nicely written
April 4th, 2025 11:07
Raindrop
Poetic Licence said:
Nature\'s life blood and cleanser, lovely imagery as you read, enjoyed the read
April 3rd, 2025 10:42
Poetic Licence said:
Nature\'s life blood and cleanser, lovely imagery as you read, enjoyed the read
April 3rd, 2025 10:42
Raindrop
sorenbarrett said:
Some great images here, I saw the line (umbrella, rainbow, waters flow) and missed the first comma reading it umbrella rainbow which was such an image the rainbow coming after the rain and a promise of protection. Great rhyme patterns internal and line end very nice and leaving a cleansing feeling
April 3rd, 2025 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
Some great images here, I saw the line (umbrella, rainbow, waters flow) and missed the first comma reading it umbrella rainbow which was such an image the rainbow coming after the rain and a promise of protection. Great rhyme patterns internal and line end very nice and leaving a cleansing feeling
April 3rd, 2025 08:19
Betterfly
Poetic Licence said:
You can see wonderful imagery as you read this delightful read, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 09:41
Poetic Licence said:
You can see wonderful imagery as you read this delightful read, enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 09:41
Betterfly
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem sparkling with vivid images and a metaphor of love as well. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2025 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem sparkling with vivid images and a metaphor of love as well. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2025 08:29
Decay
Poetic Licence said:
To me a sense of a damaged and confused my mind, nicely expressed and written
April 1st, 2025 11:24
Poetic Licence said:
To me a sense of a damaged and confused my mind, nicely expressed and written
April 1st, 2025 11:24
Decay
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic words that weave a picture in the mind. Nicely done
April 1st, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
Very poetic words that weave a picture in the mind. Nicely done
April 1st, 2025 09:37
Stay
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written piece of poetry, and there lays hope, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:24
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written piece of poetry, and there lays hope, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:24
Tailand
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write on devastation that has happened in this country but also the ongoing fight it continues itself to find peace, lovely write
March 30th, 2025 11:25
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write on devastation that has happened in this country but also the ongoing fight it continues itself to find peace, lovely write
March 30th, 2025 11:25
Tailand
sorenbarrett said:
Strong in metaphor this poem speaks of a country deciding its destiny at the peril of destruction and many lost. Very nicely written
March 30th, 2025 10:42
sorenbarrett said:
Strong in metaphor this poem speaks of a country deciding its destiny at the peril of destruction and many lost. Very nicely written
March 30th, 2025 10:42
Rest
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and intriguing, the inherent calm of the rest invoked pervading as I mull the suggestion playing itself out. Sweetly rendered in tasteful brevity with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy whose serenity seems to call, thank you for sharing.
March 29th, 2025 14:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and intriguing, the inherent calm of the rest invoked pervading as I mull the suggestion playing itself out. Sweetly rendered in tasteful brevity with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy whose serenity seems to call, thank you for sharing.
March 29th, 2025 14:46
Rest
Poetic Licence said:
A clever interesting write asking how we obtain peace and a request for peace themselves, enjoyed the read
March 29th, 2025 10:46
Poetic Licence said:
A clever interesting write asking how we obtain peace and a request for peace themselves, enjoyed the read
March 29th, 2025 10:46
Rest
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for peace and raises questions of how peace is obtained. Cleanly written and with good meter and thought provoking
March 29th, 2025 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for peace and raises questions of how peace is obtained. Cleanly written and with good meter and thought provoking
March 29th, 2025 08:25
Oh Robin
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful image but I feel that there is a metaphor here as well. So nicely stated
March 28th, 2025 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful image but I feel that there is a metaphor here as well. So nicely stated
March 28th, 2025 09:02
Greed
Poetic Licence said:
Well written write that flows really nicely as you read through, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 07:47
Poetic Licence said:
Well written write that flows really nicely as you read through, enjoyed the read
March 27th, 2025 07:47
Greed
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme and internal rhyme that carry this poem and give it more power. Very nicely done
March 27th, 2025 07:36
sorenbarrett said:
Great rhyme and internal rhyme that carry this poem and give it more power. Very nicely done
March 27th, 2025 07:36
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