Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Little Flower
Poetic Licence said:
Delicate write with lovely imagery, leave him be in his place of harmony, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 08:38
Poetic Licence said:
Delicate write with lovely imagery, leave him be in his place of harmony, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 08:38
Rain
Poetic Licence said:
The magic and power of nature\'s liquid food, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 10:01
Poetic Licence said:
The magic and power of nature\'s liquid food, enjoyed the read
May 11th, 2025 10:01
Rain
sorenbarrett said:
A truly beautiful poem of life, regeneration, cleansing and how that lifegiving substance falls from heaven. A poem of peace and a brighter sky. Loved it
May 11th, 2025 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
A truly beautiful poem of life, regeneration, cleansing and how that lifegiving substance falls from heaven. A poem of peace and a brighter sky. Loved it
May 11th, 2025 09:32
Rain
arqios said:
Rain poems are the best. And this one brings that feel of the touch of rain\'s fingers - hair plastering and beaded drops surfing our face. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 11th, 2025 07:29
arqios said:
Rain poems are the best. And this one brings that feel of the touch of rain\'s fingers - hair plastering and beaded drops surfing our face. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 11th, 2025 07:29
Ambrosia
Poetic Licence said:
Now that\'s one for the sweet pallet, beautifully written
May 10th, 2025 06:58
Poetic Licence said:
Now that\'s one for the sweet pallet, beautifully written
May 10th, 2025 06:58
Ambrosia
sorenbarrett said:
What beautiful words adorn this setting of sweet delight
May 10th, 2025 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
What beautiful words adorn this setting of sweet delight
May 10th, 2025 06:35
Smote by the Devil
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of Dante and his Inferno. Fire and brimstone is the smell here. Graphic images and so it may well be in metaphor what we experience here in recognition of hurt we have caused. Well written in rhyme and flowing meter
May 9th, 2025 08:32
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of Dante and his Inferno. Fire and brimstone is the smell here. Graphic images and so it may well be in metaphor what we experience here in recognition of hurt we have caused. Well written in rhyme and flowing meter
May 9th, 2025 08:32
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! A poem of diversity that at times mixes but like oil and water separates and fights union. A fave
May 8th, 2025 07:00
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant! A poem of diversity that at times mixes but like oil and water separates and fights union. A fave
May 8th, 2025 07:00
Oh Narrow Love
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The language is tender and heartfelt, with a rhythmic flow that enhances its emotional depth. A touching reflection on love\'s warmth and grace!
May 7th, 2025 21:40
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
The language is tender and heartfelt, with a rhythmic flow that enhances its emotional depth. A touching reflection on love\'s warmth and grace!
May 7th, 2025 21:40
Oh Narrow Love
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful wish and message put in poetic form. Very nice
May 7th, 2025 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful wish and message put in poetic form. Very nice
May 7th, 2025 09:20
Sunday Sunrise
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written piece of poetry, with meaning, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 07:48
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written piece of poetry, with meaning, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 07:48
Spring Breeze
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice sonnet and well written with great images and metaphor. Lovely
May 6th, 2025 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice sonnet and well written with great images and metaphor. Lovely
May 6th, 2025 06:34
Sunday Sunrise
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words woven here in metaphor and with deep meaning. So well written a fave
May 5th, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words woven here in metaphor and with deep meaning. So well written a fave
May 5th, 2025 06:45
As Petals Fall
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this poem gives one pause and provokes thoughts. Very nice
May 4th, 2025 10:47
sorenbarrett said:
Full of metaphor this poem gives one pause and provokes thoughts. Very nice
May 4th, 2025 10:47
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in wonderful rhyme and good flow. A love poem well written
May 3rd, 2025 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in wonderful rhyme and good flow. A love poem well written
May 3rd, 2025 05:55
My Love is a Butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful image, that of a butterfly. A great metaphor of love or of one loved. Colorful and seemingly carefree yet so vulnerable, they do no harm, bring beauty in their flight of color and pollinate flowers of beauty. Peaceful thy make no sound. A wonderful write.
May 2nd, 2025 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
Such a beautiful image, that of a butterfly. A great metaphor of love or of one loved. Colorful and seemingly carefree yet so vulnerable, they do no harm, bring beauty in their flight of color and pollinate flowers of beauty. Peaceful thy make no sound. A wonderful write.
May 2nd, 2025 08:04
A Single Tear
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of loneliness and sadness pervade this poem. Feelings of isolation and a coldness. Well written
May 1st, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of loneliness and sadness pervade this poem. Feelings of isolation and a coldness. Well written
May 1st, 2025 05:07
Tu es l\'amour de ma mine
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice love poem with great images and phrasing that lets the poem flow. Very nice
April 30th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice love poem with great images and phrasing that lets the poem flow. Very nice
April 30th, 2025 08:59
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