Comments received on poems by RSM0812
Frozen Time
sorenbarrett said:
The view of the working man a communal desire to share equally but such is not nature whose fairness is measured in survival. Nicely written
September 4th, 2025 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
The view of the working man a communal desire to share equally but such is not nature whose fairness is measured in survival. Nicely written
September 4th, 2025 09:13
For Only You
sorenbarrett said:
Very touching a poem nicely built from the beginning and completed tying the ending to the start. The element of carrying one\'s loneliness in a box a nice touch. Very nicely done
September 3rd, 2025 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
Very touching a poem nicely built from the beginning and completed tying the ending to the start. The element of carrying one\'s loneliness in a box a nice touch. Very nicely done
September 3rd, 2025 04:50
My Pen
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of thoughts and feelings where drives and desires are addressed and in humor and strive where one chooses to roll the dice. Lovely
September 2nd, 2025 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
A poem full of thoughts and feelings where drives and desires are addressed and in humor and strive where one chooses to roll the dice. Lovely
September 2nd, 2025 07:33
Time standing Still
NafisaSB said:
time ticks for everyone, and for no one..good one here...
September 2nd, 2025 02:04
NafisaSB said:
time ticks for everyone, and for no one..good one here...
September 2nd, 2025 02:04
A Kiss
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and nicely rhymed this poem calls out for another. Nicely done
September 1st, 2025 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and nicely rhymed this poem calls out for another. Nicely done
September 1st, 2025 08:54
An empty Mug
Bella Shepard said:
The opposites of life coexist; my cup runeth over or the well is dry. When peace finally finds its seat at the table, then perhaps balance is at hand. This is what I feel here when reading your poem. A very thoughtful piece.
August 31st, 2025 13:45
Bella Shepard said:
The opposites of life coexist; my cup runeth over or the well is dry. When peace finally finds its seat at the table, then perhaps balance is at hand. This is what I feel here when reading your poem. A very thoughtful piece.
August 31st, 2025 13:45
An empty Mug
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a cynical view on love and life seen as an empty mug. I too feel this mood from time to time. Well written
August 31st, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a cynical view on love and life seen as an empty mug. I too feel this mood from time to time. Well written
August 31st, 2025 04:37
Time standing Still
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s comforting to have a constant in a world full of change. A lot of people make time to be the enemy, I love the way you described it in this work.
August 30th, 2025 19:46
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s comforting to have a constant in a world full of change. A lot of people make time to be the enemy, I love the way you described it in this work.
August 30th, 2025 19:46
Time standing Still
Bella Shepard said:
The mystery of time, in beautiful rhyme. Love it!
August 30th, 2025 13:20
Bella Shepard said:
The mystery of time, in beautiful rhyme. Love it!
August 30th, 2025 13:20
Time standing Still
sorenbarrett said:
This one I love and is a fave. It combines two well known proverbs into one. So nicely said in poetic style
August 30th, 2025 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
This one I love and is a fave. It combines two well known proverbs into one. So nicely said in poetic style
August 30th, 2025 11:41
Guild the Lilly
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely penned. This poem explores the metaphor of lover and rose. Well done
August 29th, 2025 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely penned. This poem explores the metaphor of lover and rose. Well done
August 29th, 2025 13:55
Guild the Lilly
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful metaphor for true love. The rose, perfection in and of itself, just by vitrue of its being. This was a joy to read!
August 29th, 2025 08:52
Bella Shepard said:
What a beautiful metaphor for true love. The rose, perfection in and of itself, just by vitrue of its being. This was a joy to read!
August 29th, 2025 08:52
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
This one rocks with religious feeling and the dichotomy of God and Satan and the soul. Nicely written
August 28th, 2025 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
This one rocks with religious feeling and the dichotomy of God and Satan and the soul. Nicely written
August 28th, 2025 08:38
A Ride From God
sorenbarrett said:
I enjoyed the light humor in this poem. If there was a God I think he would very much enjoy this depiction. Nicely said
August 27th, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
I enjoyed the light humor in this poem. If there was a God I think he would very much enjoy this depiction. Nicely said
August 27th, 2025 07:02
The Addictive Mind
sorenbarrett said:
Morals change for good and bad with time. A lovley write
August 26th, 2025 08:06
sorenbarrett said:
Morals change for good and bad with time. A lovley write
August 26th, 2025 08:06
Borrowed from eternity
sorenbarrett said:
Full of wordplay and metaphor it breaths. Nicely done
August 25th, 2025 15:12
sorenbarrett said:
Full of wordplay and metaphor it breaths. Nicely done
August 25th, 2025 15:12
The Flower in the Stone
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor here. Well done
August 24th, 2025 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting metaphor here. Well done
August 24th, 2025 06:35
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and meaningful with great images. Lovely a fave
August 23rd, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and meaningful with great images. Lovely a fave
August 23rd, 2025 09:26
The wolf an the snake
sorenbarrett said:
I love the roll of the rhyme in what seems to be a poem with almost Native American flavor. A most lovely write and a fave
August 22nd, 2025 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
I love the roll of the rhyme in what seems to be a poem with almost Native American flavor. A most lovely write and a fave
August 22nd, 2025 05:11
Laddy Boy
sorenbarrett said:
I hardly dare venture to speak on this beautiful poem. Wonderful wording and rhyme in a poem that is a bit obscure as to meaning where angels fear to tread
August 21st, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
I hardly dare venture to speak on this beautiful poem. Wonderful wording and rhyme in a poem that is a bit obscure as to meaning where angels fear to tread
August 21st, 2025 05:29
Lovers Rose
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice sonnet in most classical form. Lovely words
August 20th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice sonnet in most classical form. Lovely words
August 20th, 2025 04:17
Little Flower
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in this poem where love needs to be nurtured and cared for through the adversities of life. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in this poem where love needs to be nurtured and cared for through the adversities of life. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 05:05
People change
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief merged with life\'s struggles. Nicely written
August 18th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of faith and belief merged with life\'s struggles. Nicely written
August 18th, 2025 04:16
Dreamless Sleep
Poetic Licence said:
A really nice write with some wonderful imagery as you read, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:53
Poetic Licence said:
A really nice write with some wonderful imagery as you read, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:53
Dreamless Sleep
sorenbarrett said:
The cadence of this poem brought to mind a chant over a caldron and witches brew. It is filled with wonderful and magical images of the night. A lovely write
August 17th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
The cadence of this poem brought to mind a chant over a caldron and witches brew. It is filled with wonderful and magical images of the night. A lovely write
August 17th, 2025 04:38
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Woven within this poem is a dark thread of man that leaves a stain in the fabric. The poem holds feelings of the surreal and prophetic words that shake the soul
August 16th, 2025 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
Woven within this poem is a dark thread of man that leaves a stain in the fabric. The poem holds feelings of the surreal and prophetic words that shake the soul
August 16th, 2025 08:33
The lonely
sorenbarrett said:
Questions asked reminiscing in this poem that speaks of a relationship nicely done
August 15th, 2025 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Questions asked reminiscing in this poem that speaks of a relationship nicely done
August 15th, 2025 05:34
The Garden
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks from darkness and its alur. It is seductive in its shadows and feels peaceful. Nicely written
August 14th, 2025 07:36
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks from darkness and its alur. It is seductive in its shadows and feels peaceful. Nicely written
August 14th, 2025 07:36
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