Comments received on poems by accross_world_with_u
Can’t keep up!
Tony Grannell said:
Yes indeed, the virtue of patients seems to be vanishing with every technological breakthrough, as if the whole world is in a hurry. It is hard to keep up and in endeavouring to do so - time flies. We must sit back and smell the roses, as my parents use to say. Your poem is leisurely composed contradicting the theme therein which gives essence to your plight - \'I just can\'t keep up!\' A most enjoyable read.
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 13th, 2025 16:42
Tony Grannell said:
Yes indeed, the virtue of patients seems to be vanishing with every technological breakthrough, as if the whole world is in a hurry. It is hard to keep up and in endeavouring to do so - time flies. We must sit back and smell the roses, as my parents use to say. Your poem is leisurely composed contradicting the theme therein which gives essence to your plight - \'I just can\'t keep up!\' A most enjoyable read.
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 13th, 2025 16:42
Can’t keep up!
sorenbarrett said:
A fun and clever play on change and wording make this a most pleasurable read. Well done
June 1st, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A fun and clever play on change and wording make this a most pleasurable read. Well done
June 1st, 2025 04:33
Searching for my place
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s a long journey finding where we belong with the past always following us, once we put space between the past and ourselves the journey gets shorter, enjoyed the read
May 31st, 2025 02:27
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s a long journey finding where we belong with the past always following us, once we put space between the past and ourselves the journey gets shorter, enjoyed the read
May 31st, 2025 02:27
Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the message and the flow. Beautiful, my friend.🌹👏
May 30th, 2025 06:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the message and the flow. Beautiful, my friend.🌹👏
May 30th, 2025 06:46
Light
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful piece of writing with wonderful imagery, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 02:34
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful piece of writing with wonderful imagery, enjoyed the read
May 30th, 2025 02:34
Light
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely images painted in great rhyme in this short piece. Very nice
May 29th, 2025 20:46
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely images painted in great rhyme in this short piece. Very nice
May 29th, 2025 20:46
Through the Noise, My Love I won’t let go!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great write, creatively presented. God bless you and your boys, my friend! 🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 12:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great write, creatively presented. God bless you and your boys, my friend! 🌹👏
April 26th, 2025 12:25
Through the Noise, My Love I won’t let go!
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this noise I understand nothing but confusion. Fun creative read
April 26th, 2025 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this noise I understand nothing but confusion. Fun creative read
April 26th, 2025 05:24
Final Era
Tristan Robert Lange said:
We\'re here, aren\'t we? A truthful poem my friend. Who knows when the actual end will come, but we\'re heading straight for it, that is for sure. Well done my friend. 🌹👏
April 25th, 2025 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
We\'re here, aren\'t we? A truthful poem my friend. Who knows when the actual end will come, but we\'re heading straight for it, that is for sure. Well done my friend. 🌹👏
April 25th, 2025 08:07
Final Era
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that has many examples and wonderful images in rhyme that see this as the end of times and calls for recognition of this. Well written with great flow and organization. Nicely done
April 25th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that has many examples and wonderful images in rhyme that see this as the end of times and calls for recognition of this. Well written with great flow and organization. Nicely done
April 25th, 2025 03:55
Silent weapons For quiet wars
nephilim56 said:
a great read, enjoyed, everyday wars
April 25th, 2025 01:42
nephilim56 said:
a great read, enjoyed, everyday wars
April 25th, 2025 01:42
O Moj Balkane!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
May the peace you pray for be so, my friend. A touching poetic tribute and call to unity! Well done! 🌹👏
March 17th, 2025 14:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
May the peace you pray for be so, my friend. A touching poetic tribute and call to unity! Well done! 🌹👏
March 17th, 2025 14:52
Silent weapons For quiet wars
Poetic Licence said:
I love this write, all the weapons used daily by the masses but can be attributed to those currently in power, powerful write sending out an important message, great write
March 9th, 2025 03:29
Poetic Licence said:
I love this write, all the weapons used daily by the masses but can be attributed to those currently in power, powerful write sending out an important message, great write
March 9th, 2025 03:29
Silent weapons For quiet wars
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the arsenal of weapons listed here. They are used every day by many of us in social interactions which I call urban warfare. Well done with good rhyme
March 8th, 2025 19:48
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the arsenal of weapons listed here. They are used every day by many of us in social interactions which I call urban warfare. Well done with good rhyme
March 8th, 2025 19:48
Terrae clamor auxilium
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully expressing the slow destruction of our planet by mankind, Great piece of writing
February 10th, 2025 11:33
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully expressing the slow destruction of our planet by mankind, Great piece of writing
February 10th, 2025 11:33
Life
Poetic Licence said:
Few words yet powerful statement, summing up life to a T, enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 12:28
Poetic Licence said:
Few words yet powerful statement, summing up life to a T, enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 12:28
Drowning
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, my friend. It says a lot in its brevity. ❤️🙏 The emotions really come through.
February 2nd, 2025 07:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful, my friend. It says a lot in its brevity. ❤️🙏 The emotions really come through.
February 2nd, 2025 07:03
Drowning
Cheeky Missy said:
Exquisite in haunting brevity with excellent imagery and a keen poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 2nd, 2025 00:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Exquisite in haunting brevity with excellent imagery and a keen poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 2nd, 2025 00:46
One More Breath
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, my friend. Death is forever the muse. Thoroughly enjoyed this. 🌹
February 1st, 2025 08:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Well done, my friend. Death is forever the muse. Thoroughly enjoyed this. 🌹
February 1st, 2025 08:56
One More Breath
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the tenacious hold on life so nicely expressed in this marvelous poem. Shades of Dylan Thomas in this poem. \"Do not go softly into that good night\" So nicely said.
February 1st, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the tenacious hold on life so nicely expressed in this marvelous poem. Shades of Dylan Thomas in this poem. \"Do not go softly into that good night\" So nicely said.
February 1st, 2025 05:47
Pinky Promise
Poetic Licence said:
True friendship is worth it`s weight in gold, really enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 02:38
Poetic Licence said:
True friendship is worth it`s weight in gold, really enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 02:38
Why do I
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Poignant questions, my friend. Ones that I relate to in the asking, for sure. Well done! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 09:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Poignant questions, my friend. Ones that I relate to in the asking, for sure. Well done! 🌹👏
January 20th, 2025 09:41
The Odyssey of Life
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely poem about 2 hearts and souls making wonderful memories and then years later reflecting back on them, beautifully written
December 30th, 2024 04:04
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely poem about 2 hearts and souls making wonderful memories and then years later reflecting back on them, beautifully written
December 30th, 2024 04:04
Voices in my head
Poetic Licence said:
Very well written poem that i completely connect with and have and do go through the gauntlet of the voices..
December 27th, 2024 02:19
Poetic Licence said:
Very well written poem that i completely connect with and have and do go through the gauntlet of the voices..
December 27th, 2024 02:19
Left without You
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant and tenderly written dedication to someone who is deeply missed, an excellent poem
December 22nd, 2024 13:52
Poetic Licence said:
A very poignant and tenderly written dedication to someone who is deeply missed, an excellent poem
December 22nd, 2024 13:52
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