Comments received on poems by Neilton
The sycamore tree
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of looking back at days gone by, when freedom was found, Nicely expressed and written
May 20th, 2025 02:15
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of looking back at days gone by, when freedom was found, Nicely expressed and written
May 20th, 2025 02:15
The sycamore tree
arqios said:
Idyllic! Brings me back to that hole and root system that grew over the edge of a stream that we used to swim in, sometimes there are eels there as well.🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 00:46
arqios said:
Idyllic! Brings me back to that hole and root system that grew over the edge of a stream that we used to swim in, sometimes there are eels there as well.🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 00:46
The sycamore tree
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic and somewhat mystical it has feelings of loss but also freedom. Nicely written
May 19th, 2025 15:23
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic and somewhat mystical it has feelings of loss but also freedom. Nicely written
May 19th, 2025 15:23
Fly with me, little bird!
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation for freedom and choice in very nice metaphor. Very nice verse that well could be a song with chorus. Well done
May 13th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation for freedom and choice in very nice metaphor. Very nice verse that well could be a song with chorus. Well done
May 13th, 2025 03:47
Fly with me, little bird!
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, around that there is a better world out there, positive write nicely written
May 13th, 2025 03:16
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, around that there is a better world out there, positive write nicely written
May 13th, 2025 03:16
Fly with me, little bird!
arqios said:
I will not let the weight
of old winds bend
your wings any longer.
You will soar, not for escape,
but for discovery.
We will carve the sky
into new stories,
where no shadow lingers,
and no voice drags you back.
Your flight is not borrowed—
it belongs to you.
May 13th, 2025 02:49
arqios said:
I will not let the weight
of old winds bend
your wings any longer.
You will soar, not for escape,
but for discovery.
We will carve the sky
into new stories,
where no shadow lingers,
and no voice drags you back.
Your flight is not borrowed—
it belongs to you.
May 13th, 2025 02:49
Extraordinary
Poetic Licence said:
Sadly way too many of these people in todays world, with their vast back catalogue of ways to continue to hurt us, nicely expressed and written
May 12th, 2025 12:59
Poetic Licence said:
Sadly way too many of these people in todays world, with their vast back catalogue of ways to continue to hurt us, nicely expressed and written
May 12th, 2025 12:59
Extraordinary
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of such people in this world unfortunately. The poem highlights the ways that such people hurt others. Well written
May 12th, 2025 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of such people in this world unfortunately. The poem highlights the ways that such people hurt others. Well written
May 12th, 2025 11:38
Extraordinary
Cheeky Missy said:
Methinks that\'s why folk believe in \"karma\" and \"comeuppance,\" yet I fail to find any ground for such a happy thought, nor even justification for the desire, although we want it so badly. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 10:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Methinks that\'s why folk believe in \"karma\" and \"comeuppance,\" yet I fail to find any ground for such a happy thought, nor even justification for the desire, although we want it so badly. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 10:58
Little boys and their toys
arqios said:
True on the base level and so true extrapolated to other kindred configurations on life. Old boys with new toys in an endless cycle 🙏🏻🕊️
May 9th, 2025 19:36
arqios said:
True on the base level and so true extrapolated to other kindred configurations on life. Old boys with new toys in an endless cycle 🙏🏻🕊️
May 9th, 2025 19:36
Little boys and their toys
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very accurate write and sadly it is on the increase in this modern world, men seeing woman as disposable toys, nicely expressed and written
May 9th, 2025 09:36
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very accurate write and sadly it is on the increase in this modern world, men seeing woman as disposable toys, nicely expressed and written
May 9th, 2025 09:36
Little boys and their toys
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful metaphor with toys. Do they consider their romantic interests toys? I guess so. A most thought provoking and honest write.
May 9th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful metaphor with toys. Do they consider their romantic interests toys? I guess so. A most thought provoking and honest write.
May 9th, 2025 08:26
Lost but never gone
NafisaSB said:
wonderful message - i hope the resurrection happens soon, and justice is done , if not already in place
May 6th, 2025 00:28
NafisaSB said:
wonderful message - i hope the resurrection happens soon, and justice is done , if not already in place
May 6th, 2025 00:28
Lost but never gone
peto said:
Good to see you still writing
Intriguing always
Keep it up
May 4th, 2025 20:57
peto said:
Good to see you still writing
Intriguing always
Keep it up
May 4th, 2025 20:57
Lost but never gone
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded Neilton this challenge from the grave and beyond a metaphor I take for slights suffered in a past poetic life now like Lazarus returned from the grave to pronounce justice upon past offenders. Yes indeed I have missed you along with a few others that seem to have fallen by the wayside. My ears not acute enough, my brain not astute enough to see the executions have waited for their resurrection. Hope to hear much more.
May 4th, 2025 07:42
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded Neilton this challenge from the grave and beyond a metaphor I take for slights suffered in a past poetic life now like Lazarus returned from the grave to pronounce justice upon past offenders. Yes indeed I have missed you along with a few others that seem to have fallen by the wayside. My ears not acute enough, my brain not astute enough to see the executions have waited for their resurrection. Hope to hear much more.
May 4th, 2025 07:42
Waiting for my love
NafisaSB said:
this poem shines with loyalty, patience and love
hope the other person did finally enter
April 6th, 2025 02:54
NafisaSB said:
this poem shines with loyalty, patience and love
hope the other person did finally enter
April 6th, 2025 02:54
Unfulfilled love
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and evocative, rendered to effect with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 17:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and evocative, rendered to effect with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 17:18
Unfulfilled love
bam said:
\"For you can not live your life in the dark--Under the shadow of a puzzled man\" AHHHHH I love. I love love love.
March 30th, 2025 23:55
bam said:
\"For you can not live your life in the dark--Under the shadow of a puzzled man\" AHHHHH I love. I love love love.
March 30th, 2025 23:55
Unfulfilled love
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching, caring and loving write around the sisters current situation, you have conveyed the emotion and feeling in the write really well, enjoyed the read
March 30th, 2025 11:29
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching, caring and loving write around the sisters current situation, you have conveyed the emotion and feeling in the write really well, enjoyed the read
March 30th, 2025 11:29
Unfulfilled love
sorenbarrett said:
Writing from another perspective is great practice in understanding more than knowing but feeling and the two are far different. A lovely write that\'s feelings came through. How some young like newly potted plants dies while others live. Who\'s to say why and blame never brings them back. Loved the poem
March 30th, 2025 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
Writing from another perspective is great practice in understanding more than knowing but feeling and the two are far different. A lovely write that\'s feelings came through. How some young like newly potted plants dies while others live. Who\'s to say why and blame never brings them back. Loved the poem
March 30th, 2025 10:35
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