Comments received on poems by Neilton
The invisible prison
Doggerel Dave said:
First time I\'ve wandered in your direction, Neilton...through the crowd. I will return. Such straightforward anger coherently expressed needs to be read by me.
July 2nd, 2024 18:57
Doggerel Dave said:
First time I\'ve wandered in your direction, Neilton...through the crowd. I will return. Such straightforward anger coherently expressed needs to be read by me.
July 2nd, 2024 18:57
The invisible prison
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Release (Hu)Man from all condemnation.\"
Isn\'t that one of the hardest things to do? I\'m working on it!
July 2nd, 2024 18:55
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Release (Hu)Man from all condemnation.\"
Isn\'t that one of the hardest things to do? I\'m working on it!
July 2nd, 2024 18:55
The invisible prison
peto said:
You are becoming very accomplished at this writing lark Neilton
Some fantastic lines again
I\'ve seen that look in a dogs eyes
\"I laugh with your foolishness, I cry with your brutishness \" really impressive
I have a blind cat (rescued)
She is amazing and if anyone tried to abuse her in my presence I hate to think what may happen
Keep it up
You have a conscience and talent
Wonderful combination
July 2nd, 2024 13:49
peto said:
You are becoming very accomplished at this writing lark Neilton
Some fantastic lines again
I\'ve seen that look in a dogs eyes
\"I laugh with your foolishness, I cry with your brutishness \" really impressive
I have a blind cat (rescued)
She is amazing and if anyone tried to abuse her in my presence I hate to think what may happen
Keep it up
You have a conscience and talent
Wonderful combination
July 2nd, 2024 13:49
The invisible prison
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - being daft - you got out of that prison yet? If it\'s invisible, how will you know when you\'ve got out?! lol
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
July 2nd, 2024 13:40
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - being daft - you got out of that prison yet? If it\'s invisible, how will you know when you\'ve got out?! lol
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
July 2nd, 2024 13:40
The invisible prison
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse of any type is abhorrent whether to people or animals. A good write N.
July 2nd, 2024 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse of any type is abhorrent whether to people or animals. A good write N.
July 2nd, 2024 12:42
Nostalgia
peto said:
Your content is really good again Neilton
You also always seem to put a wee bit of yourself into your writing
Enjoying what I\'m reading from you
June 27th, 2024 15:29
peto said:
Your content is really good again Neilton
You also always seem to put a wee bit of yourself into your writing
Enjoying what I\'m reading from you
June 27th, 2024 15:29
Nostalgia
Thomas W Case said:
This is fantastic. You capture the longing for better days.
June 27th, 2024 12:14
Thomas W Case said:
This is fantastic. You capture the longing for better days.
June 27th, 2024 12:14
Coldplay
Thad Wilk said:
An uplifting and
Insightful write!! ✍️
So glad your
dream came true,
to read A delight!! 👍
Best wishes 🌹. Thad
June 27th, 2024 10:54
Thad Wilk said:
An uplifting and
Insightful write!! ✍️
So glad your
dream came true,
to read A delight!! 👍
Best wishes 🌹. Thad
June 27th, 2024 10:54
Does it end?
Mutley Ravishes said:
Every time the body feels tension
Work on relaxation
Every morning when you wake up
Do some Pranayama
Every time a thought feels
Not aligned with your high ideal
Return gently to this ideal
So that those thoughts
Cannot steal
The sun\'s rays
Patience, persistence
And faith
June 26th, 2024 18:29
Mutley Ravishes said:
Every time the body feels tension
Work on relaxation
Every morning when you wake up
Do some Pranayama
Every time a thought feels
Not aligned with your high ideal
Return gently to this ideal
So that those thoughts
Cannot steal
The sun\'s rays
Patience, persistence
And faith
June 26th, 2024 18:29
Does it end?
peto said:
You speak of being stuck in pain
An endless maze and sorrow
Yet it is hard to imagine the writer is suffering
Hoping you find the streets of luck more often
Talented
June 26th, 2024 15:02
peto said:
You speak of being stuck in pain
An endless maze and sorrow
Yet it is hard to imagine the writer is suffering
Hoping you find the streets of luck more often
Talented
June 26th, 2024 15:02
Does it end?
orchidee said:
My poems will always end. I could add \'THE END\' after the last lines, to make it obvious! lol.
i don\'t know about paths of \'luck\' though.
June 26th, 2024 07:32
orchidee said:
My poems will always end. I could add \'THE END\' after the last lines, to make it obvious! lol.
i don\'t know about paths of \'luck\' though.
June 26th, 2024 07:32
back to the start
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... thank you for sharing your pain abandonment is not an easy table to sit at! I\'ve been there time and time again and your beautiful words show me how far I\'ve come! Thank you for sharing
June 25th, 2024 14:38
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... thank you for sharing your pain abandonment is not an easy table to sit at! I\'ve been there time and time again and your beautiful words show me how far I\'ve come! Thank you for sharing
June 25th, 2024 14:38
Farewell ?
peto said:
Some great lines in this Neilton
\"How in the world will I find my lost piece \" \"a particular favourite
Enjoyed the read and looking forward to more
June 25th, 2024 12:51
peto said:
Some great lines in this Neilton
\"How in the world will I find my lost piece \" \"a particular favourite
Enjoyed the read and looking forward to more
June 25th, 2024 12:51
My fears
Teddy.15 said:
This is beautiful, reminds me of the innocence of ignorance more than anything, sometimes we just cannot see what\'s at the end of our nose. 🌹
June 25th, 2024 11:14
Teddy.15 said:
This is beautiful, reminds me of the innocence of ignorance more than anything, sometimes we just cannot see what\'s at the end of our nose. 🌹
June 25th, 2024 11:14
My fears
Neville said:
sounds like some kind of inner turmoil .. just let it be .. accept what is and enjoy .. a compelling read, now read several times .. Neville
June 15th, 2024 03:53
Neville said:
sounds like some kind of inner turmoil .. just let it be .. accept what is and enjoy .. a compelling read, now read several times .. Neville
June 15th, 2024 03:53
And suddenly...
Thad Wilk said:
Awww, what a poignant 😢
and emotional poem
very touching indeed!
Eloquently penned and
my pleasure to read!!
Best wishes. 🌹
Thad
June 13th, 2024 15:16
Thad Wilk said:
Awww, what a poignant 😢
and emotional poem
very touching indeed!
Eloquently penned and
my pleasure to read!!
Best wishes. 🌹
Thad
June 13th, 2024 15:16
Keep trying
Neilton said:
You are absolutely right Neville! Thank so so much!!!!
June 11th, 2024 13:56
Neilton said:
You are absolutely right Neville! Thank so so much!!!!
June 11th, 2024 13:56
Keep trying
Neville said:
Never give up .. they will tire long before you do providing you remain determined .. very much enjoyed .. Neville
June 9th, 2024 16:03
Neville said:
Never give up .. they will tire long before you do providing you remain determined .. very much enjoyed .. Neville
June 9th, 2024 16:03
Coldplay
Thomas W Case said:
Very cool. The love comes through in your writing. Great work.
June 9th, 2024 14:35
Thomas W Case said:
Very cool. The love comes through in your writing. Great work.
June 9th, 2024 14:35
Coldplay
Teddy.15 said:
I am quite sure that I was sitting at a bar in a beautiful quiet square in the hills of a Florence a few years ago and Chris Martin rode up to my table on a bike, it was the weirdest moment but I can say I am almost certain it was him. To have a crush or passion for a pop star is a real life emotion, I felt the same for so many artists in the 90\'s beautiful poetry we need more inspiring voices in the music industry 🌹
June 9th, 2024 13:16
Teddy.15 said:
I am quite sure that I was sitting at a bar in a beautiful quiet square in the hills of a Florence a few years ago and Chris Martin rode up to my table on a bike, it was the weirdest moment but I can say I am almost certain it was him. To have a crush or passion for a pop star is a real life emotion, I felt the same for so many artists in the 90\'s beautiful poetry we need more inspiring voices in the music industry 🌹
June 9th, 2024 13:16
Coldplay
peto said:
I have had the same pleasure neilton
Saw them in Glasgow
This has a great rhyme to begin with
Out of all their songs this really reminds me of \"fix you \"
Great write
June 9th, 2024 12:05
peto said:
I have had the same pleasure neilton
Saw them in Glasgow
This has a great rhyme to begin with
Out of all their songs this really reminds me of \"fix you \"
Great write
June 9th, 2024 12:05
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