Comments received on poems by Neilton
Who are you performing for?
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good question that all need to ask most of us perform for friends, family, the law to be seen as something special that we feel we are not. Well written
May 15th, 2026 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good question that all need to ask most of us perform for friends, family, the law to be seen as something special that we feel we are not. Well written
May 15th, 2026 06:16
Freedom
Katie B. said:
This poem has a lot of wonderful energy. It seems to be a breaking free story that resonates with me. So well written.
May 14th, 2026 16:15
Katie B. said:
This poem has a lot of wonderful energy. It seems to be a breaking free story that resonates with me. So well written.
May 14th, 2026 16:15
Freedom
sorenbarrett said:
Neilton this poem is lovely and carries with it those feelings of freedom, whether an illusion or real. Its messages are various and like a tree branch from the main trunk each with its leaves and flowers. Very nicely composed it has the freedom it proposes with rhyme and free verse merged. Loved it my friend and a fave
May 14th, 2026 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
Neilton this poem is lovely and carries with it those feelings of freedom, whether an illusion or real. Its messages are various and like a tree branch from the main trunk each with its leaves and flowers. Very nicely composed it has the freedom it proposes with rhyme and free verse merged. Loved it my friend and a fave
May 14th, 2026 07:35
Lily of the valley
sorenbarrett said:
Being born in May and the Lilly of the Valley my grandmother\'s favorite flower it has more meaning for me. Nicely written in a romantic style
May 13th, 2026 16:18
sorenbarrett said:
Being born in May and the Lilly of the Valley my grandmother\'s favorite flower it has more meaning for me. Nicely written in a romantic style
May 13th, 2026 16:18
What if we were meant to meet this way ?
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful wording in this poem. Very nicely done making it sensuous and mysteriously romantic. Well done a fave
March 25th, 2026 16:08
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful wording in this poem. Very nicely done making it sensuous and mysteriously romantic. Well done a fave
March 25th, 2026 16:08
Ode to Christmas
sorenbarrett said:
A most seasonal poem in most north western tradition where winter takes it hold and tradition of Christmas is strongly entrenched. Well done
December 31st, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A most seasonal poem in most north western tradition where winter takes it hold and tradition of Christmas is strongly entrenched. Well done
December 31st, 2025 03:55
My forever friend
Neville said:
What an absolutely lovely if not indeed perfect tribute to a much loved Mum .. She reminds me of what my own Mother was like .. Seasonal greetings and best wishes from me to You and yours .. Neville
December 12th, 2025 06:13
Neville said:
What an absolutely lovely if not indeed perfect tribute to a much loved Mum .. She reminds me of what my own Mother was like .. Seasonal greetings and best wishes from me to You and yours .. Neville
December 12th, 2025 06:13
My forever friend
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a wonderful woman (the second line you might want to change the m to a w in moman unless there is a meaning I missed) Very nicely worded it sings out to any listener. Lovely
December 5th, 2025 08:32
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a wonderful woman (the second line you might want to change the m to a w in moman unless there is a meaning I missed) Very nicely worded it sings out to any listener. Lovely
December 5th, 2025 08:32
Coldplay
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed your Poam . As someone who Loves 60s Music, I enjoy Coldplay as well. Great Songs.
December 1st, 2025 20:37
Kevin Hulme said:
Enjoyed your Poam . As someone who Loves 60s Music, I enjoy Coldplay as well. Great Songs.
December 1st, 2025 20:37
Poetry
Doggerel Dave said:
Poetry is only worthwhile if the material expressed means something. Go for it - I\'m sure you will do it.
November 27th, 2025 17:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Poetry is only worthwhile if the material expressed means something. Go for it - I\'m sure you will do it.
November 27th, 2025 17:26
Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Neilton a beautiful expression of the power of poetry. Most lovely
November 27th, 2025 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
Neilton a beautiful expression of the power of poetry. Most lovely
November 27th, 2025 12:56
\'Tis her fate
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. Truly fantastic writing.
November 17th, 2025 09:44
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. Truly fantastic writing.
November 17th, 2025 09:44
\'Tis her fate
sorenbarrett said:
There is a floating and drifting appeal to this poem as if floating through time and sea. Well done
November 15th, 2025 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
There is a floating and drifting appeal to this poem as if floating through time and sea. Well done
November 15th, 2025 10:38
\'Tis her fate
Samuel Maximilian said:
A lovely writing and a pleasure to read
November 15th, 2025 08:30
Samuel Maximilian said:
A lovely writing and a pleasure to read
November 15th, 2025 08:30
My Cretan legend
peto said:
Keep feeling his gentle breeze Neilton
Beautiful tribute
November 14th, 2025 18:46
peto said:
Keep feeling his gentle breeze Neilton
Beautiful tribute
November 14th, 2025 18:46
My Cretan legend
arqios said:
This poem is a living monument, weaving together courage and kindness and Cretan pride. Thanks for this devoted glimpse to your family story and the legacy now expressed in this poem.
November 13th, 2025 21:19
arqios said:
This poem is a living monument, weaving together courage and kindness and Cretan pride. Thanks for this devoted glimpse to your family story and the legacy now expressed in this poem.
November 13th, 2025 21:19
My Cretan legend
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute and homage to a man that made a difference in your life. Well written it is packed with various instances that stood out. Nicely done
November 13th, 2025 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute and homage to a man that made a difference in your life. Well written it is packed with various instances that stood out. Nicely done
November 13th, 2025 13:43
For 10 minutes
Neville said:
What an incredible poem you have posted here my friend .. and what an incredible coping strategy you adopted and what an amazing gentleman your grandpa obviously was .. Oh\' and what a sure-fire way of guaranteeing your love for him and his memory will never now be forgot .. Please accept my very sincere condolences to you and yours, dear Neilton .. Neville
July 24th, 2025 13:23
Neville said:
What an incredible poem you have posted here my friend .. and what an incredible coping strategy you adopted and what an amazing gentleman your grandpa obviously was .. Oh\' and what a sure-fire way of guaranteeing your love for him and his memory will never now be forgot .. Please accept my very sincere condolences to you and yours, dear Neilton .. Neville
July 24th, 2025 13:23
For 10 minutes
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of memories shared with a passed loved one and the importance of those memories, nicely expressed and written
July 23rd, 2025 23:24
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of memories shared with a passed loved one and the importance of those memories, nicely expressed and written
July 23rd, 2025 23:24
For 10 minutes
Cheeky Missy said:
It took forever to get over losing my grandfather; I didn\'t realize until later that I was unconsciously trying to replace him with other kindly elderly men, to no avail. Very beautiful and gorgeously rendered in captivating simplicity with excellent imagery and a bittersweet poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 23rd, 2025 22:13
Cheeky Missy said:
It took forever to get over losing my grandfather; I didn\'t realize until later that I was unconsciously trying to replace him with other kindly elderly men, to no avail. Very beautiful and gorgeously rendered in captivating simplicity with excellent imagery and a bittersweet poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 23rd, 2025 22:13
For 10 minutes
sorenbarrett said:
A touching and tender poem of memories of one loved and remembered. Full of events through years of growth it takes us to a time of parting though death. Most lovely
July 23rd, 2025 16:10
sorenbarrett said:
A touching and tender poem of memories of one loved and remembered. Full of events through years of growth it takes us to a time of parting though death. Most lovely
July 23rd, 2025 16:10
Fly with me, little bird!
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation for freedom and choice in very nice metaphor. Very nice verse that well could be a song with chorus. Well done
May 13th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation for freedom and choice in very nice metaphor. Very nice verse that well could be a song with chorus. Well done
May 13th, 2025 03:47
Fly with me, little bird!
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, around that there is a better world out there, positive write nicely written
May 13th, 2025 03:16
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, around that there is a better world out there, positive write nicely written
May 13th, 2025 03:16
Fly with me, little bird!
arqios said:
I will not let the weight
of old winds bend
your wings any longer.
You will soar, not for escape,
but for discovery.
We will carve the sky
into new stories,
where no shadow lingers,
and no voice drags you back.
Your flight is not borrowed—
it belongs to you.
May 13th, 2025 02:49
arqios said:
I will not let the weight
of old winds bend
your wings any longer.
You will soar, not for escape,
but for discovery.
We will carve the sky
into new stories,
where no shadow lingers,
and no voice drags you back.
Your flight is not borrowed—
it belongs to you.
May 13th, 2025 02:49
Extraordinary
Poetic Licence said:
Sadly way too many of these people in todays world, with their vast back catalogue of ways to continue to hurt us, nicely expressed and written
May 12th, 2025 12:59
Poetic Licence said:
Sadly way too many of these people in todays world, with their vast back catalogue of ways to continue to hurt us, nicely expressed and written
May 12th, 2025 12:59
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