Comments received on poems by Neilton
For 10 minutes
Neville said:
What an incredible poem you have posted here my friend .. and what an incredible coping strategy you adopted and what an amazing gentleman your grandpa obviously was .. Oh\' and what a sure-fire way of guaranteeing your love for him and his memory will never now be forgot .. Please accept my very sincere condolences to you and yours, dear Neilton .. Neville
July 24th, 2025 13:23
Neville said:
What an incredible poem you have posted here my friend .. and what an incredible coping strategy you adopted and what an amazing gentleman your grandpa obviously was .. Oh\' and what a sure-fire way of guaranteeing your love for him and his memory will never now be forgot .. Please accept my very sincere condolences to you and yours, dear Neilton .. Neville
July 24th, 2025 13:23
For 10 minutes
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of memories shared with a passed loved one and the importance of those memories, nicely expressed and written
July 23rd, 2025 23:24
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of memories shared with a passed loved one and the importance of those memories, nicely expressed and written
July 23rd, 2025 23:24
For 10 minutes
Cheeky Missy said:
It took forever to get over losing my grandfather; I didn\'t realize until later that I was unconsciously trying to replace him with other kindly elderly men, to no avail. Very beautiful and gorgeously rendered in captivating simplicity with excellent imagery and a bittersweet poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 23rd, 2025 22:13
Cheeky Missy said:
It took forever to get over losing my grandfather; I didn\'t realize until later that I was unconsciously trying to replace him with other kindly elderly men, to no avail. Very beautiful and gorgeously rendered in captivating simplicity with excellent imagery and a bittersweet poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
July 23rd, 2025 22:13
For 10 minutes
sorenbarrett said:
A touching and tender poem of memories of one loved and remembered. Full of events through years of growth it takes us to a time of parting though death. Most lovely
July 23rd, 2025 16:10
sorenbarrett said:
A touching and tender poem of memories of one loved and remembered. Full of events through years of growth it takes us to a time of parting though death. Most lovely
July 23rd, 2025 16:10
The sycamore tree
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A beautiful poem so poetic lovely to read, sweet and like a melodious violin playing in words. Kudos.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
July 22nd, 2025 09:48
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A beautiful poem so poetic lovely to read, sweet and like a melodious violin playing in words. Kudos.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
July 22nd, 2025 09:48
The sycamore tree
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of looking back at days gone by, when freedom was found, Nicely expressed and written
May 20th, 2025 02:15
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of looking back at days gone by, when freedom was found, Nicely expressed and written
May 20th, 2025 02:15
The sycamore tree
arqios said:
Idyllic! Brings me back to that hole and root system that grew over the edge of a stream that we used to swim in, sometimes there are eels there as well.🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 00:46
arqios said:
Idyllic! Brings me back to that hole and root system that grew over the edge of a stream that we used to swim in, sometimes there are eels there as well.🙏🏻🕊️
May 20th, 2025 00:46
The sycamore tree
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic and somewhat mystical it has feelings of loss but also freedom. Nicely written
May 19th, 2025 15:23
sorenbarrett said:
Nostalgic and somewhat mystical it has feelings of loss but also freedom. Nicely written
May 19th, 2025 15:23
Fly with me, little bird!
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation for freedom and choice in very nice metaphor. Very nice verse that well could be a song with chorus. Well done
May 13th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
An invitation for freedom and choice in very nice metaphor. Very nice verse that well could be a song with chorus. Well done
May 13th, 2025 03:47
Fly with me, little bird!
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, around that there is a better world out there, positive write nicely written
May 13th, 2025 03:16
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write, around that there is a better world out there, positive write nicely written
May 13th, 2025 03:16
Fly with me, little bird!
arqios said:
I will not let the weight
of old winds bend
your wings any longer.
You will soar, not for escape,
but for discovery.
We will carve the sky
into new stories,
where no shadow lingers,
and no voice drags you back.
Your flight is not borrowed—
it belongs to you.
May 13th, 2025 02:49
arqios said:
I will not let the weight
of old winds bend
your wings any longer.
You will soar, not for escape,
but for discovery.
We will carve the sky
into new stories,
where no shadow lingers,
and no voice drags you back.
Your flight is not borrowed—
it belongs to you.
May 13th, 2025 02:49
Extraordinary
Poetic Licence said:
Sadly way too many of these people in todays world, with their vast back catalogue of ways to continue to hurt us, nicely expressed and written
May 12th, 2025 12:59
Poetic Licence said:
Sadly way too many of these people in todays world, with their vast back catalogue of ways to continue to hurt us, nicely expressed and written
May 12th, 2025 12:59
Extraordinary
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of such people in this world unfortunately. The poem highlights the ways that such people hurt others. Well written
May 12th, 2025 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
There are a lot of such people in this world unfortunately. The poem highlights the ways that such people hurt others. Well written
May 12th, 2025 11:38
Extraordinary
Cheeky Missy said:
Methinks that\'s why folk believe in \"karma\" and \"comeuppance,\" yet I fail to find any ground for such a happy thought, nor even justification for the desire, although we want it so badly. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 10:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Methinks that\'s why folk believe in \"karma\" and \"comeuppance,\" yet I fail to find any ground for such a happy thought, nor even justification for the desire, although we want it so badly. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 10:58
Little boys and their toys
arqios said:
True on the base level and so true extrapolated to other kindred configurations on life. Old boys with new toys in an endless cycle 🙏🏻🕊️
May 9th, 2025 19:36
arqios said:
True on the base level and so true extrapolated to other kindred configurations on life. Old boys with new toys in an endless cycle 🙏🏻🕊️
May 9th, 2025 19:36
Little boys and their toys
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very accurate write and sadly it is on the increase in this modern world, men seeing woman as disposable toys, nicely expressed and written
May 9th, 2025 09:36
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very accurate write and sadly it is on the increase in this modern world, men seeing woman as disposable toys, nicely expressed and written
May 9th, 2025 09:36
Little boys and their toys
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful metaphor with toys. Do they consider their romantic interests toys? I guess so. A most thought provoking and honest write.
May 9th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most wonderful metaphor with toys. Do they consider their romantic interests toys? I guess so. A most thought provoking and honest write.
May 9th, 2025 08:26
Lost but never gone
NafisaSB said:
wonderful message - i hope the resurrection happens soon, and justice is done , if not already in place
May 6th, 2025 00:28
NafisaSB said:
wonderful message - i hope the resurrection happens soon, and justice is done , if not already in place
May 6th, 2025 00:28
Lost but never gone
peto said:
Good to see you still writing
Intriguing always
Keep it up
May 4th, 2025 20:57
peto said:
Good to see you still writing
Intriguing always
Keep it up
May 4th, 2025 20:57
Lost but never gone
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded Neilton this challenge from the grave and beyond a metaphor I take for slights suffered in a past poetic life now like Lazarus returned from the grave to pronounce justice upon past offenders. Yes indeed I have missed you along with a few others that seem to have fallen by the wayside. My ears not acute enough, my brain not astute enough to see the executions have waited for their resurrection. Hope to hear much more.
May 4th, 2025 07:42
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded Neilton this challenge from the grave and beyond a metaphor I take for slights suffered in a past poetic life now like Lazarus returned from the grave to pronounce justice upon past offenders. Yes indeed I have missed you along with a few others that seem to have fallen by the wayside. My ears not acute enough, my brain not astute enough to see the executions have waited for their resurrection. Hope to hear much more.
May 4th, 2025 07:42
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