Comments received on poems by Neilton
Divulgence
sorenbarrett said:
Fear underlies many disorders both psychological and physical
November 17th, 2024 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
Fear underlies many disorders both psychological and physical
November 17th, 2024 08:04
My shaveling boy
sorenbarrett said:
Reading the authors note, it makes a great deal of sense before I read it. I was thinking of the prodigal son nevertheless a wonderful write in any regard. This poem reflects deep emotions of love, longing, and missing someone very nicely done
November 16th, 2024 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
Reading the authors note, it makes a great deal of sense before I read it. I was thinking of the prodigal son nevertheless a wonderful write in any regard. This poem reflects deep emotions of love, longing, and missing someone very nicely done
November 16th, 2024 11:41
A man in my past
Neville said:
Blimey .. talk about a whirlwind romance & what a bloomin comedown too .. I hope some very important lessons have now been learnt .. narcissists @ least real ones, the term is often overused and inappropriately .. rarely if ever change .. I know, I work with a whole bunch .. Neville
November 16th, 2024 11:08
Neville said:
Blimey .. talk about a whirlwind romance & what a bloomin comedown too .. I hope some very important lessons have now been learnt .. narcissists @ least real ones, the term is often overused and inappropriately .. rarely if ever change .. I know, I work with a whole bunch .. Neville
November 16th, 2024 11:08
A confession
Neville said:
It is perfectly clear how much you love your brother .. He is a very lucky young man to have a sister such as your goodly self .. and another poem dedicated to him .. Neville
November 16th, 2024 11:02
Neville said:
It is perfectly clear how much you love your brother .. He is a very lucky young man to have a sister such as your goodly self .. and another poem dedicated to him .. Neville
November 16th, 2024 11:02
My shaveling boy
Neville said:
I found your entire poem intriguing .. indeed fascinating, would be more precise and I enjoyed every morsel of it .. I also appreciate your authors note which made my interpretation of the infrequently heard but not entirely new to me term, shaveling more informed .. and am glad I guessed right .. I\'m gonna give todays gift a dubble 👍👍and hope your brother is feeling a bit better now .. six years is a long time .. 🤍
November 16th, 2024 10:56
Neville said:
I found your entire poem intriguing .. indeed fascinating, would be more precise and I enjoyed every morsel of it .. I also appreciate your authors note which made my interpretation of the infrequently heard but not entirely new to me term, shaveling more informed .. and am glad I guessed right .. I\'m gonna give todays gift a dubble 👍👍and hope your brother is feeling a bit better now .. six years is a long time .. 🤍
November 16th, 2024 10:56
The mask
peto said:
Your writing is truly progressing at an alarming rate
Great write Neilton
The mask is slipping with every verse
Allowing us to get a wee look behind
And as most comments seem to say
We like what we see
Excellent
November 1st, 2024 17:59
peto said:
Your writing is truly progressing at an alarming rate
Great write Neilton
The mask is slipping with every verse
Allowing us to get a wee look behind
And as most comments seem to say
We like what we see
Excellent
November 1st, 2024 17:59
My little life
Neville said:
The main body of this poem is far greater than the title suggests .. but the title first caught my attention and drew me in .. on repeated reflection, you could not have chosen a better title .. Neville
October 29th, 2024 01:00
Neville said:
The main body of this poem is far greater than the title suggests .. but the title first caught my attention and drew me in .. on repeated reflection, you could not have chosen a better title .. Neville
October 29th, 2024 01:00
The mask
Neville said:
A most impressive post .. clearly much thought went into the crafting and final edit .. A sad and sorry tale, told tantalizingly & with much truth if one dare to lift the mask and look beneath its surface .. Neville
October 29th, 2024 00:55
Neville said:
A most impressive post .. clearly much thought went into the crafting and final edit .. A sad and sorry tale, told tantalizingly & with much truth if one dare to lift the mask and look beneath its surface .. Neville
October 29th, 2024 00:55
The mask
sorenbarrett said:
A strong metaphor. We all wear a mask most of us wear many. To remove that mask risks loosing relationships. They say be yourself but in reality if we do most people won\'t like it. A good write
October 28th, 2024 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
A strong metaphor. We all wear a mask most of us wear many. To remove that mask risks loosing relationships. They say be yourself but in reality if we do most people won\'t like it. A good write
October 28th, 2024 19:41
Till death do us part
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Touching and important work.
October 26th, 2024 23:42
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Touching and important work.
October 26th, 2024 23:42
Till death do us part
Neville said:
My very dear Neilton .. I can honestly say with my hand on my ❤️ that I have rarely if ever read a better poem about the subject in hand .. I also think you are very brave, very generous & very caring in sharing much of the information contained in your authors notes .. I work with many individuals who variously experience a range of eating disorder & who have suffered similarly to your good self .. You deserve a real good pat on the back .. Neville
October 24th, 2024 11:39
Neville said:
My very dear Neilton .. I can honestly say with my hand on my ❤️ that I have rarely if ever read a better poem about the subject in hand .. I also think you are very brave, very generous & very caring in sharing much of the information contained in your authors notes .. I work with many individuals who variously experience a range of eating disorder & who have suffered similarly to your good self .. You deserve a real good pat on the back .. Neville
October 24th, 2024 11:39
Till death do us part
sorenbarrett said:
Best wishes on your recovery from this terrible plight. The poem I did not read this at first sight and like the disorder itself went unnoticed until the note at the end. Misinterpreted it would have been a very different review. The person with the disorder has to let people know to gain help. My favorite line was the last (By the thorns in her own feathers) This is truely poetic and a fovorite I will remember.
October 24th, 2024 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
Best wishes on your recovery from this terrible plight. The poem I did not read this at first sight and like the disorder itself went unnoticed until the note at the end. Misinterpreted it would have been a very different review. The person with the disorder has to let people know to gain help. My favorite line was the last (By the thorns in her own feathers) This is truely poetic and a fovorite I will remember.
October 24th, 2024 07:39
Coward
NafisaSB said:
what a masterpiece- i hope it\'s not your own broken heart that is crying to be heard
October 23rd, 2024 23:59
NafisaSB said:
what a masterpiece- i hope it\'s not your own broken heart that is crying to be heard
October 23rd, 2024 23:59
Coward
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You will be wiser for the experience.
October 23rd, 2024 14:41
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You will be wiser for the experience.
October 23rd, 2024 14:41
Coward
peto said:
Hi pal
This is a sad but beautifully written piece
The coward dies 1000 deaths
You live one life and make it a belter
\"The same as the previous and I bet my heart the next one \"
That line gave me chills
Stay strong my friend and keep writing
October 23rd, 2024 11:52
peto said:
Hi pal
This is a sad but beautifully written piece
The coward dies 1000 deaths
You live one life and make it a belter
\"The same as the previous and I bet my heart the next one \"
That line gave me chills
Stay strong my friend and keep writing
October 23rd, 2024 11:52
Coward
sorenbarrett said:
Since Hamlet I have always loved soliloquies and this is no less. I love writing them as well and haven\'t done so in a long time. This one I can hear the anger in and it is powerful very nice
October 23rd, 2024 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Since Hamlet I have always loved soliloquies and this is no less. I love writing them as well and haven\'t done so in a long time. This one I can hear the anger in and it is powerful very nice
October 23rd, 2024 05:22
Coward
Neville said:
Another little masterpiece from your growing portfolio .. I just hope if this is based on fact, you have learnt several very important lessons .. Anyway, keep your chin up regardless & write on .. Neville
October 23rd, 2024 03:59
Neville said:
Another little masterpiece from your growing portfolio .. I just hope if this is based on fact, you have learnt several very important lessons .. Anyway, keep your chin up regardless & write on .. Neville
October 23rd, 2024 03:59
The lion
Neville said:
Why am I not surprised .. Excellent ink my young friend .. Neville
October 23rd, 2024 03:57
Neville said:
Why am I not surprised .. Excellent ink my young friend .. Neville
October 23rd, 2024 03:57
Amaranthine love
Neville said:
what an extraordinarily fine love poem in my most humble opinion .. and I shall keep my fingers crossed that one day you will eventually find your prince charming & live happily ever after .. until then tho\' here\'s little old me wishing you All the very best of all good things, Neville :)
September 10th, 2024 13:52
Neville said:
what an extraordinarily fine love poem in my most humble opinion .. and I shall keep my fingers crossed that one day you will eventually find your prince charming & live happily ever after .. until then tho\' here\'s little old me wishing you All the very best of all good things, Neville :)
September 10th, 2024 13:52
The lion
sorenbarrett said:
Descriptive, vivid, powerful are words that come to mind. Such a metaphor in the contrast of a lion to a pigeon. A pigeon like a dove brings peace to my mind. A pigeon the message carrier, was the messenger killed Great poem
September 10th, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Descriptive, vivid, powerful are words that come to mind. Such a metaphor in the contrast of a lion to a pigeon. A pigeon like a dove brings peace to my mind. A pigeon the message carrier, was the messenger killed Great poem
September 10th, 2024 05:27
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