Comments received on poems by Neilton
Waiting for my love
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write over the longing of love, patiance and determination that one day it will be at the door, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 03:07
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write over the longing of love, patiance and determination that one day it will be at the door, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 03:07
Waiting for my love
Friendship said:
I relly enjoy reading your poems you write so well.your poem revolves around longing and the complex emotions associated with waiting for love. It highlights the tension between hope and despair, illustrating the struggle of holding onto love despite feelings of inadequacy and the passage of time.
March 25th, 2025 18:59
Friendship said:
I relly enjoy reading your poems you write so well.your poem revolves around longing and the complex emotions associated with waiting for love. It highlights the tension between hope and despair, illustrating the struggle of holding onto love despite feelings of inadequacy and the passage of time.
March 25th, 2025 18:59
Waiting for my love
Cheeky Missy said:
A bittersweet reality on the cusp of forever so beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy delineated herein begs the reader linger for a moment as the moon called by the ancients Cynthia, and thus evoked, likewise seems waiting her lover. Charming. Thank you for sharing.
March 25th, 2025 17:12
Cheeky Missy said:
A bittersweet reality on the cusp of forever so beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy delineated herein begs the reader linger for a moment as the moon called by the ancients Cynthia, and thus evoked, likewise seems waiting her lover. Charming. Thank you for sharing.
March 25th, 2025 17:12
Waiting for my love
sorenbarrett said:
Patience, tenacity, persistence and devotion are part of this poem of dedication. Well written and nicely done.
March 25th, 2025 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
Patience, tenacity, persistence and devotion are part of this poem of dedication. Well written and nicely done.
March 25th, 2025 16:03
My eternal bundles of joy
Friendship said:
The speaker writes to articulate their pain, seek solace in expressing their feelings, and perhaps reach out for understanding and connection in their sorrow. The act of writing becomes a way to cope with the burden of loss and to search for hope amidst despair.
March 22nd, 2025 07:19
Friendship said:
The speaker writes to articulate their pain, seek solace in expressing their feelings, and perhaps reach out for understanding and connection in their sorrow. The act of writing becomes a way to cope with the burden of loss and to search for hope amidst despair.
March 22nd, 2025 07:19
My eternal bundles of joy
Poetic Licence said:
A very passionate write of love and dedication to their prize cats, I like Soren thought it related to children until the end, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 03:11
Poetic Licence said:
A very passionate write of love and dedication to their prize cats, I like Soren thought it related to children until the end, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 03:11
My eternal bundles of joy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem dedicated to cats that before I got to the end seemed for children or a lover but love of animals is no less. Well expressed
March 19th, 2025 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem dedicated to cats that before I got to the end seemed for children or a lover but love of animals is no less. Well expressed
March 19th, 2025 15:57
Ode to rebirth
Friendship said:
Well written,Your poem is a poignant reflection on the complexities of love, the pain of betrayal, and the journey toward self-discovery and empowerment.
March 18th, 2025 08:50
Friendship said:
Well written,Your poem is a poignant reflection on the complexities of love, the pain of betrayal, and the journey toward self-discovery and empowerment.
March 18th, 2025 08:50
Ode to rebirth
Neville said:
Oh\' my word .. what an absolute nightmare .. It\'s not hard to see why you woke up my very dearest Neilton .. However, I fear that you are not the only one to have been duped and stalked in such a dreadful way .. Sometimes I am made aware of events that might otherwise very easily go unnoticed but which reinforce my contempt for certain members of my own gender and species .. I do love a happy ending tho\' and am keeping my fingers crossed that things work out in your favour .. Neville 😎🌻👍
March 18th, 2025 03:27
Neville said:
Oh\' my word .. what an absolute nightmare .. It\'s not hard to see why you woke up my very dearest Neilton .. However, I fear that you are not the only one to have been duped and stalked in such a dreadful way .. Sometimes I am made aware of events that might otherwise very easily go unnoticed but which reinforce my contempt for certain members of my own gender and species .. I do love a happy ending tho\' and am keeping my fingers crossed that things work out in your favour .. Neville 😎🌻👍
March 18th, 2025 03:27
Ode to rebirth
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is some write, nicely expressed and crafted, confirming the fact in life that not all dreams turn out the way you imagined
March 18th, 2025 03:19
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is some write, nicely expressed and crafted, confirming the fact in life that not all dreams turn out the way you imagined
March 18th, 2025 03:19
Ode to rebirth
sorenbarrett said:
What a dream it must have been. The poem seems epic in its proportions and some words I had to look up. A good deal of metaphor and maybe even Jungian archetypes. Well done
March 17th, 2025 18:33
sorenbarrett said:
What a dream it must have been. The poem seems epic in its proportions and some words I had to look up. A good deal of metaphor and maybe even Jungian archetypes. Well done
March 17th, 2025 18:33
Divulgence
sorenbarrett said:
Fear underlies many disorders both psychological and physical
November 17th, 2024 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
Fear underlies many disorders both psychological and physical
November 17th, 2024 08:04
My shaveling boy
sorenbarrett said:
Reading the authors note, it makes a great deal of sense before I read it. I was thinking of the prodigal son nevertheless a wonderful write in any regard. This poem reflects deep emotions of love, longing, and missing someone very nicely done
November 16th, 2024 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
Reading the authors note, it makes a great deal of sense before I read it. I was thinking of the prodigal son nevertheless a wonderful write in any regard. This poem reflects deep emotions of love, longing, and missing someone very nicely done
November 16th, 2024 11:41
A man in my past
Neville said:
Blimey .. talk about a whirlwind romance & what a bloomin comedown too .. I hope some very important lessons have now been learnt .. narcissists @ least real ones, the term is often overused and inappropriately .. rarely if ever change .. I know, I work with a whole bunch .. Neville
November 16th, 2024 11:08
Neville said:
Blimey .. talk about a whirlwind romance & what a bloomin comedown too .. I hope some very important lessons have now been learnt .. narcissists @ least real ones, the term is often overused and inappropriately .. rarely if ever change .. I know, I work with a whole bunch .. Neville
November 16th, 2024 11:08
A confession
Neville said:
It is perfectly clear how much you love your brother .. He is a very lucky young man to have a sister such as your goodly self .. and another poem dedicated to him .. Neville
November 16th, 2024 11:02
Neville said:
It is perfectly clear how much you love your brother .. He is a very lucky young man to have a sister such as your goodly self .. and another poem dedicated to him .. Neville
November 16th, 2024 11:02
My shaveling boy
Neville said:
I found your entire poem intriguing .. indeed fascinating, would be more precise and I enjoyed every morsel of it .. I also appreciate your authors note which made my interpretation of the infrequently heard but not entirely new to me term, shaveling more informed .. and am glad I guessed right .. I\'m gonna give todays gift a dubble 👍👍and hope your brother is feeling a bit better now .. six years is a long time .. 🤍
November 16th, 2024 10:56
Neville said:
I found your entire poem intriguing .. indeed fascinating, would be more precise and I enjoyed every morsel of it .. I also appreciate your authors note which made my interpretation of the infrequently heard but not entirely new to me term, shaveling more informed .. and am glad I guessed right .. I\'m gonna give todays gift a dubble 👍👍and hope your brother is feeling a bit better now .. six years is a long time .. 🤍
November 16th, 2024 10:56
The mask
peto said:
Your writing is truly progressing at an alarming rate
Great write Neilton
The mask is slipping with every verse
Allowing us to get a wee look behind
And as most comments seem to say
We like what we see
Excellent
November 1st, 2024 17:59
peto said:
Your writing is truly progressing at an alarming rate
Great write Neilton
The mask is slipping with every verse
Allowing us to get a wee look behind
And as most comments seem to say
We like what we see
Excellent
November 1st, 2024 17:59
My little life
Neville said:
The main body of this poem is far greater than the title suggests .. but the title first caught my attention and drew me in .. on repeated reflection, you could not have chosen a better title .. Neville
October 29th, 2024 01:00
Neville said:
The main body of this poem is far greater than the title suggests .. but the title first caught my attention and drew me in .. on repeated reflection, you could not have chosen a better title .. Neville
October 29th, 2024 01:00
The mask
Neville said:
A most impressive post .. clearly much thought went into the crafting and final edit .. A sad and sorry tale, told tantalizingly & with much truth if one dare to lift the mask and look beneath its surface .. Neville
October 29th, 2024 00:55
Neville said:
A most impressive post .. clearly much thought went into the crafting and final edit .. A sad and sorry tale, told tantalizingly & with much truth if one dare to lift the mask and look beneath its surface .. Neville
October 29th, 2024 00:55
The mask
sorenbarrett said:
A strong metaphor. We all wear a mask most of us wear many. To remove that mask risks loosing relationships. They say be yourself but in reality if we do most people won\'t like it. A good write
October 28th, 2024 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
A strong metaphor. We all wear a mask most of us wear many. To remove that mask risks loosing relationships. They say be yourself but in reality if we do most people won\'t like it. A good write
October 28th, 2024 19:41
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