Comments received on poems by Neilton
Lost but never gone
peto said:
Good to see you still writing
Intriguing always
Keep it up
May 4th, 2025 20:57
peto said:
Good to see you still writing
Intriguing always
Keep it up
May 4th, 2025 20:57
Lost but never gone
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded Neilton this challenge from the grave and beyond a metaphor I take for slights suffered in a past poetic life now like Lazarus returned from the grave to pronounce justice upon past offenders. Yes indeed I have missed you along with a few others that seem to have fallen by the wayside. My ears not acute enough, my brain not astute enough to see the executions have waited for their resurrection. Hope to hear much more.
May 4th, 2025 07:42
sorenbarrett said:
Well worded Neilton this challenge from the grave and beyond a metaphor I take for slights suffered in a past poetic life now like Lazarus returned from the grave to pronounce justice upon past offenders. Yes indeed I have missed you along with a few others that seem to have fallen by the wayside. My ears not acute enough, my brain not astute enough to see the executions have waited for their resurrection. Hope to hear much more.
May 4th, 2025 07:42
Waiting for my love
NafisaSB said:
this poem shines with loyalty, patience and love
hope the other person did finally enter
April 6th, 2025 02:54
NafisaSB said:
this poem shines with loyalty, patience and love
hope the other person did finally enter
April 6th, 2025 02:54
Unfulfilled love
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and evocative, rendered to effect with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 17:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and evocative, rendered to effect with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 17:18
Unfulfilled love
bam said:
\"For you can not live your life in the dark--Under the shadow of a puzzled man\" AHHHHH I love. I love love love.
March 30th, 2025 23:55
bam said:
\"For you can not live your life in the dark--Under the shadow of a puzzled man\" AHHHHH I love. I love love love.
March 30th, 2025 23:55
Unfulfilled love
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching, caring and loving write around the sisters current situation, you have conveyed the emotion and feeling in the write really well, enjoyed the read
March 30th, 2025 11:29
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching, caring and loving write around the sisters current situation, you have conveyed the emotion and feeling in the write really well, enjoyed the read
March 30th, 2025 11:29
Unfulfilled love
sorenbarrett said:
Writing from another perspective is great practice in understanding more than knowing but feeling and the two are far different. A lovely write that\'s feelings came through. How some young like newly potted plants dies while others live. Who\'s to say why and blame never brings them back. Loved the poem
March 30th, 2025 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
Writing from another perspective is great practice in understanding more than knowing but feeling and the two are far different. A lovely write that\'s feelings came through. How some young like newly potted plants dies while others live. Who\'s to say why and blame never brings them back. Loved the poem
March 30th, 2025 10:35
Waiting for my love
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write over the longing of love, patiance and determination that one day it will be at the door, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 03:07
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write over the longing of love, patiance and determination that one day it will be at the door, enjoyed the read
March 26th, 2025 03:07
Waiting for my love
Cheeky Missy said:
A bittersweet reality on the cusp of forever so beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy delineated herein begs the reader linger for a moment as the moon called by the ancients Cynthia, and thus evoked, likewise seems waiting her lover. Charming. Thank you for sharing.
March 25th, 2025 17:12
Cheeky Missy said:
A bittersweet reality on the cusp of forever so beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy delineated herein begs the reader linger for a moment as the moon called by the ancients Cynthia, and thus evoked, likewise seems waiting her lover. Charming. Thank you for sharing.
March 25th, 2025 17:12
Waiting for my love
sorenbarrett said:
Patience, tenacity, persistence and devotion are part of this poem of dedication. Well written and nicely done.
March 25th, 2025 16:03
sorenbarrett said:
Patience, tenacity, persistence and devotion are part of this poem of dedication. Well written and nicely done.
March 25th, 2025 16:03
My eternal bundles of joy
Poetic Licence said:
A very passionate write of love and dedication to their prize cats, I like Soren thought it related to children until the end, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 03:11
Poetic Licence said:
A very passionate write of love and dedication to their prize cats, I like Soren thought it related to children until the end, enjoyed the read
March 20th, 2025 03:11
My eternal bundles of joy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem dedicated to cats that before I got to the end seemed for children or a lover but love of animals is no less. Well expressed
March 19th, 2025 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem dedicated to cats that before I got to the end seemed for children or a lover but love of animals is no less. Well expressed
March 19th, 2025 15:57
Ode to rebirth
Neville said:
Oh\' my word .. what an absolute nightmare .. It\'s not hard to see why you woke up my very dearest Neilton .. However, I fear that you are not the only one to have been duped and stalked in such a dreadful way .. Sometimes I am made aware of events that might otherwise very easily go unnoticed but which reinforce my contempt for certain members of my own gender and species .. I do love a happy ending tho\' and am keeping my fingers crossed that things work out in your favour .. Neville 😎🌻👍
March 18th, 2025 03:27
Neville said:
Oh\' my word .. what an absolute nightmare .. It\'s not hard to see why you woke up my very dearest Neilton .. However, I fear that you are not the only one to have been duped and stalked in such a dreadful way .. Sometimes I am made aware of events that might otherwise very easily go unnoticed but which reinforce my contempt for certain members of my own gender and species .. I do love a happy ending tho\' and am keeping my fingers crossed that things work out in your favour .. Neville 😎🌻👍
March 18th, 2025 03:27
Ode to rebirth
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is some write, nicely expressed and crafted, confirming the fact in life that not all dreams turn out the way you imagined
March 18th, 2025 03:19
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is some write, nicely expressed and crafted, confirming the fact in life that not all dreams turn out the way you imagined
March 18th, 2025 03:19
Ode to rebirth
sorenbarrett said:
What a dream it must have been. The poem seems epic in its proportions and some words I had to look up. A good deal of metaphor and maybe even Jungian archetypes. Well done
March 17th, 2025 18:33
sorenbarrett said:
What a dream it must have been. The poem seems epic in its proportions and some words I had to look up. A good deal of metaphor and maybe even Jungian archetypes. Well done
March 17th, 2025 18:33
Divulgence
sorenbarrett said:
Fear underlies many disorders both psychological and physical
November 17th, 2024 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
Fear underlies many disorders both psychological and physical
November 17th, 2024 08:04
My shaveling boy
sorenbarrett said:
Reading the authors note, it makes a great deal of sense before I read it. I was thinking of the prodigal son nevertheless a wonderful write in any regard. This poem reflects deep emotions of love, longing, and missing someone very nicely done
November 16th, 2024 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
Reading the authors note, it makes a great deal of sense before I read it. I was thinking of the prodigal son nevertheless a wonderful write in any regard. This poem reflects deep emotions of love, longing, and missing someone very nicely done
November 16th, 2024 11:41
A man in my past
Neville said:
Blimey .. talk about a whirlwind romance & what a bloomin comedown too .. I hope some very important lessons have now been learnt .. narcissists @ least real ones, the term is often overused and inappropriately .. rarely if ever change .. I know, I work with a whole bunch .. Neville
November 16th, 2024 11:08
Neville said:
Blimey .. talk about a whirlwind romance & what a bloomin comedown too .. I hope some very important lessons have now been learnt .. narcissists @ least real ones, the term is often overused and inappropriately .. rarely if ever change .. I know, I work with a whole bunch .. Neville
November 16th, 2024 11:08
A confession
Neville said:
It is perfectly clear how much you love your brother .. He is a very lucky young man to have a sister such as your goodly self .. and another poem dedicated to him .. Neville
November 16th, 2024 11:02
Neville said:
It is perfectly clear how much you love your brother .. He is a very lucky young man to have a sister such as your goodly self .. and another poem dedicated to him .. Neville
November 16th, 2024 11:02
My shaveling boy
Neville said:
I found your entire poem intriguing .. indeed fascinating, would be more precise and I enjoyed every morsel of it .. I also appreciate your authors note which made my interpretation of the infrequently heard but not entirely new to me term, shaveling more informed .. and am glad I guessed right .. I\'m gonna give todays gift a dubble 👍👍and hope your brother is feeling a bit better now .. six years is a long time .. 🤍
November 16th, 2024 10:56
Neville said:
I found your entire poem intriguing .. indeed fascinating, would be more precise and I enjoyed every morsel of it .. I also appreciate your authors note which made my interpretation of the infrequently heard but not entirely new to me term, shaveling more informed .. and am glad I guessed right .. I\'m gonna give todays gift a dubble 👍👍and hope your brother is feeling a bit better now .. six years is a long time .. 🤍
November 16th, 2024 10:56
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