Comments received on poems by Neilton
My little life
sorenbarrett said:
There are strong feelings of love in this poem. Carries with it a sensitivity towards others and a general feeling of peace. Very nicely worded.
September 9th, 2024 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
There are strong feelings of love in this poem. Carries with it a sensitivity towards others and a general feeling of peace. Very nicely worded.
September 9th, 2024 06:37
My little life
2781 said:
If the Son therefore shall make you free, ye shall be free indeed.
September 9th, 2024 02:49
2781 said:
If the Son therefore shall make you free, ye shall be free indeed.
September 9th, 2024 02:49
A touch
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and inspiring, whelling into jubilant rejoicing, only so softly and almost subtly as if it\'d been a secret which manifested what the soul was yearning to own.
September 8th, 2024 17:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and inspiring, whelling into jubilant rejoicing, only so softly and almost subtly as if it\'d been a secret which manifested what the soul was yearning to own.
September 8th, 2024 17:39
A touch
sorenbarrett said:
Light the symbol for knowledge a guiding source. Nicely done.
September 8th, 2024 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
Light the symbol for knowledge a guiding source. Nicely done.
September 8th, 2024 06:34
A touch
Cassie58 said:
That spark of light in the darkness is hope. It came when needed in this poem. We all need that beacon when we are in trouble. What a significant difference it can make.
September 8th, 2024 04:10
Cassie58 said:
That spark of light in the darkness is hope. It came when needed in this poem. We all need that beacon when we are in trouble. What a significant difference it can make.
September 8th, 2024 04:10
Amaranthine love
Dan Williams said:
Sure, I had to look up \'amaranthine\' but hey, was worth it. Very nice.
September 7th, 2024 01:26
Dan Williams said:
Sure, I had to look up \'amaranthine\' but hey, was worth it. Very nice.
September 7th, 2024 01:26
Amaranthine love
Cassie58 said:
Amaranthine love sounds pretty good to me. Very nicely penned Neilton. Pleased I stopped by. Happy Friday.
September 6th, 2024 11:20
Cassie58 said:
Amaranthine love sounds pretty good to me. Very nicely penned Neilton. Pleased I stopped by. Happy Friday.
September 6th, 2024 11:20
Can you tell?
RSM0812 said:
Sounds like your brother is lucky to have you as a brother. Great write.
September 6th, 2024 09:24
RSM0812 said:
Sounds like your brother is lucky to have you as a brother. Great write.
September 6th, 2024 09:24
Amaranthine love
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write. A Professing of love and an idealistic view of it. Very nicely expressed in an organized poetic manner.
September 6th, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write. A Professing of love and an idealistic view of it. Very nicely expressed in an organized poetic manner.
September 6th, 2024 04:35
A confession
AuburnScribbler said:
Such a powerful and wonderful write Neilton, the fact that this poem is also autobiographical, it makes it even more compelling.
Though you have written this in a painful yearning tone, I do hope that you and your brother still hold on to happy memories, and are able to create new ones very soon.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 2nd, 2024 13:03
AuburnScribbler said:
Such a powerful and wonderful write Neilton, the fact that this poem is also autobiographical, it makes it even more compelling.
Though you have written this in a painful yearning tone, I do hope that you and your brother still hold on to happy memories, and are able to create new ones very soon.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 2nd, 2024 13:03
A man in my past
Dan Williams said:
Thoughts racing, whirling. This guy embarrasses me, not a gentleman. Nice work.
September 1st, 2024 00:42
Dan Williams said:
Thoughts racing, whirling. This guy embarrasses me, not a gentleman. Nice work.
September 1st, 2024 00:42
A man in my past
Cassie58 said:
You convey the pain here. So unpleasant to feel that you have been played. We do grow stronger where we break, although you might not appreciate that yet. Narcissism, yuk. A clean break is always best. They never change. A good read.
August 31st, 2024 18:41
Cassie58 said:
You convey the pain here. So unpleasant to feel that you have been played. We do grow stronger where we break, although you might not appreciate that yet. Narcissism, yuk. A clean break is always best. They never change. A good read.
August 31st, 2024 18:41
A man in my past
sorenbarrett said:
Being taken advantage of and discarded is a very painful thing. This poem appears to be an opening of the heart nicely written.
August 31st, 2024 15:12
sorenbarrett said:
Being taken advantage of and discarded is a very painful thing. This poem appears to be an opening of the heart nicely written.
August 31st, 2024 15:12
Can you tell?
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Really love the bond your share with your brother
August 31st, 2024 00:13
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Really love the bond your share with your brother
August 31st, 2024 00:13
Can you tell?
Doggerel Dave said:
This poem is notable as much for what it doesn\'t say than what it does. And that is right and proper. But many many folks don\'t get the best start in life for a wide variety of reasons, and I see this as a support for them as well as your brother.
August 30th, 2024 18:48
Doggerel Dave said:
This poem is notable as much for what it doesn\'t say than what it does. And that is right and proper. But many many folks don\'t get the best start in life for a wide variety of reasons, and I see this as a support for them as well as your brother.
August 30th, 2024 18:48
The invisible prison
Neville said:
Some things just need to be both said and written down as a memo .. this is one of those things .. a powerful and emotionally charged plea & prayer to all regarding the need to value and cherish all life forms .. You also remind me of why I have such contempt for certain members of my own species .. Neville
July 8th, 2024 03:34
Neville said:
Some things just need to be both said and written down as a memo .. this is one of those things .. a powerful and emotionally charged plea & prayer to all regarding the need to value and cherish all life forms .. You also remind me of why I have such contempt for certain members of my own species .. Neville
July 8th, 2024 03:34
The invisible prison
Doggerel Dave said:
First time I\'ve wandered in your direction, Neilton...through the crowd. I will return. Such straightforward anger coherently expressed needs to be read by me.
July 2nd, 2024 18:57
Doggerel Dave said:
First time I\'ve wandered in your direction, Neilton...through the crowd. I will return. Such straightforward anger coherently expressed needs to be read by me.
July 2nd, 2024 18:57
The invisible prison
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Release (Hu)Man from all condemnation.\"
Isn\'t that one of the hardest things to do? I\'m working on it!
July 2nd, 2024 18:55
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Release (Hu)Man from all condemnation.\"
Isn\'t that one of the hardest things to do? I\'m working on it!
July 2nd, 2024 18:55
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