Comments received on poems by Neilton
Does it end?
orchidee said:
My poems will always end. I could add \'THE END\' after the last lines, to make it obvious! lol.
i don\'t know about paths of \'luck\' though.
June 26th, 2024 07:32
orchidee said:
My poems will always end. I could add \'THE END\' after the last lines, to make it obvious! lol.
i don\'t know about paths of \'luck\' though.
June 26th, 2024 07:32
back to the start
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... thank you for sharing your pain abandonment is not an easy table to sit at! I\'ve been there time and time again and your beautiful words show me how far I\'ve come! Thank you for sharing
June 25th, 2024 14:38
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... thank you for sharing your pain abandonment is not an easy table to sit at! I\'ve been there time and time again and your beautiful words show me how far I\'ve come! Thank you for sharing
June 25th, 2024 14:38
Farewell ?
peto said:
Some great lines in this Neilton
\"How in the world will I find my lost piece \" \"a particular favourite
Enjoyed the read and looking forward to more
June 25th, 2024 12:51
peto said:
Some great lines in this Neilton
\"How in the world will I find my lost piece \" \"a particular favourite
Enjoyed the read and looking forward to more
June 25th, 2024 12:51
My fears
Teddy.15 said:
This is beautiful, reminds me of the innocence of ignorance more than anything, sometimes we just cannot see what\'s at the end of our nose. 🌹
June 25th, 2024 11:14
Teddy.15 said:
This is beautiful, reminds me of the innocence of ignorance more than anything, sometimes we just cannot see what\'s at the end of our nose. 🌹
June 25th, 2024 11:14
My fears
Neville said:
sounds like some kind of inner turmoil .. just let it be .. accept what is and enjoy .. a compelling read, now read several times .. Neville
June 15th, 2024 03:53
Neville said:
sounds like some kind of inner turmoil .. just let it be .. accept what is and enjoy .. a compelling read, now read several times .. Neville
June 15th, 2024 03:53
And suddenly...
Thad Wilk said:
Awww, what a poignant 😢
and emotional poem
very touching indeed!
Eloquently penned and
my pleasure to read!!
Best wishes. 🌹
Thad
June 13th, 2024 15:16
Thad Wilk said:
Awww, what a poignant 😢
and emotional poem
very touching indeed!
Eloquently penned and
my pleasure to read!!
Best wishes. 🌹
Thad
June 13th, 2024 15:16
Keep trying
Neilton said:
You are absolutely right Neville! Thank so so much!!!!
June 11th, 2024 13:56
Neilton said:
You are absolutely right Neville! Thank so so much!!!!
June 11th, 2024 13:56
Keep trying
Neville said:
Never give up .. they will tire long before you do providing you remain determined .. very much enjoyed .. Neville
June 9th, 2024 16:03
Neville said:
Never give up .. they will tire long before you do providing you remain determined .. very much enjoyed .. Neville
June 9th, 2024 16:03
Coldplay
Thomas W Case said:
Very cool. The love comes through in your writing. Great work.
June 9th, 2024 14:35
Thomas W Case said:
Very cool. The love comes through in your writing. Great work.
June 9th, 2024 14:35
Coldplay
Teddy.15 said:
I am quite sure that I was sitting at a bar in a beautiful quiet square in the hills of a Florence a few years ago and Chris Martin rode up to my table on a bike, it was the weirdest moment but I can say I am almost certain it was him. To have a crush or passion for a pop star is a real life emotion, I felt the same for so many artists in the 90\'s beautiful poetry we need more inspiring voices in the music industry 🌹
June 9th, 2024 13:16
Teddy.15 said:
I am quite sure that I was sitting at a bar in a beautiful quiet square in the hills of a Florence a few years ago and Chris Martin rode up to my table on a bike, it was the weirdest moment but I can say I am almost certain it was him. To have a crush or passion for a pop star is a real life emotion, I felt the same for so many artists in the 90\'s beautiful poetry we need more inspiring voices in the music industry 🌹
June 9th, 2024 13:16
Coldplay
peto said:
I have had the same pleasure neilton
Saw them in Glasgow
This has a great rhyme to begin with
Out of all their songs this really reminds me of \"fix you \"
Great write
June 9th, 2024 12:05
peto said:
I have had the same pleasure neilton
Saw them in Glasgow
This has a great rhyme to begin with
Out of all their songs this really reminds me of \"fix you \"
Great write
June 9th, 2024 12:05
Coldplay
Cassie58 said:
Pleased you enjoyed the concert. No question of doubt you found the experience uplifting. A totally positive and memorable occasion your tribute tells me:)
June 9th, 2024 10:39
Cassie58 said:
Pleased you enjoyed the concert. No question of doubt you found the experience uplifting. A totally positive and memorable occasion your tribute tells me:)
June 9th, 2024 10:39
And suddenly...
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem. Must have been alot of hurt here and that takes time to soften. I only hope there are good memories too.
June 1st, 2024 06:18
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem. Must have been alot of hurt here and that takes time to soften. I only hope there are good memories too.
June 1st, 2024 06:18
The debate
Neville said:
Once started, it was impossible to put down until the PAIN was revealed .. a compelling post indeed .. and muchly enjoyed .. Neville
May 30th, 2024 04:51
Neville said:
Once started, it was impossible to put down until the PAIN was revealed .. a compelling post indeed .. and muchly enjoyed .. Neville
May 30th, 2024 04:51
And suddenly...
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fine poem expressing swell, lamenting and sighing superbly in words. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 14th, 2024 13:15
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fine poem expressing swell, lamenting and sighing superbly in words. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 14th, 2024 13:15
And suddenly...
Teddy.15 said:
There should be no room in any of our lives for toxic love. Beautiful. 🌹
April 13th, 2024 02:59
Teddy.15 said:
There should be no room in any of our lives for toxic love. Beautiful. 🌹
April 13th, 2024 02:59
And suddenly...
Neville said:
I sense more than just a hint of sadness here .. enjoyed tho\' ..
March 5th, 2024 13:25
Neville said:
I sense more than just a hint of sadness here .. enjoyed tho\' ..
March 5th, 2024 13:25
And suddenly...
peto said:
Nice rhyme in this poem
Although sad it also has a feeling of moving on
That takes strength
Enjoyed
March 5th, 2024 12:15
peto said:
Nice rhyme in this poem
Although sad it also has a feeling of moving on
That takes strength
Enjoyed
March 5th, 2024 12:15
The unkind
peto said:
Enjoyed the read
Glad to discover your writing
Looking forward to reading more
February 28th, 2024 16:52
peto said:
Enjoyed the read
Glad to discover your writing
Looking forward to reading more
February 28th, 2024 16:52
The unkind
Meera Mere said:
\"I guess it\'s their insult.\"
It is indeed, to miss the beauty. Even the moon is cratered with imperfections. Our imperfections make us who we are, live it.
February 27th, 2024 12:29
Meera Mere said:
\"I guess it\'s their insult.\"
It is indeed, to miss the beauty. Even the moon is cratered with imperfections. Our imperfections make us who we are, live it.
February 27th, 2024 12:29
Keep trying
Cassie58 said:
Keep trying. Persevere. Never give up working your way through the darkness. There is light at the end of the tunnel. I enjoyed my visit today. Thank you.
February 26th, 2024 08:57
Cassie58 said:
Keep trying. Persevere. Never give up working your way through the darkness. There is light at the end of the tunnel. I enjoyed my visit today. Thank you.
February 26th, 2024 08:57
back to the start
Neville said:
I am so glad I stumbled upon these fine words .. Oh\' & welcome to MPS ..
I hope you will be happy here .. & write on .. Neville
February 25th, 2024 15:20
Neville said:
I am so glad I stumbled upon these fine words .. Oh\' & welcome to MPS ..
I hope you will be happy here .. & write on .. Neville
February 25th, 2024 15:20
back to the start
Cassie58 said:
Conflict with a loved one. Your lines express how difficult you are finding this situation. You convey your feelings well. I enjoyed reading your poem. All good wishes.
February 25th, 2024 14:21
Cassie58 said:
Conflict with a loved one. Your lines express how difficult you are finding this situation. You convey your feelings well. I enjoyed reading your poem. All good wishes.
February 25th, 2024 14:21
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