Comments received on poems by Neilton
Till death do us part
sorenbarrett said:
Best wishes on your recovery from this terrible plight. The poem I did not read this at first sight and like the disorder itself went unnoticed until the note at the end. Misinterpreted it would have been a very different review. The person with the disorder has to let people know to gain help. My favorite line was the last (By the thorns in her own feathers) This is truely poetic and a fovorite I will remember.
October 24th, 2024 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
Best wishes on your recovery from this terrible plight. The poem I did not read this at first sight and like the disorder itself went unnoticed until the note at the end. Misinterpreted it would have been a very different review. The person with the disorder has to let people know to gain help. My favorite line was the last (By the thorns in her own feathers) This is truely poetic and a fovorite I will remember.
October 24th, 2024 07:39
Coward
NafisaSB said:
what a masterpiece- i hope it\'s not your own broken heart that is crying to be heard
October 23rd, 2024 23:59
NafisaSB said:
what a masterpiece- i hope it\'s not your own broken heart that is crying to be heard
October 23rd, 2024 23:59
Coward
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You will be wiser for the experience.
October 23rd, 2024 14:41
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. You will be wiser for the experience.
October 23rd, 2024 14:41
Coward
peto said:
Hi pal
This is a sad but beautifully written piece
The coward dies 1000 deaths
You live one life and make it a belter
\"The same as the previous and I bet my heart the next one \"
That line gave me chills
Stay strong my friend and keep writing
October 23rd, 2024 11:52
peto said:
Hi pal
This is a sad but beautifully written piece
The coward dies 1000 deaths
You live one life and make it a belter
\"The same as the previous and I bet my heart the next one \"
That line gave me chills
Stay strong my friend and keep writing
October 23rd, 2024 11:52
Coward
sorenbarrett said:
Since Hamlet I have always loved soliloquies and this is no less. I love writing them as well and haven\'t done so in a long time. This one I can hear the anger in and it is powerful very nice
October 23rd, 2024 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Since Hamlet I have always loved soliloquies and this is no less. I love writing them as well and haven\'t done so in a long time. This one I can hear the anger in and it is powerful very nice
October 23rd, 2024 05:22
Coward
Neville said:
Another little masterpiece from your growing portfolio .. I just hope if this is based on fact, you have learnt several very important lessons .. Anyway, keep your chin up regardless & write on .. Neville
October 23rd, 2024 03:59
Neville said:
Another little masterpiece from your growing portfolio .. I just hope if this is based on fact, you have learnt several very important lessons .. Anyway, keep your chin up regardless & write on .. Neville
October 23rd, 2024 03:59
The lion
Neville said:
Why am I not surprised .. Excellent ink my young friend .. Neville
October 23rd, 2024 03:57
Neville said:
Why am I not surprised .. Excellent ink my young friend .. Neville
October 23rd, 2024 03:57
Amaranthine love
Neville said:
what an extraordinarily fine love poem in my most humble opinion .. and I shall keep my fingers crossed that one day you will eventually find your prince charming & live happily ever after .. until then tho\' here\'s little old me wishing you All the very best of all good things, Neville :)
September 10th, 2024 13:52
Neville said:
what an extraordinarily fine love poem in my most humble opinion .. and I shall keep my fingers crossed that one day you will eventually find your prince charming & live happily ever after .. until then tho\' here\'s little old me wishing you All the very best of all good things, Neville :)
September 10th, 2024 13:52
The lion
sorenbarrett said:
Descriptive, vivid, powerful are words that come to mind. Such a metaphor in the contrast of a lion to a pigeon. A pigeon like a dove brings peace to my mind. A pigeon the message carrier, was the messenger killed Great poem
September 10th, 2024 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Descriptive, vivid, powerful are words that come to mind. Such a metaphor in the contrast of a lion to a pigeon. A pigeon like a dove brings peace to my mind. A pigeon the message carrier, was the messenger killed Great poem
September 10th, 2024 05:27
My little life
sorenbarrett said:
There are strong feelings of love in this poem. Carries with it a sensitivity towards others and a general feeling of peace. Very nicely worded.
September 9th, 2024 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
There are strong feelings of love in this poem. Carries with it a sensitivity towards others and a general feeling of peace. Very nicely worded.
September 9th, 2024 06:37
My little life
2781 said:
If the Son therefore shall make you free, ye shall be free indeed.
September 9th, 2024 02:49
2781 said:
If the Son therefore shall make you free, ye shall be free indeed.
September 9th, 2024 02:49
A touch
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and inspiring, whelling into jubilant rejoicing, only so softly and almost subtly as if it\'d been a secret which manifested what the soul was yearning to own.
September 8th, 2024 17:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and inspiring, whelling into jubilant rejoicing, only so softly and almost subtly as if it\'d been a secret which manifested what the soul was yearning to own.
September 8th, 2024 17:39
A touch
sorenbarrett said:
Light the symbol for knowledge a guiding source. Nicely done.
September 8th, 2024 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
Light the symbol for knowledge a guiding source. Nicely done.
September 8th, 2024 06:34
A touch
Cassie58 said:
That spark of light in the darkness is hope. It came when needed in this poem. We all need that beacon when we are in trouble. What a significant difference it can make.
September 8th, 2024 04:10
Cassie58 said:
That spark of light in the darkness is hope. It came when needed in this poem. We all need that beacon when we are in trouble. What a significant difference it can make.
September 8th, 2024 04:10
Amaranthine love
Dan Williams said:
Sure, I had to look up \'amaranthine\' but hey, was worth it. Very nice.
September 7th, 2024 01:26
Dan Williams said:
Sure, I had to look up \'amaranthine\' but hey, was worth it. Very nice.
September 7th, 2024 01:26
Amaranthine love
Cassie58 said:
Amaranthine love sounds pretty good to me. Very nicely penned Neilton. Pleased I stopped by. Happy Friday.
September 6th, 2024 11:20
Cassie58 said:
Amaranthine love sounds pretty good to me. Very nicely penned Neilton. Pleased I stopped by. Happy Friday.
September 6th, 2024 11:20
Can you tell?
RSM0812 said:
Sounds like your brother is lucky to have you as a brother. Great write.
September 6th, 2024 09:24
RSM0812 said:
Sounds like your brother is lucky to have you as a brother. Great write.
September 6th, 2024 09:24
Amaranthine love
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write. A Professing of love and an idealistic view of it. Very nicely expressed in an organized poetic manner.
September 6th, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write. A Professing of love and an idealistic view of it. Very nicely expressed in an organized poetic manner.
September 6th, 2024 04:35
A confession
AuburnScribbler said:
Such a powerful and wonderful write Neilton, the fact that this poem is also autobiographical, it makes it even more compelling.
Though you have written this in a painful yearning tone, I do hope that you and your brother still hold on to happy memories, and are able to create new ones very soon.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 2nd, 2024 13:03
AuburnScribbler said:
Such a powerful and wonderful write Neilton, the fact that this poem is also autobiographical, it makes it even more compelling.
Though you have written this in a painful yearning tone, I do hope that you and your brother still hold on to happy memories, and are able to create new ones very soon.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 2nd, 2024 13:03
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