Comments received on poems by Neilton
Can you tell?
RSM0812 said:
Sounds like your brother is lucky to have you as a brother. Great write.
September 6th, 2024 09:24
RSM0812 said:
Sounds like your brother is lucky to have you as a brother. Great write.
September 6th, 2024 09:24
Amaranthine love
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write. A Professing of love and an idealistic view of it. Very nicely expressed in an organized poetic manner.
September 6th, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write. A Professing of love and an idealistic view of it. Very nicely expressed in an organized poetic manner.
September 6th, 2024 04:35
A confession
AuburnScribbler said:
Such a powerful and wonderful write Neilton, the fact that this poem is also autobiographical, it makes it even more compelling.
Though you have written this in a painful yearning tone, I do hope that you and your brother still hold on to happy memories, and are able to create new ones very soon.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 2nd, 2024 13:03
AuburnScribbler said:
Such a powerful and wonderful write Neilton, the fact that this poem is also autobiographical, it makes it even more compelling.
Though you have written this in a painful yearning tone, I do hope that you and your brother still hold on to happy memories, and are able to create new ones very soon.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 2nd, 2024 13:03
A man in my past
Dan Williams said:
Thoughts racing, whirling. This guy embarrasses me, not a gentleman. Nice work.
September 1st, 2024 00:42
Dan Williams said:
Thoughts racing, whirling. This guy embarrasses me, not a gentleman. Nice work.
September 1st, 2024 00:42
A man in my past
Cassie58 said:
You convey the pain here. So unpleasant to feel that you have been played. We do grow stronger where we break, although you might not appreciate that yet. Narcissism, yuk. A clean break is always best. They never change. A good read.
August 31st, 2024 18:41
Cassie58 said:
You convey the pain here. So unpleasant to feel that you have been played. We do grow stronger where we break, although you might not appreciate that yet. Narcissism, yuk. A clean break is always best. They never change. A good read.
August 31st, 2024 18:41
A man in my past
sorenbarrett said:
Being taken advantage of and discarded is a very painful thing. This poem appears to be an opening of the heart nicely written.
August 31st, 2024 15:12
sorenbarrett said:
Being taken advantage of and discarded is a very painful thing. This poem appears to be an opening of the heart nicely written.
August 31st, 2024 15:12
Can you tell?
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Really love the bond your share with your brother
August 31st, 2024 00:13
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Really love the bond your share with your brother
August 31st, 2024 00:13
Can you tell?
Doggerel Dave said:
This poem is notable as much for what it doesn\'t say than what it does. And that is right and proper. But many many folks don\'t get the best start in life for a wide variety of reasons, and I see this as a support for them as well as your brother.
August 30th, 2024 18:48
Doggerel Dave said:
This poem is notable as much for what it doesn\'t say than what it does. And that is right and proper. But many many folks don\'t get the best start in life for a wide variety of reasons, and I see this as a support for them as well as your brother.
August 30th, 2024 18:48
The invisible prison
Neville said:
Some things just need to be both said and written down as a memo .. this is one of those things .. a powerful and emotionally charged plea & prayer to all regarding the need to value and cherish all life forms .. You also remind me of why I have such contempt for certain members of my own species .. Neville
July 8th, 2024 03:34
Neville said:
Some things just need to be both said and written down as a memo .. this is one of those things .. a powerful and emotionally charged plea & prayer to all regarding the need to value and cherish all life forms .. You also remind me of why I have such contempt for certain members of my own species .. Neville
July 8th, 2024 03:34
The invisible prison
Doggerel Dave said:
First time I\'ve wandered in your direction, Neilton...through the crowd. I will return. Such straightforward anger coherently expressed needs to be read by me.
July 2nd, 2024 18:57
Doggerel Dave said:
First time I\'ve wandered in your direction, Neilton...through the crowd. I will return. Such straightforward anger coherently expressed needs to be read by me.
July 2nd, 2024 18:57
The invisible prison
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Release (Hu)Man from all condemnation.\"
Isn\'t that one of the hardest things to do? I\'m working on it!
July 2nd, 2024 18:55
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Release (Hu)Man from all condemnation.\"
Isn\'t that one of the hardest things to do? I\'m working on it!
July 2nd, 2024 18:55
The invisible prison
peto said:
You are becoming very accomplished at this writing lark Neilton
Some fantastic lines again
I\'ve seen that look in a dogs eyes
\"I laugh with your foolishness, I cry with your brutishness \" really impressive
I have a blind cat (rescued)
She is amazing and if anyone tried to abuse her in my presence I hate to think what may happen
Keep it up
You have a conscience and talent
Wonderful combination
July 2nd, 2024 13:49
peto said:
You are becoming very accomplished at this writing lark Neilton
Some fantastic lines again
I\'ve seen that look in a dogs eyes
\"I laugh with your foolishness, I cry with your brutishness \" really impressive
I have a blind cat (rescued)
She is amazing and if anyone tried to abuse her in my presence I hate to think what may happen
Keep it up
You have a conscience and talent
Wonderful combination
July 2nd, 2024 13:49
The invisible prison
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - being daft - you got out of that prison yet? If it\'s invisible, how will you know when you\'ve got out?! lol
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
July 2nd, 2024 13:40
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - being daft - you got out of that prison yet? If it\'s invisible, how will you know when you\'ve got out?! lol
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
July 2nd, 2024 13:40
The invisible prison
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse of any type is abhorrent whether to people or animals. A good write N.
July 2nd, 2024 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
Abuse of any type is abhorrent whether to people or animals. A good write N.
July 2nd, 2024 12:42
Nostalgia
peto said:
Your content is really good again Neilton
You also always seem to put a wee bit of yourself into your writing
Enjoying what I\'m reading from you
June 27th, 2024 15:29
peto said:
Your content is really good again Neilton
You also always seem to put a wee bit of yourself into your writing
Enjoying what I\'m reading from you
June 27th, 2024 15:29
Nostalgia
Thomas W Case said:
This is fantastic. You capture the longing for better days.
June 27th, 2024 12:14
Thomas W Case said:
This is fantastic. You capture the longing for better days.
June 27th, 2024 12:14
Coldplay
Thad Wilk said:
An uplifting and
Insightful write!! ✍️
So glad your
dream came true,
to read A delight!! 👍
Best wishes 🌹. Thad
June 27th, 2024 10:54
Thad Wilk said:
An uplifting and
Insightful write!! ✍️
So glad your
dream came true,
to read A delight!! 👍
Best wishes 🌹. Thad
June 27th, 2024 10:54
Does it end?
Mutley Ravishes said:
Every time the body feels tension
Work on relaxation
Every morning when you wake up
Do some Pranayama
Every time a thought feels
Not aligned with your high ideal
Return gently to this ideal
So that those thoughts
Cannot steal
The sun\'s rays
Patience, persistence
And faith
June 26th, 2024 18:29
Mutley Ravishes said:
Every time the body feels tension
Work on relaxation
Every morning when you wake up
Do some Pranayama
Every time a thought feels
Not aligned with your high ideal
Return gently to this ideal
So that those thoughts
Cannot steal
The sun\'s rays
Patience, persistence
And faith
June 26th, 2024 18:29
Does it end?
peto said:
You speak of being stuck in pain
An endless maze and sorrow
Yet it is hard to imagine the writer is suffering
Hoping you find the streets of luck more often
Talented
June 26th, 2024 15:02
peto said:
You speak of being stuck in pain
An endless maze and sorrow
Yet it is hard to imagine the writer is suffering
Hoping you find the streets of luck more often
Talented
June 26th, 2024 15:02
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