Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk



~> The Vampiress - in three poetic forms -
Mutley Ravishes said:

Sorry Vampiress,
But Medusa is
The scariest!

Nice write, Thad!

November 24th, 2024 20:11

~> The Vampiress - in three poetic forms -
Cassie58 said:

You are so bloomin clever with your structured verse. You must have alot of patience Thad. Need to keep out of her way. She spells trouble. Entertaining and I do like the repeat lines. They add emphasis. All good wishes.

November 24th, 2024 18:36

~> The Vampiress - in three poetic forms -
Doggerel Dave said:

Got me completely – I’ll shut up
I cannot follow – I will let up…….
………For today anyway…....

Dunno how you do it Thad - but the entertainment level is high. 👍👍👍


November 24th, 2024 16:30

~> This Monster Lurks, Inside My Head! - form Monotetra -
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Another wonderful monotetra on one of my favorite topics: monsters.👾 Love this Thad. 🤘

November 24th, 2024 02:49

~> This Evil Clown - form Monotetra -
Goldfinch60 said:

I won\'t go out again tonight then Thad.

Andy

November 24th, 2024 02:22

~> This Evil Clown - form Monotetra -
Thomas W Case said:

Wow. Scary stuff.

November 23rd, 2024 18:51

~> This Evil Clown - form Monotetra -
Doggerel Dave said:

Howdo Thad,
Mate, you make it look too easy;
I’m scratching around all the time.
When my lines they get too wheezy
It’s because I can’t find the rhyme.

Doing my best to be a bard; but you’ve got it all sewn up!



November 23rd, 2024 17:38

~> This Evil Clown - form Monotetra -
orchidee said:

Do you know this guy? Not a pleasant guy to meet! lol.

November 23rd, 2024 12:54

~> This Monster Lurks, Inside My Head! - form Monotetra -
Goldfinch60 said:

Can I go out tonight and come back safely Thad? LOL

Andy

November 23rd, 2024 02:46

~> This Monster Lurks, Inside My Head! - form Monotetra -
Doggerel Dave said:

Howdee Thad,
I really feel something amiss;
It just don’t fill me with no bliss.
It’s my girlfriend who gives me this -
A big wet kiss, a big wet kiss.

Really think I might be getting a feel for this Monotwhatsit thingy….😜


November 22nd, 2024 16:44

~> This Monster Lurks, Inside My Head! - form Monotetra -
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. So true.

November 22nd, 2024 15:20

~> This Monster Lurks, Inside My Head! - form Monotetra -
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 22nd, 2024 13:52

~> This Monster Lurks, Inside My Head! - form Monotetra -
Goddess of the Mist said:

Wow - frightening! And yes, the monsters are definitely inside.

November 22nd, 2024 12:01

~> Will Work For Head! - Monorhyme -
Doggerel Dave said:

G’day Thad:
Now it seems for her you’d lost your cred;
But why did you believe the lies she fed?
So the best thing you can do is just fly -
No more loss of self-esteem – say good bye.
Aw shit! After her outburst she got in first.

A highly technical poetry form consisting of five lines, in which the first and second pairs retain rhyme unto themselves. The concluding line has a rhyme within its single structure. I know it’s complicated – please don’t attempt unless you feel strong…
I hope this helps……


November 21st, 2024 18:08

~> Will Work For Head! - Monorhyme -
arqios said:

And on and on rides our Ichabod Crane... and his headless horseman!

November 21st, 2024 17:11

~> Will Work For Head! - Monorhyme -
Cassie58 said:

Headless and challenged. Where do you get the inspiration for your humour Thad? Thanks for making a cloudy day sunny. A fun poem. Making it a favourite.

November 21st, 2024 13:19

~> Will Work For Head! - Monorhyme -
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Great write, Thad! You had me from the title! LOL! And the poem didn\'t fail to deliver! Well done, my friend! And excellent monorhyme! 🌹👏

November 21st, 2024 11:52

~> Will Work For Head! - Monorhyme -
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Thad best regards

November 21st, 2024 10:27

~> Another Meal, On The Fly! - Form Trijan Refrain -
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words and layout Thad.

Andy

November 21st, 2024 02:19

~> Another Meal, On The Fly! - Form Trijan Refrain -
Doggerel Dave said:

Modesty does not become you, tree-frog guy -
You got Thad going with his Trijan Refrain.
Come round an keep them flies out of my fry;
I don’t want to see that blue-bottle again.

Howdee, Thad – after that break you’re back with sensible engaging poetry once more – well done, Sir.


November 20th, 2024 20:52

~> Another Meal, On The Fly! - Form Trijan Refrain -
sorenbarrett said:

I didn’t know about that form, but I have my own tree frog that lives in my bathroom and serenades me at night. He eats my flies and mosquitoes, and I have to be careful before I flush because he swims in my toilet.

November 20th, 2024 20:05

~> I need Your Love - form Rondeau -
Neville said:



I bet these are not the easiest to craft .. an impressive form that I am not likely to try and attempt .. much credit to you my friend for pulling it off so well .. Neville

November 20th, 2024 00:44

~> I need Your Love - form Rondeau -
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving words Thad.

Andy

November 19th, 2024 02:27

~> I need Your Love - form Rondeau -
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Impressive, my friend! A form I have yet to write in. At some point, I figure I just might! The form and the words both make for a beautiful expression of love. Wonderful job! 👏🌹

November 18th, 2024 14:51

~> Never Hurts To Wear The Right Shirts!
NafisaSB said:

humor well presented. enjoyed the flow of words - as usual: you have me floored... keep it coming

November 18th, 2024 08:48

~> Never Hurts To Wear The Right Shirts!
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful fun words Thad. As Cassie said, here in the UK we call ir \"Builders Bum\".

Andy

November 18th, 2024 02:23

~> Never Hurts To Wear The Right Shirts!
Neville said:



Fuck the monometric form this cool as it stands .. or should that be hot as he kneels .. at the end of the day it don\'t matter .. I bet you get a load of view too .. bravo .. Neville

November 18th, 2024 02:07

~> My Dawg Clyde!
NafisaSB said:

my neighbor\'s dog grew as fast before our eyes as your dog Clyde.. very descriptive and beautiful write..wishing you and your dog great bonding.

November 18th, 2024 00:27

~> Never Hurts To Wear The Right Shirts!
Doggerel Dave said:

Presentation is All:
It’s all them customers to whom my bum is in thrall.
Times when we couldn’t pay the bills, I don’t miss ‘em at all.
My wife refused to let me buy better fitting trews -
Any change of apparel, she said would mean we would lose.

You\'ve certainly plumbed the depths of hilarity, Thad


November 17th, 2024 17:17

~> Never Hurts To Wear The Right Shirts!
sorenbarrett said:

Humor is the best medicine and sex sells better than anything else put the two togeather and you got a winner.

November 17th, 2024 14:34



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