Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk
~> This Monster Lurks, Inside My Head! - form Monotetra -
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. So true.
November 22nd, 2024 15:20
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. So true.
November 22nd, 2024 15:20
~> This Monster Lurks, Inside My Head! - form Monotetra -
Tony36 said:
Great write
November 22nd, 2024 13:52
Tony36 said:
Great write
November 22nd, 2024 13:52
~> This Monster Lurks, Inside My Head! - form Monotetra -
Goddess of the Mist said:
Wow - frightening! And yes, the monsters are definitely inside.
November 22nd, 2024 12:01
Goddess of the Mist said:
Wow - frightening! And yes, the monsters are definitely inside.
November 22nd, 2024 12:01
~> Will Work For Head! - Monorhyme -
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad:
Now it seems for her you’d lost your cred;
But why did you believe the lies she fed?
So the best thing you can do is just fly -
No more loss of self-esteem – say good bye.
Aw shit! After her outburst she got in first.
A highly technical poetry form consisting of five lines, in which the first and second pairs retain rhyme unto themselves. The concluding line has a rhyme within its single structure. I know it’s complicated – please don’t attempt unless you feel strong…
I hope this helps……
November 21st, 2024 18:08
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad:
Now it seems for her you’d lost your cred;
But why did you believe the lies she fed?
So the best thing you can do is just fly -
No more loss of self-esteem – say good bye.
Aw shit! After her outburst she got in first.
A highly technical poetry form consisting of five lines, in which the first and second pairs retain rhyme unto themselves. The concluding line has a rhyme within its single structure. I know it’s complicated – please don’t attempt unless you feel strong…
I hope this helps……
November 21st, 2024 18:08
~> Will Work For Head! - Monorhyme -
arqios said:
And on and on rides our Ichabod Crane... and his headless horseman!
November 21st, 2024 17:11
arqios said:
And on and on rides our Ichabod Crane... and his headless horseman!
November 21st, 2024 17:11
~> Will Work For Head! - Monorhyme -
Cassie58 said:
Headless and challenged. Where do you get the inspiration for your humour Thad? Thanks for making a cloudy day sunny. A fun poem. Making it a favourite.
November 21st, 2024 13:19
Cassie58 said:
Headless and challenged. Where do you get the inspiration for your humour Thad? Thanks for making a cloudy day sunny. A fun poem. Making it a favourite.
November 21st, 2024 13:19
~> Will Work For Head! - Monorhyme -
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great write, Thad! You had me from the title! LOL! And the poem didn\'t fail to deliver! Well done, my friend! And excellent monorhyme! 🌹👏
November 21st, 2024 11:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great write, Thad! You had me from the title! LOL! And the poem didn\'t fail to deliver! Well done, my friend! And excellent monorhyme! 🌹👏
November 21st, 2024 11:52
~> Will Work For Head! - Monorhyme -
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Thad best regards
November 21st, 2024 10:27
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Thad best regards
November 21st, 2024 10:27
~> Another Meal, On The Fly! - Form Trijan Refrain -
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words and layout Thad.
Andy
November 21st, 2024 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words and layout Thad.
Andy
November 21st, 2024 02:19
~> Another Meal, On The Fly! - Form Trijan Refrain -
Doggerel Dave said:
Modesty does not become you, tree-frog guy -
You got Thad going with his Trijan Refrain.
Come round an keep them flies out of my fry;
I don’t want to see that blue-bottle again.
Howdee, Thad – after that break you’re back with sensible engaging poetry once more – well done, Sir.
November 20th, 2024 20:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Modesty does not become you, tree-frog guy -
You got Thad going with his Trijan Refrain.
Come round an keep them flies out of my fry;
I don’t want to see that blue-bottle again.
Howdee, Thad – after that break you’re back with sensible engaging poetry once more – well done, Sir.
November 20th, 2024 20:52
~> Another Meal, On The Fly! - Form Trijan Refrain -
sorenbarrett said:
I didn’t know about that form, but I have my own tree frog that lives in my bathroom and serenades me at night. He eats my flies and mosquitoes, and I have to be careful before I flush because he swims in my toilet.
November 20th, 2024 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
I didn’t know about that form, but I have my own tree frog that lives in my bathroom and serenades me at night. He eats my flies and mosquitoes, and I have to be careful before I flush because he swims in my toilet.
November 20th, 2024 20:05
~> I need Your Love - form Rondeau -
Neville said:
I bet these are not the easiest to craft .. an impressive form that I am not likely to try and attempt .. much credit to you my friend for pulling it off so well .. Neville
November 20th, 2024 00:44
Neville said:
I bet these are not the easiest to craft .. an impressive form that I am not likely to try and attempt .. much credit to you my friend for pulling it off so well .. Neville
November 20th, 2024 00:44
~> I need Your Love - form Rondeau -
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Thad.
Andy
November 19th, 2024 02:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Thad.
Andy
November 19th, 2024 02:27
~> I need Your Love - form Rondeau -
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Impressive, my friend! A form I have yet to write in. At some point, I figure I just might! The form and the words both make for a beautiful expression of love. Wonderful job! 👏🌹
November 18th, 2024 14:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Impressive, my friend! A form I have yet to write in. At some point, I figure I just might! The form and the words both make for a beautiful expression of love. Wonderful job! 👏🌹
November 18th, 2024 14:51
~> Never Hurts To Wear The Right Shirts!
NafisaSB said:
humor well presented. enjoyed the flow of words - as usual: you have me floored... keep it coming
November 18th, 2024 08:48
NafisaSB said:
humor well presented. enjoyed the flow of words - as usual: you have me floored... keep it coming
November 18th, 2024 08:48
~> Never Hurts To Wear The Right Shirts!
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun words Thad. As Cassie said, here in the UK we call ir \"Builders Bum\".
Andy
November 18th, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful fun words Thad. As Cassie said, here in the UK we call ir \"Builders Bum\".
Andy
November 18th, 2024 02:23
~> Never Hurts To Wear The Right Shirts!
Neville said:
Fuck the monometric form this cool as it stands .. or should that be hot as he kneels .. at the end of the day it don\'t matter .. I bet you get a load of view too .. bravo .. Neville
November 18th, 2024 02:07
Neville said:
Fuck the monometric form this cool as it stands .. or should that be hot as he kneels .. at the end of the day it don\'t matter .. I bet you get a load of view too .. bravo .. Neville
November 18th, 2024 02:07
~> My Dawg Clyde!
NafisaSB said:
my neighbor\'s dog grew as fast before our eyes as your dog Clyde.. very descriptive and beautiful write..wishing you and your dog great bonding.
November 18th, 2024 00:27
NafisaSB said:
my neighbor\'s dog grew as fast before our eyes as your dog Clyde.. very descriptive and beautiful write..wishing you and your dog great bonding.
November 18th, 2024 00:27
~> Never Hurts To Wear The Right Shirts!
Doggerel Dave said:
Presentation is All:
It’s all them customers to whom my bum is in thrall.
Times when we couldn’t pay the bills, I don’t miss ‘em at all.
My wife refused to let me buy better fitting trews -
Any change of apparel, she said would mean we would lose.
You\'ve certainly plumbed the depths of hilarity, Thad
November 17th, 2024 17:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Presentation is All:
It’s all them customers to whom my bum is in thrall.
Times when we couldn’t pay the bills, I don’t miss ‘em at all.
My wife refused to let me buy better fitting trews -
Any change of apparel, she said would mean we would lose.
You\'ve certainly plumbed the depths of hilarity, Thad
November 17th, 2024 17:17
~> Never Hurts To Wear The Right Shirts!
sorenbarrett said:
Humor is the best medicine and sex sells better than anything else put the two togeather and you got a winner.
November 17th, 2024 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
Humor is the best medicine and sex sells better than anything else put the two togeather and you got a winner.
November 17th, 2024 14:34
~> Never Hurts To Wear The Right Shirts!
Cassie58 said:
Hilarious. You must have some time on your hands to compose in all these different forms. Over here in the UK we would call that Builders Bum. I just showed my other half your posted images. He laughed a lot. Where do you buy the shirts lol. He didn’t want to know about your poetry though lol. He isn’t a poetry sort of guy.
November 17th, 2024 11:17
Cassie58 said:
Hilarious. You must have some time on your hands to compose in all these different forms. Over here in the UK we would call that Builders Bum. I just showed my other half your posted images. He laughed a lot. Where do you buy the shirts lol. He didn’t want to know about your poetry though lol. He isn’t a poetry sort of guy.
November 17th, 2024 11:17
~> My Dawg Clyde!
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Thad, Clyde must be a great friend.
Andy
November 17th, 2024 03:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Thad, Clyde must be a great friend.
Andy
November 17th, 2024 03:04
~> My Dawg Clyde!
Doggerel Dave said:
And once more with feeling, Thad:
Wot you’ve got there is a hound dog and a half -
Best take him to the carwash when he needs a bath.
When his food gets delivered neighbours are quite miffed;
It’s delivered by truck and bleedin great forklift.
November 16th, 2024 18:41
Doggerel Dave said:
And once more with feeling, Thad:
Wot you’ve got there is a hound dog and a half -
Best take him to the carwash when he needs a bath.
When his food gets delivered neighbours are quite miffed;
It’s delivered by truck and bleedin great forklift.
November 16th, 2024 18:41
~> My Dawg Clyde!
sorenbarrett said:
Gives me memories of my old dog he used to pull me on my bike all around town. I too had to watch out for cats. A great write thanks for the memories
November 16th, 2024 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
Gives me memories of my old dog he used to pull me on my bike all around town. I too had to watch out for cats. A great write thanks for the memories
November 16th, 2024 13:30
~> My Dawg Clyde!
Cassie58 said:
Monotetra. Learning form poetry from you Thad. You are an adventurer :) That is one big dog. Looks as though he would eat my Solo for breakfast ( a staffy). Thanks for a fun poem on a cold Saturday afternoon. Happy weekend.
November 16th, 2024 11:01
Cassie58 said:
Monotetra. Learning form poetry from you Thad. You are an adventurer :) That is one big dog. Looks as though he would eat my Solo for breakfast ( a staffy). Thanks for a fun poem on a cold Saturday afternoon. Happy weekend.
November 16th, 2024 11:01
~> My Dawg Clyde!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful Monotetra, Thad. And a great narrative too! Well done, my friend!! 🙏🖤❤️🖤
November 16th, 2024 10:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful Monotetra, Thad. And a great narrative too! Well done, my friend!! 🙏🖤❤️🖤
November 16th, 2024 10:03
~> Today Was Ma Lucky Day!
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words that dialect Thad .
Andy
November 16th, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words that dialect Thad .
Andy
November 16th, 2024 02:23
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