Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk
Sei Tutto Per Me! [ Sicilian Sonnet ]
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad, You don\'t really need any further response after Missy has overwhelmingly endorsed your passionate poetry, do you?
And anyway but also, I do feel that anything I write might by virtue of its crassness, inadvertently cast a pall over the delicate atmosphere you have laboured so diligently….. and so on…. 🙃
September 21st, 2024 21:15
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad, You don\'t really need any further response after Missy has overwhelmingly endorsed your passionate poetry, do you?
And anyway but also, I do feel that anything I write might by virtue of its crassness, inadvertently cast a pall over the delicate atmosphere you have laboured so diligently….. and so on…. 🙃
September 21st, 2024 21:15
Sei Tutto Per Me! [ Sicilian Sonnet ]
Cheeky Missy said:
SIGH. I \"favorite\" these in a vain attempt to collect them for my own. Why have none left any commentary on this delectable number?! Aha! nevermind. I know why, methinks. Were we all able to see one another face to face in this happy, happy pleasure of sharing poetry, there\'d be but slight difference in how all trips along. But I digress.
Oh me! You men know too well how to woo with mere lines. This delicious number rendered to effect in a sonnet, as was said so commonly in Jane Austen\'s day that men were established as suitors thereby, [for evidence thereof see in Pride and Prejudice and etc] how courtship is waltzing sweetly hereby and I well-nigh swoon. Thank you so very, very much for sharing. Me loves.
September 21st, 2024 15:04
Cheeky Missy said:
SIGH. I \"favorite\" these in a vain attempt to collect them for my own. Why have none left any commentary on this delectable number?! Aha! nevermind. I know why, methinks. Were we all able to see one another face to face in this happy, happy pleasure of sharing poetry, there\'d be but slight difference in how all trips along. But I digress.
Oh me! You men know too well how to woo with mere lines. This delicious number rendered to effect in a sonnet, as was said so commonly in Jane Austen\'s day that men were established as suitors thereby, [for evidence thereof see in Pride and Prejudice and etc] how courtship is waltzing sweetly hereby and I well-nigh swoon. Thank you so very, very much for sharing. Me loves.
September 21st, 2024 15:04
~> April Showers Bring May Flowers - Acrostic -
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful acrostic Thad.
Andy
September 21st, 2024 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful acrostic Thad.
Andy
September 21st, 2024 01:48
~> April Showers Bring May Flowers - Acrostic -
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh that\'s orright then, Back to love poetry next week..... or something more.......😜🙃
Fishing? Not going to diversify then?
September 21st, 2024 00:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh that\'s orright then, Back to love poetry next week..... or something more.......😜🙃
Fishing? Not going to diversify then?
September 21st, 2024 00:43
~> April Showers Bring May Flowers - Acrostic -
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad,
Never seen the point of acrostics in terms of Truth ‘n Beauty and all that stuff. Just as puzzling, pleasing fun.
And why not when It is as good as yours. Good lines, Front works well, the ends tied in with great rhyming bows.
PS: Artwork Yours?
September 20th, 2024 18:23
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad,
Never seen the point of acrostics in terms of Truth ‘n Beauty and all that stuff. Just as puzzling, pleasing fun.
And why not when It is as good as yours. Good lines, Front works well, the ends tied in with great rhyming bows.
PS: Artwork Yours?
September 20th, 2024 18:23
~> April Showers Bring May Flowers - Acrostic -
orchidee said:
A fine write Thad.
I can\'t mention Ch..... (it\'s in December) until that month, or another post, Goldfinch, will shoot me - in our bantering! lol.
September 20th, 2024 14:16
orchidee said:
A fine write Thad.
I can\'t mention Ch..... (it\'s in December) until that month, or another post, Goldfinch, will shoot me - in our bantering! lol.
September 20th, 2024 14:16
~> April Showers Bring May Flowers - Acrostic -
Cheeky Missy said:
My--! You\'ve floored me. I never in all my wildest dreams thought you could pen such delectable beauties to curtsy forth, take bows, and dance so captivatingly across the page I\'d nearly swoon. Acrostic was one of my first forms to try and yikes! that probably over 40 years ago by now, crazily. Wow. You\'ve outdone my impressions. Amazing. Beautifully rendered with a subtly joyful poignancy and excellent details. Thank you for sharing.
September 20th, 2024 12:02
Cheeky Missy said:
My--! You\'ve floored me. I never in all my wildest dreams thought you could pen such delectable beauties to curtsy forth, take bows, and dance so captivatingly across the page I\'d nearly swoon. Acrostic was one of my first forms to try and yikes! that probably over 40 years ago by now, crazily. Wow. You\'ve outdone my impressions. Amazing. Beautifully rendered with a subtly joyful poignancy and excellent details. Thank you for sharing.
September 20th, 2024 12:02
~> April Showers Bring May Flowers - Acrostic -
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done Thad with such good rhyme.
September 20th, 2024 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done Thad with such good rhyme.
September 20th, 2024 10:35
~> Since Ya Left - [ red neck ] free verse
Goldfinch60 said:
We get such fond memories from so many strange things Thad. Fine words.
Andy
September 20th, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
We get such fond memories from so many strange things Thad. Fine words.
Andy
September 20th, 2024 01:25
~> Since Ya Left - [ red neck ] free verse
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad.
I think I’m about to opt out of today’s discussion. I believe Missy (above) has, in response to your problem, comprehensively covered your issues and in a way I could never hope to achieve (the vernacular ah do believe).
I am however a little concerned that you may get behind the wheel in a highly emotional state……
Brilliant use of metaphor (which I don’t understand….)
September 19th, 2024 16:58
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad.
I think I’m about to opt out of today’s discussion. I believe Missy (above) has, in response to your problem, comprehensively covered your issues and in a way I could never hope to achieve (the vernacular ah do believe).
I am however a little concerned that you may get behind the wheel in a highly emotional state……
Brilliant use of metaphor (which I don’t understand….)
September 19th, 2024 16:58
~> Since Ya Left - [ red neck ] free verse
Cheeky Missy said:
Yer havin\' way, way too mutch fun makin\' light over heartbreak, ya are. Tis unfergivible, I tell ya. Gonna string yas up an\' pelt ya wif me\'s scarves ta let ya knows tis downright unfergivible it is.
So, I is truly sniffling cuz of frequent crying bouts and me is NOT happy, but I\'s glad to see yer havin\' fun wi\'out me.
Beautifully rendered with excellent humor and good dialect, not to mention a teasing bit of poignancy flirting about. Thank you for sharing.
September 19th, 2024 15:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Yer havin\' way, way too mutch fun makin\' light over heartbreak, ya are. Tis unfergivible, I tell ya. Gonna string yas up an\' pelt ya wif me\'s scarves ta let ya knows tis downright unfergivible it is.
So, I is truly sniffling cuz of frequent crying bouts and me is NOT happy, but I\'s glad to see yer havin\' fun wi\'out me.
Beautifully rendered with excellent humor and good dialect, not to mention a teasing bit of poignancy flirting about. Thank you for sharing.
September 19th, 2024 15:45
~> Since Ya Left - [ red neck ] free verse
sorenbarrett said:
I guess all people feel loss and heart break. Nicely done
September 19th, 2024 13:51
sorenbarrett said:
I guess all people feel loss and heart break. Nicely done
September 19th, 2024 13:51
~> Since Ya Left - [ red neck ] free verse
orchidee said:
When did ah leave ya?! lol.
September 19th, 2024 13:03
orchidee said:
When did ah leave ya?! lol.
September 19th, 2024 13:03
~> Since Ya Left - [ red neck ] free verse
Cassie58 said:
Dear Thad. What a heartbreak tale of misery. Excuse me for smiling. I guess I have a warped sense of humour. You know us Brits do know how to laugh. That flushing of her memory did make my lips turn upwards while they turned down again at the mention of a squashed butterfly. Thank you dear Thad for an entertaining read. Have yerself a great day:) I enjoyed my visit.
September 19th, 2024 09:44
Cassie58 said:
Dear Thad. What a heartbreak tale of misery. Excuse me for smiling. I guess I have a warped sense of humour. You know us Brits do know how to laugh. That flushing of her memory did make my lips turn upwards while they turned down again at the mention of a squashed butterfly. Thank you dear Thad for an entertaining read. Have yerself a great day:) I enjoyed my visit.
September 19th, 2024 09:44
OMG! I Can\'t Think Of Anything To Write!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Thad for those that would not come to you.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Thad for those that would not come to you.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 01:54
OMG! I Can\'t Think Of Anything To Write!
Doggerel Dave said:
I wandered lonely right round here
Looking for some halfway decent cheer:
Your doppelganger in the pic
Done himself alright with that chick;
But do you have to wear a bra
To get ‘em jumping into your car?
I possess neither a bra or a car - definitely among the lovelorn…
September 18th, 2024 18:50
Doggerel Dave said:
I wandered lonely right round here
Looking for some halfway decent cheer:
Your doppelganger in the pic
Done himself alright with that chick;
But do you have to wear a bra
To get ‘em jumping into your car?
I possess neither a bra or a car - definitely among the lovelorn…
September 18th, 2024 18:50
OMG! I Can\'t Think Of Anything To Write!
Cassie58 said:
Thank you for making me chuckke Thad. Pleased to know that isn’t you in the photo. You still managed a poem, even if your muse wasn’t with you to begin with. She soon kicked in. Happy Wednesday.
September 18th, 2024 11:35
Cassie58 said:
Thank you for making me chuckke Thad. Pleased to know that isn’t you in the photo. You still managed a poem, even if your muse wasn’t with you to begin with. She soon kicked in. Happy Wednesday.
September 18th, 2024 11:35
~> Across The Span Of Ageless Skies
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Thad, if only all could see that love works.
Andy
September 18th, 2024 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Thad, if only all could see that love works.
Andy
September 18th, 2024 02:02
~> Across The Span Of Ageless Skies
Doggerel Dave said:
That is a sweetly smooth paean to love, Thad - even if, on the mention of \'bird\' all I can picture are a cockatoo and a kookaburra.
Not too sugary - rich imagery.
September 17th, 2024 18:02
Doggerel Dave said:
That is a sweetly smooth paean to love, Thad - even if, on the mention of \'bird\' all I can picture are a cockatoo and a kookaburra.
Not too sugary - rich imagery.
September 17th, 2024 18:02
~> Whilst At The Beach
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful humorous words Thad.
One time I couldn\'t find the car park let alone the car! LOL
Andy
September 17th, 2024 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful humorous words Thad.
One time I couldn\'t find the car park let alone the car! LOL
Andy
September 17th, 2024 01:49
~> It\'s You I Idolize -form Trijan Refrain -
NafisaSB said:
lovely piece of verse - the emotions shine through..
September 17th, 2024 01:26
NafisaSB said:
lovely piece of verse - the emotions shine through..
September 17th, 2024 01:26
~> Whilst At The Beach
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad.
Well at least they’re doing better than me -
I’ve pinched their cane to stay upright you see…
I worry not about going to bed;
Reclined in my armchair, no clothes to shed.
I remove my clothes for my yearly bath….
Them garments take off on their own flight path.
September 16th, 2024 17:18
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad.
Well at least they’re doing better than me -
I’ve pinched their cane to stay upright you see…
I worry not about going to bed;
Reclined in my armchair, no clothes to shed.
I remove my clothes for my yearly bath….
Them garments take off on their own flight path.
September 16th, 2024 17:18
~> Whilst At The Beach
orchidee said:
Good write T. That you on the left?! heehee.
September 16th, 2024 13:06
orchidee said:
Good write T. That you on the left?! heehee.
September 16th, 2024 13:06
~> It\'s You I Idolize -form Trijan Refrain -
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s me day off, Thad.....🙃
September 16th, 2024 02:13
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s me day off, Thad.....🙃
September 16th, 2024 02:13
~> It\'s You I Idolize -form Trijan Refrain -
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving words Thad.
Andy
September 16th, 2024 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving words Thad.
Andy
September 16th, 2024 01:27
~> It\'s You I Idolize -form Trijan Refrain -
orchidee said:
You can call me Princess. Just don\'t call me Susan (random name there!). lol.
September 16th, 2024 01:17
orchidee said:
You can call me Princess. Just don\'t call me Susan (random name there!). lol.
September 16th, 2024 01:17
~> It\'s You I Idolize -form Trijan Refrain -
Cheeky Missy said:
So...if I may be my cheeky and pesky self, when shall we be privileged to see a tad of Mrs Wilk? My cheekiness and curiosity aside, how delightfully you\'ve rendered this delectable offering to your treasure, sprinkling details of your affection throughout until we must verily swoon. Ah me! Smelling salts, I faint, I faint! Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 15th, 2024 18:29
Cheeky Missy said:
So...if I may be my cheeky and pesky self, when shall we be privileged to see a tad of Mrs Wilk? My cheekiness and curiosity aside, how delightfully you\'ve rendered this delectable offering to your treasure, sprinkling details of your affection throughout until we must verily swoon. Ah me! Smelling salts, I faint, I faint! Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 15th, 2024 18:29
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