Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk



~` Perfection! `~ -form Monotetra-
Doggerel Dave said:

Excellent work once more (and I mean yours..) Thad -

Should the nose and the anus change places?
They both blow, doncha know, So a swapsie
Would perhaps put one’s face through its paces:
One fart, you have wrinkles galore, face all flopsie.

In a piece full of metaphor mediocrity and misspelling, readers are advised to focus on the visuals……


December 12th, 2024 17:25

~` Perfection! `~ -form Monotetra-
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Thad, best regards

December 12th, 2024 14:04

~` Perfection! `~ -form Monotetra-
orchidee said:

A fine write Thad. lol. It\'s said some people talk out of the back of their....... Strange place for a mouth. lol.

December 12th, 2024 14:01

~` Perfection! `~ -form Monotetra-
Cassie58 said:

Your poems are such great fun Thad. Thank you for the monotetra and for sharing your great sense of humour with us. 😀

December 12th, 2024 13:01

~` Perfection! `~ -form Monotetra-
Poetic Licence said:

Entertaining and funny read, Thank you Thad

December 12th, 2024 11:46

~` Perfection! `~ -form Monotetra-
sorenbarrett said:

Most amusing but also logical and an evolutionary growth. Lovely

December 12th, 2024 10:51

~` Perfection! `~ -form Monotetra-
Tristan Robert Lange said:

If there were ever such a nose
That ever were placed in such woes
On top or bottom where gas flows,
Man, that sure blows—Man, that sure blows!
🤣💨

Wonderful monotetra my friend! 🌹👏

December 12th, 2024 10:27

`~ Read My Lips! ~`
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Well... perhaps cats and wives..both like to rule over whatever they find....lovely ppoem!

December 12th, 2024 04:29

`~ Read My Lips! ~`
Goldfinch60 said:

Cats are always the boss Thad.

Andy

December 12th, 2024 02:27

`~ Read My Lips! ~`
arqios said:

Now we know who\'s boss! Repeating phrases like \"Don\'t try that pup\" and \"I knows Kung-Fu\" adds a rhythmic and entertaining quality to the poem, making it both amusing and memorable.

December 12th, 2024 02:10

`~ Read My Lips! ~`
Thomas W Case said:

Lol. Great stuff. I have 3 cats, they bite.

December 11th, 2024 22:12

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December 11th, 2024 21:32

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sorenbarrett said:

Had both dogs and cats they got along too well. The dog liked the cat so much he licked all the hair off hisr lower half. Tne cat went tp live with the neighbor.A most fun read.

December 11th, 2024 15:50

`~ Read My Lips! ~`
Doggerel Dave said:

Give the dawg a chance, Thad:

I ain’t gonna be around here for long -
That kind of language withers my dong;
Cannot stand that kind of hostility,
It all but knackers my virility.
I’m off to pastures new where doggies do:
Where I’ll find a mate and procreate.


December 11th, 2024 14:56

`~ Read My Lips! ~`
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Thad, best regards

December 11th, 2024 14:52

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Ellen Marsell said:

This was so funny to read. I love cats! Most of them are real manipulators.

December 11th, 2024 14:23

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orchidee said:

A nice friendly cat there, ya\'ll! lol.

December 11th, 2024 10:54

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

I was waiting for “A true story folks. I can’t make it up!” in the notes. Why? Because, I have two dogs and two cats, and one of my cats barks…and I do mean barks…and scares my dogs. So, I know this to be a true story! 😂 Loved the pussycat humor my friend. Well done!

December 11th, 2024 10:04

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Poetic Licence said:

Why is it that a Cat always rules the dog in a house, a great bit of fun to read, and that cat probably has it`s owner under control as well, scary, enjoyed the read, Thank you Thad

December 11th, 2024 09:55

~> Our Garden Of Love
NafisaSB said:

so tragic, so beautiful, so well written
unrequited love can be a torment

December 11th, 2024 07:05

~> The Ghost Of Lena Grouse!
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine horror words Thad, I won\'t go in that house.

Andy

December 11th, 2024 02:20

~> The Ghost Of Lena Grouse!
Mutley Ravishes said:

Asking for a favor, Thad. If Lena finds the head and manages to put it back on can you ask her how she did it? I lost mine when I forgot to mind my manners in the Halls of Valhalla and was decapitated!

December 10th, 2024 18:52

~> The Ghost Of Lena Grouse!
Doggerel Dave said:

Blood and gore all over the floor;
No culprit within a bull’s roar.
Her husband a bit of a mouse,
Not good enough for Lena Grouse.
She underestimated him
And decided to do some sim….no, sorry I meant sin…

Put me off me breakfast…. 🤢


December 10th, 2024 15:16

~> The Ghost Of Lena Grouse!
Cassie58 said:

Gruesome, but entertaining Thad. And a true story? Wow. Seems the husband got a little bit narked at his wife’s infidelity 😂. A demonstration of anger and jealousy at boiling point and what it can lead to:)

December 10th, 2024 13:57

~> The Ghost Of Lena Grouse!
Poetic Licence said:

really entertaining read, i love the ending, thank you Thad

December 10th, 2024 13:46

~> The Ghost Of Lena Grouse!
orchidee said:

Good write y\'all! :)

December 10th, 2024 12:57

~> The Ghost Of Lena Grouse!
sorenbarrett said:

Haunting may I say. Dark for sure, Gruesome too. Intriguing as well and yes where is the head? Reminds me of the song \"Where did you sleep last night\" by Leadbelly and covered by Kurt Cobain/, his head was found in a driving wheel.

December 10th, 2024 11:01

~> The Ghost Of Lena Grouse!
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Love ghost tales and this one delivers. Goosebumps my friend...goosebumps! 🌹👏 Love the pic too!

December 10th, 2024 10:21

~> Ralphie Gets Even! ( Monorhyme )
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words and picture Thad.

Andy

December 10th, 2024 02:12

~> Ralphie Gets Even! ( Monorhyme )
arqios said:

So you got a jealous one there. Lucky he just got his shots! We had a puppy once, Tapas was his name, on account of being a tiny morsel, who would dig up the flower bed just because he caught us planting there while he wanted to play! Funny dog.

December 9th, 2024 20:29



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