Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk
~> Take Me To Your Leader Bro!
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah What\'s up Doc? Doncha wanna drop that AK47 an try some of this extra special selectively bred weed I\'m gonna bestow on you? So cool - you\'ll be horizontal but alive an drifting....
September 11th, 2024 19:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah What\'s up Doc? Doncha wanna drop that AK47 an try some of this extra special selectively bred weed I\'m gonna bestow on you? So cool - you\'ll be horizontal but alive an drifting....
September 11th, 2024 19:32
~> Take Me To Your Leader Bro!
Tony36 said:
Made me laugh, excellent write
September 11th, 2024 15:46
Tony36 said:
Made me laugh, excellent write
September 11th, 2024 15:46
~> Take Me To Your Leader Bro!
Cheeky Missy said:
My la! When Bugs enters the picture, there\'s as much fact in the rendition as either in the antique cartoons, or else Santa Claus, the Easter Bunny, and a passel of other falsehoods. But this is as ever, too fun and hilarious. You\'re a regular riot. I declare! Oh [hugs self] I do love it!!! Awesomely rendered with excellent poignancy and fascinating details. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 10:47
Cheeky Missy said:
My la! When Bugs enters the picture, there\'s as much fact in the rendition as either in the antique cartoons, or else Santa Claus, the Easter Bunny, and a passel of other falsehoods. But this is as ever, too fun and hilarious. You\'re a regular riot. I declare! Oh [hugs self] I do love it!!! Awesomely rendered with excellent poignancy and fascinating details. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 10:47
~> She\'s Ma Eye Candy! Redneck
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy that candy with happeness Thad.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy that candy with happeness Thad.
Andy
September 11th, 2024 01:53
~> She\'s Ma Eye Candy! Redneck
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad,
Had to be Walmart didn’t it…… and with all that candy in yer, and/or in her or what the hell whatever whenever I’ve already seen yer - the future is now, you People of Walmaart….
September 10th, 2024 19:00
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad,
Had to be Walmart didn’t it…… and with all that candy in yer, and/or in her or what the hell whatever whenever I’ve already seen yer - the future is now, you People of Walmaart….
September 10th, 2024 19:00
~> She\'s Ma Eye Candy! Redneck
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read Thad. Set in the right vernacular and setting it was a pleasure to read
September 10th, 2024 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read Thad. Set in the right vernacular and setting it was a pleasure to read
September 10th, 2024 13:13
> The Doctor Will See You Now! - form Monorhyme -
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Thad.
Andy
September 10th, 2024 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Thad.
Andy
September 10th, 2024 01:49
> The Doctor Will See You Now! - form Monorhyme -
MR.apocalypse said:
reminds me of robert frosts style very nice
September 9th, 2024 18:52
MR.apocalypse said:
reminds me of robert frosts style very nice
September 9th, 2024 18:52
> The Doctor Will See You Now! - form Monorhyme -
Doggerel Dave said:
Here in Oz, because I am of a certain vintage, I get to see these private enterprise agents for free… doesn’t prevent them from prescribing the products of large pharmaceutical companies in large quantities as represented here by one (no two) large……
Nailed it in another great monorhyme, Thad.
September 9th, 2024 17:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Here in Oz, because I am of a certain vintage, I get to see these private enterprise agents for free… doesn’t prevent them from prescribing the products of large pharmaceutical companies in large quantities as represented here by one (no two) large……
Nailed it in another great monorhyme, Thad.
September 9th, 2024 17:50
> The Doctor Will See You Now! - form Monorhyme -
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately too true. A most fun read that rings true and having worked with doctors most of my life \\I know why. There is money involved unlike poetry.
September 9th, 2024 14:59
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately too true. A most fun read that rings true and having worked with doctors most of my life \\I know why. There is money involved unlike poetry.
September 9th, 2024 14:59
> The Doctor Will See You Now! - form Monorhyme -
orchidee said:
That your Doc there?! lol.
September 9th, 2024 12:57
orchidee said:
That your Doc there?! lol.
September 9th, 2024 12:57
> The Doctor Will See You Now! - form Monorhyme -
Tony36 said:
Awesome write
September 9th, 2024 09:28
Tony36 said:
Awesome write
September 9th, 2024 09:28
~~> I\'m Going To Put My Heart Away! -form Monorhyme-
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness, betrayal, and disillusion. Because one fails on one’s first try there is no need to close the door. I love the rhyme in this poem and it’s flow towards the end. Nicely written.
September 9th, 2024 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of sadness, betrayal, and disillusion. Because one fails on one’s first try there is no need to close the door. I love the rhyme in this poem and it’s flow towards the end. Nicely written.
September 9th, 2024 06:22
~~> I\'m Going To Put My Heart Away! -form Monorhyme-
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart will be safe and will come out again soon Thad.
Andy
September 9th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart will be safe and will come out again soon Thad.
Andy
September 9th, 2024 01:50
~~> I\'m Going To Put My Heart Away! -form Monorhyme-
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad,
So THAT, a proper purposeful monorhyme with all the trimmings is it! Got you!
Suits the terrible monotony and depression after loss…. Your dirge or lament is very convincing… how long before you get cheerful again???
September 8th, 2024 21:22
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad,
So THAT, a proper purposeful monorhyme with all the trimmings is it! Got you!
Suits the terrible monotony and depression after loss…. Your dirge or lament is very convincing… how long before you get cheerful again???
September 8th, 2024 21:22
~~> I\'m Going To Put My Heart Away! -form Monorhyme-
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, let\'s dedicate this to Ben Affleck, whose latest matrimonial ventures ended remarkably fast. I\'ve allus said my heart\'s been made a jigsaw puzzle for all the times it\'s been broken too many times sans matrimony. You do know how to write such perfect pieces, even when it\'s downright heartbreaking. Me loves. Too perfectly rendered with a haunting poignancy and superb detailing. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 18:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, let\'s dedicate this to Ben Affleck, whose latest matrimonial ventures ended remarkably fast. I\'ve allus said my heart\'s been made a jigsaw puzzle for all the times it\'s been broken too many times sans matrimony. You do know how to write such perfect pieces, even when it\'s downright heartbreaking. Me loves. Too perfectly rendered with a haunting poignancy and superb detailing. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 8th, 2024 18:50
~> YIKES!
Cassie58 said:
You are a bad lad Thad but I like your sense of humour :)) That woman needs at least 36 inches added to her nightshirt lol. Thanks for the smile.
September 8th, 2024 04:03
Cassie58 said:
You are a bad lad Thad but I like your sense of humour :)) That woman needs at least 36 inches added to her nightshirt lol. Thanks for the smile.
September 8th, 2024 04:03
~> YIKES!
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re a regular riot! I declare! Nuttin\' like puddy gettin\' a\' terrified by madam\'s ass a pointin\' \'eavenward. Ooh wee! Dat crack! Dat sight none should see but \'er lovin\' man! Frightful! Runnin\' fer dee hills right now I iz, oh yes I iz!
September 7th, 2024 14:43
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re a regular riot! I declare! Nuttin\' like puddy gettin\' a\' terrified by madam\'s ass a pointin\' \'eavenward. Ooh wee! Dat crack! Dat sight none should see but \'er lovin\' man! Frightful! Runnin\' fer dee hills right now I iz, oh yes I iz!
September 7th, 2024 14:43
~> The Moon Hides Secrets - form Sonnet
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day, Thad –
Admiration for the sonnet form…. Content? Well.. free of trouble here, but formerly massive amounts of self control required when in late October, right in the middle of my favorite TV programme a group of three foot high individuals would knock and through paper horror masks Woo Woo….. Terrifying….
September 6th, 2024 20:07
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day, Thad –
Admiration for the sonnet form…. Content? Well.. free of trouble here, but formerly massive amounts of self control required when in late October, right in the middle of my favorite TV programme a group of three foot high individuals would knock and through paper horror masks Woo Woo….. Terrifying….
September 6th, 2024 20:07
~> The Moon Hides Secrets - form Sonnet
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh dear! Where\'s that, precisely? In TX??? I used to go every moonlit night and wander in our 3 acre yard, nestling beneath one of the huge Maples to revel in it all every Summer and Fall. This is too lovely. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 6th, 2024 11:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh dear! Where\'s that, precisely? In TX??? I used to go every moonlit night and wander in our 3 acre yard, nestling beneath one of the huge Maples to revel in it all every Summer and Fall. This is too lovely. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 6th, 2024 11:33
~> The Moon Hides Secrets - form Sonnet
Cassie58 said:
Quite a different sonnet Thad. Refreshingly different. No romance here. No moonlight walking for me lol. Have a great Friday.
September 6th, 2024 11:23
Cassie58 said:
Quite a different sonnet Thad. Refreshingly different. No romance here. No moonlight walking for me lol. Have a great Friday.
September 6th, 2024 11:23
~ Clyde The Turkey ~ Limericks
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad,
May I contribute my mini limerick?
Poor old Clyde the turkey was booked
To be on Thanksgiving day cooked
He hid as a lamp
(Exceedingly camp)
But Clyde did not shine when they looked………
Keep e\'m coming - great fun (this one wasn\'t easy; had three goes before it came out..) Felt I had to make the effort as I\'m vegetarian!
September 5th, 2024 16:52
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad,
May I contribute my mini limerick?
Poor old Clyde the turkey was booked
To be on Thanksgiving day cooked
He hid as a lamp
(Exceedingly camp)
But Clyde did not shine when they looked………
Keep e\'m coming - great fun (this one wasn\'t easy; had three goes before it came out..) Felt I had to make the effort as I\'m vegetarian!
September 5th, 2024 16:52
~ Clyde The Turkey ~ Limericks
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun! I declare! My la, and that picture accompanying this is obvious perfection. What a veritable treat. Thank you very much!
September 5th, 2024 15:16
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun! I declare! My la, and that picture accompanying this is obvious perfection. What a veritable treat. Thank you very much!
September 5th, 2024 15:16
~ Clyde The Turkey ~ Limericks
sorenbarrett said:
Thad, I’ve told you before I like limerick and this is a good one. It gave me a smile and that’s worth quite a bit.
September 5th, 2024 13:49
sorenbarrett said:
Thad, I’ve told you before I like limerick and this is a good one. It gave me a smile and that’s worth quite a bit.
September 5th, 2024 13:49
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