Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk



~> Oh, I need you so much!
Neville said:


and they are very good for your prostate too .. thought you girls out there would be pleased to hear that as well ... 🍅😎👍

October 26th, 2024 03:31

~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody-
Neville said:


There is something inherently sinister about clowns that goes back to well before the time of court jesters .. I could write a thesis on it .. in fact I did once .. However, I digress .. Now, where woz I .. Oh\' yes, this is a great Halloween poem Thad that has some great credentials, not least the prettiness of it as it lays on the page but also is built atop of a firm foundation and from which, it rises so rhythmically .. Neville

October 26th, 2024 02:47

~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody-
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good parody Thad.

Andy

October 26th, 2024 01:11

~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody-
Doggerel Dave said:

G\'day Thad,

Mary, Mary, quite contrary
Why do clowns scare you so?
With choppers like that, I’d be scared too
Of them sharp pointy things in a row.

Would never have thought of Mary getting roped in for Halloween, plus never understood why people were afraid of clowns until....Oh so well writ. Thanks.



October 25th, 2024 14:49

~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody-
sorenbarrett said:

Bravo! A great Halloween poem it reminds me a little of the movie Secret Window. Well rhymed and metered loved it

October 25th, 2024 10:21

~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody-
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

October 25th, 2024 09:33

~> When An Old Man Dies
Goldfinch60 said:

Such true words Thad, so much id lost when an old man dies.

Andy

October 25th, 2024 01:15

~> When An Old Man Dies
Doggerel Dave said:

G\'day Thad,
Old men leave records everywhere:
Memoirs and (oh no!) poetry.
Nothing rhymes with poetry but ‘tree’
So leave it alone and let it be -
Trees last longer with less hot air…

Phew - nearly fell over there; ran out of rhyme. You are making it harder.. any time you want me to give up, just say so...


October 24th, 2024 17:02

~> When An Old Man Dies
orchidee said:

Good write T.

October 24th, 2024 13:56

~> When An Old Man Dies
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed so with each a burning of the library of Alexandria. A point well taken and a great metaphor my friend

October 24th, 2024 12:16

~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
Teddy.15 said:

Definitely spooky. 🌹 Wonderfully nerrated

October 24th, 2024 02:52

~> Oh, I need you so much!
orchidee said:

Good write Thad.

October 24th, 2024 01:40

~> Oh, I need you so much!
Goldfinch60 said:

Enjoy your food Thad it can bring words to your life.

Andy

October 24th, 2024 01:26

~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
NafisaSB said:

beautiful horror story - scared me...ha ha

October 24th, 2024 00:00

~> Oh, I need you so much!
Doggerel Dave said:

G’day Thad.
Tomato it was – I’d never have known
If your comment from author hadn’t revealed
Your bathtub was not full of blood congealed
Before inspiration appeared full grown.

Does a poet suffer for his art?
Well if you do, just carry on suffering……


October 23rd, 2024 15:07

~> Oh, I need you so much!
sorenbarrett said:

Yea I guessed it might have been tomato but this death apple was thought to be poisonous for some time, being a part of the deadly night shade family. Loved the read

October 23rd, 2024 12:48

~> Oh, I need you so much!
MR.apocalypse said:

hilarious love it

October 23rd, 2024 09:59

~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
Goldfinch60 said:

If he rings my doorbell Thad he will be unlucky as I am not in. LOL

Andy

October 23rd, 2024 01:31

~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
Doggerel Dave said:

The reaper geezer turns up here this time:
His visit means a finale will be mine;
But \"Go on - sod off I’m not quite ready yet”
Went next door instead – thick as a briquette.

Strained rhyme today – more interested in relieving him of his gold watch before he went next door. You don’t come the Flash Harry round here and get away wiv it….

Forgiving the ‘Muahahaaaaa!’ - a really disciplined write, Thad.


October 22nd, 2024 13:31

~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
sorenbarrett said:

A great write for Halloween and this time of the year.

October 22nd, 2024 11:54

~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
Neville said:



.. He\'s sure is lookin dapper, made me almost wanna crappa .. actually I think it may have been a dodgy oyster I had for lunch .. Spooky coincidence tho or what


October 22nd, 2024 11:54

~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Thad.

Andy

October 22nd, 2024 01:47

Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme-
Goldfinch60 said:

Very clever and good loving words Thad.

Andy

October 22nd, 2024 01:44

~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Thad.

Andy

October 22nd, 2024 01:32

~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
Doggerel Dave said:

G’day Thad,
A ruck and a stink - they’re at it again;
The Estate Agent didn’t mention them.
My next door neighbors are a right old pain;
One of ‘em fancies me but she ain’t no femme…….

….. ‘I’m off to see the wizard’ – You know, that old bloke from Oz....see if he can help me out….


October 21st, 2024 16:17

~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
orchidee said:

Ahh, a picture of three mother-in-laws there?! heehee.

October 21st, 2024 14:51

~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
Neville said:



Maybe I\'m just going through a bad spell .. Not my favourite time of year or celebration, but a great and timely poem nevertheless .. 🐧👍

October 21st, 2024 11:52

~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
Teddy.15 said:

Some of us find it easy to be a witch 🧹 lol 🤣
another wonderful addition to MPS\'s very own Halloween collection 🎃

October 21st, 2024 10:17

~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
sorenbarrett said:

Almost Shakepear Mcbeth a fun read and all in the season of darkness.

October 21st, 2024 10:16

~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie!
Neville said:



A tail told terribly well .. and I hope the old Dog appreciates it ..

October 21st, 2024 03:36



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