Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk



~> Oh, I need you so much!
Goldfinch60 said:

Enjoy your food Thad it can bring words to your life.

Andy

October 24th, 2024 01:26

~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
NafisaSB said:

beautiful horror story - scared me...ha ha

October 24th, 2024 00:00

~> Oh, I need you so much!
Doggerel Dave said:

G’day Thad.
Tomato it was – I’d never have known
If your comment from author hadn’t revealed
Your bathtub was not full of blood congealed
Before inspiration appeared full grown.

Does a poet suffer for his art?
Well if you do, just carry on suffering……


October 23rd, 2024 15:07

~> Oh, I need you so much!
sorenbarrett said:

Yea I guessed it might have been tomato but this death apple was thought to be poisonous for some time, being a part of the deadly night shade family. Loved the read

October 23rd, 2024 12:48

~> Oh, I need you so much!
MR.apocalypse said:

hilarious love it

October 23rd, 2024 09:59

~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
Goldfinch60 said:

If he rings my doorbell Thad he will be unlucky as I am not in. LOL

Andy

October 23rd, 2024 01:31

~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
Doggerel Dave said:

The reaper geezer turns up here this time:
His visit means a finale will be mine;
But \"Go on - sod off I’m not quite ready yet”
Went next door instead – thick as a briquette.

Strained rhyme today – more interested in relieving him of his gold watch before he went next door. You don’t come the Flash Harry round here and get away wiv it….

Forgiving the ‘Muahahaaaaa!’ - a really disciplined write, Thad.


October 22nd, 2024 13:31

~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
sorenbarrett said:

A great write for Halloween and this time of the year.

October 22nd, 2024 11:54

~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
Neville said:



.. He\'s sure is lookin dapper, made me almost wanna crappa .. actually I think it may have been a dodgy oyster I had for lunch .. Spooky coincidence tho or what


October 22nd, 2024 11:54

~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Thad.

Andy

October 22nd, 2024 01:47

Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme-
Goldfinch60 said:

Very clever and good loving words Thad.

Andy

October 22nd, 2024 01:44

~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write Thad.

Andy

October 22nd, 2024 01:32

~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
Doggerel Dave said:

G’day Thad,
A ruck and a stink - they’re at it again;
The Estate Agent didn’t mention them.
My next door neighbors are a right old pain;
One of ‘em fancies me but she ain’t no femme…….

….. ‘I’m off to see the wizard’ – You know, that old bloke from Oz....see if he can help me out….


October 21st, 2024 16:17

~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
orchidee said:

Ahh, a picture of three mother-in-laws there?! heehee.

October 21st, 2024 14:51

~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
Neville said:



Maybe I\'m just going through a bad spell .. Not my favourite time of year or celebration, but a great and timely poem nevertheless .. 🐧👍

October 21st, 2024 11:52

~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
Teddy.15 said:

Some of us find it easy to be a witch 🧹 lol 🤣
another wonderful addition to MPS\'s very own Halloween collection 🎃

October 21st, 2024 10:17

~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
sorenbarrett said:

Almost Shakepear Mcbeth a fun read and all in the season of darkness.

October 21st, 2024 10:16

~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie!
Neville said:



A tail told terribly well .. and I hope the old Dog appreciates it ..

October 21st, 2024 03:36

Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme-
Doggerel Dave said:

“Now just how sad can it be?
Lucky escape if you ask me…
Don’t crawl, definitely don’t plea -
Sit a fresh babe upon your knee……”

- Quote from page 53 of ‘Mrs Mumpy’s advice to the lovelorn’

Kudos as above, Thad.





October 20th, 2024 14:50

Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme-
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Thad, best regards

October 20th, 2024 12:54

~> I\'m Sailing Home, To You My Love -
Teddy.15 said:

Wonderful. 🌹 I hope you never have to sail again! ❤️

October 20th, 2024 11:20

Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme-
sorenbarrett said:

So many of us have felt this way it is easy to empathize. I too have used this rhyme scheme in the past. It does a good job of emphasizing the ever returning thoughts that obsessively fill ones head at such a loss. Very nicely done

October 20th, 2024 09:13

~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie!
Bobby O said:

I think I would really like Uncle Louie and his brilliant black cat.

October 20th, 2024 02:34

~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie!
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh Thad - your dedication all but overwhelmed me.... SOL (Snigger Out Loud)

Picture Uncle Louie training the cat:
Months of hard lessons to get him like that.
And black cats are lucky, so they do say;
Yes – ‘cos Puss got his fortune, by the way.

Keep \'em coming Mate - an always enjoyable interlude experienced here.


October 19th, 2024 19:00

~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie!
Tony36 said:

Beautiful tribute

October 19th, 2024 15:13

~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie!
sorenbarrett said:

I\'ll bet he did. I\'ll have to think up one for my passing. A fun read

October 19th, 2024 10:36

~> I Fucking Hate Loving You
Goldfinch60 said:

Strong words Thad.

Andy

October 19th, 2024 01:48

~> I Fucking Hate Loving You
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh no. not you too;
I can\'t understand a word.
I\'m up and away............

....Will probably return, Thad when you come to your senses and write something dirty,😅😂🤣.

October 18th, 2024 21:05

~> I Fucking Hate Loving You
Bobby O said:

That’s a strong piece. I have shared it with friends not in this group and and there is simpatico unanimity !

October 18th, 2024 14:09

~> I Fucking Hate Loving You
sorenbarrett said:

\"Where my girl are you sleeping tonight\" remnicent of an old Leadbelly song covered by Kurt Cobain and Nirvana in one of his last perfomances having found that his wife had been sleeping around. A poem of pain, darkness and hopelessness from betrayal and loss. Powerful words and vivid images reach into the soul

October 18th, 2024 10:59



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