Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk



~> Lord Hear My Plea!
sorenbarrett said:

From the words of Job to those of Jesus pleas to take away the cup but no, that is the lesson of the world. Addiction is a terrible disease and needs to be treated as such. My heart goes out to addicts of all types. My addiction is to food, water and air and that is bad enough

October 9th, 2024 11:01

~> Lord Hear My Plea!
Abdullah123 said:

Love it. Great poem

October 9th, 2024 09:54

~> Lord Hear My Plea!
peet said:

Wow. What words. A lot of honesty and submission penned very well.

October 9th, 2024 09:40

~> and the rain fell in torrents (free verse)
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words Thad, we all go through this and I am not at all concerned about showing my emotions at any time.

Andy

October 9th, 2024 01:27

~> and the rain fell in torrents (free verse)
sorenbarrett said:

Great analogy and a good message as well. Nicely done Thad

October 8th, 2024 20:32

~. SPRING - (double Acrostic)
MaxSmith said:

I love a good acrostic, never seen a double and it certainly didn\'t fail.

A beautiful picturesque read, full of nature.

Nice work

October 8th, 2024 16:17

~> and the rain fell in torrents (free verse)
MaxSmith said:

A very touching read.

But so you know, grown men definitely can cry.

Thanks so much for sharing


October 8th, 2024 14:39

~> and the rain fell in torrents (free verse)
orchidee said:

Good write T.

October 8th, 2024 11:26

~. SPRING - (double Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful words Thad, thank you for sharing them.

Andy

October 8th, 2024 01:10

~> Let\'s Fly Away
Dan Williams said:

In my day this would be Steppenwolf and pretty much stronger. Yours is much prettier. Nice work.

October 7th, 2024 23:50

~. SPRING - (double Acrostic)
sorenbarrett said:

Creative and inovative with good rhyme and consistent theme. Well done.

October 7th, 2024 19:30

~. SPRING - (double Acrostic)
Tony36 said:

Great write Thad

October 7th, 2024 15:16

~. SPRING - (double Acrostic)
Thomas W Case said:

Superb.

October 7th, 2024 13:09

~. SPRING - (double Acrostic)
orchidee said:

A fine double write Thad!

October 7th, 2024 09:45

~> Let\'s Fly Away
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving sonnet Thad.

Andy

October 7th, 2024 01:20

~> Let\'s Fly Away
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely done as a pledge of love.

October 6th, 2024 18:51

~> Let\'s Fly Away
orchidee said:

Good write T. Where ya going on that carpet?! lol.

October 6th, 2024 14:26

~. You Are My Destiny - Double Acrostic
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Thad and so well written in that double acrostic.

Andy

October 6th, 2024 01:11

~. You Are My Destiny - Double Acrostic
orchidee said:

Good write T. Good write T.
A double appreciation for a double sonnet. lol.

October 5th, 2024 14:26

~. You Are My Destiny - Double Acrostic
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 5th, 2024 12:21

~. You Are My Destiny - Double Acrostic
2781 said:

I feel for that one.

October 5th, 2024 10:25

~> I\'m Sailing Home, To You My Love -
sorenbarrett said:

A pledge of love offered in very smooth verse and good meter. A sonnet well done

October 5th, 2024 05:35

~> I\'m Sailing Home, To You My Love -
Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful words Thad, I rarely do this but this is going into favourites,

Andy

October 5th, 2024 01:49

~> Your Precious Love\'s, All I Desire
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving words Thad,

Andy

October 4th, 2024 01:25

~> Your Precious Love\'s, All I Desire
orchidee said:

A fine write T,
I never knew no-one else could take my place! lol.

October 3rd, 2024 13:54

~> Your Precious Love\'s, All I Desire
Tony36 said:

Love it

October 3rd, 2024 09:15

~> Yosemite Sam I am!
Goldfinch60 said:

Do I get an invite to dinner when it is cooked Thad? LOL

Andy

October 3rd, 2024 01:09

~> Yosemite Sam I am!
Doggerel Dave said:


Hors de combat right now - back later.

October 2nd, 2024 19:01

~> I Wish That My Lawn Was EMO! - form Jeffreys Sonnet -
Goldfinch60 said:

Mowing our lawn is on the list of things to do Thad. LOL.

Andy

October 2nd, 2024 01:21

~> I Wish That My Lawn Was EMO! - form Jeffreys Sonnet -
Doggerel Dave said:


G’day Thad,
That ad is real bad taste I’ll have you know;
But as for the poem, do take a bow.
Though leave the mower, shove it in the shed -
Go Japanese, just use pebbles instead.

Enjoyed the poem but the underlying technicalities gave me a headache. I’m a simple soul, just about able to manage couplets and quatrains……..


October 1st, 2024 18:39



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