Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk



~> Fukitol Is The Real Deal! - Shakespearean Sonnet -
Goldfinch60 said:

I never need that pill Thad as my life is wonderful all the time.

Andy

October 30th, 2024 02:51

~> Fukitol Is The Real Deal! - Shakespearean Sonnet -
Mutley Ravishes said:

Haha! By the way Thad, there is a much better “pill” than Fukitol.”

October 29th, 2024 18:14

~> Fukitol Is The Real Deal! - Shakespearean Sonnet -
Doggerel Dave said:

‘Morning Thad.
Taking it or plugging this don’t matter:
Tried the pill when you first suggested it.
Now I think I’m quite possibly better,
Because now I don’t give a fuck one bit….

Been there, done that got the…. attitude. 🙃


October 29th, 2024 15:48

~> Fukitol Is The Real Deal! - Shakespearean Sonnet -
Teddy.15 said:

Make sure you don\'t get it mixed up with Viagra lol 🤣

October 29th, 2024 13:48

~> Fukitol Is The Real Deal! - Shakespearean Sonnet -
sorenbarrett said:

Sounds familiar. Think I tried it but built up an immunity. For the hard core try Strap on next best to the real thing.

October 29th, 2024 12:12

~> Fukitol Is The Real Deal! - Shakespearean Sonnet -
orchidee said:

I\'m sure I been taking the wrong pill each day - a blue one. They were red and yellow, the last lot I took. A repeat prescription must have got mixed up. Doh! (heehee).

October 29th, 2024 11:34

~> Heroin! - form Monotetra -
Ezekiel Olayemi said:

It indeed a sad thing to get betrayed by someone you love and trust. Reminds me to trust myself only , the world is unfair !!!

Poignant write sir!

October 29th, 2024 05:06

~* Father *~ [ double Acrostic ]
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Thad and so true in my life as well.

Andy

October 29th, 2024 03:53

~* Father *~ [ double Acrostic ]
Doggerel Dave said:

Thought you would not miss a rhyme today, Thad. Salute to Dad worth all your skills.

October 28th, 2024 17:45

~* Father *~ [ double Acrostic ]
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work.

October 28th, 2024 13:53

~* Father *~ [ double Acrostic ]
Neville said:



I have never encountered one of these double acrostics before .. but what I have seen, I like .. Neville

October 28th, 2024 11:34

~* Father *~ [ double Acrostic ]
orchidee said:

Good write Thad.

October 28th, 2024 11:21

~* Father *~ [ double Acrostic ]
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful tribute to a father on a special day. Most lovely and lovingly said in verse. Very nice

October 28th, 2024 09:53

~* Father *~ [ double Acrostic ]
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Excellent write and a touching tribute to you father! Well done!

October 28th, 2024 09:52

~* Father *~ [ double Acrostic ]
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 28th, 2024 09:42

~> A Really Sad Story! ( Cry )
Goldfinch60 said:

Those seagulls have a great deal for which to answer Thad. LOL

Andy

October 28th, 2024 02:46

~> A Really Sad Story! ( Cry )
Doggerel Dave said:

G’day Thad
I sat on the beach communing with nature;
Keen so I was to work out my future.
Impeded by a minor apocalypse:
Two bloody seagulls came and nicked my chips..

I hope my little contribution brings added depth to an already rich narrative.


October 27th, 2024 16:49

~> A Really Sad Story! ( Cry )
sorenbarrett said:

Thieves they are. Had them try to pilfer from me too. When was younger took my kids to the beach and we would hand them bread as they glided in the air at head level. A most fun read

October 27th, 2024 15:07

~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You!
Goldfinch60 said:

I used to be a heavy smoker and gave up exactly forty two years ten days ago on 16th October 1982. Not that I am counting of course.

Andy

October 27th, 2024 02:51

~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You!
orchidee said:

When did ya meet me?! (lol).

October 27th, 2024 02:24

~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You!
Neville said:



I lost track of the number of years since I quit .. but it\'s still the tobacco that counts, or so they used to say .. very much enjoyed sir .. your poem I mean .. Neville

October 27th, 2024 01:42

~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You!
Ezekiel Olayemi said:

Captivating, intriguing writing , speak so much and shows your heart felt words

October 26th, 2024 19:18

~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You!
Doggerel Dave said:

G\'day Thad - usual spot:

Nico was my gal once; kissed her regularly;
So now smoke gets in my eyes, and I cry.
Some love affairs ain’t wot they’re cracked up to be;
Why was it so early we wanted to die?

Don\'t miss her at all now.... but it has been thirty five years......



October 26th, 2024 15:42

~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You!
Teddy.15 said:

LOL I too was once a smoker giving up was the best thing but yes, I did miss that sleek camel very much for a long while. 🤣 Kudos.

October 26th, 2024 15:08

~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You!
sorenbarrett said:

Many of us have love affairs with things that hurt us. We often take abuse for years before we give up. A great write

October 26th, 2024 11:58

~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody-
Parisab said:

Wow-truly scary -but I’m afraid he’s real and out of his costume-thanks for the great structure in your poem…

October 26th, 2024 10:36

~> Oh, I need you so much!
Neville said:


and they are very good for your prostate too .. thought you girls out there would be pleased to hear that as well ... 🍅😎👍

October 26th, 2024 03:31

~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody-
Neville said:


There is something inherently sinister about clowns that goes back to well before the time of court jesters .. I could write a thesis on it .. in fact I did once .. However, I digress .. Now, where woz I .. Oh\' yes, this is a great Halloween poem Thad that has some great credentials, not least the prettiness of it as it lays on the page but also is built atop of a firm foundation and from which, it rises so rhythmically .. Neville

October 26th, 2024 02:47

~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody-
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good parody Thad.

Andy

October 26th, 2024 01:11

~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody-
Doggerel Dave said:

G\'day Thad,

Mary, Mary, quite contrary
Why do clowns scare you so?
With choppers like that, I’d be scared too
Of them sharp pointy things in a row.

Would never have thought of Mary getting roped in for Halloween, plus never understood why people were afraid of clowns until....Oh so well writ. Thanks.



October 25th, 2024 14:49



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