Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk
~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain -
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Thad.
Andy
September 27th, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Thad.
Andy
September 27th, 2024 01:52
~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain -
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Thad.
I’m just a vegetarian,
So squirrels are quite safe from me.
Get her onto a pensian
And let the animal go free.
Not for nothing my first name’s ‘Doggerel’. I bow to your superior versification and mastery of a complex form. 👍
September 26th, 2024 18:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Thad.
I’m just a vegetarian,
So squirrels are quite safe from me.
Get her onto a pensian
And let the animal go free.
Not for nothing my first name’s ‘Doggerel’. I bow to your superior versification and mastery of a complex form. 👍
September 26th, 2024 18:11
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sorenbarrett said:
A rather complex write in rhyme scheme and structure. Very nicely done but I\'m a bit picky about what I eat.
September 26th, 2024 13:16
sorenbarrett said:
A rather complex write in rhyme scheme and structure. Very nicely done but I\'m a bit picky about what I eat.
September 26th, 2024 13:16
~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain -
orchidee said:
Good write T. Urgh! Wouldn\'t want to eat squirrel!
September 26th, 2024 09:42
orchidee said:
Good write T. Urgh! Wouldn\'t want to eat squirrel!
September 26th, 2024 09:42
~> My Kitty\'s Plotting To Kill Me! -form Kyrielle-
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of a cat my sister used to have. It haded my younger brother, used to sneak up behind his chair and rake the back of his head with its claws, at night would crap in his shoe, cats have vendetas
September 25th, 2024 20:45
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of a cat my sister used to have. It haded my younger brother, used to sneak up behind his chair and rake the back of his head with its claws, at night would crap in his shoe, cats have vendetas
September 25th, 2024 20:45
~> My Kitty\'s Plotting To Kill Me! -form Kyrielle-
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad.
‘I Tawt I Taw A Puddy Tat a ‘creeping up on me
But you ain’t no budgerigar or dicky bird I see.
So why is it you don’t tell Sylvester to go get lost?
He won\'t \'cos no more regular fishy meals will be the cost.
Cats are bright creatures who know when and where they are well off - too bad yours can\'t read this brill dedication to their efforts.
September 25th, 2024 16:53
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad.
‘I Tawt I Taw A Puddy Tat a ‘creeping up on me
But you ain’t no budgerigar or dicky bird I see.
So why is it you don’t tell Sylvester to go get lost?
He won\'t \'cos no more regular fishy meals will be the cost.
Cats are bright creatures who know when and where they are well off - too bad yours can\'t read this brill dedication to their efforts.
September 25th, 2024 16:53
~> My Kitty\'s Plotting To Kill Me! -form Kyrielle-
orchidee said:
Good write T.
September 25th, 2024 10:56
orchidee said:
Good write T.
September 25th, 2024 10:56
~> My Kitty\'s Plotting To Kill Me! -form Kyrielle-
Cheeky Missy said:
The only thing I\'d alter about the image to add realism in a frightening fashion is the male character who obviously can withstand the puddy tat\'s intentions, however ill they may chance to be. Mum having taught me too many years ago that cats are extremely dangerous when babies are in the house since they\'ll characteristically sleep on infants and young babies faces, it is more serious a threat depending on your youth, I suspect.
That aside, you\'re too fun! Me loves this rollicking romp up and down the stairs through mental roller-coasters as the suggested threat strives to gain momentum despite the obvious levity. Beautifully rendered with definitely haunting poignancy and excellent details. Thank you for sharing.
September 25th, 2024 10:17
Cheeky Missy said:
The only thing I\'d alter about the image to add realism in a frightening fashion is the male character who obviously can withstand the puddy tat\'s intentions, however ill they may chance to be. Mum having taught me too many years ago that cats are extremely dangerous when babies are in the house since they\'ll characteristically sleep on infants and young babies faces, it is more serious a threat depending on your youth, I suspect.
That aside, you\'re too fun! Me loves this rollicking romp up and down the stairs through mental roller-coasters as the suggested threat strives to gain momentum despite the obvious levity. Beautifully rendered with definitely haunting poignancy and excellent details. Thank you for sharing.
September 25th, 2024 10:17
~> \'Pon A Closet Shelf,
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Thad, those memories that can come back can be so wonderful.
Andy
September 25th, 2024 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Thad, those memories that can come back can be so wonderful.
Andy
September 25th, 2024 01:48
~> Nay, I Shan\'t Share! ( Sonnet-Dedication )
sorenbarrett said:
Greed is not exclusively a human trait but it is the foundation of capitalism maybe birds are capitalists. A fun read Thad
September 24th, 2024 16:44
sorenbarrett said:
Greed is not exclusively a human trait but it is the foundation of capitalism maybe birds are capitalists. A fun read Thad
September 24th, 2024 16:44
~> \'Pon A Closet Shelf,
Cassie58 said:
Treasure for her. To find them again and relive the memories years later. Sentimental poetry Thad. Just my cup of tea. Happy Tuesday.
September 24th, 2024 13:48
Cassie58 said:
Treasure for her. To find them again and relive the memories years later. Sentimental poetry Thad. Just my cup of tea. Happy Tuesday.
September 24th, 2024 13:48
~> \'Pon A Closet Shelf,
sorenbarrett said:
Momentos of the past bring with them past feelings. Very nice Thad
September 24th, 2024 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
Momentos of the past bring with them past feelings. Very nice Thad
September 24th, 2024 13:00
~> \'Pon A Closet Shelf,
Cheeky Missy said:
Me canna guess where you found that image, but from her attire and the light emanating from that sacred, empowered box, I swear it\'s actually the charred remains of her ex whose spirit is tortured every time she chooses to peer hungrily into his ashes to indulge her wickedness. And how on earth can Dave call it \"smooth\" when it trips and hardly manages to catch itself? I\'m regrettably in a horrid mood today, dunno why on earth and can\'t extricate me by any means. Pardon me, please? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a lurid poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
September 24th, 2024 10:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Me canna guess where you found that image, but from her attire and the light emanating from that sacred, empowered box, I swear it\'s actually the charred remains of her ex whose spirit is tortured every time she chooses to peer hungrily into his ashes to indulge her wickedness. And how on earth can Dave call it \"smooth\" when it trips and hardly manages to catch itself? I\'m regrettably in a horrid mood today, dunno why on earth and can\'t extricate me by any means. Pardon me, please? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a lurid poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
September 24th, 2024 10:13
~> \'Pon A Closet Shelf,
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep,Thad I confess I have a couple of stashes like that. However the box is plastic and they do feel uncomfortably close to one another.
Also, I can\'t wear stockings in quite that way.....
Smooth write.😊
September 24th, 2024 09:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Yep,Thad I confess I have a couple of stashes like that. However the box is plastic and they do feel uncomfortably close to one another.
Also, I can\'t wear stockings in quite that way.....
Smooth write.😊
September 24th, 2024 09:24
~> Nay, I Shan\'t Share! ( Sonnet-Dedication )
Cassie58 said:
Hello Thad, thanks for the sunshine on a wet morning. A sonnet with a difference lol. So well penned too. You sure have an excellent command of language through the ages. Love your brand of humour. Keep making me laugh. Have yourself a great day poet of versatility 🙂☀️
September 24th, 2024 04:24
Cassie58 said:
Hello Thad, thanks for the sunshine on a wet morning. A sonnet with a difference lol. So well penned too. You sure have an excellent command of language through the ages. Love your brand of humour. Keep making me laugh. Have yourself a great day poet of versatility 🙂☀️
September 24th, 2024 04:24
~> Nay, I Shan\'t Share! ( Sonnet-Dedication )
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun sonnet Thad.
Andy
September 24th, 2024 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun sonnet Thad.
Andy
September 24th, 2024 01:22
~> Nay, I Shan\'t Share! ( Sonnet-Dedication )
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Thad
September 23rd, 2024 17:57
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Thad
September 23rd, 2024 17:57
~> Nay, I Shan\'t Share! ( Sonnet-Dedication )
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad
Thou can’st see what property can’st do,
Apart from theft, it’s lotsa hard work too.
Must be great living a life free as a bird -
But ownership turns Dicky into a turd.
There you go - aggro and violence trumps love; sad old world ain’t it?
September 23rd, 2024 16:37
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad
Thou can’st see what property can’st do,
Apart from theft, it’s lotsa hard work too.
Must be great living a life free as a bird -
But ownership turns Dicky into a turd.
There you go - aggro and violence trumps love; sad old world ain’t it?
September 23rd, 2024 16:37
~> Nay, I Shan\'t Share! ( Sonnet-Dedication )
Cheeky Missy said:
I\'ve watched the robins rout the sparrows and all the other friendly fowl in my vicinity as if it was acceptable, and we\'ve been technically at war ever since, and that\'s been for a decade by now. Watched hummingbirds quarrel over their 4-server feeder until none could enjoy it, and now you post this hilarious image with a sonnet to accompany it and I wish I could have it in hand, I love and cherish it so much!!!!
How delightfully rendered to effect with superb language and a subtly tasteful poignancy. This is too perfect! Me LOVES! Thank you VERY much, Thad.
September 23rd, 2024 13:11
Cheeky Missy said:
I\'ve watched the robins rout the sparrows and all the other friendly fowl in my vicinity as if it was acceptable, and we\'ve been technically at war ever since, and that\'s been for a decade by now. Watched hummingbirds quarrel over their 4-server feeder until none could enjoy it, and now you post this hilarious image with a sonnet to accompany it and I wish I could have it in hand, I love and cherish it so much!!!!
How delightfully rendered to effect with superb language and a subtly tasteful poignancy. This is too perfect! Me LOVES! Thank you VERY much, Thad.
September 23rd, 2024 13:11
Sei Tutto Per Me! [ Sicilian Sonnet ]
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a pledge of love and devotion set in poetic form. Nicely done Thad
September 23rd, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Here is a pledge of love and devotion set in poetic form. Nicely done Thad
September 23rd, 2024 04:35
~> Heroin! - form Monotetra -
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Thad, throughout my life I have never knowingly been near any drugs except alcohol and cigarettes.
Andy
September 23rd, 2024 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Thad, throughout my life I have never knowingly been near any drugs except alcohol and cigarettes.
Andy
September 23rd, 2024 01:45
~> Heroin! - form Monotetra -
Dan Williams said:
Wow. This is an all too frequent story. How is it that I feel I need to carry OD antidote in my glovebox? Mayne the need but don\'t have, have but don\'t need scenario?
September 23rd, 2024 00:08
Dan Williams said:
Wow. This is an all too frequent story. How is it that I feel I need to carry OD antidote in my glovebox? Mayne the need but don\'t have, have but don\'t need scenario?
September 23rd, 2024 00:08
~> Heroin! - form Monotetra -
Doggerel Dave said:
Some fish manage to get away
With the bait and live another day;
But for others the result ain’t good,
So a life of rectitude they should
Consider and health problems thus allay.
*
As I think I may have mentioned before….
Found this a neat well rhymed moral tale, Thad.
September 22nd, 2024 15:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Some fish manage to get away
With the bait and live another day;
But for others the result ain’t good,
So a life of rectitude they should
Consider and health problems thus allay.
*
As I think I may have mentioned before….
Found this a neat well rhymed moral tale, Thad.
September 22nd, 2024 15:49
~> Heroin! - form Monotetra -
sorenbarrett said:
Heroin the demise of too many famous and infamous. Sad story my friend but well written
September 22nd, 2024 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
Heroin the demise of too many famous and infamous. Sad story my friend but well written
September 22nd, 2024 13:37
~> Heroin! - form Monotetra -
orchidee said:
A fine write T. Sadly, some are led away to drugs.
September 22nd, 2024 10:20
orchidee said:
A fine write T. Sadly, some are led away to drugs.
September 22nd, 2024 10:20
~> Heroin! - form Monotetra -
Cheeky Missy said:
Aha! \"Heroine\" was the false premise as she fell unto her demise in the subtle offer of her new, cruel master heroin. Oh! That killer distinction which netted hitherto unperceived misery! Poor girl. Could as likely been Eve with the Serpent at this rate.
Awesome. Not my favorite topic but as ever, beautifully rendered to good effect with haunting poignancy and excellent details. Thank you for sharing, good Sir.
September 22nd, 2024 10:03
Cheeky Missy said:
Aha! \"Heroine\" was the false premise as she fell unto her demise in the subtle offer of her new, cruel master heroin. Oh! That killer distinction which netted hitherto unperceived misery! Poor girl. Could as likely been Eve with the Serpent at this rate.
Awesome. Not my favorite topic but as ever, beautifully rendered to good effect with haunting poignancy and excellent details. Thank you for sharing, good Sir.
September 22nd, 2024 10:03
Sei Tutto Per Me! [ Sicilian Sonnet ]
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tad and in my life they mean so much to me.
Andy
September 22nd, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Tad and in my life they mean so much to me.
Andy
September 22nd, 2024 01:19
Sei Tutto Per Me! [ Sicilian Sonnet ]
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad, You don\'t really need any further response after Missy has overwhelmingly endorsed your passionate poetry, do you?
And anyway but also, I do feel that anything I write might by virtue of its crassness, inadvertently cast a pall over the delicate atmosphere you have laboured so diligently….. and so on…. 🙃
September 21st, 2024 21:15
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad, You don\'t really need any further response after Missy has overwhelmingly endorsed your passionate poetry, do you?
And anyway but also, I do feel that anything I write might by virtue of its crassness, inadvertently cast a pall over the delicate atmosphere you have laboured so diligently….. and so on…. 🙃
September 21st, 2024 21:15
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