Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk
~> I\'m Sailing Home, To You My Love -
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of love offered in very smooth verse and good meter. A sonnet well done
October 5th, 2024 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge of love offered in very smooth verse and good meter. A sonnet well done
October 5th, 2024 05:35
~> I\'m Sailing Home, To You My Love -
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Thad, I rarely do this but this is going into favourites,
Andy
October 5th, 2024 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful words Thad, I rarely do this but this is going into favourites,
Andy
October 5th, 2024 01:49
~> Your Precious Love\'s, All I Desire
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Thad,
Andy
October 4th, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Thad,
Andy
October 4th, 2024 01:25
~> Your Precious Love\'s, All I Desire
orchidee said:
A fine write T,
I never knew no-one else could take my place! lol.
October 3rd, 2024 13:54
orchidee said:
A fine write T,
I never knew no-one else could take my place! lol.
October 3rd, 2024 13:54
~> Yosemite Sam I am!
Goldfinch60 said:
Do I get an invite to dinner when it is cooked Thad? LOL
Andy
October 3rd, 2024 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Do I get an invite to dinner when it is cooked Thad? LOL
Andy
October 3rd, 2024 01:09
~> Yosemite Sam I am!
Doggerel Dave said:
Hors de combat right now - back later.
October 2nd, 2024 19:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Hors de combat right now - back later.
October 2nd, 2024 19:01
~> I Wish That My Lawn Was EMO! - form Jeffreys Sonnet -
Goldfinch60 said:
Mowing our lawn is on the list of things to do Thad. LOL.
Andy
October 2nd, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Mowing our lawn is on the list of things to do Thad. LOL.
Andy
October 2nd, 2024 01:21
~> I Wish That My Lawn Was EMO! - form Jeffreys Sonnet -
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad,
That ad is real bad taste I’ll have you know;
But as for the poem, do take a bow.
Though leave the mower, shove it in the shed -
Go Japanese, just use pebbles instead.
Enjoyed the poem but the underlying technicalities gave me a headache. I’m a simple soul, just about able to manage couplets and quatrains……..
October 1st, 2024 18:39
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad,
That ad is real bad taste I’ll have you know;
But as for the poem, do take a bow.
Though leave the mower, shove it in the shed -
Go Japanese, just use pebbles instead.
Enjoyed the poem but the underlying technicalities gave me a headache. I’m a simple soul, just about able to manage couplets and quatrains……..
October 1st, 2024 18:39
~> God If You\'re Listening,
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful amusing sonnet Thad.
Andy
October 1st, 2024 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful amusing sonnet Thad.
Andy
October 1st, 2024 01:48
~> God If You\'re Listening,
Doggerel Dave said:
The lad is dyslexic, that’s all I can say;
Butch is dog but spelt the other way.
So take the big pretender for a walk;
Clear God’s bowels and forget the baby talk.
Wish I got to study sonnets like that when I woz at school.
Appreciative as always for the trouble you’ve gone to, Thad.
September 30th, 2024 16:44
Doggerel Dave said:
The lad is dyslexic, that’s all I can say;
Butch is dog but spelt the other way.
So take the big pretender for a walk;
Clear God’s bowels and forget the baby talk.
Wish I got to study sonnets like that when I woz at school.
Appreciative as always for the trouble you’ve gone to, Thad.
September 30th, 2024 16:44
~> God If You\'re Listening,
orchidee said:
You\'ll be all right with Butch, God, and a gas mask! lol.
September 30th, 2024 13:08
orchidee said:
You\'ll be all right with Butch, God, and a gas mask! lol.
September 30th, 2024 13:08
~> Cuckoo - Cuckoo ( haiku )
sorenbarrett said:
Great haiku thinking metaphoricalchy watch out for those rubber dollies
September 30th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
Great haiku thinking metaphoricalchy watch out for those rubber dollies
September 30th, 2024 05:19
~> I know Why They Are Here! - Sonnet -
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale Thad, we often wonder why they are here.
Andy
September 30th, 2024 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale Thad, we often wonder why they are here.
Andy
September 30th, 2024 02:22
~> I know Why They Are Here! - Sonnet -
sorenbarrett said:
A great tale in a sonnet. Nicely done
September 29th, 2024 19:39
sorenbarrett said:
A great tale in a sonnet. Nicely done
September 29th, 2024 19:39
~> I know Why They Are Here! - Sonnet -
Doggerel Dave said:
Archie the alien knew his stuff -
Across the universe for weed not rough.
If Shakespeare had known of this verse so buff
He may have returned as well for a puff…
Alas rubbish rhyme don’t get no better do it…. Totally overshadowed by a Mr Thad Wilk who knows what he’s doing.
September 29th, 2024 19:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Archie the alien knew his stuff -
Across the universe for weed not rough.
If Shakespeare had known of this verse so buff
He may have returned as well for a puff…
Alas rubbish rhyme don’t get no better do it…. Totally overshadowed by a Mr Thad Wilk who knows what he’s doing.
September 29th, 2024 19:12
~> I know Why They Are Here! - Sonnet -
orchidee said:
So that\'s why! lol.
September 29th, 2024 11:18
orchidee said:
So that\'s why! lol.
September 29th, 2024 11:18
~> I know Why They Are Here! - Sonnet -
2781 said:
If nothing else is proves is good pot.
September 29th, 2024 08:54
2781 said:
If nothing else is proves is good pot.
September 29th, 2024 08:54
~> Cuckoo - Cuckoo ( haiku )
Doggerel Dave said:
Meaningful haiku, Thad. That\'ll learn him, and let\'s hope it changes his tune....
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-127216
September 28th, 2024 18:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Meaningful haiku, Thad. That\'ll learn him, and let\'s hope it changes his tune....
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-127216
September 28th, 2024 18:01
~> Cuckoo - Cuckoo ( haiku )
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, here\'s hoping no men actually try the act with a solid mannequin or they\'ll be howling likewise. Lovely little tribute to the folly with good humor. Beautifully rendered with tasteful brevity and good imagery. Thank you for sharing.
September 28th, 2024 16:48
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, here\'s hoping no men actually try the act with a solid mannequin or they\'ll be howling likewise. Lovely little tribute to the folly with good humor. Beautifully rendered with tasteful brevity and good imagery. Thank you for sharing.
September 28th, 2024 16:48
~> Gals; A True Friend\'s Like,
sorenbarrett said:
I can use a fun read at any time and this was one go get my day strarted. Gave me a smile Thad thanks for that.
September 28th, 2024 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
I can use a fun read at any time and this was one go get my day strarted. Gave me a smile Thad thanks for that.
September 28th, 2024 04:48
~> Gals; A True Friend\'s Like,
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Thad.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Thad.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:21
~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain -
Dan Williams said:
Very clever, both feeding and eating. Love the \"a marionet duplicate\". Very nice.
September 28th, 2024 00:16
Dan Williams said:
Very clever, both feeding and eating. Love the \"a marionet duplicate\". Very nice.
September 28th, 2024 00:16
~> Gals; A True Friend\'s Like,
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad
A bra was always a problem for me;
To find the hooks before she cooled off you see.
This was years ago and times I think have changed,
Friendship’s more thoughtful; ideas are exchanged…..
Good laugh Mate, but I remain ever thankful I’m not of that gender forced to wear one of them….
September 27th, 2024 17:04
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad
A bra was always a problem for me;
To find the hooks before she cooled off you see.
This was years ago and times I think have changed,
Friendship’s more thoughtful; ideas are exchanged…..
Good laugh Mate, but I remain ever thankful I’m not of that gender forced to wear one of them….
September 27th, 2024 17:04
~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain -
Cheeky Missy said:
You know, for too many years now I\'ve read tales of the elderly and beggerly catching and eating squirrels, albeit I\'m still too much of a youngster and my only claims are trying to catch one just before dinner in 5th grade [Hey! I wanted a pet and he was too fun!];and having one of my neighbors call the squirrels \"your friend--\"(well, he DID murder one of my potted plants to avail himself of said pot and digging happily in the dirt; and he DID destroy my soft cooler when he wanted the buns I packed there over winter...) And oh! the image! I was too tired to respond at all when you posted this, but stared in fascination at the picture....from, whence you drew inspiration? Awesome! I declare, you\'re a regular riot!!! I just did my duty and read this aloud, as all poetry is to be properly enjoyed: too waltzingly rendered with superb and rollicking humor, not to mention awesome details. Thank you very much for sharing. Me loves.
September 27th, 2024 16:31
Cheeky Missy said:
You know, for too many years now I\'ve read tales of the elderly and beggerly catching and eating squirrels, albeit I\'m still too much of a youngster and my only claims are trying to catch one just before dinner in 5th grade [Hey! I wanted a pet and he was too fun!];and having one of my neighbors call the squirrels \"your friend--\"(well, he DID murder one of my potted plants to avail himself of said pot and digging happily in the dirt; and he DID destroy my soft cooler when he wanted the buns I packed there over winter...) And oh! the image! I was too tired to respond at all when you posted this, but stared in fascination at the picture....from, whence you drew inspiration? Awesome! I declare, you\'re a regular riot!!! I just did my duty and read this aloud, as all poetry is to be properly enjoyed: too waltzingly rendered with superb and rollicking humor, not to mention awesome details. Thank you very much for sharing. Me loves.
September 27th, 2024 16:31
~> Gals; A True Friend\'s Like,
Cheeky Missy said:
Written by a boy, no less, where mine kills me, who refuses to buy bigger and gave up adding the stretcher pieces since the first is an unnecessary expense and the second only renders them too loose. Gaining weight turned them into tourniquets, or painful reminders I dearly need to lose weight. But I digress.
Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a waltzing sense of good humor, as well as being a lovely intro to your revered grandma and good advice, perhaps. Thank you very much for sharing!
September 27th, 2024 12:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Written by a boy, no less, where mine kills me, who refuses to buy bigger and gave up adding the stretcher pieces since the first is an unnecessary expense and the second only renders them too loose. Gaining weight turned them into tourniquets, or painful reminders I dearly need to lose weight. But I digress.
Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a waltzing sense of good humor, as well as being a lovely intro to your revered grandma and good advice, perhaps. Thank you very much for sharing!
September 27th, 2024 12:35
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