Comments received on poems by Maplespal
Lowered
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and even heart rending this poem shows devotion and love of one lost. Nicely written
August 16th, 2024 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and even heart rending this poem shows devotion and love of one lost. Nicely written
August 16th, 2024 05:16
Heavy Steps
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of parting with a lifetime companion. Well expressed
August 15th, 2024 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
A sad write of parting with a lifetime companion. Well expressed
August 15th, 2024 05:26
Sleepless
Bella Shepard said:
The overwhelming sadness of death, compounded by its inevitable aftermath is so well presented in this poem. My deepest symapthy for what you\'ve been through.
August 14th, 2024 08:12
Bella Shepard said:
The overwhelming sadness of death, compounded by its inevitable aftermath is so well presented in this poem. My deepest symapthy for what you\'ve been through.
August 14th, 2024 08:12
Sleepless
sorenbarrett said:
The bureaucracy of death. Incredible that even in death there is no peace. A wonderful write.
August 14th, 2024 06:35
sorenbarrett said:
The bureaucracy of death. Incredible that even in death there is no peace. A wonderful write.
August 14th, 2024 06:35
14th poem for: “T.N.D” - Cent or Dollar
sorenbarrett said:
An innovative approach to telling someone that you will remember them when no one else will. A fun read.
August 13th, 2024 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
An innovative approach to telling someone that you will remember them when no one else will. A fun read.
August 13th, 2024 05:57
13th poem for: “T.N.D” - Quiet morning
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and dark a poem of loss and death. Nicely rhymed and in good meter it flows well all the way to the tragic end.
August 12th, 2024 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and dark a poem of loss and death. Nicely rhymed and in good meter it flows well all the way to the tragic end.
August 12th, 2024 06:06
12th poem for: “T.N.D” - Please Stay
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for continued union in verse. The message is clearly sent and I hope heard.
August 11th, 2024 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for continued union in verse. The message is clearly sent and I hope heard.
August 11th, 2024 06:50
Dinner Date
Bella Shepard said:
Memory can be deceptive, especially when love is concerned. So sad, but so well written.
August 10th, 2024 10:06
Bella Shepard said:
Memory can be deceptive, especially when love is concerned. So sad, but so well written.
August 10th, 2024 10:06
Dinner Date
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read where expectations were exceeded in the last of the poem. Memory is a problem at times, especially as we grow older. Thanks for the share.
August 10th, 2024 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read where expectations were exceeded in the last of the poem. Memory is a problem at times, especially as we grow older. Thanks for the share.
August 10th, 2024 07:03
11th poem for - “T.N.D” - Trinkets
2781 said:
I spent two years crying after losing someone, but the memories and messages were ultimately healing.
There\'s always a new dawn.
August 9th, 2024 06:35
2781 said:
I spent two years crying after losing someone, but the memories and messages were ultimately healing.
There\'s always a new dawn.
August 9th, 2024 06:35
11th poem for - “T.N.D” - Trinkets
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed this poem of parting. It is unclear if this is metaphoric of final departure of literal of a temporary one either way it works. Lovely
August 9th, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
Well rhymed this poem of parting. It is unclear if this is metaphoric of final departure of literal of a temporary one either way it works. Lovely
August 9th, 2024 06:02
What Makes us Superior?
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed point of view does determine what we call superior. It is all in a point of view. Nicely written
August 8th, 2024 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed point of view does determine what we call superior. It is all in a point of view. Nicely written
August 8th, 2024 07:06
What Makes us Superior?
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure what you are saying with this. Superior? Mankind has made a right fuck up of it then. .
August 8th, 2024 05:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure what you are saying with this. Superior? Mankind has made a right fuck up of it then. .
August 8th, 2024 05:27
10th poem for - “T.N.D” - How I Feel
Bella Shepard said:
This is so poignant and sad, yet the wonderful memories you recount are so sweet and full of love. A beautiful write!
August 7th, 2024 15:23
Bella Shepard said:
This is so poignant and sad, yet the wonderful memories you recount are so sweet and full of love. A beautiful write!
August 7th, 2024 15:23
10th poem for - “T.N.D” - How I Feel
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and moving a poem of loss and missing the one that is lost. Feelings of sorrow are portrayed here.
August 7th, 2024 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Sad and moving a poem of loss and missing the one that is lost. Feelings of sorrow are portrayed here.
August 7th, 2024 04:37
9th poem for - “T.N.D” - Silenced
Bella Shepard said:
This poem speaks to a wonderful relationship grounded in mutual respect and love. There is the sadness of loss, yet the memory of all that was shared. Beautiful!
August 6th, 2024 13:09
Bella Shepard said:
This poem speaks to a wonderful relationship grounded in mutual respect and love. There is the sadness of loss, yet the memory of all that was shared. Beautiful!
August 6th, 2024 13:09
9th poem for - “T.N.D” - Silenced
2781 said:
It\'s hard for me to be concise, because of the last few lines....
I loved the way you seemed to get along with your differences-
If only...
August 6th, 2024 08:10
2781 said:
It\'s hard for me to be concise, because of the last few lines....
I loved the way you seemed to get along with your differences-
If only...
August 6th, 2024 08:10
9th poem for - “T.N.D” - Silenced
sorenbarrett said:
Sad the tone to this poem, one of loss and the missing of what once was.
August 6th, 2024 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
Sad the tone to this poem, one of loss and the missing of what once was.
August 6th, 2024 05:35
8th poem for - “T.N.D” - Roots
sorenbarrett said:
Nice memories contained in this short piece. Well expressed.
August 5th, 2024 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
Nice memories contained in this short piece. Well expressed.
August 5th, 2024 07:32
7th poem for - “T.N.D” - Perfect Picture
Bella Shepard said:
The final image impressed forever, as perfect as you remember, so beautifully said. The sentiment gently and lovingly conveyed. A touching and very tender write dear poet!
August 4th, 2024 12:00
Bella Shepard said:
The final image impressed forever, as perfect as you remember, so beautifully said. The sentiment gently and lovingly conveyed. A touching and very tender write dear poet!
August 4th, 2024 12:00
7th poem for - “T.N.D” - Perfect Picture
sorenbarrett said:
Surprise ending to this piece gives it a powerful impact. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
Surprise ending to this piece gives it a powerful impact. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 06:24
6th poem for - “That Night’s Dream” - Last Breath
sorenbarrett said:
Very romantic in nature this poem gives a pledge of love to the last line.
August 3rd, 2024 06:17
sorenbarrett said:
Very romantic in nature this poem gives a pledge of love to the last line.
August 3rd, 2024 06:17
4th & 5th poems – “That Night’s Dream” – Lingering, and You Remain
Bella Shepard said:
In dreams we can find those lost to us, and the feeling will linger on after day has dawned, they are never gone. Beautifully and lovingly written my friend.
August 2nd, 2024 09:24
Bella Shepard said:
In dreams we can find those lost to us, and the feeling will linger on after day has dawned, they are never gone. Beautifully and lovingly written my friend.
August 2nd, 2024 09:24
4th & 5th poems – “That Night’s Dream” – Lingering, and You Remain
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and reliving it through remembered images associated with the lost is a bitter sweet experience. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2024 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
Loss and reliving it through remembered images associated with the lost is a bitter sweet experience. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2024 05:51
I\'m Watching
Eugene S. said:
Reminiscent of \"Every Breath You Take\" by The Police. Very possessive and \'atmospheric\' in a captivating way!
August 1st, 2024 11:35
Eugene S. said:
Reminiscent of \"Every Breath You Take\" by The Police. Very possessive and \'atmospheric\' in a captivating way!
August 1st, 2024 11:35
I\'m Watching
sorenbarrett said:
Kind of creepy and I was waiting for the punch line of it being an animal of flower or something.
August 1st, 2024 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
Kind of creepy and I was waiting for the punch line of it being an animal of flower or something.
August 1st, 2024 05:53
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