Comments received on poems by Maplespal
An Arguments End, Together, and Stay Within Me
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting compilation. Nicely stated.
July 31st, 2024 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting compilation. Nicely stated.
July 31st, 2024 06:29
Beautiful Thing, Be My Companion, and With You
sorenbarrett said:
In a couple of your poems now you have taken this method of incorporating three poems into one. I like this and it seems to work well for you. It gives a greater meaning to the piece and a broader spectrum overall. Very nicely done.
July 30th, 2024 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
In a couple of your poems now you have taken this method of incorporating three poems into one. I like this and it seems to work well for you. It gives a greater meaning to the piece and a broader spectrum overall. Very nicely done.
July 30th, 2024 06:28
Beautiful Thing, Be My Companion, and With You
2781 said:
Shame about the voice!
July 30th, 2024 06:10
2781 said:
Shame about the voice!
July 30th, 2024 06:10
Let us talk
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the rhyme but loved more the presentation of life as it is some call it lies others exaggeration others a different point of view. What ever it is the point was made.
July 29th, 2024 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the rhyme but loved more the presentation of life as it is some call it lies others exaggeration others a different point of view. What ever it is the point was made.
July 29th, 2024 09:51
do it for me
sorenbarrett said:
The repetitive wording and rhyme in this poem gives it power to take the reader along on its currents. A wonderful ride.
July 28th, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
The repetitive wording and rhyme in this poem gives it power to take the reader along on its currents. A wonderful ride.
July 28th, 2024 06:13
3 x part of a story - \"That Night\'s Dream\"
2781 said:
Emotion is in the truth
July 27th, 2024 08:48
2781 said:
Emotion is in the truth
July 27th, 2024 08:48
3 x part of a story - \"That Night\'s Dream\"
sorenbarrett said:
Hard hitting and powerful. These evoke emotion of the human story and are very nicely worded. Feeling that emotion as the reader tells me this is a work of art not just a poem.
July 27th, 2024 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
Hard hitting and powerful. These evoke emotion of the human story and are very nicely worded. Feeling that emotion as the reader tells me this is a work of art not just a poem.
July 27th, 2024 06:36
inspired by a painting.
sorenbarrett said:
A painting in words about a painting in paint. Meta I say. Nicely done.
July 26th, 2024 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
A painting in words about a painting in paint. Meta I say. Nicely done.
July 26th, 2024 12:27
my day today
Bella Shepard said:
To make the best of each day is a laudable goal. Thank you for this inspirational poem, simply elegant!
July 25th, 2024 08:02
Bella Shepard said:
To make the best of each day is a laudable goal. Thank you for this inspirational poem, simply elegant!
July 25th, 2024 08:02
my day today
sorenbarrett said:
Poems come and go through one\'s head and here is represented the day\'s passage in poetry. Very nice
July 25th, 2024 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
Poems come and go through one\'s head and here is represented the day\'s passage in poetry. Very nice
July 25th, 2024 06:28
If today?
Bella Shepard said:
Excellent question. If today we were to die, I think nature would heave a big sigh. We are all but transient on this earth, but earth will survive long after we are gone. A very reflective poem my friend.
July 24th, 2024 13:19
Bella Shepard said:
Excellent question. If today we were to die, I think nature would heave a big sigh. We are all but transient on this earth, but earth will survive long after we are gone. A very reflective poem my friend.
July 24th, 2024 13:19
If today?
sorenbarrett said:
I don\'t know the answer to this one but we wouldn\'t know. A question to puzzle over. I guess a lot of dogs and cats would go hungry.
July 24th, 2024 06:04
sorenbarrett said:
I don\'t know the answer to this one but we wouldn\'t know. A question to puzzle over. I guess a lot of dogs and cats would go hungry.
July 24th, 2024 06:04
poor puppy
Bella Shepard said:
Love the rhyming scheme of this poem, it flows so well to tell this unfortunate story. I came across a fox that had been hit by a car in our subdivision on an early morning walk, and I can understand the feeling of disbelief when you find somethig such as this, dead in your path. It was good that it was put to rest. And a very good write my friend.
July 23rd, 2024 13:11
Bella Shepard said:
Love the rhyming scheme of this poem, it flows so well to tell this unfortunate story. I came across a fox that had been hit by a car in our subdivision on an early morning walk, and I can understand the feeling of disbelief when you find somethig such as this, dead in your path. It was good that it was put to rest. And a very good write my friend.
July 23rd, 2024 13:11
poor puppy
sorenbarrett said:
A sad story told in verse that all comes back to the same place death and burial. Continual rhyme gives it an urgent feel. Good work
July 23rd, 2024 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
A sad story told in verse that all comes back to the same place death and burial. Continual rhyme gives it an urgent feel. Good work
July 23rd, 2024 05:40
A Question need or want?
Bella Shepard said:
A very frank and noble write my friend. A good narrative with a compelling message. I see the conflicts and hope that you find the resolution you want.
July 22nd, 2024 13:41
Bella Shepard said:
A very frank and noble write my friend. A good narrative with a compelling message. I see the conflicts and hope that you find the resolution you want.
July 22nd, 2024 13:41
444 in total
Bella Shepard said:
It sounds like you made it to the heights of love, those 222 steps always to be remembered. Such a lovely write!
July 21st, 2024 15:25
Bella Shepard said:
It sounds like you made it to the heights of love, those 222 steps always to be remembered. Such a lovely write!
July 21st, 2024 15:25
How? Without You?
Thad Wilk said:
A very romantic ❤️ and
poignant write. 😢
Great rhyme and flow,
way to go!
Thanks for sharing
to read A delight!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 20th, 2024 12:29
Thad Wilk said:
A very romantic ❤️ and
poignant write. 😢
Great rhyme and flow,
way to go!
Thanks for sharing
to read A delight!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 20th, 2024 12:29
How? Without You?
sorenbarrett said:
There is a deep sense of loss in this poem with a strong desire for reunification. All this set in rhyme
July 20th, 2024 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
There is a deep sense of loss in this poem with a strong desire for reunification. All this set in rhyme
July 20th, 2024 10:54
We Sit in Jail
Bella Shepard said:
A tale well told, with imagery that captures the sad scene so well. A good write!
July 19th, 2024 12:50
Bella Shepard said:
A tale well told, with imagery that captures the sad scene so well. A good write!
July 19th, 2024 12:50
We Sit in Jail
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! A type of ballad in verse. The story was good as was the rhyme. The pacing also was excellent as was the length. Nicely done
July 18th, 2024 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
Wow! A type of ballad in verse. The story was good as was the rhyme. The pacing also was excellent as was the length. Nicely done
July 18th, 2024 05:22
A Storm Passed
sorenbarrett said:
A story that could be a metaphor as well. Great imagery in this write.
July 17th, 2024 10:30
sorenbarrett said:
A story that could be a metaphor as well. Great imagery in this write.
July 17th, 2024 10:30
In My Will
2781 said:
Come now,let us reason together, Says the Lord, \"Though your sins be as scarlet, They shall be as white as snow...
July 16th, 2024 04:47
2781 said:
Come now,let us reason together, Says the Lord, \"Though your sins be as scarlet, They shall be as white as snow...
July 16th, 2024 04:47
a moment
orchidee said:
I spent a moment - or three - or 100 moments - reading this good write.
July 14th, 2024 09:20
orchidee said:
I spent a moment - or three - or 100 moments - reading this good write.
July 14th, 2024 09:20
a moment
sorenbarrett said:
In determinism events are set just as with rhyme the choices are limited to complete the phrase. The illusion of choice is broken in rhyme if you want free will try free verse. Nicely done
July 14th, 2024 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
In determinism events are set just as with rhyme the choices are limited to complete the phrase. The illusion of choice is broken in rhyme if you want free will try free verse. Nicely done
July 14th, 2024 06:59
Why?
Maplespal said:
Thanks for all your comments.
i have asked to be put in an Institute for my suicidal thoughts.
I will be heading there this Friday. Going to be on pen and paper. Going to be gone for a while, my head is really messed up, almost 50 and never dealt with any of my issues.
it was very hard but my subordinates are showing too much concern for me, so i can\'t end it and hurt them, so i asked for help.
thank you for all your comments.
June 29th, 2024 10:16
Maplespal said:
Thanks for all your comments.
i have asked to be put in an Institute for my suicidal thoughts.
I will be heading there this Friday. Going to be on pen and paper. Going to be gone for a while, my head is really messed up, almost 50 and never dealt with any of my issues.
it was very hard but my subordinates are showing too much concern for me, so i can\'t end it and hurt them, so i asked for help.
thank you for all your comments.
June 29th, 2024 10:16
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