Comments received on poems by Maplespal
2 more poems, um don\'t enjoy
sorenbarrett said:
At first I thought that the second poem was what had happened to the narrator of the first poem prior to it being written and unbeknownst to him.
November 16th, 2024 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
At first I thought that the second poem was what had happened to the narrator of the first poem prior to it being written and unbeknownst to him.
November 16th, 2024 08:39
2 at once, enjoy
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts lay frozen in this latter poem and its all too human questions. Very nicely done
November 15th, 2024 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
Deep thoughts lay frozen in this latter poem and its all too human questions. Very nicely done
November 15th, 2024 05:53
2 at once, enjoy
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoy?? Really??
Never the less some rich imagery and prophetic warnings ...as an amateur pessimist I can tune in quite well to some of that..
November 15th, 2024 05:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoy?? Really??
Never the less some rich imagery and prophetic warnings ...as an amateur pessimist I can tune in quite well to some of that..
November 15th, 2024 05:44
A restricted life
sorenbarrett said:
It all seems overwhelming. I hear the frustration and anguish in the poem, and there are feelings of it all being a bit too much nicely worded.
November 14th, 2024 14:27
sorenbarrett said:
It all seems overwhelming. I hear the frustration and anguish in the poem, and there are feelings of it all being a bit too much nicely worded.
November 14th, 2024 14:27
A restricted life
Doggerel Dave said:
Not much I can say either - other than \'sorry\'.
An insight into wheelchair survivors and others with inflicted disabling injuries.
November 14th, 2024 07:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Not much I can say either - other than \'sorry\'.
An insight into wheelchair survivors and others with inflicted disabling injuries.
November 14th, 2024 07:23
I write: poems
sorenbarrett said:
I thank you for your writing and I thank you for your enlightening. They are both appreciated and this poem expresses it well.
November 12th, 2024 14:54
sorenbarrett said:
I thank you for your writing and I thank you for your enlightening. They are both appreciated and this poem expresses it well.
November 12th, 2024 14:54
I write: poems
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write on writing poetry! 🌹👏
November 12th, 2024 08:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A wonderful write on writing poetry! 🌹👏
November 12th, 2024 08:45
Todays task
Doggerel Dave said:
More than \'just a thought\' (singular), You cover the issues more profoundly than many who once a year decide to remember \'the fallen\'. In the broader context, your post includes continuing conflicts today, innocent civilians (a hobby horse of mine!) and the fact that \"Every war us humans have stupidly fought, power, land, and riches were always sought\".
Good for you and thank you!.
November 11th, 2024 07:28
Doggerel Dave said:
More than \'just a thought\' (singular), You cover the issues more profoundly than many who once a year decide to remember \'the fallen\'. In the broader context, your post includes continuing conflicts today, innocent civilians (a hobby horse of mine!) and the fact that \"Every war us humans have stupidly fought, power, land, and riches were always sought\".
Good for you and thank you!.
November 11th, 2024 07:28
Decided not to
sorenbarrett said:
Decisions are often difficult to make, and we vacillate from one to another. In the end, it may all be the same. A good writing.
November 10th, 2024 12:04
sorenbarrett said:
Decisions are often difficult to make, and we vacillate from one to another. In the end, it may all be the same. A good writing.
November 10th, 2024 12:04
A sniper dwells
MR.apocalypse said:
i am not to familiar with the innerworkings of the military nor is it why i faved your poem. it has absolutely great rhyme that I\'m almost jealous of myself
November 8th, 2024 15:01
MR.apocalypse said:
i am not to familiar with the innerworkings of the military nor is it why i faved your poem. it has absolutely great rhyme that I\'m almost jealous of myself
November 8th, 2024 15:01
His last thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
Well sritten the symptoms of depression and despair and the accompaning feelings of uselessness and suicide. Sad and powerful
November 7th, 2024 17:05
sorenbarrett said:
Well sritten the symptoms of depression and despair and the accompaning feelings of uselessness and suicide. Sad and powerful
November 7th, 2024 17:05
3 poems on drops life
sorenbarrett said:
And from a single drop comes the inspiration for three poems that splendidly tell of its properties and life cycle and in metaphor ours as well
November 5th, 2024 09:54
sorenbarrett said:
And from a single drop comes the inspiration for three poems that splendidly tell of its properties and life cycle and in metaphor ours as well
November 5th, 2024 09:54
Off to work
sorenbarrett said:
The ritual of daily living put to verse. I feel that I have been there. Well done
November 4th, 2024 08:55
sorenbarrett said:
The ritual of daily living put to verse. I feel that I have been there. Well done
November 4th, 2024 08:55
“Just, until” & “A drop waiting”
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for company and I like even more the reworked second poem it holds more promise and brightness
November 3rd, 2024 09:23
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for company and I like even more the reworked second poem it holds more promise and brightness
November 3rd, 2024 09:23
Waiting for snow
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the personification of the snowflake and the metaphor of people being alone as well. Death upon impact most interesting. A beautiful poem
November 2nd, 2024 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the personification of the snowflake and the metaphor of people being alone as well. Death upon impact most interesting. A beautiful poem
November 2nd, 2024 10:14
Sorry 3 poems
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely. Each is a beauty in its own right, together expressive of a larger reality unfolding throughout, the queries posed and unspoken tempting answers. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and haunting poignancy.
November 1st, 2024 13:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely. Each is a beauty in its own right, together expressive of a larger reality unfolding throughout, the queries posed and unspoken tempting answers. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and haunting poignancy.
November 1st, 2024 13:35
A drop\'s view
sorenbarrett said:
This to me held a strong metaphor of how the sea in this life separates the sailor from his love as death does as well but how both are temporary until reuniting. Lovely
October 31st, 2024 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
This to me held a strong metaphor of how the sea in this life separates the sailor from his love as death does as well but how both are temporary until reuniting. Lovely
October 31st, 2024 05:00
6 poorly written poems sorry
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the pain in these and the sense of loss. Expression of this pain and loss hopefully helps heal the wound. Nicely done
October 30th, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the pain in these and the sense of loss. Expression of this pain and loss hopefully helps heal the wound. Nicely done
October 30th, 2024 05:05
4 different poems
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Love all 4 of them! Last ones my favorite, good write! ❤️
October 29th, 2024 07:59
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Love all 4 of them! Last ones my favorite, good write! ❤️
October 29th, 2024 07:59
Cold it is
sorenbarrett said:
Been there done that but no more cold for me. Nicely written in verse this poem brought back old memories. Thanks for the memories
October 28th, 2024 10:01
sorenbarrett said:
Been there done that but no more cold for me. Nicely written in verse this poem brought back old memories. Thanks for the memories
October 28th, 2024 10:01
That day\'s call
sorenbarrett said:
A great set up to the story in this poem. We often blame others for our own mistakes what a great message and told so well. Lovely
October 27th, 2024 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
A great set up to the story in this poem. We often blame others for our own mistakes what a great message and told so well. Lovely
October 27th, 2024 06:07
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