Comments received on poems by Maplespal
The haunting game
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of some one looking in on their insecurities, well written
December 23rd, 2024 02:35
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of some one looking in on their insecurities, well written
December 23rd, 2024 02:35
The haunting game
sorenbarrett said:
The aspect of self reflection and evaluation comes through in this poem. Very nicely written
December 22nd, 2024 20:25
sorenbarrett said:
The aspect of self reflection and evaluation comes through in this poem. Very nicely written
December 22nd, 2024 20:25
No Eggs
Cassie58 said:
Happy to have a bacon sarney without an egg. I guess you are a bacon and eggs guy. Not a great start to your day, although your poem was fun to read and enjoyed.
December 21st, 2024 13:01
Cassie58 said:
Happy to have a bacon sarney without an egg. I guess you are a bacon and eggs guy. Not a great start to your day, although your poem was fun to read and enjoyed.
December 21st, 2024 13:01
No Eggs
sorenbarrett said:
Great use of familiar sayings and nursery rhymes to make a valid point that some things go together and are not the same when a part is missing.
December 21st, 2024 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
Great use of familiar sayings and nursery rhymes to make a valid point that some things go together and are not the same when a part is missing.
December 21st, 2024 09:11
Mind displays
Poetic Licence said:
A clever way to express ones desire to write poetry, and i think you do it well.
December 20th, 2024 12:45
Poetic Licence said:
A clever way to express ones desire to write poetry, and i think you do it well.
December 20th, 2024 12:45
Mind displays
sorenbarrett said:
Language is the paint our tongue the brush and we print it on paper for our eyes to see. Very nicely expessed in this poem
December 20th, 2024 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Language is the paint our tongue the brush and we print it on paper for our eyes to see. Very nicely expessed in this poem
December 20th, 2024 11:35
I am up
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words with a great meaning and most uplifting.
December 19th, 2024 14:39
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words with a great meaning and most uplifting.
December 19th, 2024 14:39
Thought 2
Poetic Licence said:
Echo`s my sentiments exactly regarding exercise, clever and funny ditty
December 18th, 2024 18:32
Poetic Licence said:
Echo`s my sentiments exactly regarding exercise, clever and funny ditty
December 18th, 2024 18:32
Thought 2
sorenbarrett said:
What a truism for us and our society. Well said in such few words
December 18th, 2024 17:12
sorenbarrett said:
What a truism for us and our society. Well said in such few words
December 18th, 2024 17:12
Converse
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely poem showing the importance of talking, enjoyable read
December 16th, 2024 01:35
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely poem showing the importance of talking, enjoyable read
December 16th, 2024 01:35
Converse
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the evolution of this poem as it looks at conversation in all its possabilities. Nicely worded
December 15th, 2024 20:06
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the evolution of this poem as it looks at conversation in all its possabilities. Nicely worded
December 15th, 2024 20:06
thought 1
Poetic Licence said:
Clever piece of double edge writing, really like it
December 14th, 2024 15:10
Poetic Licence said:
Clever piece of double edge writing, really like it
December 14th, 2024 15:10
Empty thoughts - extended v of Empty Thought
sorenbarrett said:
Finding the right words is not always easy. Words one of only two ways of showing our emotions and finding just the right one to convey the proper meaning and feeling is not always easy. Even knowing ourself what we want to convey is difficult. Nicely written
December 14th, 2024 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Finding the right words is not always easy. Words one of only two ways of showing our emotions and finding just the right one to convey the proper meaning and feeling is not always easy. Even knowing ourself what we want to convey is difficult. Nicely written
December 14th, 2024 04:28
Empty thought
Poetic Licence said:
I empathise with the sentiment of the sad poem sometimes you can hear it all to clearly, thank you for the read
December 12th, 2024 11:41
Poetic Licence said:
I empathise with the sentiment of the sad poem sometimes you can hear it all to clearly, thank you for the read
December 12th, 2024 11:41
Empty thought
sorenbarrett said:
.So true emptiness has much to say. so nicely said
December 12th, 2024 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
.So true emptiness has much to say. so nicely said
December 12th, 2024 10:48
For the readers I write
sorenbarrett said:
A most inspiring poem written from the heart of a poet. A gracious thank you to all the inspirations that create poetry. A most lovely write
December 11th, 2024 15:53
sorenbarrett said:
A most inspiring poem written from the heart of a poet. A gracious thank you to all the inspirations that create poetry. A most lovely write
December 11th, 2024 15:53
For the readers I write
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem of a thousand story`s, really enjoyed it.
December 11th, 2024 14:01
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem of a thousand story`s, really enjoyed it.
December 11th, 2024 14:01
My mind rests
Poetic Licence said:
It paints the picture for you, enjoyed the read
December 11th, 2024 00:43
Poetic Licence said:
It paints the picture for you, enjoyed the read
December 11th, 2024 00:43
My mind rests
sorenbarrett said:
Had to shovel too much snow in my life so moved south where I\'ll never see another flake. You brought back old memories. Nicely written
December 10th, 2024 20:31
sorenbarrett said:
Had to shovel too much snow in my life so moved south where I\'ll never see another flake. You brought back old memories. Nicely written
December 10th, 2024 20:31
I write for you
Poetic Licence said:
I am glad she inspires you, enjoyed the read
December 9th, 2024 15:36
Poetic Licence said:
I am glad she inspires you, enjoyed the read
December 9th, 2024 15:36
Hot and amazing
sorenbarrett said:
All the views now represented. It is always important to see things from all sides. Well done
December 8th, 2024 15:06
sorenbarrett said:
All the views now represented. It is always important to see things from all sides. Well done
December 8th, 2024 15:06
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