Comments received on poems by Maplespal
2 Brain dumps sorry
sorenbarrett said:
i There the dot is in its spot. I loved the poems they were cleverly worded and hold a truth. Nicely done
March 7th, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
i There the dot is in its spot. I loved the poems they were cleverly worded and hold a truth. Nicely done
March 7th, 2025 06:21
Lost in the ocean
Poetic Licence said:
A write full of sadness and loneliness, with possibly dark intentions, emotions expressed well in this write
March 6th, 2025 11:26
Poetic Licence said:
A write full of sadness and loneliness, with possibly dark intentions, emotions expressed well in this write
March 6th, 2025 11:26
Lost in the ocean
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds lost, lonely and sad. Very nice
March 6th, 2025 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds lost, lonely and sad. Very nice
March 6th, 2025 09:11
Bread
sorenbarrett said:
There are all types of breads from sweet breads to sour dough. I love the metaphor it seems to fit well.
March 5th, 2025 06:19
sorenbarrett said:
There are all types of breads from sweet breads to sour dough. I love the metaphor it seems to fit well.
March 5th, 2025 06:19
Watching a smirk
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of reflection and being surprised by a memory you thought you had forgotten, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 08:18
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of reflection and being surprised by a memory you thought you had forgotten, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 08:18
Watching a smirk
sorenbarrett said:
Sad nostalgia and well written in this poem of loss and having to be in the right spot to see, remember and feel the past. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 06:52
sorenbarrett said:
Sad nostalgia and well written in this poem of loss and having to be in the right spot to see, remember and feel the past. Lovely
March 4th, 2025 06:52
Watching a smirk
Natalie Gladmir said:
How sweet that you are so observant, and how wonderful that you have not lost the ability to be pleasantly surprised by someone\'s unexpected appearance.
March 4th, 2025 06:41
Natalie Gladmir said:
How sweet that you are so observant, and how wonderful that you have not lost the ability to be pleasantly surprised by someone\'s unexpected appearance.
March 4th, 2025 06:41
Watching a smirk
MDStone said:
They sure do, don’t they? A painful memory or a pleasant smirk… Catching us at the spot we happen to be. Great writing. Thanks for sharing!
March 4th, 2025 06:30
MDStone said:
They sure do, don’t they? A painful memory or a pleasant smirk… Catching us at the spot we happen to be. Great writing. Thanks for sharing!
March 4th, 2025 06:30
Replay
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed the way this was written , some memories do take us to places we would rather not be, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 06:11
Poetic Licence said:
Enjoyed the way this was written , some memories do take us to places we would rather not be, enjoyed the read
March 3rd, 2025 06:11
Replay
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is haunting and sad. Past memories can be sad but they can also be happy and cheerful depending what we choose to focus on. Loved this poem and its sense of distance and haze in the memory that seems to fade away at the end of the poem. Most lovely
March 3rd, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is haunting and sad. Past memories can be sad but they can also be happy and cheerful depending what we choose to focus on. Loved this poem and its sense of distance and haze in the memory that seems to fade away at the end of the poem. Most lovely
March 3rd, 2025 05:47
I write & The situation
sorenbarrett said:
Your first poem seen as an oblation and accepted with gratitude, A lovely write of dedication to all. The second one of resignation and sacrifice a deterministic end. Very nicely done.
March 2nd, 2025 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
Your first poem seen as an oblation and accepted with gratitude, A lovely write of dedication to all. The second one of resignation and sacrifice a deterministic end. Very nicely done.
March 2nd, 2025 06:27
2 Thoughts from a bird
Poetic Licence said:
I often wonder wouldn\'t it be nice to just have freedom a bird has and be able view the world from their view, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 06:40
Poetic Licence said:
I often wonder wouldn\'t it be nice to just have freedom a bird has and be able view the world from their view, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 06:40
2 Thoughts from a bird
sorenbarrett said:
Not only a great write from a birds perspective but as a metaphor. Loved the images in this poem
March 1st, 2025 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Not only a great write from a birds perspective but as a metaphor. Loved the images in this poem
March 1st, 2025 05:34
The last 3 of the River story
sorenbarrett said:
Each with its own form of sadness, forlorn they cast shadows and darken. Very sad
February 28th, 2025 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
Each with its own form of sadness, forlorn they cast shadows and darken. Very sad
February 28th, 2025 06:49
Staying home
MDStone said:
A haunting and yet inviting write. Speaks to my soul of memories and of good times had. Now these stories entertain my heart. Your poem entertained mine. Thank you for sharing.
February 27th, 2025 07:30
MDStone said:
A haunting and yet inviting write. Speaks to my soul of memories and of good times had. Now these stories entertain my heart. Your poem entertained mine. Thank you for sharing.
February 27th, 2025 07:30
Staying home
sorenbarrett said:
Ghosts have a way of haunting our memories. A most lovely write
February 27th, 2025 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
Ghosts have a way of haunting our memories. A most lovely write
February 27th, 2025 06:53
Past the flowers
Poetic Licence said:
Trying to resolve unresolved issues,a very touching and well written write
February 26th, 2025 08:53
Poetic Licence said:
Trying to resolve unresolved issues,a very touching and well written write
February 26th, 2025 08:53
Past the flowers
sorenbarrett said:
A write about an unresolved loss that troubles the author and water is such a great metaphor and symbol for this. Very nice
February 26th, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
A write about an unresolved loss that troubles the author and water is such a great metaphor and symbol for this. Very nice
February 26th, 2025 06:45
Unknown cause & Sorry for the nights
Poetic Licence said:
These are wonderful pieces of writing, the first describing horrific injury\'s sustained and the sense to be alive. The second trying to cope with the aftermath of the injury\'s and the effects it has on them and their loved ones, haunting, touching and emotional writing well done
February 25th, 2025 07:01
Poetic Licence said:
These are wonderful pieces of writing, the first describing horrific injury\'s sustained and the sense to be alive. The second trying to cope with the aftermath of the injury\'s and the effects it has on them and their loved ones, haunting, touching and emotional writing well done
February 25th, 2025 07:01
Unknown cause & Sorry for the nights
sorenbarrett said:
Both poems so well written. You have come a long way in your writing. The first graphic and so well expressed I thought at first you were speaking from the mouth of a deer that had been hit on the road but was mistaken to find it was you. A metaphor possibly as well. The second a continuation? Is this the trauma that left you broken? I can only wonder due to the juxtaposition. Lovely writing
February 25th, 2025 06:16
sorenbarrett said:
Both poems so well written. You have come a long way in your writing. The first graphic and so well expressed I thought at first you were speaking from the mouth of a deer that had been hit on the road but was mistaken to find it was you. A metaphor possibly as well. The second a continuation? Is this the trauma that left you broken? I can only wonder due to the juxtaposition. Lovely writing
February 25th, 2025 06:16
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