Comments received on poems by Maplespal



Pausing the string
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 7th, 2025 10:52

Shadows and rays
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

February 6th, 2025 19:53

Behind the kiss
Caring dove said:

A lovely poem gentle writing

February 6th, 2025 13:57

Shadows and rays
Caring dove said:

Very nice poem ..
sometimes I find that , when writing from a picture .. just makes you think and it’s nice to be inspired by things

I liked reading your poem

February 6th, 2025 13:55

Shadows and rays
sorenbarrett said:

Such a beautiful set of images you cast and it feels so light. Lovely and worth a fave

February 6th, 2025 13:55

Restlessly I lay
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 5th, 2025 18:11

Restlessly I lay
sorenbarrett said:

Lonliness pervades this poem and it is filled with a longing.very nice

February 5th, 2025 17:19

Message 2
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful message. Very nicely said

February 4th, 2025 18:35

Wet eyes
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of great pain at the loss of someone loved dearly, very nice write

February 3rd, 2025 16:16

Wet eyes
sorenbarrett said:

The pain of loss is great when it is someone you love. A sad poem

February 3rd, 2025 15:40

Captured view
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 1st, 2025 17:16

Message 1
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 30th, 2025 20:27

Message 1
sorenbarrett said:

Very nicely worded it had to be read more than once to understand,

January 30th, 2025 16:35

Here
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 28th, 2025 19:56

Here
Poetic Licence said:

It has a sense of someone excepting they have reached the end, nicely written

January 28th, 2025 17:30

Here
sorenbarrett said:

I get the feeling that this is the end of the road, it sounds hollow and empty. A vapid feeling comes through. Well expressed and written in verse

January 28th, 2025 17:17

It is it
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 20th, 2025 17:44

It is it
sorenbarrett said:

Destiny? Well could be then there are no guilty. Loved the poem a great philisophical write

January 20th, 2025 13:04

Your pictured view
sorenbarrett said:

Reminders often bring sadness. Few greater reminders than a picture. A sad but powerful write

January 18th, 2025 20:35

Thought 3
sorenbarrett said:

Very nice. Man, woman, child even animals wild we are all living things
Doesn\'t matter what race or species you are we are all equal and with the same value. A most wonderful write

January 17th, 2025 17:30

To my kind: It\'s time
sorenbarrett said:

A haunting write and a different point of view presented in this poem. Very interesting

January 15th, 2025 10:34

We are
sorenbarrett said:

A great thought and a philisophical poem as well. Nicely worded

January 14th, 2025 09:14

Influenced by Woodkid
Poetic Licence said:

I always write listening to music, it seems to open up the old mind and left things flow easier, enjoyed the read

January 13th, 2025 12:30

Influenced by Woodkid
sorenbarrett said:

A most beautiful poem of where one can be taken with the magic of music. Wonderful images here.

January 13th, 2025 12:26

A question on time
sorenbarrett said:

A most difficult concept to grasp. It is philisophical and you have looked at several clever worded aspects yet the last question remains a good one for which I have no answer

January 12th, 2025 12:20

A question on time
Poetic Licence said:

One to get your head around, if not defined what would in then be, enjoyed the read

January 12th, 2025 12:11

Last mans grave
Bella Shepard said:

It takes a man of insight, and dare I say courage to pen these words. I\'ve often wondered what the world would be like if the female perspective were given a chance to blossom. I harken back Robin Williams\'s quote \" If women ran the world, we wouldn\'t have wars, just intense negotiations every 28 days\". I say give it a try. Thank you my friend!!

January 11th, 2025 13:32

Last mans grave
sorenbarrett said:

Thought provoking yes women are the prototype and theoretically men may not be needed, it is so among several species.

January 11th, 2025 07:41

Last mans grave
Poetic Licence said:

A serious issue of the non value and worth of women that still exists in cultures around the world, man should be verry careful, we are not needed anymore. Enjoyed the read

January 11th, 2025 06:36

Behind the kiss
Bella Shepard said:

The kiss is sweet, but the conversation is priceless. Beautifully expressed, enjoyed to the max.

January 10th, 2025 10:24



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